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  1. Sceptilespy
    Pulse Hydreigon. Looks like a snake. Heads can turn things to stone.
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    E17 bar is at 100%. efinxguvnj dsnvzueajdvbdskcbikv xj

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    While I wouldn't put it in that way, I somewhat agree. Games don't NEED to have anything unique in order to succeed, but having a unique or somewhat original aspect that you don't see in a lot of other games (18 gyms (When it was new), choice based gameplay), will definitely make people want to play it. While I wouldn't refer to your game "cookie cutter", nothing really draws me in. " 18 gyms? Seen that. Elite 8? Rejuv's gonna do that, but could be good. Custom Megas? OOOOOOH. Story driven gameplay. I mean, that's basically every fangame on the reborn forums"- a summarized thingy of what I thought going through this. I like the idea of multiple evil teams. But frankly, between 18 gym leaders, probably 2 rivals, some other important people, and +1 evil team, there's no way I'm going to remember anything. I think a good idea for your game would be to switch perspectives at some point. Like, you play through maybe 2 gyms as one sister, and then switch to the perspective another sister with a set team. That would definitely be cool. You could also do a little bit better with the superpowers. I mean, if we combine all above average and popular Pokemon fangames, at this point 20% of the world population can speak to Pokemon. I think some more creative abilities would be cool, like maybe sister 1 (lmao forgot her name), can manifest certain moves and aspects of Pokemon she's bonded with. Like being able to survive in toxic substances and breathe under water would be a result of a bond with Toxapex. Just something to think about. Regardless, good luck, and I hope you take what I and the dude I quoted into consideration, because there has to be at least an ounce of truth in there somewhere. Also @fjnfkwdnf What you said didn't make much sense. You'd get more enjoyment out of playing games with much more experienced developers, and have had YEARS to fix their mistakes than a game that doesn't even exist yet.
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    I want to die. I know it seems like a crappy self hate meme, but I've adopted that into my go to vocabulary when I'm at a loss for words or I'm in a crappy situation. To say the least, it's come back to bite me more then a few times.
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    Remember, Ame took a long time fixing the AI. So like I said, don't count Gyarados out.
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    I know this is off topic, but I feel it had to be said.
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    Long story short. Gyarados is completely possible, and so are most psuedos at this point in the game. EDIT: Someone mentioned Gyarados sweeping at Plus 6. The AI is improved, so I think it's a safe bet to say that it knows when it can get fucked and it can make an appropiate countermeasure. "but, sc3pt1le, wat 1f th3 f03 h4s n0 c0unt3r". This is Pokemon Reborn. Anything significant enough to require a +6 Gyarados will have a counter.
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    @Anti_Hero Thunder wave freezing was to simulate Frostbite. Or just getting stuck in cold weather altogether. Basically, what I'm saying is getting paralyzed in cold weather might as well be freezing. IDK.
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    I mean, you could try that. Or you could listen to the dialogue where they explain what the move does. But as far as your question goes, I'm positive there's a way.
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    Ken is basically Pokeaim.
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    I'd swap out A-Sandslash for Swinub/Sneasel. I'd swap out Exeggecute for Tangela. Change Litwick for Ghastly. Honestly, Litwick isn't doing anything until Level 40. And as far as game development goes, that's like, a clean year. Change Makuhita for Riolu. Normal: Porygon/Starly Other then that, the list is solid in my eyes.
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    An Ice Rink field would be cool. If it makes it any easier. I think you could snag Angie's field from Rejuvenation with Jan's permission and make some changes. Something like this. x1.5 to Ice attacks x1.2 to Priority moves Dance moves effects are doubled. Earthquake, Bulldoze, Flame burst, and Heat Wave destroy the field Freeze chances on all moves are doubled. Thunder Wave now Freezes instead of Paralyzing. All Flying moves get an Ice Sub Type. Tailwind creates Hail. (TBH, that's all you really need for a first gym, but you could probably expand on it.)
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    Serperior- Grass/Dragon. (Draco Meteor now can be taught.) 90/90/100/110/90/140 Ability: Intimidate Hidden Ability: Contrary Garbodor- Poison 100/95/105/90/110/75 Abilities: Poison Touch/Poison Point HA: Merciless Silvally- Normal 110/110/110/110/110/110 Ability: RKS System HA: Multitype Luxray- Electric/Dark 80/135/95/100/90/120 Ability: Guts/Static HA: Tough Claws (Can now learn Volt Tackle) Bewear- Fighting/Fairy 150/130/80/10/110/60 Ability: Fluffy/Fur Coat HA: Huge Power (Can now learn Play Rough) Golisopod- Water/Bug 85/140/150/60/90/90 Ability: Tough Claws/Drizzle HA: Adaptability
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    @ssbCasper That would be Reborn's Circus Field. A good idea for a field is: A graveyard, the sky, and a thunderstorm. I have a thread where people made some cool field effects.
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    I don't see the difference.
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    Personally, I'd be a chill reserve leader for, well, everyone. I'd live my days out in peace and harmony, until I'm needed. Whether a Gym Leader dies, or is wrapped up in something, I'll be there to step up and take responsibility in the leader's absence. I'd have a variety of teams of course, seeing as I could fill in for all 18 leaders if need be. I'd first get this philosophy by watching Saphira fend off Team Meteor, and realizing I could never be as good or talented as someone like her at the way my life was going. That inspired me to do the best I can and help out. I went all over the world, the universe even, searching for new Pokemon, techniques, etc. But something I found out about myself is, I never really liked doing one thing. I was good at multi tasking, and used hundreds of different techniques to get myself out of binds. It was at that point I realized, I had become protean. All the different environments, Pokemon, People. Everything I was exposed to actually biologically changed me. I knew I could use this ability for evil, but I thought that that would just be setting myself up for failure. So I decided to use my newfound ability productively, and try out for every single Gym Leader position in the league. It took about 9 different types before Ame realized what was up. I knew this was what I wanted to do. Use different things, test different ideas. Doing the same thing forever is boring anyway. Why not switch it up. And besides, at the end of the day, I'll be the spine, holding the the Reborn Region up. How cool is that? My casual team is- Greninja Garchomp Charizard Galvantula Mega Medicham Skarmory.
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    Assuming sign ups are still open. Here we Go. EDIT: A bunch of changes lol I'd like the Ace Trainer M with RWBY theme.
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    So far, it seems developers are cool about this type of stuff. Ame and Jan have given PBS files to people who requested them. Example, Acegamestv. He's done a few runs where he's captured people's Pokemon, and that's only possible with the PBS files. And who has the PBS files you ask?
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    Just, what do you think about all of this? Give me thoughts, anything. 

