Code: PIRULUK

"Again, who are you lot of matchsticks supposed to be?" Serene kept her head tilted back, not moving from her spot. "My mother told me not to follow strangers. Maybe it would help if you could satisfy my burning curiosity by unstrangerifying yourselves, hm?"

And Here's her sheet :3 Serene, the Restrained Arsonist "I figure, so long as I don't burn the important people, I won't go to hell, no?"

"Mmmmmmm... Yes... More... More... Hotter... Mmmm~" Serene held her palms close to the blaze, indulging in the feeling of hot, hot fire licking against her skin. She let out moans of excitement as she felt the burns, the fire taking her to increasing levels of sensuality. She longed to throw her entire body onto the flame, but she couldn't; not yet. She had things she had to do. As the burns started to creep upward along her arms, she clenched her legs together and released a long, primal howl, then collapsed to the floor, panting. Brow shining with sweat from both the heat and her exertion, she turned her head to face the group of interlopers who had so rudely intruded upon her special private time. "Eh? Who're you cinders? Do you know how difficult it is to find a nice blaze like this? Can't you let a girl enjoy some burning-hot action in peace? "

Character Name: Valor Igyllmrn ((Whew that took a while. Let me know if anything needs changing, especially for the weapon; I don't know if guns are invented yet in your verse)) (((I honestly can't believe I'm submitting a male character)))

... ...... .......... We know pretty much absolutely nothing about how Lumen works. How could you possibly have enough information to come up with a system with regards to it? Also, you may not realise it, but a statement/claim like this bears an implicit assumption that you somehow know the host's world better and have a system superior to their own, which is disrespectful at best and a metaphorical spittoon in the face at worst, depending on how the host takes it. I find a statement like this to be rather disrespectful, and I'm inclined to believe I'm not alone in this conviction. I urge you to please restrain yourself and give the host the due respect they deserve by not trying to superimpose arbitrary systems of your own creation on the world they built; it's the literary equivalent of attempting to forcefully name another person's newborn baby.

:^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^) Jokes aside, you've got my attention. I don't really have any questions to ask for now, at least until I see more of it, but it does seem like an interesting world concept.

Okay, most of this is probably going to be a reiteration of what everyone else has said. BUT. I think it needs to be said anyway. Others have already pointed out the vagueness of the battle system and the redundancies in the class list. Beyond those, I have two major gripes with this: 1) What do the jobs do? Like, wow! A time mage sounds cool! But what...does a time mage actually do? Hastega? How would that translate into RP combat? Similarly, FF has spell tiers, e.g. ファイア、ファイアラ、ファイアガ、ファイアジャ (aka Fire1/Fire2/Fire3/Fire4 or Fire/Fira/Firaga/Firaja). Is there a system in place to stop people from loading up with tier 4 spells at the start of the RP? How do they unlock later tiers? Is there a skilltree for the classes? What exactly does the class system entail? 2) The plot. This is my biggest problem with what you've outlined, there's nothing about the plot. I have no idea what's going on or where it takes place. For instance, you state this RP occurs "In a world where a great war was clashed by friends and foes alike". Ignoring the misuse of the mono-transitive verb "clash", this description tells me nothing about the world. Is it a desert world, a la Kashykk? Is it a frozen Tundra, like Niflheim? Is it metropolitan? What's the technology level? Is it an intersection of worlds, like the plane in Dissidia? If so, by what rules do these worlds intersect, and why does this plane exist? You need to explain the setting. Right now, I literally cannot imagine anything of the world you're trying to construct, because there isn't any information to extrapolate from. And if a person can't visualise the setting, it'll be nigh-impossible for them to achieve the level of immersion needed to enjoy an RP to the fullest. Adding on to that, you have not mentioned anything of the plot. Let's say a player were to join your RP; what would said player be doing? Is there a goal? Is there a storyline? How did the player come to be in this place? Is he part of a merry band of heroes? There's no information given about this. I'm not saying you should outline the entirety of your intended plot, but the players should at least have some semblance of an idea about what they're signing up for. I would suggest looking at the OOC/Signups threads for other RPs, to get a better idea of what is expected of a host's OOC topic. In fact, in my limitless generosity, I've picked a few for you to glance at, and even listed what they did well! (IMO) ANKL, by Lexi (Worldbuilding, Character Creation) The Tenth God, also by Lexi (Worldbuilding, Battle Mechanics) Fire Emblem on the Forums: Ashes, by Pyon (Worldbuilding, Character Creation) Luminous Dawn, by Jory (Battle Mechanics) Heartless Souls, by Hukuna (Character Creation) Sins of Avalon, by Stratos (Worldbuilding, Battle Mechanics) The RPs above all have wonderfully crafted opening topics, and can be very good references for the level of effort and preparation which RPers expect of hosts. I would suggest taking a look at them as a starting point for polishing up this idea.

