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  1. Author's Notes: I'm so, so, so sorry ofr constantly changing the first episode and delaying the next one. I hope to God this will be the last time I change up the first episode. Criticism and reviews are greatly appreciated! Mysterious Motherly Voice: You are Atma. ERROR! Mysterious Motherly Voice: Remember, help those who can’t help themselves. ERROR! ERROR! Mysterious Motherly Voice: I love you, my son. ERROR! ERROR! ERROR! Atma: Huh?! A black-haired boy suddenly woke up from…whatever that is. Atma: What the heck? Huh? Just then, the boy realizes his current situation. In that he’s lying on the ground, leaving a human sized indent. Beside him is a river. A rather beautiful river by that, with the sun sparkling in the water. Atma: Woah…so pretty…what is this pretty place? Where am I? He observed his surroundings and noticed a nearby rusted abandoned illegible sign. The words Atma could make out is “Park” Atma: Dang. That thing doesn’t look pretty at all. Wonder what’s a Pak? How did I get here? Hmm… The boy tried to recall how he got to this “Pak”. He tries. And tries. And tries. Until he realizes, that he couldn’t remember anything at all. He can’t recall anything before waking up. His mind is a total blank. Atma: Huh. All I remember is that pretty woman’s voice. I wonder who is she? I want to see her face…She says I’m Atma. And I’m her…son? Huh? Just then, he notices his current attire. Which is a dull grey full bodysuit covering his entire body from neck to toe. Around his waist is a dark grey belt, with a slot to insert something. Along with a holster on his side. But the most interesting of all is a dull grey diamond shaped crystal, embedded right in his chest, as a part of his body. Atma’s reaction to this is, Atma: Eugh! What the heck?! I look…I look…I look so uncool! Euw! Clearly, this kid has his priorities straight. Unfortunately, he was too busy fussing over his attire that he didn’t notice a cat right next to him. Until he stepped on it. Cat: MROW!!! Atma: GWAH?! Oh, sorry! I didn’t see- The cat didn’t wait for his apology. It just run away from Atma. Atma: Wait, I’m sorry! Come back…whatever you are! … … … Elsewhere, a girl adjusted something on her watch, before aiming at the ground. The girl wears an inner hijab, while wearing a black and red hoodie which covers almost her entire body. She also wears black and red gloves alongside red shoes. But what’s most interesting about her is the scar on her right eye. Her index finger pressed something on her glove. Click! Her watch fires a small grey ball. Once the object touched the ground, it releases colourless, slippery liquid, that’s almost invisible. Almost unnoticeable. Young girl: (thoughts) Good. It works. Now I need to test whether it’s actually slippery. ?: Hah! This place is perfect! Young girl: (thoughts) Scrap! The young girl immediately hid herself behind some nearby trees, as a group of rowdy teenagers walk by. But not just any teenagers. These are ferocious looking teenage gangsters with scars and tattoos. Each of them at least wore a white skull tattoo on their shoulder. However, one of the gangsters has an extra “X” mark over his tattoo, and seems to be the leader of this gang. Thankfully, none of them notices her. Gangster boss: No annoying adults around! This will be Skull Gang’s new territory. With no busybodies around, we can do whatever we want! Hahahah! His goons laughed as well, while the girl groans in frustration. Young girl: (thoughts) Tch! Just when I found a private training spot. I better get out of here fas- Atma: Don’t run! Young girl: !? A cat ran past her hiding spot, much to her astonishment. Before being followed by a panting Atma. Arma: Come…*pant* back- Suddenly, Atma notices the girl hiding nearby, much to his surprise. As the girl stares back at Atma, one thought appears on Atma’s mind. Atma (thoughts) Whoah…She looks super cool! Unfortunately, because Atma is too busy admiring how cool the girl looks and the fact the liquid is almost invisible, Atma slipped on the slippery liquid. Atma: Whoa whoa whoa-Ouw! Crash! If this is an anime, Atma would have swirls in his eyes as he face planted on the ground, with stars spinning on top of his head. Atma: Ouw… Struggling, Atma tried to get up, STOMP! When the Gangster Boss stomps on his back. Atma: Ouw! Gangster Boss: Now who do we have here, barging into my territory. Atma: What the heck?! Let go of me! That hurts! The gangster boss responded by stepping on Atma’s back much harder. Atma: Ouw, ouw, ouw! Gangster Boss: Nobody orders me around, brat! Not in my territory. Atma: Territory? What the heck is that? The gangster boss stepped harder. Atma: Ouw! Knock it off already! Gangster Boss: You dare make fun of me, huh?! You lot, teach this brat a lesson! The other gangsters laughed sadistically as they approach Atma menacingly. As Atma struggle to free himself, Smack! One of the goons kick him in his side. Much to Atma’s shock, confusion, and pain. Atma: OUW! What did you do tha- Smack! Another goon kicks him in the side as well. The gangsters laugh cruelly at Atma’s misfortune, while Atma suffer in pain. Atma: Ouw… Gangster Goon 3: Hah! My turn! Atma: Stop…ouw…it hurts… Atma look in horror as the goon lifted his leg, ready to stomp Atma in the head… Splat! When something hit the goon, right in the eye. Gangster Goon 3: Argh! My eyes! It burns! Splat! Before the same thing hit the boss in the eye as well. Which seems to be…sambal? Gangster Boss: Argh! My eye, my eye! Who dares attack me?! Gangster Goon 5: That one, boss! Atma glances at where the goon is pointing, and saw, Atma: Cool girl…? Cool girl glares at the gangsters as she took a fighting stance. While gesturing for them to come closer to here. Not that the boss could see that, as he’s struggling to open his eyes. Gangster Boss: Ergh! What are you waiting for?! Beat whoever that is! Gangster Goons: R-right, boss! Atma watched in horror, as the gangster