     

     

    Name: Gang Leader Aiden

    Type Gym: Normal

    Level Cap: 25

    Pokemon available- 

    18 starters (at this point it's routine)

    Pokemon available at time of battle. 

    Spoiler

    Route 1- Slakoth, Caterpie, Scyther, Staravia, Tangela

    Legend Way- Shroomish, Foongus, Beedrill, Trubbish

    Bloom Outskirts- Scraggy, Croagunk, Pawniard

    Event Pokemon/Hidden Pokemon: Aron, Machop, Snivy, Shuppet, Magikarp

    Tms available 

    Spoiler

    Sunny Day

    Hail

    Work Up

    Rock Smash (Buffed to 65 Damage and 100% defense drop)

    Taunt 

    Smack Down

    Shadow Ball

     

    Field effect used (Custom)

    Spoiler

    Tournament Ring- "In the arena, all forms of combat excel!"

    Elemental moves (Ice, Fire, Water, Grass, Ground, Rock, Bug,Flying) get a x1.5% boost: "Mother nature overwhelms the opponent!"

    Spiritual moves (Ghost, Psychic) get a x1.5% boost: "The challenger challenges the mental boundaries of this world!"

    Scientific or Man harnessed moves (Electric, Steel, Poison) get a x1.5% boost: "The challenger strikes with moves too complex for the average joe!"

    Legendary moves (Fairy, Dragon) instantly ohko the user and the foe: "A strikingly powerful blast fueled from the legends of our ancestors!"

    Trained/Technique type moves (Normal, Fighting)  get a x1.2% boost: "The result of hard training and studying!"

    Dark Type moves get a x1.5% boost: "An underhanded trick by our opponent!"

    All Priority moves get a x2% boost. "A strike performed at hyperspeed!"

    All Normal Type status moves effects are doubled. 

    Pokemon cannot fall asleep.

    Paralysis only lasts 5 turns. 

    Burn damage is 12% a round,  but gives all of the burned opponent's attacks a 30% chance to burn. 

    Sound based moves get a x1.1% boost. "The attack combined with the roars of the crowd!"

    Poison damage is buffed to 20% a round. 

    After using Work Up, Moves that require charge or recharge to use, now don't. This effect only lasts for one use of a move though. (Ex. Round 1: Work Up. Round 2: Hyper Beam. Round 3: Hyper Beam. Round 4: Recharge.)

