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This episode's song is devoted to Fern who believes in his world he is king. With Justin bringing the war to him I found a nice little gem from a music pal of mine. At any rate hope you all enjoyed. Next episode ends this arc and begins my literal favorite part of the story in the game. Battle for Beryl. Wooooooo
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VICTORIA We should stop him! JUSTIN Why he always cries after he's beaten. He's a less intelligent Cartman. VICTORIA I don't understand that reference but Florinia runs the school here as Principal and Gym Leader. JUSTIN And. VICTORIA He's the Class president JUSTIN So- VICTORIA By vote. Terrified by the revalation. JUSTIN Oh. Oh.... shit. Justin and Victoria run inside of the school. InT. Onyx trainer's school O.T.S Just as Justin and Victoria make it inside a gate slams down in front of them with F
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MeMBER Hey Lux... (confused) Are you running the garden now? Luxcalibur nods as he smiles. MemBER Oh... Okay. The patron makes his way to the garden but Luxcalibur growls and points to the sign in. MemBER Sorry... Ummm The man signs in and bows. Lux smiles and he makes his way to the garden. Lux continues smiling and wagging his tail, facing forward waiting for the next person to make their way in. ExT. opal ward Its a relatively nice day outside. People are casually strolling down the main street in front of Grand Hall. Justin and V
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So its been quite long, this story is far from gone, I'll also prepare a song and for those who are wondering Fern is still wrong. Terrible segue but 11 is my lucky number. You're welcome. InT. Magma base Maxwell is sitting on his throne next to Momo his Magmortar. Only members of the team are in the base at the moment. Break, Darm and Chris are kneeling in front of the mad king waiting for him to speak. Maxwell Ya done fucked up. All of you. Break Apologies sir. Darm The fuck are you apologizing for? BREAK Failing to stop you. Darm
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Alas a song that works for our newcomer this episode ZEL otherwise known as the trio de dangers including Zero, Eve and Lumi. Here's a song that I think gets them depending on how you interpret it. The soundtrack to this reborn story would be amazing (its my taste in music so yeah bias but true XD) anywho here's da tunes.
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FLORINIA I've avoided injury yes. AMARIA Okay... Goodnight everyone. Amaria leaves. VICTORIA Justin, The two families worked well together. JUSTIN Do they hate each other anymore? VICTORIA No... I think we've averted their attention with that attack. JUSTIN Good. Call Clean and get everyone to go to Seacrest's Garden. VICTORIA Where is that? JUSTIN A block away from Julia's gym, VICTORIA Sure? Is that okay? JuSTIN I'm sure they were just sitting around bored all day. Cain. CAIN Sup?
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So it's been forever since I posted one of these episodes but I've finally had some time to write again and why not continue the story I love to write. Thanks game for existing. That was pretty cool. So story picks up from episode 9 obviously. Refresher? Sure. Justin and co went to fight Pulse tangrowth, split into teams, Blaze is fighting team magma back at the garden episode ends on a trailer line. Here we go with the aptly named episode 10..... "What did I miss?" ExT. seacrest's garden Its night time and most of the Pokémon are sleeping. Seacrest, Blaze and Soldier are tend
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For me personally writing is just a fun thing to do and I like to get better at it. Not getting feedback isn't a deterrent for me anymore. I try to give time to others when I have a moment to sit down and process stories since good feedback builds confidence and said confidence can lead to more stories and work being generated. Seeing you say that it can turn poorly if rewarded did immediately send a signal to me Commander as I can see that turning sour pretty quickly. Just for anyone out there I guess don't be afraid to post everything you want to write about. This is a great forum let's enjo
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So umm, I'm not the most active in this portion area lately. I'll admit it but the fact that my last topic from December is still on the page of recent posts before this topic means maybe there isn't enough going on. Is it for lack of interest or feedback. I can't say since refer to the first sentence. Maybe and admins feel free to comment. If there's some incentive to comment and create content for this section so people want to contribute here as much as other sections. I think since this site is based on the idea of pushing dreams to their limit the creative writing section should be one of
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Writing is getting hard. I used to not care about feedback but... idk. Mehhh I'll just try not to care.
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So here's that feedback for this episode. If you have some awesome if not, well nothing new here. Enjoy the new episode. 10 may be a while since I'm in the midst of changing jobs. Curious would anyone enjoy a holiday ep featuring the stars in a non-canon story just for hanachistmawanza?