goons charged at Cool girl, who just stood still. Atma: Ergh…Watch out, cool gi-! Slip Atma: Eh? Suddenly, for some reason, the goons slip on something, causing them to lose their balance and disrupting their movements. Giving the girl a good chance to get in close and strike the goons in the neck, immediately knocking them out. To say Atma is amazed is an understatement. Atma: Woah… But there are goons who are still standing up, and tries to attack her. One goes for a punch, Gangster Goon 4: Hiyargh! Which Cool girl effortlessly evaded, before getting in close and delivered a strong elbow strike to the goon’s chest. Knocking him out. Gangster Goon 2: Uwargh! Another goon went for a flying kick, which Cool girl responds by catching the goon by the leg, before tripping his other leg. Causing the goon to fall on his back, giving the girl a chance to stomp the goon in the crotch. To say it is painful is an understatement, as evident by the girlish screams from that goon, before he comically passes out. Atma: Hmm? Is it really that painful? Cool girl: (thoughts)Hmm. It looks like my fighting skills hasn’t gone rusty… Atma: Watch out, cool girl! Suddenly, one goon leap into the air while swinging a metal pipe at her. Trying to bash her head in. Gangster Goon 1: Take this, you brat! Which Cool girl leaps out of the way. Evading the swing. But the goon wasn’t finished as it tries to go for another swing. But the girl’s not giving that goon a chance. Quickly, the girl aims her watch at the goon’s neck as she presses something on her glove with her middle finger. BZZT! Gangster Goon 1: Erk-! Suddenly, the Goon stop in his tracks, as if he is shocked by an electric surge, before crumpling to the ground. Like a lifeless doll. Gangster Boss: W-w-what?! What did you do, brat?! Atma: I don’t know, but I bet it’s super cool! Gangster Boss tremble in fear, as he realizes he’s the only one left standing. Leaving him all alone as the girl approaches him. Menacingly, despite the clear difference in age and size. There’s only one thing he could do right now. Gangster Boss: Kyaa! Run away and scream like a little girl. Atma: Heh! That’s right, run away you jerk! Cool girl: How are you feeling right now? Atma: Oh, cool girl! I’m feeling okay now. Cool girl: Cool…girl? Atma: Yeah! You are super cool, beating up those jerks! Thanks a lot, cool girl! If you didn’t beat up these jerks, I…I…I have no idea what’s gonna happen, but I bet it’s gonna hurt a lot. So really, thanks! Cool girl: If you really want to thank me, you can start by explaining about yourself. Like what’s with the crystal on your chest? Atma: Oh, this thing? I dunno. I woke up and I already have this thing. Looks so not cool… Cool girl: …Excuse me? Atma: I said I don’t know what this thing is. Or maybe I do, but I forgot. I mean, I can’t really remember anything. All I remember is, Atma recaps what he remembered from the moment he wakes up, up until he met the girl. Atma: As I was chasing that cute thing, I saw you. You look so co- Cool girl: How do I know you’re not lying? Atma: What? Cool girl: How do I know you didn’t make all of this up? How do I know you really lose your memories? Atma: Hmm…I don’t know? But I’m not lying. I really can’t remember anyth-urk! Suddenly, Atma slumps to the ground as he held his stomach in pain. Much to the girl’s shock. Cool Girl: Hey, what’s wrong?! What’s with your stomach? Cool girl: (thoughts) Scrap! Don’t tell me he’s got internal bleeding!...or maybe, this is a trick to lower my guard?! She aimed her watch at Atma, ready to fire in case Atma tries something funn- GRU~ Until she hears the sound of a hungry stomach. Atma: Urgh…it…hurts… Cool girl: (thoughts) … … …Hmm. He doesn’t seem to be faking it…a trip to Pak Majid’s food should to the jo-wait, why should I care about him? I don’t know who he is. He has no relation to me. It’s not my problem. It’s not my business. It’s not my concern- Cool Girl(much younger): Ibu, why are you cooking all these meals? Girl’s mother: For the masjid’s charity event, of course. For the poor and unfortunate people. Cool Girl(much younger): I know that, but why for them? Do you know those people? Are they your friends? Girl’s mother: Whether I know them or not, is irrelevant, Zafira. What matter is, that they are less fortunate than we are. That they are hungrier than we are. That they suffering more than we do. It’s because we are more fortunate that we should be helping others, my cute daughter. Cool girl: (thoughts)…And look where that got you, Ibu. Because of your altruism, you…you…you… Atma: You, urgh, okay cool girl? Cool girl: Hmm? Cool girl was astonished. Not expecting concern from him. Cool girl: …I’m not the one with an aching stomach. Atma: I know, urgh, but are you okay? You seem…seem…how should I say this? You don’t seem okay? The girl stares at Atma’s perplexing behaviour. He’s the one who just got beat up and suffering from a stomach ache, yet he’s asking if she’s okay? Either he’s just acting nice or…. Cool girl: …That’s none of your concern. What matters is that you need something to eat. Stand up. Atma: Oh. Alright then. Cool girl: Good. Now hold still. The young girl took out a red kain sarung, before wrapping it around Atma’s chest, covering the crystal on his chest. Cool girl: Don’t take this off. Don’t tell anyone else about your crystal. Don’t show anyone else unless I say so. Got it? Atma: Got it, cool girl. No way I’m gonna take this cool thing off. Cool girl: (thoughts) …That’s just kain sarung. Cool girl: Follow me. I know a place where you can eat. Atma: Really? Cool! Thanks, cool girl! Cool girl: Stop it. Atma: What? Cool girl: Just call me Zafira. Atma: No prob, Zafira. And you can call me Atma! Zafira: *groan* I know. Zafira: (thoughts) I’m only doing this because I want to know what’s the deal with the crystal on his chest. That’s all there is to it. Nothing else. Nothing more. Not because of some stupid altruism… With Zafira leading the way, the two of them