     

     

     

     

     

    Aiden's Team: 

    Spoiler

    Vigoroth Lv 22 w/ Silk Scarf

    Slash

    Aerial Ace

    Rock Tomb

    Shadow Claw

     

    Porygon Lv 22 w/ Eviolite

    Ability: Analytic 

    Recover

    Toxic

    Psybeam 

    Tri Attack

     

    Gumshoos Lv 23 w/ Lum Berry 

    Ability: Stakeout

    Leer

    Tackle

    Bite

    Work Up

     

    Trumbeak Lv 23 w/ Metrenome

    Ability: Skill Link

    Pluck

    Fury Attack

    Bullet Seed

    Rock Blast 

     

    Loudred Lv 24 w/ Oran Berry

    Echoed Voice

    Work Up

    Uproar

    Shadow Ball

     

    Diggersby Lv 25 w/ Sitrus Berry

    Ability: Huge Power

    Tackle

    Bulldoze

    Double Kick 

    Agility

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Opening dialogue: 

    Spoiler

    "So..., a lot's happened in the past week. Team Zeta, Cults, and High School Drama. I just want you to know, this is all your fault. By you forcing my hand, a lot of things are going to change. You've set everything in motion, and when it all crumbles in on you, when you're all alone, squealing in pain to the crunching sound of your bones, you only have yourself to look at. You're not a hero. You're ignorant. You're ignorant of everything that happens next. Are you ready to take on the responsibility of what you've caused? Do you truly think you can save the citizens of Wyquil? Well, I don't. I'm a Gym Leader, so I'm pretty good at assessing where you are, in terms of a person, and a trainer. You're not up to speed anywhere. So, I'll crush your resolve here, and send you back to wherever you came from with your tail between your legs. I'll humiliate you in front of everyone! And then you'll know what you're getting into. Pain, sorrow, and anger. You're not ready for any of that, and I'll show that here! Prepare yourself. I don't pull punches!"

    Last Pokemon: 

    Spoiler

    "You think you can change anything? I'm not done yet!"

    Loss:

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    " I-I..., I just don't know what to say. If you think you've done anything positive, you're wrong. In fact, you've only showed me why Team Zeta's goal is worth supporting. If worthless trash like you can just poof into existence and beat someone like me, it only shows how unfair this world is. I will not forget this. Take your damn badge and get out. That'll raise the God forsaken level cap to 35, and make your rotten Pokemon respect you somehow. Damien will give you a Tm and a Pokemon outside. Get out of my sight."

    Pokemon awarded: Porygon/Zangoose. (Porygon if you won with more then 3 Pokemon, and Zangoose if you won with 3 or less Pokemon.)

    Item awarded: Link Stone and Up-grade if you got Porygon. Flame Orb and Toxic Orb if you got Zangoose.

    Tm awarded: Facade and Strength. 

    Next Gym Type: Ghost

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      Sceptilespy

      That's actually a really good idea. A magician. I can make that work lol.

      I can also come up with a field effect for him to take advantage of.

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      Sceptilespy

      Format: Double Battle

      Team: Delphox, Sableye, Medicham, Claydol, Zoroark, and Mismagius. 

      Basic movesets for all as of right now. 

      Theme: Magic

      Field effect: Wonderland:

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      "A wonderland of trickery and absurdity!"

      All Special Psychic moves roll a 6 sided dice to see if their move gets any stronger. 1: x0.5, 2: x0.7, 3: No buff or debuff, 4: x1.2, 5: x1.5, 6: x2. "You toss the dice of endless mystery and roll a(n) (Insert random number you got)"

      All Physical Psychic moves are boosted by x1.2: "The movement challenges the very fabric of reality!"

      All Ghost Type moves are boosted by x1.5: "The spirits of the unknown have come to play!"

      Ghost Type moves hit Normal and Fighting types super effectively. 

      All Dark Type moves are boosted by x1.3: "The endless darkness is so exciting!"

      All Priority moves get boosted by x1.2 and confuse the opponent: "BOO!"

      Pokemon cannot fall asleep

      Dance moves get their effects doubled. 

      Fiery Dance is boosted by x1.2. "What a feisty dance!"

      Haze steals the opponent's stat changes.

      Mist puts up a reflect and light screen. 

      Multitype and RKS system give the user two random types every round.

      Sound moves get boosted by x1.2.

      Double Team's effect is doubled.

      If any Beam or Ball moves miss, they will bounce off a mirror and deal double the damage. "Back atcha!"

       

       

       

       

    4. Wolfox

      Wolfox

      that looks nice, perhaps a nice effect would be that Normal and Fighting moves also hit ghost types, as Nothing is what it seems on the field

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    I feel like a Psychic or Fairy type would do your team well.
  21. Sceptilespy
    Yup. In any case @Littlep12. There are many ways to "work around" the level cap. But I guess if you don't want the level cap all together. You could ask Ame for the PBS files and download RPG maker to change stuff. I just don't think that's necessary though.
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    @gkhmpg I barely EV train my mons and I don't have too much trouble with leaders/bosses. A good strategy will always let you come out on top.
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    Hello again. This will probably be the third to last time I drop dialogue on the forums. I want to get reviews of course. But there's so much more to learn outside of what people say on the internet, positive or negative. Wow. I think that's quotable. Ok. To the dialogue. 

    Krystal- Ice Type/Thaumaturge's mountain Gym Leader.

