Ooh! A thread for lampooning poor writing!? count me in!
Pokemon Rejuvenation's plot, much like the fangame it's inspired by, is a complete and utter mess. Most of the problems that I believe Reborn has are applicable to this game as well (Character bloat, meandering to nonsensical pacing, the characters themselves, the tone of the stories, presentation, and the list goes on). One big reason is because Pokemon really doesn't have a formula where some kind of massive story can take place. Pokemon is really an Adventure RPG first and foremost where your goal is to train up some cool