Gen 4 - Shiny Thread | Public Development

[Jan]

22 hours ago, foznkr said:

Skorupi

 

Looks good to me! Approved!

 

22 hours ago, Cool Girl said:

Hey Jan! Here's Phione and Manaphy!  

 

 

 

  

 

I'd like to get the Glameow (yes that means I will do both Glameow and Purugly) line next, please

 

Thanks!  

Colors on Manaphy are fine, but I think the pink on Phione is a little too hot pink. 

22 hours ago, DreamblitzX said:

Here, have a purple Carnivine (loosely inspired by pvz chomper)

 

 

Also tried a Christmas Shaymin, but not sure how happy with it I am, so feedback would be appreciated.

 

Carnivine looks rad af and is approved. The shaymin looks nice but Idk how to feel about the brown. 

 

21 hours ago, DreamblitzX said:

 yea I'm not entirely sure what to do there, but I'll have a tinker. the problem seems to be that they kinda need whites, but don't normally have them due to the white skin

 

I guess the alternatice is something like this:

I think I like this Shaymin a lot more. 

21 hours ago, Felcatty said:

I've made a few possibilities for the Cherubi line. With the exception of Cherubi, I've made season related Cherrim (Summer-Green, Autumn-Yellow, Winter-Blue). Would love any feedback  

 

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Or maybe something a little more 'wilted'

 

I also noticed an error I made with the female Pachirisu sprite, here's the edited version:

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Hm... tbh I'm having a hard time picking. What are your thoughts? I'm leaning towards the green and the wilted one.

 

20 hours ago, ycoder321 said:

a wellp XD could i get rotom instead of combee then owo

Yep! Go for it. 

 

20 hours ago, Trevore said:

I have now completed Spiritomb's back sprite, thus completing the Spiritomb line. I'm so glad so many people like it!  Next, I shall work on D.Va Palkia, although it might take longer, for now is the time for me to study an exam. 

Approved. Have fun with the Palkia! Take your time. 

 

19 hours ago, Jmanultrax1 said:

Took me awhile to get the correct color palette that I wanted. Criticism is welcome, and let me know what you think.

 

 

 

 

 

This is for the Gible line.

Looks fine to me, though the outline could use some work. It's hard to see.

 

6 hours ago, BIGJRA said:

Here's Probopass. The backsprite body colors feel really hard to work with for me so if anyone sees it needs to be fixed/can do it I'd appreciate that. I'll start the fishes soon.

I think you should dull the red on the body. Perhaps something like this?

Probopass was sprited weirdly so it's hard to recolor this one... 

6 hours ago, KmK said:

Here's the rest of the turtwig line

I was trying to make the flowers bigger with each evolution but I'm not sure what works best for turtwig.

Here are my two ideas for turtwig:

Grotle:

Torterra (I noticed one tiny mistake with the other torterra frontsprite, so here he is again):

 

If these are allright, I'd like to claim chatot next.

Absolutely beautiful! Chatot is yours!

 

5 hours ago, Korvpizza said:

Here is the Color Corrected Amazing Technicolor Giratina:

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Origin Form:

Hopefully these are the final versions of the sprites. And if these are okay, I'd like to claim the Hippopotas line too.

(Also, I noticed that Ambipom was credited under Atticus although I made them back in gen 2. (Link: http://www.rebornevo.com/forum/index.php?/topic/24471-gen-2-shiny-thread-public-development/&do=findComment&comment=604852))

 

Looking really good to me! Approved! Also I'll update the list then, sorry about that!

4 hours ago, Hycrox said:

Dialcer's back

 

EDIT: I also did this:

 

 

Lava lamp Heatran (it's not vaporwave I swear). Yea or nay?

 

Also could I get you guize's opinion(s) on two Infernapes I did a while ago just for fun?

 

Heatran is looking really nice, too. I think the shading works here more than it did with others. 

 

As for infernape, I like the second one more. I think the problem with the one on the right is that there are too many colors so it looks REALLY busy. 

 

 

Hopefully I didn't miss anyone... 

[Alex]

Help! I dropped my pokemon!

[Felcatty]

12 hours ago, Jan said:

Hm... tbh I'm having a hard time picking. What are your thoughts? I'm leaning towards the green and the wilted one.

Personally since I've used so many bright colours, I like the wilted one better; contrasts Sunny Cherrim.

 

If these are alright, I'd like to try the Hippopotas line Please

 

Edit: I see someone (Korvpizza) has asked to claim the Hippopotas line but the list wasn't updated so I'd like the Kricketot line instead if that's alright please.

 

Also my submission for your Togepi/Togetic/Togekiss contest:

 

Spoiler

 

Edited February 9, 2017 by Felcatty

[Cool Girl]

1 hour ago, Jan said:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Colors on Manaphy are fine, but I think the pink on Phione is a little too hot pink. 

 

 If anybody has an idea on how I can do the shade for Phione, 'cause I've been trying to get the pink right but I'm having a hard time right now, so let me know if anyone wants to help...

[Tringus]

Now, one question I do have in mind when making D.Va Palkia is which colors to use.  Do you want me to use the mech colors, or do you want me to use the colors of D.Va herself?  So far, I'm just going along the colors of the mech, thanks to the Pixel spray, but if you want me to use the colors of D.Va herself, just let me know, and I'll get cracking on that.