    Aiden- Team Zeta Agent/Bloom Outskirts Gym Leader

    Barada- Team Zeta Puppetmaster

    Wax- Team Zeta Sneak

    Hazel- Team Zeta Commander

    Papa Ge- Team Zeta Autocrat (Fancy way of saying dictator or supreme leader.)

    Teams-

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    Krystal- Mamoswine, Alolan-Ninetales, Articuno, Walrein, Mega Glalie, Jynx

    Aiden- Silvally, Porygon-Z, Drampa, Mega Pidgeot, Diggersby, Bewear

    Barada- Spiritomb, Ferrothorn, Nidoqueen, Magmotar, Fearligatr, Mega Beedrill

    Wax- Serperior, Kingler, Ursaring, Nidoking, Electivire, Mega Pinsir

    Hazel- Mega Metagross, Tyranitar, Salamence, Volcarona, Greninja, Tangrowth

    Papa Ge- Hoopa-Unbound, Hoopa-Unbound, Honchkrow, Malamar, Bisharp, Drapion

     

    Spoiler

    (Team Zeta HQ. Located under Bloom Central.)

    (Two members are seen walking in.)

    Barada: -nd that's why, Oranges are named orange.

    Wax: See, but that doesn't make sense. Why name oranges, orange? Why not name them yellow? Why aren't apples named red?

    Barada: Because when they were named, nobody cared as much as you do, and they just got to eating, rather then focusing on specifics. Aren't you a cannibal anyway, why do you care?

    Wax: I'm only a cannibal on Tuesdays! Besides, I still want to know what my victims are eating so I can slurp up their nutrients!

    Barada: That might be the most disgusting thing I've heard all year. 

    Wax: Hey, I don't judge your weird dances you do alone at 12:00. 

    Barada: You mean my very important rituals essential to our survival? Yeah, please don't judge.

    Krystal: Can you guys shut up? I already have enough of a headache, and listening to you two stooges speak makes my entire body ache. 

    Wax: Am I really that charming?

    Barada: Wax, shut up.

    Wax: Ok...

    (Aiden walks in meeting room as Barada and Wax sit down.)

    Aiden: Oh, looks like we have some scholars ready for today's class already!

    Krystal: Shut your damn mouth! If it wasn't for you, I wouldn't be here right now!

    Barada: Calm yourself, none of us want to be in the same room as you as well. 

    Krystal: So then why the hell are we here, and what do the citizens of the mountain have to do with it!?

    Aiden: You should really learn to take a hint. Calm down. Now. 

    Krystal: No! You guys dragged me here, after taking a village of innocent people hostage, and beating my boyfriend to near death! Why should I calm down? Why are you calm?! How can you be calm after all the disgusting things yo-.

    (Hazel walks in.)

    Hazel: That's enough. Anymore from you, and-

    (Papa Ge materializes behind Hazel.)

    Papa Ge: We'll get to chopping on your scrawny fantasy boyfriend!

    Krystal: Fantasy? You lit-

    Barada: Seriously, shut up. You're in the presence of two people who can wipe your petty existence off the map in a blink of an eye. 

    Krystal: ...

    Barada: Thank you. And to think, you wanted to talk about headaches. My head is pounding. Please, continue. 

    Papa Ge: Well at least someone has some sense in this world! It's good to know I have people like you on my side bro. We'll be best friends forever!

    Barada: Uhhh, okay?

    Wax: Is the meeting over?

    Papa Ge: Oh right, that's what we're here for. Nope. 

    (Devious smile forms on Papa Ge's face.)

    Papa Ge: It's just starting to get interesting. Take it away my sweet Hazel!

    Hazel: ..., anyways. Let's get down to business. Long story short, we want something from you Krystal.

    Krystal: What is that exactly? What makes it worth dragging me down here and holding my people hostage?

    Hazel: We want you to tell us what the Thaumaturge's cult is planning. 

    .................

    Krystal: The what?

    Hazel: Don't play dumb with me. We've seen you talking directly to the Cyroking as if it was nothing.

    Krystal: I seriously have no idea what you're talking about. I only reside in my village, and rarely go outside. I've never associated with a "Cyroking".

    Wax: God, you're clueless. 

    Krystal: I won't take that from someone who questioned why Oranges were named Oranges! They're literally freakin' orange!

    Barada: Pffft. (Holding back laughter.)

    (Wax stands up.)

    Wax: You'll be sorry you ever said that you insignificant piece of,..., ugh! I can't even think of a comeback! 

    (Wax pulls out a radio.)

    Wax: Bring me my punching bag!

    (Meeting room doors instantly open. Everyone is greeted by Team Zeta grunts dragging in a teenage male.)

    Krystal: What the,.., Cole!

    (Krystal stands up and grabs a pokeball.)

    (Cole coughs up blood.)

    Cole: What,.., are you doing here? Why did you come? You've fallen right into a trap!

    Wax: Speaking of traps, shut yours! 