exited the abandoned park and entered a district. Who look like it had seen better days. Atma: Ergh… Not that Atma realized that, as his stomach ache grew stronger. Zafira: Here. The girl entered a run-down restaurant named Pak Majid’s Food, with Atma behind her. A waiter greets them. Male Waiter: Salam, Zafira-Oh, what’s with your friend? Atma: Hun…gry… Zafira: Whip up something quick for him please. Anything would do. Male Waiter: Alright then, what about you? Zafira: Nothing. He’s the only one eating today. Male Waiter: If you say so. The two of them sat at a table. Or rather, Zafira sat. Atma slumps into his chair. Atma: Ergh…so hungry… Zafira: Patience. Atma: Fine… Zafira: Hold still. Zafira ordered as she took out her handphone, and took a picture of Atma’s face. Atma: What are…ergh…you doing? Zafira: None of your concern. Atma: Fine… As Atma slumped on the table, waiting for his food, Zafira searches Atma’s name and face on the Internet. And found no match. Zafira: (thoughts) Huh? Refresh search No match. Refresh search. No match. Zafira: …You sure your name is Atma? Atma: Yes…urgh…hungry… Male Waiter: Here’s a Nasi Lemak, adik. Atma: Finally…thanks… Zafira: (thoughts)Hmm…even if his name isn’t Atma, I’d expect at least one profile to appear that match his face…could it be, he’s not registered? Maybe an illegal immigrant?! But his Bahasa Melayu is decently fluent. NYOM! What happen next made Zafira’s eyes grew comically wide, it almost fell out of her sockets. Because Atma finish one plate of food in one bite. Atma: SO YUMMY!!! Zafira: …You finished a whole plate. In one go. Atma: Yeah! Zafira: …How. The male waiter chuckle in amusement. Male Waiter: Adik, you eat what’s on the plate. Not the plate. Atma: Oh, really? Complying, Atma put down his plate before he could take a bite out of it. Zafira continues to stare with bewilderment as Atma’s antics. Male Waiter: Hahahah! It’s rare to see a Malay kid enjoying rice nowadays. Female Waiter: There’s more where that came from, adik. Another waiter, a female, placed two plates of steaming food on their table. Much to Atma’s delight, and Zafira’s suspicion. Zafira: I only ordered one meal. Female Waiter: A secret admirer decided to treat you two. Atma: Thanks secret admirer! Whoever you are! Just as he is about to feast on his second meal, Zafira swipes his plate away. Atma: Huh? What are you doing, Zafira? Zafira: You don’t find this suspicious? Atma: Suspi…what? Zafira: Urgh, I mean, don’t you think this is weird? Atma: What’s weird? Male Waiter: Yeah, Zafira. It’s just someone treating you to food. Female Waiter: It’s rude to refuse someone’s gift, you know. Refusing rezeki. Atma: Yeah, what she said. Zafira: …Tch! Fine. Here. Atma: Nice! Atma open his mouth wide, ready to eat a whole plate of food again. Before Zafira swipes the plate away. Atma: Hey! Zafira: Learn some manners first. Atma: Who’s manners? Female Waiter: Hahahah! Your friend sure is a funny one. Zafira just groaned. One lesson about manners later…a long, long, long lesson… Atma: Mmm! So yummy! Zafira: (thoughts) No wonder parents get so stressed… Atma: Hmm? Zafira, your food’s over there. Zafira: I know. Atma: So why aren’t you eating it? Zafira: I’m not hungry. Atma: Really? But the food’s so yummy! Zafira: Don’t make me repeat myself. Atma: Alright. But seriously, the food is yummy. Thanks a lot, Zafira for bringing me to this cool place. Zafira: Don’t mention it. Atma: And for saving me from those jerks. Zafira: You already said that. Atma: Well, I’m saying it again. Thanks, Zafira. You’re super cool! Love ya! As soon he said those words, suddenly, his clothes transformed. Gone are the dull faded grey colours. What replaces it are the colours crimson red and sky blue. Even his belt became half red and half blue. But what’s most interesting is his chest crystal which glows red and blue, causing the sarong to loosen somehow, before Atma’s crystal turns into a half blue and half red crystal. To say Zafira was surprised is an understatement. And she’s not the only one. Everyone in the restaurant stared at Atma in shock. While Atma, Atma: Oh. My. God. SO COOL! His eyes sparkle with glee, not at all perturbed or disturbed by what is currently happening. Zafira: H…how did you change your clothes like that? Female Waiter: And what’s with your…chest, adik? Atma: No idea, but it’s look so cool! He pointed at the red portion of his attire. Atma: Look at this! It looks just like yours, Zafira! Zafira: I can see that… Female Waiter: Adik, your watch! Zafira: ! Zafira glanced at her watch. And gasped in shock as her watch suddenly has a glowing crystal embedded to it, similar to Atma’s, except in red and black. Atma: Woah, didn’t know you had that as well?! Cool! Zafira: I don’t… Zafira: (thoughts) How…what…why… Atma: Sooo cool! We both…we both…we both…err… Female Waiter: Match? Atma: Yeah! That’s it. We match! So awesome! Can this day get any better? Boom! Atma: Gwah! Suddenly, a loud noise from outside caught everyone by surprise. Especially Atma who fall from his chair. Upside down. Atma: Ouw… Zafira: You okay?! (thoughts) What was that noise? Atma: I’m okay. What’s that sound? Zafira: How should I know!? Zafira growled, before realising her mistake. Zafira: Sorry. Didn’t mean to yel-Oi! Where are you going? Atma: I want to see what the heck that is! Atma’s not the only one as everyone else in the restaurant headed outside to satisfy their curiosity. Which is then followed by a reluctant Zafira. Zafira: (thoughts) Damn you… But once everyone steps outside, the sight they saw immediately took their breath away. But not in a good way. Because right now, a grey humanoid reptilian monster wielding a large hammer, is wrecking the town. Hammer Monster: Hahahah! The monster maniacally lifted it’s hammer high, before slamming it down on the ground, releasing a shockwave. Smashing up the street even more. Zafira: (thoughts) What. The. Heck. A monster. A monster. A real life monster?! How?! For the first