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Just caught up with the run. You should not underestimate this region ability to create mind bogging attitudes, and with time travel being a thing, we might get a glimpse of advanced techniques of stupidity I still think the Marianette we've seen is from a timeline where Vitus had his "start of darkness", but differently, mostly because what we see doesn't look like the mansion in the prologue/Indriad arc(even tough he could have had it rebuilt/changed house). I see that exposure effect can start wearing down even the deepest disgust...If she weren't put on a bus maybe this co

I like your Fern and Florina, mainly because it still mesh well with their personality(sunglasses for the "swag jockey", glasses in place for "flobot"), and the wider pupils makes them look a bit more realistic Julia look a bit strange, it looks like another character entirely and is a bit out of place with the other Bennet has a wiser look to him and nice touch for the acnea. Both version are fine imo. Cain and Victoria look younger and for the former it makes him look a bit more friendly.I still prefer cannon though Overall I think they are okay: they feel different than

Nice read What do you mean by " So far, she had lost two people in her lives from the very moment she stepped into the region. " I can only see Nancy, unless you meant since she arrived and count Melia in it. Other than that everything was clear and you get your point across without dwelling too much on it. Although maybe you could add some details about the hanging out in the sewers(I know it is jus t a small part of the game but since here it took days and was important for Alice it might not hurt)