    (Wax kicks Cole in the mouth.)

    Cole: Augh!

    Krystal: NO! I'll kill you! Go Articuno, destroy him! Use Ice Beam!

    Papa Ge: Stop. 

    .........

    Krystal: Articuno? 

    (Articuno faints.)

    Krystal: What the?

    Wax: Hehehe. Hahahaha. HahaHAHAHAHA! You can't harm me in front of my master!

    (Wax keeps kicking cole in the mouth as he laughs maniacally.)

    Hazel: That's enough Wax. Sit down. 

    Wax: Whatever you say millady!

    (Wax sits, as Krystal's mouth is wide open in shock. She's looking at her fallen Articuno and her boyfriend's bloody face.)

    Papa Ge: IN ANY CASE. We're not fucking around with you. I hope we've made that clear.

    Krystal: I-I, What the hell do you guys want!

    Hazel: I just told you. We want to know what the Thaumaturge's cult is planning.

    Krystal: UGH! I just said I don't know a damn thing about a Cyroking or Thaumaturd's cult! 

    Papa Ge: Suuure, Barada, teach that punching bag a lesson.

    Barada: Um, ok. 

    (Barada walks over to Cole and picks him up.)

    Barada: Go Ferrothorn!

    (Barada drags Cole's face near one of Ferrothorn's spikes.)

    Barada: Start talking. I'd rather not destroy this poor dude's face, but if that's what it takes to save the world then so be it. 

    Krystal: Please stop! I swear on everything I don't know what you're talking about!

    Papa Ge: Damn. I feel really bad for that poor boy. Barada?

    Barada: Yes sir?

    Papa Ge: Turn his face into a shishkebab.

    Barada: Your wish is my command. 

    Cole: No, no no no. UGH! AH! CHILL! CHILL OUT! OH GOD. PLEASE STOP!

    (Barada forces Cole's right eye onto a Ferrothorn spike.)

    Krystal: Jesus christ, STOP! 

    Barada: Then you start talking! Do you think I like doing this! 

    Krystal: I don't know anything about the cult. JUST LET US GO!

    Barada: Listen lady, I have a Beedrill in my party, and if you don't get to talking, I'm gonna get a ton of blood stains on my uniform. 

    Krystal: ..... Fine. If that's what you twisted fuckers want then fine!

    Wax: It's about time. 

    Krystal: Shut up! You want to know what their planning huh! Well here you go! They're going to resurrect the original dragon! Simple as that! Then, they're going to force this shit stain of a planet into a never ending winter! And after that, they'll remake it from the ground up! Happy?!

    Papa Ge: Not really. But I'm somewhat satisfied. Is there anything else you'd like to tell us.

    Krystal: Oh I have a LOT I'd like to tell you. But you should know they already possess Kyurem and Reshiram. They know you have Zekrom. Which means they're coming to kill your asses! All of you!

    Papa Ge: If you honestly think the Cyroking alone is a match for me, then you've got another thing coming. Barada, kill the boy. 

    Krystal: STOOOP! They're also using a modified DNA splicers to summon him at the top of Thaumaturge's mountain! 

    Hazel: What's that do for us. 

    Krystal: If it's just an item they're using, then you could easily steal it and modify it to fuse your two Hoopas! Or whatever you want.

    Papa Ge: Holy..., shit YOU'RE A GENIUS. 

    Krystal: Whatever! Please, let me and Cole go!

    Papa Ge: YES! THIS CHANGES EVERYTHING. OH MAH GAWD THIS IS A BREAKTHROUGH. BARADA KILL THE BOY AND GIRL! THIS IS A MIRACLE ARCEUS HAS BLESSED ME! 

    Krystal: What?

    Cole: Please ...

    Barada: Sorry bro, but it's looking like a wrap for you. 

    Krystal: NO! Go, Walrein and Ninetales!

    Barada: Tch, Ferrothorn, Magmotar, let's do this!

    Wax: Aww, let me join the fun. Go Ursaring!

    Hazel: Quit while you're ahead. Go, Tyranitar. 

    Krystal: I'll take all of you on! 

    (Uses max revive on Articuno.)

    Krystal: (Shoot, she changed the weather.) Come back Ninetales, Go Jynx! Use Reflect!

    Wax: Too Slow! 

    Barada: Ferrothorn, use Gyro Ball on the Ursaring!

    Wax: Catch it Ursaring and use Strength to throw it at the girl! 

    Krystal: Walrein, use Blizzard!

    Hazel: Tyranitar, use Stone Edge to change the Ferrothorn's direction!

    Krystal: What the, agh!

    (Ferrothorn bounces off the Stones and charges straight toward Krystal, successfully chopping her arm off.)

    Krystal: Ugh. It hurts! You guys...! Articuno use Hurricane! Walrein, use Blizzard! Jynx use Blizzard!

