Eh that was rude, you can't just call someone's work a flop.
The intro looks nice but like CG said there is two grammar mistakes , anyhow keep up the good work
well voted for Darganrompa but i guess bugs win, i made a quick look on rejuvenation and turns out you can get a scatterbug just after you get the 'starter' and a dwebble,shuckle on route 2 so you'll be fine~