time in a while, her body shake in shock, fear, and horror. A feeling shared by the other onlookers. Zafira: (thoughts) This isn’t a dream. This isn’t a cartoon. This is- Atma: So cool! Everyone else glares at an oblivious Atma, who’s eyes sparkle at the sight of that monster. While Zafira comically faceplanted to the floor, anime style. Zafira: (thoughts) Seriously?! Blam! Blam! Blam! Several shots hit the monster, as it came from several policemen pointing their guns at the monster. Policemen: Surrender! This is your final warning! Unfortunately, their shots barely scratch the monster. Zafira: (thoughts)Their guns didn’t work?! Hammer Monster: Heh! Is that all you cops got?! Weak! Let me show what true strength is! Hiyargh! Boom! With a Hammer swing, the monster launched a shockwave at the stunned police, who couldn’t dodge in time. Argh! Ergh! Urgh! Atma: Oh My God! Are they okay?! Atma gasp in horror at the sprawled, unconscious bodies of the police. A sentiment shared with nearly everyone who was watching. Some onlookers already fainting in shock. Zafira: They seem fine to me. Atma: Really? Zafira: Of course not! Atma: I take it back. That jerk is not cool at all! Zafira: (sarcastically)Oh really? What gave that away? Hammer Monster: Hah! That ghost motorcycle was right! You cops can’t do anything against me! None of you cops can get in my way again. I can do anything I want! Ahahahah! The monster lifted it’s hammer once again, going for another shockwave. Aiming for the unconscious policemen. Much to Atma’s horror. Which triggered something inside him. Atma: Stop! Fwoosh! One moment he was beside Zafira. Next, Atma was leaping through the air, before punching the monster in the face. The crowd gasped in confusion, surprise and amazement. Especially Zafira. Zafira: (thoughts) Did he just…?! How did he move so fast? And what’s that “Fwoosh” sound? Hammer Monster: Argh! Atma: Knock it off! You’re hurting them! Hammer Monster: HOW DARE YOU BRA-oh. Oh. It’s you! Atma: Yeah, it’s me!…what about it? Hammer Monster: You’re that brat from earlier! Atma: …Do I know you? Zafira: (thoughts) Earlier? What is that freak talking about…wait. Hammer Monster: Finally…I get to finish you off! Hiyargh! The monster swing at Atma, Fwoosh! Who narrowly evaded. Atma: Hey! I said knock it off! Hammer Monster: Huwargh! The monster launches a shockwave at Atma, Fwoosh! Which Atma dodged by leaping out of the way. Zafira: (thoughts) That sound…it sounds like a jet thruster… Hammer Monster: What are you?! How are you moving that fast? Atma: I…have no idea, really. How do I move this fast?...But even if I know, what makes you think I will tell you, you jerk! Take this! Fwoosh! Atma leaped through the air, ready to deliver another punch. When suddenly, Bam. Zafira: Huh? Atma: Ouw! For some reason, Atma stop in his tracks as he clutches his back, seemingly in pain. Atma: Ouw, what the? Zafira: Atma, watch out! Smash! Atma: Woah! Barely, just barely, Atma dodges the hammer swing by boosting sideways. But unfortunately, he wasn’t looking where he was going, and accidently step on some debris caused by the monster’s attacks. Atma: Whoa! Atma struggles as he tries to regain his balance and not falling on the asphalt. But unfortunately, this distracted him from noticing the monster’s next swing. Zafira: Watch out! Until it was too late. Boom! The direct shockwave sent the boy flying, before landing on the tarmac and groaning in pain. Atma: ARGH!! Sakitnya!!! Ergh… The force of the hammer is so strong, it didn’t just tear through his attire, it actually tore through Atma’s skin, revealing something that shock everyone even more. Machine parts and wires. Like that of a machine. Atma: Ouw… Zafira: Atma…you’re…a robot? Blue liquid drips from Atma’s gaping wound, as Atma’s struggle in pain. While the monster mocks him. Hammer Monster: Hah! So you’re a freak! That explains everything. Oh, but don’t worry freak. I’ll show you where you belong. In the trash! The monster cackled as it lifted it’s hammer, ready to deliver another shockwave towards Atma… Before a bolt arrow struck the monster in the chest. BZZT! Hammer Monster: Erk! Courtesy of Zafira, aiming her watch at the monster. Or more accurately, a watch which has somehow transformed into a crossbow. Zafira: (thoughts) To think I would use this Crossbow Mode for someone I literally just meet… Despite his intense pain, Atma’s eyes sparkle in amazement at Zafira’s weapon. Atma: Whoah…you…ergh…so cool…ouw… Zafira: Stop talking. As the monster writhe in pain, struggling with paralysis, Zafira pulled back her bow, generating a new bolt arrow. Bam. When her crossbow suddenly reverts back into a watch. Much to her shock and confusion. Zafira: Huh?! Zafira press on her watch, trying to transform it into a crossbow. But her watch remains as a watch. It’s as if her watch’s transforming mechanism is broken. Zafira: Scrap! Atma: Zafira? Ergh…is…everything okay? Hammer Monster: Ergh… What’s worse, the monster’s paralysis has worn off. Leaving Zafira defenceless against the ferocious and enraged monster. Hammer Monster: You…you brats! I…I’ll kill you both! Rragh! Zafira stare in horror and fear as the monster launches another shockwave, aiming at her this time. If Zafira was thinking more clearly, she would have quickly gotten out of the way. But she wasn’t calm. She wasn’t thinking clearly. For the first time ever, she was panicking. She was scared. She was terrified. Atma: Zafira! As Zafira watch in horror as the shockwave is approaching her at an alarming speed… JET RUHA SLASH Suddenly, a dark purple energy slash intercepted the shockwave. Protecting Zafira. Zafira: (thoughts) …Huh? Hammer Monster: Hah?! Zafira: Atma…? Zafira stared in disbelief at her saviour, the one who perform the dark energy slash, Atma. Who’s appearance has suddenly changed, again. But this time, looking rather ominous. Gone are his red and blue colours, replace by ominous dark purple. Even his crystal glows an ominous purple. On