[Twilightwing]

Just now, Trevore said:

Now, one question I do have in mind when making D.Va Palkia is which colors to use.  Do you want me to use the mech colors, or do you want me to use the colors of D.Va herself?  So far, I'm just going along the colors of the mech, thanks to the Pixel spray, but if you want me to use the colors of D.Va herself, just let me know, and I'll get cracking on that.

If you did the mech then that bright pink will be hurting my eyes

[Tringus]

RIP I'll do two versions.  Hopefully the pink I use won't hurt anyone's eyes, but so far, it looks pretty decent.  I can try to go a darker shade of pink if necessary when I'm done, but I'll submit it when I'm finished.

[Felcatty]

@Jan I've helped out @Cool Girl with the Phione's shading.

Edited February 9, 2017 by Felcatty

[MakaTorracat]

From sprites at last lol

Mothim still needs work but I need sleep so yeah

[Atticus]

Ok, a little update on my claims:

Vespiquen line is done, but I'm having some... technical issues, so I'm posting this via cellphone. I should get by my friend's house tomorrow so I can post it.

 

Just started to work on Empoleon and on my Togekiss for the contest.

 

(btw idk how to color words via mobile so i'm putting it bold instead)

[foznkr]

Floatzel

male

female

Edited February 9, 2017 by foznkr

[Zumi]

chimchar line and cresselia are done!

 

[Phi-Bi]

Guess I want to give this a shot. I'd like to claim Staraptor and Abomasnow please.

[Desaya]

Leafeon & Glaceon

 

  

 

  

[Atticus]

they say purple always suits royalty well

Edited February 9, 2017 by Atticus

[Winter]

Alright, God Horse is finished! (Click the spoiler at your own risk, because it is loooooooong.)

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Normal:

Water:

Fire

Grass:

Fairy:

Psychic:

Ice:

Ghost:

Dragon:

Poison:

Ground:

Flying:

Bug:

Electric:

Dark:

Steel:

Rock:

Fighting:

Now, if these are accepted, I'll do the Hippopotas line next. And since I don't think anyone has claimed it, may I do Mamoswine too?

EDIT: Of course things couldn't simply be that easy. I noticed an error with the Ghost-front sprite. Anyways, it's fixed now.

Edited February 9, 2017 by Korvpizza

[Jan]

17 hours ago, Felcatty said:

@Jan I've helped out @Cool Girl with the Phione's shading.

Mm... There are shading issues here. Perhaps something like this instead? 

16 hours ago, MakaTorracat said:

From sprites at last lol

Mothim still needs work but I need sleep so yeah

Mothim looks fine to me honestly, the only thing I would change is the brightness of the wings. Making them brighter will enhance the outline + the shading.

 

8 hours ago, foznkr said:

Floatzel

male

female

Not to sure if the gray works too well. I think it would be better to lean it more towards white. 

 

8 hours ago, Zumi said:

chimchar line and cresselia are done!

 

Wow, these are both really beautiful. Nice job!

 

4 hours ago, Desaya said:

Leafeon & Glaceon

 

  

 

  

I really like these. Approved!

 

39 minutes ago, Korvpizza said:

Alright, God Horse is finished! (Click the spoiler at your own risk, because it is loooooooong.)

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Normal:

Water:

Fire

Grass:

Fairy:

Psychic:

Ice:

Ghost:

Dragon:

Poison:

Ground:

Flying:

Bug:

Electric:

Dark:

Steel:

Rock:

Fighting:

Now, if these are accepted, I'll do the Hippopotas line next. And since I don't think anyone has claimed it, may I do Mamoswine too?

EDIT: Of course things couldn't simply be that easy. I noticed an error with the Ghost-front sprite. Anyways, it's fixed now.

These are absolutely stunning! Approved for sure! Hippopotas is yours. Mamoswine is also yours. 

[Alex]

Paladin Skunks?

[Cool Girl]

41 minutes ago, Jan said:

Mm... There are shading issues here. Perhaps something like this instead? 

Wow thank you Jan!  I really appreciate it!  I'll work on the backsprite for it now!  

[Jan]

32 minutes ago, Alex said:

Paladin Skunks?

I like it! Approved!

 

Just now, Cool Girl said:

Wow thank you Jan!  I really appreciate it!  I'll work on the backsprite for it now!  

No problem! Pink can be tricky. I'm happy to help!

[Alex]

im taking uxie, azelf, and mesprit (they're all kinda like one line, right?)

[Cool Girl]

Alright Jan. Here's a embellished Phione and here is Manaphy! I hope you like them!  

 

  

 

  

 

If possible now, I'd like the Glameow line (yes, I will do both Glameow and Purugly)

[foznkr]

What about this?

Edited February 9, 2017 by foznkr

[Siragon]

Here i come with the inverse-Lucario line. Simplicity is sometimes good too.

[Jmanultrax1]

1 hour ago, Siragon said:

Here i come with the inverse-Lucario line. Simplicity is sometimes good too.

Its hard to tell the white shade with the background. So perhaps make the background clear. The white shade on the designs is good, but maybe lower them a bit, their a bit too bright