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  1. Damage
    Everyone needs a song and Florinia is no exception. Her song is one of my personal favorites and something I used in an audition that landed me a role. P.S everytime why not turns into the dam pokemon in my script I get a little angrier. This joke has gone on too long.
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    The Magmar jumps up and its hand combusts, it avoids Magnezone to everyone's surprise and aims for Julia. Before it lands it's attack Justin grabs it out of the air and slams it on the ground and punches the firebrand in the stomach before tossing him over to Blaze who kicks him upward into the air and jumps with him and kicks him into Luxcalibur who simply grins as we cut away to seeing electric lights going off behind Justin, Blaze, Julia and Magnezone. JusTIN You good? Julia recalls her Magnezone. JuLIA I am. But Magnezone was fighting two fire types alone since Rini is grass. J
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    JusTIN (even more confused) Like actually a robot? Fern starts laughing and Florinia walks towards the factory. JulIA No. She's Rini. JusTIN So she's a robot named Rini? JULIA (upset) Noooooooooooooo FlorINIA The Meteors have probably been alerted to our presence. JusTIN Imagine that. FlORINIA We don't have to. JusTIN God damn it. Lux? Luxcalibur looks inside and points to both left and right sides. JusTIN Okay so they don't know I'm here so if you could continue to distract them. FlorINIA Pardon. Justin if I'm not mistaken. JusTIN Yeah? FloR
  4. Damage
    Wow time flies huh. Already made five of these things. Maybe I'll reach episode 19 before Ame. Dare to dream. Anyway episode five sees the return of a couple cool cats and the introduction to everyone's favorite Flo-bot, unless you're a little more progressive. There's action, there's comedy and honestly not enough time to do everything but this is a small piece of the journey so I wanted to keep it to one episode. Comment, like, yell, rant or just do some curls in the gym. Surprise me. Without further add dew here is episode 5: The Blackwater-gate Scandal. InT. Seacrest's Garden Morning Jus
  5. Damage
    This is good. I guess it just makes sense that the characters we create are similar to us in one way or another. Even villanous characters have a little bit of the creator in them. Me personally the villain that I like the most that I've written is pretty much me if I was pushed farther and desperate to win. I suppose it would be a little difficult to create a character you have no connections with.
  6. Damage
    So like many in this portion of the forum I have an OC or OCs that I relate to. I think mainly because like many writers characters that I create are a piece of myself. A person that is a fraction of me that reacts in scenarios that a certain part of me agrees with. #1 is a secret agent that feels powerless all too often but tries his hardest to enjoy everything around him. Is there any character that you've created you feel the same way about and why if you don't mind going in detail.
  7. Damage
    As per usual I have a theme song lined up and sorry to say that Blaze's song isn't yet although I know what it is. Just not the time kids. This episode's character song is Luxcalibur who everytime I write his character doing something this song comes on. I feel as though this thoroughly describes his mentality on a good day. The original version of course.
  8. Damage
    JUSTIN Blaze. Blaze walks closer to Justin looking up curiously to his sparring partner. JUSTIN Odds are that one day and only one day. We will lose. Not anytime soon obviously but one day. If that time comes. InT. UNDERGROUND RAILS Blaze and the Noibat leader are on the ground getting barraged with a hail of lightning attacks from afar by Klinklang. Blaze sees the Noibats being constantly assaulted and picks himself up. JUSTIN (V.O.) We get stronger and we fight again. Blaze starts releasing fire at an exponential rate. A bolt of electricity knocks him down again. JUSTIN (
  9. Damage
    The next shot we see Shinx yawning sitting next to his young owner who is playing with a gameboy. The child lays his head on Shinx's body as he plays. The small cub looks around for a moment then closes his eyes and goes to sleep. The boy's father and mother walk into the living room and stand side by side in front of the boy. FATHER Hey champ... Can you put down the game for a minute? BOY Yes sir. He happily turns his game off and places it on the floor then looks up smiling at his father while petting his resting friend. MOTHER We need to talk about your mon- FATHER Your Po
  10. Damage
    Hello all, for everyone who has been checking out the series sorry about the hiatus but a lot of film projects take up my time which is awesome but I really like this story and of course working on my writing. This story has never left my mind so if I can share it with all you cool people then I'm all for the effort needed. So a small note before starting, this episode isn't too heavy on Justin so if you come just for his HILARIOUS one liners then I'm afraid you'll have to come back next time. No this episode focuses more on his teammate Blaze the Torchic and Luxcalibur the Luxio. I hope you e
  11. Damage
    From the effort to the look to the varying degrees of effect this field is an absolute masterpiece and assuming its the gym leader I think it is, it can match them almost as perfectly if not just as much as Corey's field did him (if you oust him). Just to honor your hard work I'll try to beat the boss without burning the field. I respect you that much. (though I'll probably fail and end up using fire.)
  12. Damage
    Here's the feedback booth for the story I'm writing. as well as questions I'll have for viewers since that area is going to get cluttered fast. First is I'm going up to episode 5 since real life filming is going to get in the way. I'll probably pick back up in a few months, Second to make it easier how do I make clickable parts in the first post so one can skip to a certain episode instead of sifting through. Lastly I'll condense each episode into one post to enhance ease. Leave your thoughts, I always appreciate.
  13. Damage
    So I hope everyone enjoys this episode as much as I did. Three fights may have been a little much but they're kinda my favorite thing. Anywho this week's theme belongs to Julia. A song (if you will) that I feel she would be very likely to play at any party she wants to liven up. If it somehow hasn't with her insane presence alone.