his dark purple belt, a card occupies one of the slots. To top it all off, an ominous purple aura is surrounding Atma. As he wields two, never before seen, dark purple glowing blade on his wrists. Which seems to be shaped like a jet wings. And Atma’s expression? Cold, calculated, harsh. His expression is almost unrecognizable. He looks like a different person. Atma: Hah…hah…hah… Despite his gaping wound, Atma keeps glaring at the monster, who flinch in response. Before responding, Hammer Monster: Huh! Y-you think a costume change is going to defeat me, brat?! Rragh! Once again, the monster lifted his hammer, ready for another swing. But Atma was ready. As he aimed his one of blades at the monster, JET RUHA SHOT Before firing a dark purple energy shot at the monster. Hitting the monster in the face. Hammer Monster: Argh! As the monster writhe in pain, Atma rush towards the monster, getting close to it. However, the monster has recovered, and in rage, swing at Atma at close range! Zafira: Atma! Atma’s response is to block the handle of the hammer with his jet blade before, with the boost from his internal thrusters, delivers a, JET RUHA PUNCH To the Monster’s stomach, knocking the wind out of the monster. Hammer Monster: Urk! Grr… The Monster tries to swing again, which Atma block and counter with a, JET RUHA PUNCH Once again. Zafira: (thoughts) …Huh. So he does know how to fight… Groaning in immense pain and frustration, the monster tries swinging at Atma from the side. Which Atma evade by ducking before one of jet blades attach to his leg. Before he then performs a sweeping motion at the monster’s legs. Tripping up the monster and causing it to drop it’s hammer on the ground. JET RUHA SWEEP Zafira observed the monster’s condition with deep interest. Particularly, at how the monster’s legs began to bleed. Bleeding red blood. Zafira: (thoughts) So this freak can bleed…interesting… The monster groans as it tries to get up. JET RUHA STOMP Hammer Monster: Argh! But Atma’s bladed foot on the monster’s back put a stop to that. Struggling in immense pain against Atma’s sharp foot, the monster tries to grab it’s hammer. Blam! Blam! Blam! Which Atma responds by shooting the hammer far away from the monster. With his leg pinning the monster, and the hammer far away, the monster is helpless. Zafira: (thoughts) Hmm? Just then, Zafira notices something else about Atma. Particularly, his healing wound. Bit by bit, Atma’s flesh are growing back, closing his gaping wound. And Atma seem to be getting…less tired. He doesn’t seem to be worn out, despite using a lot of energy. Zafira: (thoughts) …And I thought this day couldn’t get any weirder. SP BAR FULL. ABILITY READY Zafira: Eh? Suddenly, Atma took out a card from his belt holster. A dark purple card, with black volt patterns all over. Glaring at the weakened monster, Atma inserts the card into a slot in his belt. ABILITY: VOLT Before a black volt aura surrounds Atma, and changes Atma attire. It’s still dark purple, but it now has the additions of black volt patterns, much to Zafira’s astonishment. Zafira: (thoughts) …Huh. Then, his leg jet blade detaches from his leg, before combining with his other jet blade. Forming a new weapon, a single sword shaped like a jet Holding his jet sword in both of his hands, Atma plunge his sword into the monster’s back, delivering a big surge of voltage energy towards the monster. FINISHER: VOLT SURGE To say the monster is in agony is an understatement. The monster screams in pain, but only for a while, as it quickly passed out. No longer able to move, react and fight. With a bruised, battered, and beaten body. The monster is finally defeated. Thanks to Atma. Just then, the monster suddenly reverts back to a human form. A human Zafira is familiar with. The gangster’s leader who bullied Atma earlier. Zafira: (thoughts) Hmph. Knew it. Good riddance. Although being dead would be preferable… Though faint, Zafira could see that the ex-monster is still breathing. Albeit barely. MATERIALIZING…WAVE Zafira: Hmm? Suddenly, a card materialized in mid-air in front of Atma, before forming into a card. WAVE WEAPON Without any words, Atma grabs the card before placing it into his holster. Zafira: (thoughts) Hmm? So he gains the ability of the freak he defeated? FINISHER ACTIVE Suddenly, Atma click a button on his belt. Before holding his sword high in the air. Despite the fact his foe has been defeated. Zafira: (thoughts) What is he doing? He looks like he’s going to cut…oh. Oh. Oh. Upon realization, for the first time since ever, Zafira smile. But not a kind smile. A sinister, sadistic, malicious smirk. Zafira: (thoughts) Heh. You continue to exceed my expectations, Atma. And I use to think you were just a naïve, weak kid. Dark electricity sparks gather in his blade as Atma prepares for a deadly slash, Ready to end his foes’ life, once and for all. FINISHER: VOLT SLA- Teenage Girl: That’s enough! Suddenly, a teenage girl in a hijab interrupts Atma. A rather tall teenager, with a beautiful face, and an elegant yet stern voice. Her attire consists of a black uniform with violet highlights which resembles a military uniform, complete with a military cap. And Zafira knew this teenager very well. Much to her displeasure. Zafira: (thoughts) Violet?! What is she doing here?! Violet: Your foe is already defeated, kid. You can stop now. Zafira: Don’t stop, Atma! Finish off that freak! Violet: Zafira! Zafira: Screw off, Miss Violet! This isn’t your business! Violet: I’m not letting your friend take a life, sister. Zafira: You’re not my sister! Just because my father married your mother doesn’t mean we’re related! So, don’t step in where you don’t belon- Violet: Kid! What’s wrong?! Zafira’s rant is interrupted as she too starts to notice something odd about Atma. His aura and attire starts to flicker, as he clutches his head, seemingly in pain. Zafira: Atma?! Despite his apparent pain, he remains silent as he continues to clutch his head. Suddenly, his attire