Kagarin - Attend Black Idol's Concert Kagarin touched a finger to her lip, wondering where she should go. Food? She wasn't very hungry. She tried listening to her breasts to see if there were any lolis nearby, but they remained soft and unresponsive. She sighed. It seemed like today was one of her bad days. Lazily considering her options, she settled on the concert. She had a thing for music, and besides, Black Idol was pretty cute. For a non-loli, at any rate. Yawning, she headed in the direction of the concert.

Awwwww sho shweet <3 XD Aight I'll brainstorm something up and post it soonish.

Pst Notus hi is there a slot

LOLI_HUNTER v.s Ricochet Kagari grinned as she let go of the knife and took hold of the spear in the same action. "Thanks for the delivery!" As her opponent leapt into the water, Numerous cables shot out from her back and dug deeply into the ground, anchoring her firmly. Simultaneously, she released more cables to entangle Ricochet's leg. With his movements already encumbered by the existing cables, it was not within his ability to avoid the attack. Just as he entered the water, she yanked on the cables, hard. "It's been a while since I went fishing!" Using the leverage from her stable position and her own mechanical arm strength, she yanked her opponent out of the water as she reversed her spear grip and the spear in her hand transformed itself into a three-pronged trident. The moment he emerged, she threw it, skewering right through his mech's cockpit and handily ending the fight. With that, she wordlessly left the arena. The number of lolis in the area were far too low to have any motivation to bask in her victory.

I can't believe you didn't make him androgynous. I'm disappointed in you, I am. He's supposed to have the strength and build of the perfect man and the elegance and beauty of the perfect woman. Redo!

I figured Kagarin landed within Ricochet's guard, so her legs are "in between" his feet. @Lexi tell me if you think that's unlikely, thanks.

There's also the fact that it would probably be impossible to output any significant amount of melee arm strength while underwater since water resistance is a thing. Certainly not enough strength to punch through an island's base. If you've ever tried to punch someone underwater, you'll know what I mean.

I consider Innocent Monster to apply as long as your appearance is affected by others' opinions of you, as ib the case of Andersen and Bathory. Shapeshift is more of a conscious thing that can be controlled.

1. Because Jane Eyre was first published as a fictional autobiography, "edited by Currer Bell", Victorian society at the time believed Bronte to have been telling her own story. That is to say, the public opinion was that Jane Eyre was actually autobiographical, with Jane serving as a proxy for Bronte. One particularly popular rumor at the time was that Jane's relationship with Rochester was a mirror for Bronte's relationship with Thackeray, the author of Vanity Fair. Bronte eventually got so annoyed with these insinuations that she had later editions of the novel printed as "written by Currer Bell" rather than "edited by Currer Bell", which was later changed to "written by Charlotte Bronte". So, people imposing their assumptions about the writer based on their work, basically should qualify her for Innocent Monster. In other words, appearance-wise, her male and female personae have vastly different appearances, with her female appearance influenced by Jane (plain, short) and her male appearance influenced by Charles Dickens' male gentleman characters (pompous, arrogant dandies) 2. Charles Dickens wrote for a weekly serial and wrote chapters of considerable length; it was pretty fast for his time, especially if you consider how many words he used.

This Caster is a genderbend that basically takes the original person's identity and it out the window. It probably won't be accepted, but this idea has been stuck in my head and refuses to get out, so fuck it, I'll put it here. Since the Servant is an author I took the stats and skills almost wholesale from Shakespeare/Andersen.

Question. Am I allowed to genderbend for my Servant application? Also, if so, dibs on Caster.

Megumin casts [Explosion] and they all die.