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    Blaze shrugs and both of them laugh. JUSTIN You ready buddy. The first of our many league battles. Journey of a thousand miles and the sort. Blaze releases embers from his ruffled feathers. JUSTIN Lets go! Both young battlers run towards Julia's gym. Ext. julia's power plant Justin and Blaze run up to the wide doors of the gigantic building. It's a showcase for metalwork and industrial lightning rods. The building's roof with the same induction capabilities as shown by its vast metal wire network that connects its metal poles across the entirety of the roof. While the size of t
  15. Damage
    FERN I don't think you quite understand. You think I have friends... JUSTIN I did until you started talking. FERN See the top dog doesn't have friends. Just a seat at the top of the world. JUSTIN (astonished) Are you for real? FERN I'm the realest thing that ever walked this planet. I'm also the most forgiving. If you apologize for trying to bring me down to your level then all will be forgiven. JUSTIN I think I'm going to do both of us a favor and walk away before I do something I'll regret. Justin starts walking away but Fern grabs his shoulder and pulls him back.
  16. Damage
    Hello everyone, this one took a little while what with writer's block. Always a good time. This episode takes place a little while after Episode 2. So as usual read, critique, banter or comment on my good looks. Any feedback is good feedback. Without further adieu... I bring you.. Episode 3 :The only way to win InT. Seacrest's garden (early aftnernoon) Justin and Blaze are in the garden facing off against a young trainer and his Pikachu. Blaze has grown about 3 inches taller and is noticeably bigger than last time, his black feathers are also much shinier. On the side is Seacrest with Luxcal
  17. Damage
    Just read the story and it was pretty dark. I'm seeing like a noir vibe with this gritty and bitter man who has a chip on his (lucky to be there) shoulder. There was a lot of setup that led us to seeing someone else who will potentially be our lead. I like the mind games. My only qualm was Mike thinking that his coworker would be hunting him down. That seems odd given the coworker was fired for a very realistic reason. Being bad at his job and almost killing friends. I must say I'm very curious as to where the story goes. The pacing was pretty good, the imagery was nice and the setting worked.
  18. Damage
    I used my script writing software for the format this time around. The positive is it cleans up everything nicely the downside is I don't see until now that some names weren't capitalized properly. When transitioning it over its a little tougher but I'll just spend more time proving when it gets to the site. Sorry about that for now. JustinXCain let the fan-fic of the fan fic begin lol I like Shelly too and her growth during the game is pretty great imo. I also wanted to give Justin more time dealing with certain characters to give him more to work with and his backstory shares some elements
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    Hey the story was pretty enjoyable. I was really getting into but the mountain of names being listed all at once sucked me right out. I think you should introduce people as we meet them. I'm all for setting up characters we see later but given the sort of story we're about to hear I don't think it works as well. The beggar's story trails off a bit and I'm guessing that's because he wants to talk to your MC again the next day which is fine. Just since this is their first meeting, how long is this guy going to sit down and listen? A question to ask is if you were listening how long would you sit
  20. Damage
    Everyone needs a theme song and this episode we tribute one for Shelly. A fitting song I feel. You are of course free to feel as you please.
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    Shelly recalls her Yanmega and begins walking inside with Justin following her. The Luxio walks between Justin's legs, purring all the while. JUSTIN (surprised) Hello... you uhhh, want a sleep over or something? ShELLY Looks like he likes you. Justin picks up the young lion. JUSTIN You wanna join team shenanigans? The Luxio nestles itself in Justin's arms. JUSTIN Welcome to the squad Luxcalibur. ShELLY Why Luxcalibur? Justin holds up Lux's collar. ShELLY He lost his home? JUSTIN Looks like it. If we find the owner, he'll get back. I promise. Shelly walks i
  22. Damage
    SEACREST More than anything. JUSTIN Then you can help out by giving me a couple blue tee shirts. Seacrest rubs his bald head and stares at Justin in hesitation. SEACREST Hmmmm. One condition. If it gets nasty you turn tail. Justin and Shelly both stand up. JUSTIN We both know that's not- Shelly pokes Justin in the side. JUSTIN Turn it wag it, whatever you want. Seacrest sighs and heads inside. JUSTIN Rebecca. REBECCA Yes? JUSTIN I'm terrified at the thought of it but I need you to watch over Blaze. REBECCA I can but wouldn't he be safe in a Pokéball?
  23. Damage
    Hello everybody, here is the second episode of Justin's story in Reborn. Hope you all enjoy and if you have time don't forget to critique until your heart's content. Episode two is called "Garden Party" InT. Opal ward apartment late noon The episode picks up exactly where the last left off. Shelly has just entered the apartment building and approached Rebecca and Justin who is still holding a now sleeping Blaze. Rebecca Shelly! Thank you so much for coming. Rebecca hugs Shelly briefly before rushing her over to her sick Kricketot. Shelly Aww... The poor thing. Shelly sits down to thoro
  24. Damage
    All of these additions are so epic and make this feel right at home for me as I love the Tales series more than any other. Definitely keep up the good work and don't feel bad about taking days off for youtube videos. The stress relieving days are important for a creative mind.
  25. Damage
    Thanks, I'll try to fix the wording a little more. I feel you about the ladies of Reborn, only one I don't feel one way or another about is Victoria because I feel not enough was done with her. As for Fern, I hate to say but tread carefully. We all want Fern harmed in some way but I feel like it definitely needs to be earned otherwise its still senseless violence. We could go on forever so yeah. When you put up your story I'll have to check it out.
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