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Pokemon Reborn Development Blog

Pokemon Rejuvenation Development Blog

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  1. Damage
    Thanks Halloween for the feedback. Super glad you like Justin, he's a character I've been thinking about for a while now. I guess I'll just go into each note for now... "as societies progress..." This line is meant to setup how Justin feels about and treats Pokémon. He tries to treat them with a high level of dignity and respect which is why he goes to the effort of teaching Blaze things like reading and writing. Keeping characters true to the source is my first and biggest priority. I want to make sure all characters are seen here as they are in the game even Fern... That said I alread
  2. Damage
    Alright, as a writer I strive for the level of detail when it comes to the scene that you painted here. From the rotten boards being crashed into by this rock faced monster down to the rusted weapon your girl bashed its face with. Its so much nicer to read than "she hit it good with a pole". I'd like to see this adventure into the ruins that you've started here. Sorry I've not much to offer but this was pretty good so I don't have much besides keep writing.
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    Thanks, the font size bothered me too, so I'll gladly remedy that for episode 2. I am trying to keep the characters as close to their real selves in the game. Yeah arrogant mcs have been done a lot but this fits the mold I'm going for a lot better in the long run. He generally isn't this rough I promise you. I do like the critiques and I'll do my best to implement them in upcoming episodes. Thank you again.
  4. Damage
    For episode one, I decided that the main character, Justin Wayland deserves a theme song. Here's our buddy's song.
  5. Damage
    Damn, if a western styled movie started off like this I'd move to the front of the theatre.
  6. Damage
    Opal Ward It is now late evening. People are seen walking down the streets, most of them smoking. In front of one house a small Shinx is sitting atop a garbage can lazily smiling at passerbys. Justin and Blaze are seen walking train tracks towards the Opal Bridge. From the cavern fly out swarms of Noibat. Justin So Noibat are common here. Back in my day caves didn’t have dragons in them… Well one did. This is good though. We train with these guys and we will build up speed and reaction time. We’ll do this every day after studying for about three hours. In a week or so we’ll give the boom la
  7. Damage
    Opal Ward Justin walks down the road seeing cops and firefighters assisting wounded and talking to citizens who witnessed the bomb. He sees the lake and stops for a moment. Justin Yeah perhaps letting time do its thing would have worked out the same for our bad guy. An old man sitting at the edge of the pier looking onto the lake looks at Justin then back at the lake. Old man Perhaps you’re right young man. This town has been deteriorating for the past decade. Why one would even bother attacking it at this point is beyond me. Justin Anyone who really hates this town c
  8. Damage
    Hello all. To build upon my writing I've decided to write a story based on my current playthrough of Reborn. Its a narrative following a fictional character interacting in place of the MC in the game. The events for the most part are the same with some being changed to better reflect the main character and his pokemon team. Any and all criticism is helpful and wanted. Please try not to just flame me since that does little in the way of improvement. Anyway here's a short intro so you know what you're getting into. (Things regarding format please also note as I'm writing this in word using a scr
  9. Damage
    Mega Hitmonchan Wonder guard Hp 50 Atk 115 Def 139 Sp atk 35 Sp def 130 Speed 86 speed So Hitmonchan is a boxer and his basic premise is about defense over offense. So spike up the defenses since his hp is pitiful and give him the ultimate defensive ability. I considered giving more speed over special defense but with that ability power and speed can't be too ridiculous. Overall this makes chan a pretty tough one to take down but not impossible. His attack could be lower to raise his speed tier and keep him from being broken physically but I think this pans out nicely.
  10. Damage
    I actually raised Nidoking to learn thrash and poison spikes. Setup with him and gabite then Camerupt came when the sand ended since the sand puts out the fire every time. I had to bench trap because yeah too frail. Luckily no one knows rain dance or water sport so this battle was winable since every mon had to switch into fire.
  11. Damage
    no mercy haha thats awesome
  12. Damage
    Shelly's gym (Hardcore) My team is Gabite Sand tomb/Slash/Dragon Claw/ Sandstorm Swampert Water gun/protect/rock slide/mudbomb Camerupt Iron head/magnitude/lava plume/rock slide Trapnich Rock slide/earthquake/dig/crunch Krokorok dig/sand tomb/torment/crunch Ryhorn chip away/smack down/bulldoze/scary face Normally this team would have mild difficulty beating shelly since grass moves slaughter me. But theres a politoed in the room that I can't kill for some reason. (Commander why) I'm doing a mono ground so if it isn't ground then I'd rather not use it even to overcome this obstacle. I a
  13. Damage
    thats crazy. its still pretty funny though
  14. Damage
    On that Mr.Mime note. I just realized there can be a female Mr.Mime... I'm all for equality but uhh.. Was Ms.Mime impossible?
  15. Damage
    Toggle feature for the HUD?
  16. Damage
    This game looks beyond amazing. I have a feeling running it will be like Crysis 3 though...
  17. Damage
    Moxie is only working if you OHKO an opponent. That's not how it worked way back when I had Gyrados so idk which is the correct working format. OHKO or just KO.
  18. Damage
    I think there may be something wrong with the field, looks a little glitchy.
  19. Damage
    Mannnnn @$#% these water fields. How you gonna take away Gyrados and Lanturn then send us underwater, that's some first class shenanigans. Real note, these fields seem a tad OP in favor of gym leaders. I mean unless you're rolling with more than one water type or electric special attacker these fields might make you feel like less of a person. Well Yolo so good luck to my Blaziken/Charizard starters like myself.
  20. Damage
    Just one episode 13, well that's a steal. Seriously though good work, pulling out all the stops right now.
  21. Damage
    If earthquake and magnitude break icy field, why doesn't bulldoze?
  22. Damage
    Numero Uno for me is tied with the true king of pokemon (not Arceus and his punk @$$) it's MEWTWO. He is so gangsta. I hear the floor shakes when he stomps. Second is gonna be the pokemon that got me to watch the show as a kid. Charizard. he went from cutest mon to absolute douche and we loved him. The original fire starter that for some reason even though he looks like a dragon, roars like a dragon and breathes fire like a dragon needs to go mega to be a dragon. W/e still my dragon.
  23. Damage
    I saw a level 98 Goomy. Ame is you're favorite movie quote just "good luck"?
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