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So that's episode 9. I think the new Magma members as well as showing Darm's position and failing was cool. Had to expand on the personalities of some since most side characters don't really get development time in a game as big as this. One thing I like but I don't know if others like is just how good Justin's team is with or without him. They're all pretty good on their own which makes them a little op but Justin's training methods are different so maybe it is in line with his character. Anyway here's this episode's song. Dedicated to the King of Team Magma Maxwell. rawrrr
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JuSTIN What the hell is this?! You have prisoners? Justin grabs the Pangoro leader by the fur of its collar. The Pangoro grunts weakly but angrily at Justin. JuSTIN (furious) Open the cage. The daunting Pokémon pushes Justin away and barks again. Before Justin attacks again, Luxcalibur cuts him off and points to Justin's watch and howls. Justin slowly reads it. JUSTIN (confused) War... kids... Missing. Justin sighs as he runs his hands through his very short hair. JUSTIN Damn, I can never do one thing at a time. Justin kicks the
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ChrIS If I can't have it.... no one will. Explosion... Golem begins to glow brightly and everyone stares in horror but before the ball shaped creature is able to self-destruct it is surrounded in flames and subsequently burned to death then shortly after to ashes. From the skies falls an extremely large Magmortar which lands in the ashes of the golem scattering its remains to the wind. DARM Awwwww damn it. MAXWELL (O.S.) Thank you Momo. A rare candy flies past the group and into Momo's hand. He unravels then eats the treat and throws the wrapper to the ground
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Wow, episode 9. I've read em, you've read em... maybe. Here's the 9th episode. Doing more of the dual story thing. Works nice for me since the team has been split up a bit and it gives time to build more characters outside of the main crew as well as introduce side plots villains and all that jazz. Had a lot of fun writing this episode but sadly the silliness and puns are going into hibernation as when "The battle for beryl" arc (is that a nice name lemme know) starts then it gets pretty dark and serious as veterens of the game can expect. My playthrough with this team is going hilariously awf
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id like a hat. me and my blaziken if possible
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As usual comment in this ol section so I know if I'm getting better or worse at writing. A man can dream can't he.
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after writing the last episode of Justin's story in reborn. I found a new profile pic that I think best describes the duo... flawlessly
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Sooooo Underbelly was fun. A little play on words as Justin, Lux and Victoria travel to the underbelly of Obsidia. The other side is underbelly is the most exposed and vulnerable side of any creature or person. To show it is scary and this is exactly what Blaze and Izzy (Isabella) show each other. Anyhow I know how you guys love these songs... maybe. So here is the theme for Team Magma. rawr. Don't forget to like share and subscribe.... oh wait. Just comment and criticize.
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DARM Hey new Darm Jr. You ain't allowed to slack. The Darmanitan flies over in a Flare Blitz crushing Blaze between himself and the Onix. He then uppercuts Blaze into the air and proceeds to run up Onix who raises his body. ChRIS Good job Onix. DARM Keep up the synergy boys! The burning ape continues his assault while running up the rock snake's spiraling staircase of a body and bats Blaze higher and jumps off Onix's head to punch Blaze back downwards. Onix uncurls around him and bats the outnumbered bird into the streets and a large amount of blood can be se
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NANCY I'm sorry but if you use your psychic power to assist in walking your legs wont regain their strength. The young esper looks saddened and drops her head. Blaze raises her head high and gestures to mimic him as he takes a deep breath then proceeds to move forward one step at a time. After following the young foul's instructions Kirlia is able to take four unassisted steps before pausing to take a break. Blaze cheers and Kirlia weakly smiles. NANCY Very good. You're already making significant progress. Blaze helps her to sit down. NANCY Perhaps a break is
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So kids, here's that 8th episode. I'm cranking them out lately and I feel pretty good about this bold attempt. So I decided to do two things I've been wanting to practice more. "B story writing" and "show don't tell" I commented on another writer needing to do this and decided my own medicine might actually be tasty. So in this episode I focused on Blaze, Justin's best friend and Combusken and Isabella, the Kirlia that Blaze rescued in the prior chapter. The two share a bit of time together in this episode showing how Blaze represents a lot of what Justin teaches. But I've avoided the talking
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and now I have 70.... thanks a lot