    (As the moves are fired off, an extremely destructive snow storm is created.)

    Barada: Ugh! Damn girl! 

    Aiden: Pidgeot, use hyper beam! 

    Krystal: AGH! 

    (Mega Pidgeot's hyper beam pierces through the snowstorm and takes off Krystal's other arm.)

    (All of her pokemon stop their attack and go to help her.)

    Hazel: Where have you been this entire time.

    Aiden: Biding my time. Waiting for an opening.

    Wax: Smart! How did you know this would happen.

    Aiden: It may not seem like it, but Papa Ge is a genius. He knew exactly how this would go down. And took advantage of Mega Pidgeot's no guard ability. 

    Wax: Woah, my master is cool.

    Hazel: But I'm your master....

    Wax: You're meh.

    Hazel:....

    Krystal: Don't ignore me! 

    Aiden: You're half dead. Stop while you're ahead. Your Pokemon won't even fight because they're too busy protecting you. 

    Krystal: Fuck you!

    Aiden: I'm not into girls with no arms. You should really pull yourself together.

    Barada: Wow, that's cold. 

    (Krystal falls to her knees.)

    Hazel: I should end this. Thank you for the information. Die knowing you helped take part in saving the world.

    Aiden: Watch out!

    (Hazel's body is cut in half by an Aegislash.)

    Hazel: huh. Ugh!

    Wax: Hazel! Who did this!

    Barada: You little..., I should've killed you when I had the chance! How dare you kill her! Do you know how much she meant to me?

    (Cole is barely standing up with a pokeball open. It's the one that let the Aegislash lose.)

    Cole: We're leaving. Right now.

    Barada: On my dead body you are! I still have pokemon left! Magmotar, use flamethrower!

    Cole: Go Genesect! Use Techno Blast

    Wax: Ok, how did he get a-

    (Huge explosion.)

    (Cole picks up Krystal and her pokeballs, making her pokemon return, and runs out of the hole created by the explosion.)

    Barada: Get back here! I'm not finished wi-

    (Papa Ge grab's Barada's shoulder.)

    Papa Ge: Don't worry. You'll have your chance for revenge. Let's just focus on what's important now.

    Barada: Bu-but..

    Papa Ge: F O C U S.

    Barada: ..., Yes master. Grunts! Prepare our materials and prepare to leave, there's no way the people of Bloom Central didn't feel that explosion!

    Wax: Also, get Hazel some damn medical attention! She's gonna die!

    Aiden: Leave her all ready before we have a gym leader to deal with!

    Wax: What the? Barada! Come on! Help me carry Hazel!

    Barada: ..., we have to focus on more important things. She's a goner. Grab her pokemon and go.

    Wax: What..? You. YOU! YOU BACKSTABBER! 

    Papa Ge: DIDN'T I SAY  F O C US.

    Wax: ...., yes master. My bad. 

    Aiden: Uh, ok. In that case. Let's get going.

    ....

    Barada: Yeah. 

     

     

     

     

  24. Sceptilespy

    Trying out some more dialogue for my game. 

    Would like to be rated.

    Aiden- Gym Leader of Bloom Outskirts

    Enema- Gym Leader of Bloom Central/Aiden's Ex

    Damien- Aiden's Right Hand Man

    Tyler- Aiden's Lackey

    Dallas- Aiden's Lackey

    Carmen- Aiden's Boyfriend

    Seth- Your Rival

    Vera- Seth's Sister

     

    Spoiler

    (Sounds of battling and trash cans being flung can be heard from a nearby alley.)

    Seth: Uh, ok. I'm just going to ignore that.

    Vera: What if someone is in trouble? 

    Seth: I literally don't care, they're probably in trouble for good reason.

    Vera: What if it's a helpless little girl who bumped into the wrong person?

    Seth: Then sue the parents for neglect. How many of your sentences have to end in question marks for you to understand, we don't acknowledge these things. Remember, you're a criminal, so lay low, and mind your own damn business!

    Vera: Tch, I'm going back there! If you really want to change, you'll come with me!

    Seth: (Mocking Vera) Oh, yeah, I want to change! That will definitely get me out of jail! It's not like I've savagely beaten people before! HAHahaHaAha. -Sigh- (Follows Vera)

    (In the Alley. 6 Figures are visible. 2 males appear to be battling 1 girl. Male 1 has a Rampardos, and Male 2 has an Aerodactyl. Girl 1 has a Vivillon.)

    Vera: SEE, I TOLD YOU S-

    Seth: (Cups Vera's mouth and drags her behind a flung Trash can.) -Whispers- Are you stupid? Do you know who that is?

    Vera: -Whispering is muffled through Seth's hand- Well, clearly I don't, considering I nearly threw out my Pokemon.

    Seth: That's AIDEN. A GYM LEADER. He's literally the law.

    Vera: So what?

