Code: PIRULUK

Rein directed a sidelong glance at Katherine. The teacher seemed reasonable enough. Though attempting to explain the sheer hatred for her name would be tiresome. She sighed in resignation. She shifted a bit and recrossed her arms. Then, without moving from her spot or turning to face the teacher, she responded to the woman's query with disjointed, monosyllabic words. "...Name. Rein."

Also I should probably clarify that the attack was likely a straight rather than a hook, considering it hit her abdomen. But 'tis a small matter.

Doesn't matter, Rein is ambidexterous. In this case she probably used her right hand though, due to fighting convention.

Rein stood stoicly still, her face showing only disinterest. So she was outside the Teacher's office. Waiting to be scolded and possibly suspended. Would not have been the first time. She glanced at the girl next to her. While she bore no ill will towards this person, it was her own fault for calling Rein by her given name. ...Granted, Rein had never actually indicated that she hated her given name. In hindsight, that probably meant that she was in the wrong here. ...Oh well. Apologising was too much effort, much better to simply stay still and wait for whatever was coming. It's not like she particularly cared about school, anyway. ...Perhaps she should work on controlling her gut impulse to hit someone when they used her name. ...Probably. But she would not. Self-control required effort. Rein was never one to force herself to put in more effort than barely necessary. Rein glanced over at Lee again, this time with an evaluating gaze. Tall, lots of piercings. Not her aesthetic at all. Any slight intention which she had to apologise quickly evaporated. Then the teacher approached. Rein glanced over to her as well, and breathed a sigh of resignation. Where there no cute girls in this entire school?

We could but... that feels like something we'd do near the end of the day, and as long as the fight in the mall is ongoing, we're stuck in the middle of day 1.

Lily is waiting on orders. A machine does not move without instruction. Yukine won't be doing anything much for the rest of the day (WHICH IS STILL DAY ONE, IF I MIGHT ADD)

Layla is a loli. All hail Layla. I desire to offer tribute to my loli goddess. May the beauty of her loli divinity shine forever bright.

@Stratos rip oops yeah it's dead. It died after Zeph went mia, and then I decided not to revive it. At least, not yet.

Sticking with Purity cos she's A D O R A B L E Forum Name: Acquiescence / Code: PIRULUK Character Name: Purity Revynjahlsmyrl (Reh-vin-yaz-merl), Alias "Rein" Age: 15. November 14th, 1024 Personality: The first thing to note about Purity is that she hates her name. She hates it to the point where she refuses to go by it, always introducing herself as "Rein" instead. Her greatest desire in life is to get to whatever age marks the legal limit for applying for a legislative name change. Anyone who calls her by her name is likely to end up getting hit in some way. On the whole, Purity is a very quiet, reserved, extremely violent girl. Violence is often her first answer to any problem. It is also often her second, third, fourth and fifth answer. She rarely speaks, and tends to keep to herself. If you slight her, she will not say anything, and will probably not show any form of reaction other than silently attacking you viciously. Her personality has led to her being mostly isolated from others around her, and she doesn't really mind - it takes effort to constantly punch people who annoy you after all. However, despite her violent tendencies, she is not an impulsive person. Purity is more than capable of reasoned thinking and rational decision making - it's just too much trouble most of the time. Appearance: Purity is slightly shorter than the average 15-year-old. She has shoulder-length silver hair that she pulls back in a ponytail, holding it in place with a cyan heart-shaped hairclip. Her skin falls on the paler side, and her eyes are a vivid green. This combination of features, along with her usual stoic expression, has led some to remark that her face has a doll-like quality, a remark which Purity neither appreciates nor takes offense at. Clothing-wise, She normally dresses casually, as it's too much trouble to put on anything more elaborate. She is most frequently seen in a simple blouse-skirt combo, with the occasional baby blue cardigan. The colors she wears around varies greatly, as she mostly just grabs whatever's closest to her. However, if her parents are around, they have an annoying tendency to put her into elaborate dresses in the Lolita fashion, which Purity harbors a strong distaste for. Line of Belief: Practicing Laylite Modifier: Elemental

Finally finished Kagari's sheet \o/ She's now all ready to kick butt and kidnap lolis \o/

I thought it would be prudent to point out that you don't always have to give criticism. I can't speak for other writers, but personally, the three things that make me happiest, in descending order, are: writing, talking about my writing, and recieving criticism. Just talking about a story shows that you enjoyed it enough to form attachments to its characters and world. Criticism certainly helps the author to improve, but if you have nothing to criticise, just talk about the work with the author. Say what you did and didn't like about the chapter, make jokes about the characters, single out which character is your favorite; etc. Authors love talking about their work. They love their work being talked about. There are few greater gifts you can give an author than to engage at length with them in a discussion about their work.

WIP SHEET In case anyone doesn't know what a Bit system is, it's a Gundam 00 thing that basically refers to this:

Not bad, not bad. Some of the dialogue is a bit questionable, though. For example, I don't think many people would use a word as archaic as "lineages" in a tense shouting match like this.