reverts back to his sky blue and red attire. Like the one back in the restaurant. The aura surrounding his body disappears, along with his jet sword. Even his crystal stop glowing and becomes a faded red and blue colour, as Atma’s eyes close shut, before his body fell. Heading to the ground. Zafira: Atma! ... … … Unbeknownst to anyone, a mysterious figure has been observing everything that has happened from on top of a building, hidden from sight. This mysterious girl wore an attire of red and yellow, while wearing a red mask with flame designs. To put in simple, her attire seems to be fire theme. In her hand, is a red and yellow sniper rifle. The mysterious girl smirks. Mysterious Girl: Well, well, well, so this is where you ended up, V1T-100. And your RUHA Magic is still working. Finally, things are getting interesting again. The sniper rifle in her hand dissipated before the girl took out a phone. She aims at a spot before pressing an app. Causing the phone to fire a beam of light at that spot, which materializes a portal. Mysterious girl: I can’t wait…it’s gonna be so much fun~ The girl giggle maliciously as she walks into the portal. Before the portal disappears, leaving no trace of anyone or anything there on the roof. Hakimblue99 Productions presents: LIMIT BREAK: Tales of Atma the Hybrid Hero Episode 1: Bizarre Meeting, Bizarre Day
  2. If you want to change the stats of a Pokemon alternate forms(Like Megas and stuff), you need to go to the Scripts folder, and find the MultipleForms file
  3. Ah, a fan of Hardy. I see you are a cultured individual. Honestly, he's one of the few characters I like in Reborn. Anyway, replying to Derogatory's reply to my replys; Oh. OH. THOSE kind of fangmes. Ergh, thanks a lot Internet... Pfft. You Europeans don't all look the same? Hah! How prespos....pespost...presposterous! Next thing you'll tell me that not all Europeans understand and/or want to speak English. Terminally online people making fools out of themselves is one thing, but when they think they're smart and be a condescending ass is another thing. Like claiming all art is political, and says we're stupid for enjoying a simple art. And even unironically equating Thomas with slavery. In 2023. Ohoho, but it gets even better. This..."genius" went even further, and claim that trains are political! I'm guessing the joy I get whenever I see a train passing through is political?!?! God, these politically obssesed people. God, I legitimitely hate "Death of the Author" . God, I'm not even 50 and my blood is already rising high. Then again, I was arguing with someone online. I kinda brought that to myself. Pfft. Then just be immortal. Problem solved! On a serious note, but in my opinion, if (weirdo) billionares think they found a way to be immortal, I'm pretty sure they would do whatever they can to achieve this supposed key to immortality. Even if they have to kill a bunch of children or something. In fact, I'm pretty sure there are some villains in fiction who have this kind of motive. Can't really recall who... But they can still die from a banana peel, so in the end, it's worthless. On to the chapter: I know I said this multiple times but I despise this arc. Because of Turd and Stain. Because this arc happens because some brain dead gijinkas wanting to teach a lesson. That's it. That's 98% of this arc. A lesson that's meaningless. Even superheroes who try to save everyone( because they're, well, superheroes) care waaay more about their loved ones than some frigging rando they meet for the literal first time. And I still don't like their names. I know using Latin names is cliche, but that would be a better alternative than "Timpea and Spacea". Or better yet, I suggest some names from my language. Don't worry, I choose good names this time. Like Waktu and Dimensi ... ... ...That's all I can think of. I could go for "Angkasa" but that refers to Space, as in the space with stars and planets and everything. Remember when you were supposed to find out about Aelita's past? Instead, this arc decides to waste it time on a boring ass timeline. Thankfully though, Aelita's past did get revealed in the end. Oh sorry. Did I say Thankfully? I meant Shockingly. Because WHAT THE HECK is that backstory?!!! Like...damn. Sheesh. If there's one thing I'm looking forward from this arc, it's your reaction to Aelita's..."birth". ....Either v13 rewrote Madame X's dialogue, or my brain just shut out the fact that a TERRORIST is giving advice on how to sacrifice people. Terrorist, people who are usually well known to kill people and claim it's a "necessary sacrifice" for the "greater good". It's like an animal abuser giving advice to euthenise a dying pet. It's the correct advice in this situation, but from the worst person possible. Eugh...I never like the whole "touching an alternate timeline self destroys the universe" trope. If someone from the future touch their past self, then yeah the universe would logically explode. But I thought this princess is just Melia's alternate self? Why should that affect anything? In my opinion, it's no different from touching your self from an alternate dimension. Then again, what do I know about time travel plots? Then again, when does time travel ever makes sense? I was hoping that Madame X was secretly hungry all the time, but pretend otherwise to keep her edgy look. Because that means she's suffering. And I love seeing enemies suffering, mwahaha.... The closest thing we get to dynamic Pokemon battles is Pokken, maybe? I think? But God, Pokken looks so cool...I wish I could get one. And this is coming from someone who don't really give a damn about fighting games. Hey, jumping off high things is cool! As long as you don't make a fool of yourself in the process... I on the other hand don't understand what makes Dracula scary, especially in the modern age? So it can suck your blood, so? It lightphobic, just blast light into his eyes. If it can blind humans, it sure as heck can blind wimpy draculas who