    Seth: We're criminals. And you were about to assault the people with him with your Pokemon. Do you want 20 years behind bars?

    Vera: I think 20 years is an overstatement. 

    Seth: Ok, well, let's bring up your history in the Asteroid be-

    Vera: Understood. 20 years is a perfect sentence for someone like myself.

    Seth: Thank you.

    (Large gust of wind blows Trash Can covering Seth and Vera away.)

    Enema: -Panting heavily- Is that all you guys got? 

    Dallas: You have one pokemon left. You cannot win.

    Tyler: You slow or somethin'? Give up while you're ahead and I'll be gentle.

    Enema: Tch, ambushing a girl, and then countering her favorite type? I'm pretty sure being "gentle" is out of the picture.

    Dallas: Details, details. Quit the talking. Rampardos, end this. Use Rock slide!

    Enema: Actually, the battle is already over.

    Tyler: For you maybe. 

    (A swarm of trash cans suddenly drops on Aerodactyl and Rampardos.)

    Dallas: What in the-?

    Tyler: Holy shit!

    Dallas: What the hell did you do!

    Enema: Heh, what did you think that blast of wind was for? I had Vivillon use hurricane to fling the trash cans up, and let you two talk your mouths off until they landed. Pretty smart eh?

    Dallas: It would've been, if that wasn't the final trick up your sleeve. I still have 2 Pokemon left. And this time, Steel won't hurt them. Go Arcanine! 

    Tyler: And I have 3 Pokemon! Go Vivillon!

    Enema: (A Vivillon? What are they planning?) Vivillon! Use Hurricane to launch those trash bags at them!

    Dallas: Not this time you stuck up bug! Arcanine use Heat Wave!

    Tyler: Vivillon, use powder!

    Enema: Wait, no! Don-!

    (Heat Wave Clashes with the Hurricane, Vivillon uses powder to put explosive substances in the air, turning the clash into Arcanine's favor. As well as the Heat Wave turning the Trash bags and bins on fire, and the powder making them explode, effectively turning them into Grenades.)

    (Explosion)

    Carmen/Damien: AIDEN WATCH OUT!

    Seth: Vera, this is our chance! We gotta GO! 

    Vera: She could be dead! I have to check if she's alright!

    Seth: Listen, whoever she is, I know for a fact she wouldn't want a somewhat innocent person to run into the middle of a deadly battle. So do her a favor, and let's bounce!

    Vera: No! I'm going! (Runs into smoke.)

    Seth: You self righteous piece of..., ugh! (Runs into smoke as well.)

    (Smoke clears)

    Tyler: Did we get her?

    Dallas: We definitely did. 

    Vera: Go Lucario! Use Close Combat on those losers!

    Tyler: What the? Dallas!

    Dallas: I got it. Arcanine, use heat wave and light up the leftover substances on the ground! 

    Seth: Go Throh! Use Wide Guard to block it!

    (Explosion clashes against barrier.)

    Tyler: They survived? What the- AUGH! 

    (Tyler falls after getting punched in the stomach by Lucario.)

    Dallas: You ignorant little kids! Where did you even come from! Arcanine, use-!

    Seth: Throh, use Storm Throw!

    (Throh throws Arcanine into the air.)

    Vera: Now, Lucario, Focus Blast it into Oblivion! 

    (Lucario uses focus blast and knocks out the flying arcanine.)

    Dallas: Tch, return Arcanine! I still have a Pokemon left, and I'll be damned if I lose to yo-! Go Staraptor! Use Brave Bird on the girl!

    Vera: Lucario, use counter!

    (Staraptor brave birds into the counter and gets knocked out, flying into Dallas and knocking them both out.)

    Seth: Easy. Now let's go check on the girl and get out of here. The police are in hot pursuit of our asses, and I'm 110% sure they'll check an explosion. 

    Vera: Miss! Are you ok?

    Enema: (Covered under trash bags and ash.) Why did you come here! I'm a Gym Leader, I have it under control!

    Vera: Well seeing as you're covered in ash and dirt, I'd say you don't, here, let me help you up. 

    Seth: VERA. WE HAVE BIGGER PROBLEMS.

    Aiden: There's just no way, I see little old Seth here. With Vera too. Oh, this is way too good.

    Carmen: TOO GOOD.

    Enema: Leave them alone Aiden! It's me you came for right? So focus on me, I still have a Pokemon left!

    Aiden: Quit frontin', you know damn well your legs will give out any second now. 

    Carmen: ANY SECOND.

    Enema: And you know damn well that this isn't right!

    Aiden: Oh so you want to talk about what's right and wrong now? Who made you the grand arbiter on morality?

    Carmen: NOBODY.

    Enema: Well, why don't y- okay, can you shut your poor excuse for a girlfriend up? I can't believe I dumped you and you crawled to this chick.

    Aiden: Go, Silvally! Now. If you have something else you'd like to say, let's hear it. I'm sick and tired of your games. I'm ending your manipulative tyranny here.