Okay, quick tips on formatting: -Your font really doesn't need to be that big. Most of us can read perfectly fine, and it kind of looks really ugly, especially since you're doing it in a script format which traditionally has immense numbers of line breaks, and hence empty space. -Try to make voiced and unvoiced lines more distinct. Perhaps you could italicise the unspoken descriptions? It vastly aids readability, and makes the work look less messy. -For a script format, the convention of the mode is to include setting descriptions in parantheses, and write everything with direct mode in the present tense. Whether you want to follow this is up to you, just thought I'd put it out there. Now for the plot: -Several characters are acting out-of-character, specifically Ame, Cain, and to an extent, Julia. Since this is a fanwork using another person's characters, you should try to keep the non-OCs as close to character as possible, as a show of respect for their original creator. -Overall, an arrogant OC with a knack for trolling and/or a cynical sense of humor isn't exactly the most original, but can still be good if well-executed. I'm going to refrain from commenting more until we get to see more of the plot, otherwise it'd be an unfair assessment. Keep writing, this certainly has some potential ^^

Now, I previously mentioned I would be developing a google Spreadsheet to help facilitate hosts who'd like to use this system. So here's a sneak peak at version 0.1 of this spreadsheet https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/12HNuePkXKW7SZqefzAajKopyRxqRlZNikZS89Ng4Ddc/edit?usp=sharing I do hope this alleviates your concerns of the system being too complicated. As the project is still in its early stages, there are a number of unimplemented components, such as multi attacks and skills/weapons, but this should be enough to give you a general feel of what it's going to end up as. I've also left the spreadsheets with character data open to edit, so you can toss in your own characters and stuff if you feel like it. NOTE: DO NOT REORDER THE SPREADSHEETS OR MOVE EXISTING CELLS AROUND YOU WILL BREAK THE THING. Thanks ^^

Radio hobbyists and people like Symphony. Symphony believes that somewhere, somehow, she has a kindred spirit out there.

Symphony stood up, fully recovered from the grenade. She helped Heavensea to her feet, then dusted herself off. It seemed Millennium wanted to head straight to an extraction point. She frowned. He said "one target", wouldn't that mean there were others yet unsecured? She glanced to the living quarters. If there was anyone left, they were likely to be in there... ...more importantly, she hadn't had the chance to nick any of the pirates' radio equipment. There was a high likelihood it was within their quarters. Radio equipment meant pirate broadcasts. Pirate broadcasts meant more advertising. More advertising meant more exposure. More exposure meant possibly being scouted, which meant Debuts, Singles, CD Deals! Her retinal displays adjusting to reflect dozens of tiny moving stars, she got up and made a beeline right for the Living Quarters.

Well, obviously it's not meant to be used for everything. Thought it was implied that the 2nd question was asking whether hosts would be willing to use the system at all, not whether they would use it for every RP. Similarly, Question 3 was asking if players would be comfortable using it in an applicable RP.

Added a poll. please do leave an answer, it will help me decide if I want to continue developing this. also, if you answer no, I'd appreciate it if you left a reply saying why. no obligation, though!

Alright so I've gone back and revised this, to Version 0.8, removing LUCK as a stat, and introducing the simpler, more lightweight version: ALTS! So, a key summary of how ALTS differs from ARTS: -Simpler math -No %-based modifiers -Simpler Math -Streamlining of character creation: Base stats now RNG-decided, but level growths are decision-based. -Simpler Math -Streamlined Multi Attacks -Simpler Math

Symphony felt a surge of relief as the grenade didn't explode. At least her cute partner was safe. It should be punishable by the heavens to attack a cute person, really. Cuteness is the driving factor of life. Then she felt a surge of something completely different as a part of the wave released by the grenade tore through her systems, rapidly disabling parts of her functionality. Losing all strength in her arms, she collapsed on top of Heavensea, mouth landing right next to the Michi's ear, panting as she waited for her strength to recover. "That's... Odd... Give me a few seconds, 'kay..."

Well met, my fellow travelers of destiny! Most certainly, 'tis fate that has brought us to these crossroads and bound us in this web of affection! Though our souls may clash, though our hearts may battle. Know thus! Know that here, with our spirits in brilliant resonance, we shall forge the bonds of companionship! For 'tis fate! Most certainly, 'tis fate, who has brought all of you, my slumbering companions from an age long past, here together, to me! And I, to you! And by this hallowed seal I wear upon mine eye, in the name of the great destiny borne upon mine sealed left arm, I pledge to endeavour my best in this shining collision of souls.

Symphony was, honestly, at a loss as to what to do about the woman running at them with a grenade. Even if she shot her down, the grenade would still go off, and she had no way of knowing how deadly it was going to be. For Symphony, she probably wouldn't die, though she would probably need some expensive repairwork. But her organic friend was slightly less metallic. As she was thinking, she noticed Millennium by the side raising his arm at the charging woman. Acting purely on instinct, she dashed out of the elevator, leaving the rifle behind, and attempted to pull Heavensea to the ground, intending to shield the Michi under her metal body.

Fight Dave. If you take him out Shou can beamspam everyone to 7th heaven.