could only drink blood. What a loser. I'm more afraid of Raja Bersiong, a character in my local folklore. Unlike Dracula, Raja Bersiong drinks blood because...it's tasty. That's...pretty much it. And he's not afraid of light, especially since my country is on the Earth's Equator. Sure, Bersiong doesn't have any mystical powers...But he's a king of a kingdom with loads of soldiers behind him. If he wants blood, he just order his soldiers to kill people. Problem solved! Also, his story originated much earlier than Dracula, so he's not a ripoff of Dracula. Points for originality! I'm surprised that, according to Time Master Eon, you can't just cut someone's finger and use it to bypass security? Dang, there goes my future criminal plans... I assure you, I'm totally joking. Hmm...that girl in the painting seems to be black. Even better~ ...I think I may have a certain fetish... ...I'm also not a cunt.That's another difference we have, cunt. Perfect summary of Villain Sue there. Being as irritating and ridiculous as possible REALLY takes them out of their comfort zone. I wish there were more heroes who do stuff like these. The enemies are being try hard edgelords, yet the hero keeps going "LOL, XOXOXO" I hope she isn't Gijinka Regigigas. Because Regigigas sucks... ... ...Unless Jan plans to give that thing a Mega or something? My thoughts about gen 9: WHHHHHHHHHHYYYYY does it stand up?!?! Why.... I'm still gonna choose it though. I'm bias to cats. And Proean, depsite being nerf. I would have love unnerfed Protean, but for balance sakes, it's probably for the best. Although, there's another starter who's also contending for my heart. I don't usually care for Fire types. And Ghost types. And Crocodiles. But for some reason, I love this cool singing croc. His Signature move is so awesome... I have nothing else to say about Quaquaval, except agreeing with everything you said. Maybe that's why they gave the Kamen Rider Tinted lens? Sometimes, GameFreak does use their brain cells. Lokix is so cool though. I know this is a pipe dream, but as a Kamen Rider fan, I wish we could get more colour variations for this Bug of Justice. There's so many options to choose from... Also, I'm probably looking too deeply into this, but I like that it also gets the Dark type, considering that most Kamen Rider origins tend to be dark. And most Kamen Rider series can get rather dark, despite being for kids. Don't believe me? Here: https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/NightmareFuel/KamenRider Oh. My. God. Clodsire...IS SO CUTE!!!AWRTFHTNTNTLook at it's derp face! I just want to squish this thing, and make him my body pillow. It's been years since I last had one... Why couldn't Arboliva be cute... A defensive Rock Pokemon, that's quite a rarity. Love it's design. Love it's ability. Love it's signature move. I just love him entirely. I think people like Armarouge and Ceruledge because of the resemblance to the MegaMan Battle Network series. I can certainly see the resemblance. Their stats and ability are kinda bleh, but their moves are pretty good. But with Terastilization, they became even better....I think. Kingambit knows that if he ever choose to stand up, our eyes would not be able to withstand how cool he is. But seriously though, I rarely, if ever, use Bisharp but I certainly didn't expect him to get an evolution. Congrats! Now when are we getting a Rook version? Horse? Knight? Queengambit? I too am not really fond of Paradox Pokemon. Considering they all have practically the same abilities. If they had different abilities, they might be more interesting. I'm fond of the alternate Volcarona's though. Can someone explain why a region based on Spain has Chinese products? Did Spain invade China at some point or something? ... ... ...That's their lore?! Why GameFreak, why do you always make messed up lore...
  4. Replying to previous chapter: ARGH! How dare you remind me of that garbage Spider-Man arc!...but you're right. I hate to admit it, but you're right. You're so right. Sometimes Spider-Man is awesome. Sometimes comics acts like comics i.e. garbage. Which is one of the reason why I don't bother with them. Heck, most of my Spider-Man experience comes from the movies and animated shows! You're half right. It's actually Air and Light. Or to be more accurate, it's Taufan + Solar = Sopan! A sword element does sound pretty cool though... ... ... ...What. No, seriously, what? You're serious?! Holy... Out of curiosity, which Pokemon fangame has....the latter? One that I could think is Pokemon Reborn because, let's be honest, that's totally in Reborn's territory. Don't know any other fangame that has...that. ...No. Zira...I never thought that she could...I didn't think this timeline could get any worse, yet it did. Truly, this is the worst timeline. If it makes you feel better, that Aggron probably has Sturdy. Because Sturdy + Metal Burst is the type of degenerate strategy this game would love to pull. But emotions have to put aside for now. Because right now, it's MUTINY!!! Please don't write a serious angsty run, I beg you. Otherwise I might actually die from cringe. Which explains why this Amber is so pale, instead of sun-kissed like the one we have at home. Proof that darker skin is better than white-woah, woah, woah, that doesn't sound right. Emm....Uh...shoot, how do I rephrase this? I'm not an idiot who unironically says "you can't be racist to whites", trust me! "Anti-racist" : Uh, Actually racism totally means systematic, so you totally can't be racist to stupid racist whi- Oh, screw off. That's not what racism means. I don't give a damn about whites to be honest(...you're an obvious exception) but I don't pretend like I'm fighting for equality/representation/crap like that. But of course, nowadays if you don't like this show with a POC/minority/whatever, you're a racist, misogynist, hompohobic, etc etc. No, I don't like this show because it's garbage. Because it's not interesting. Because it's bleh. Like that