    Carmen: RIGHT NOW. 

    Enema: Big words for someone who doesn't understand anything! You're just a pawn!

    Aiden: Pawn I may be, but at the end of the day, I'll be at the top, and you should've been there with me. 

    Carmen: SHOULD'VE.

    Enema: Who cares about being at the top! Have you thought about what will happen to everyone you cared about!

    Aiden: Everyone I cared about is either dead, or covered in trash in front of me wailing about what's right and wrong. 

    Carmen: WAILING. 

    Enema: Don't you have a heart?

    Aiden: You ripped out my heart and threw it down the drain along with our relationship.

    Carmen: TORE IT OUT.

    Aiden: Ok, Carmen, you can stop now. It's starting to annoy me.

    Carmen: Haha, my bad. Now who's this trash bag you're arguing with. Can I drop her in a casket?

    Aiden: That will be my pleasure, but we can't do that yet.

    Seth: -Whispering- Now would be a good time to leave.

    Vera: -Whispering- I'm actually starting to agree with you.

    (Seth and Carmen slowly tip toe out until they hit a barrier.)

    Carmen: Nice try.

    Damien: Where do you think y'all are goin'?

    Seth: Literally anywhere else. 

    Damien: Sorry, see, you've seen a bit to much. So you gotta go.

    Vera: Does that mean you- you're gonna kill us?

    Damien: Duh

    ......

    Seth and Vera: HAHAHAHA, LMAO, LOOK AT THIS TOUGH GUY. 

    Damien: What the? What's so funny losers? 

    Seth: (Tearing up from laughter) With all due respect, We've survived much more then you think we have. You won't be killing shit.

    Vera: I'm more scared of infection from that trash bag then you!

    Damien: Why you little. How about this! Go Salamence!

    Seth: Oh. 

    Vera: Oh.

    Seth: Whatever, if it's a battle you want, it's a battle you'll get! Go Greninja!

    Vera: What he said! Let's do this Weavile!

    Aiden: Go help out Damien, Carmen. I'll handle Enema. 

    Carmen: She only has 1 pokemon but ok. I'll take on the runts. Go Alakazam!

    Aiden: Don't think I haven't noticed you using revives under those trash bags. 

    Enema: Tch, Doesn't matter. (All I need is to create an opening, and then Aiden is done for!)

    Aiden: Your Pokemon are at half health. You don't stand a chance.

    Enema: Well, I'm surprisingly resourceful, so let's see!

    Damien: I'll crush you, and then I'll take that sweet little girl back home with me!

    Seth: If you touch her, on my life, it's a wrap for you! I'll destroy you right here!

    Damien: Try me!

    Carmen: Guess it's a double battle then!

    Vera: Let's smack these guys!

    Aiden: You're mine!

    Enema: Come at me!

    All: I WILL NOT LOSE! '

     

    Aiden's Team: Silvally, Porygon-Z, Mega Pidgeot, Raticate-Alola, Pyroar, Snorlax

    Enema's Team: Vivillon, Forretress, Araquanid, Mega Pinsir, Escavelier, Golispod

    Damien's Team: Mega Salamence, Haxorus, Hydreigon, Dragalge, Kommo-o, Garchomp

    Carmen's Team: Alakazam, Mega Gallade, Malamar, Exeggutor, Gothitelle, Gardevior

    Vera's Team: Mega Lucario, Weavile, Roserade, Delphox, Primarina, Flygon

    Seth's Team: Throh, Greninja, Mega Charizard, Mamoswine, Tyranitar, Scolipede

     

     

    1. Show previous comments  1 more
    2. AiedailEclipsed

      AiedailEclipsed

      Uhm. I don't really have much of a comment on the content, but I did need to at the very least warn you about one of your characters' names. Unless this is one of those weird parody games (a la Pokémon Clover), but you probably will want to change Enema's name. This is a pretty SFW wikipedia article on what an enema is and why you probably want to change the character's name.

       

      In any case, good luck with the game!

    3. Sceptilespy

      Sceptilespy

      @AiedailEclipsed

      LMAO. I didn't even notice that. I just thought it sounded cool. Thanks for the luck lol.

      @Monochrome_Complex

      Thanks for the review. I hope I can clear up some things. 

      I intended for Dallas' mood to kinda elevate. As he went from more formal, and using words sparingly, to being ruder and more insulting. Just about everything else is my own mistake lol. I'm new to this whole writing thing. Regardless, thanks a ton.

       

    4. Monochrome_Complex

      Monochrome_Complex

      Sure no problem^_^ and okay i guess that does make kind of sense for Dallas. I can see some potential in this, and I'm sure you'll fine tune and improve as you continue along.

  25. Sceptilespy
    It's been a while, and I haven't really responded to anything. But thanks for contributing to the short lived topic lol.
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