Marvel Kamala Khan show. It says it has a Muslim protagonist. So? I'm not interested. That, and the comics suuucks. If I'm so desperate to find a show with an MC that shares my religion, why the frag would I go for something from western countries? I have local options! Nah, she probably said "Go Go Weaboo Copter" or *insert edgy line copter here*. Or both. Somehow. Urgh. God damn cultist. Always trying to end the world... Urgh. I dislike social media, but I despise Tiktok. Do zoomers have the attention span of a baby?! But I hate it even more when zoomers pretend like they were being abused by their parents over extremely insiginficant stuff. Like the time a zoomer in my country go Zoomer: Uuuu my mother is mean because she said I have a pimple!!11!! How cruel Uuuuu!!!!! You wish I was kidding. But nope, that actually happen. Spoiled brats... I too, desire to punt that little ragdoll into the ocean. I wonder if Ghost types can withstand toxic water, considering they resist Poison...why do Ghost types resist Poison? Type charts are so confusing sometimes... ...Is it bad that I wanted the Anti-Assist leader to be hot? At least, to counter the leader's idiocy. Wait, but that would make her a bimbo...I think? What's a bimbo actually? As much as I don't want Team Xen to be secretly "good", the possibility of that happening seems pretty high...Urgh... Is it too hard to have side characters that are actually useful...I mean, I get they are malnourished and way weaker than you, but I wish they could contribute something... I'd have an easier time looking out of a Kamen Rider(Power Ranger's elder brother)'s mask than looking through Madame Weeb's mask. And Kamen Rider masks look way cooler!... ... ....this is why I don't bother having friends...my media tastes are so not mainstream. Oh, a Jellicent. I never used it, but it seem kinda cool. Although that's probably due to my Water type bias. Is Jellicent any good? Because money backed by power conquers all. With money, you can anyone to do what you want. And if you're strong, they wouldn't dare to backstab you. Hail money! Hail power! Hail....err....other stuff!
  5. I tried using coaching in a double battle on ashen beach. And it did raise the partner's stat sharply....the defense and special defense, specifically. I thought it's supposed to raise defense and attack? Is it a bug, or is it intentional?
  6. Another reason why I'm not so fond of this arc when I first played it. It feels sooo sluggish. I want to see new interesting locations and catch new Pokemons, not wasting away in this alternate place that I'll never be able nor want to return anyway. Oh, right. Silly me. Of course a locomotive as vain and fabulous as James would be picky about his specific shade of red. So vain that I used to think he's a girl. The eyelashes doesn't help... I'm...err...not the brightest. Eheheh. In fact, remember the whole NatDex fiasco years ago? When I heard GameFreak claim they did that to improve their animations, I legitimitely believed what GameFreak said. Thankfully, after I found out that was a load of Rapidash crap, I wisen up and learn to not be such an idiot. Hopefully. But I'm definitely more to be heavily critical of giga corporations/franchise nowadays. In fact, you should be critical. Very critical. Super critical. Too harsh? Who cares! Giga corpos lose a few dollars? Oh, boohoo! How sad. Like I give a damn. Which is baffling that some modern Marvel fans would sack their child to protect their poor, precious, pretty MCU from any (valid) criticisms. Sorry that people expected high quality from a multi-billion dollar franchise. Then again, when has comic books movies became good? ... ... ...Hmm. For some reason, I feel like I just pissed off a bunch of people. Okay fine. I enjoyed the Spider-Man movies. but that's because Spider-Man is awesome! I dare you to disagree with me! ...must...resist...urge...to....google... I know, right! American weirdos. I mean, I already mentioned how much I love black characters, but if a show, especially an ASIAN show doesn't have one, I'm not gonna throw a tantrum. There's barely any shows that has a character that shares my race(the Malay race, or Melayu), yet you don't see Melayu throwing tantrums about that. That and we already have our local animation. It's not as high quality like anime or western shows and it's obviously for kids, but it's still fun. For me, at least. I mean, it doesn't have any stupid political crap, so that's always a plus. That and they look pretty cool. In my opinion. Fun quiz! This superhero form is actually an elemental fusion from two elements. Can you guess what elements are those? The answer should be pretty obvious... Fo-fo-forgive me, Derogatory Overlord. Please spare my life! On a side note, what title would you use when you claim your rightful place as the ruler of your Aevium? Darn. Get battle-blocked by the plot, AGAIN. Oh, God. That castle. I take back the (few) positives things I said about this timeline. Thanks a lot, Melia. Err...I think her hair's still brown. Although what would I know, mr-not-the-brightest. Hmm...I don't recall any Pokemon fangames ever tackled about...err...underage pre*nancy. Or se*ual assault. Despite the numerous edgy Pokemon fangames out there. Aww, watching you interact with the apocalypse aftermath family is adorable. Too bad you spent all that time waiting for an ungrateful tablecloth to hatch. Another reason I don't like this arc. You don't deserve any love, Mimikyu! Revolution, ho! Ship takeover, let's go! Oh, and Madame Weeb is here. Yay...
  7. I never drank nor will ever drink wine, so I'm not sure about the water. It's definitely red, though. So red that James the Red Number 5 would be jealous. I "love" what happened is completely different than those Time and Space losers foreshadowed. They implied that saving one would kill a lot of other humans, not send the world into apocalypse age! Also, I found it interesting that we never see Vivian in this apocalypse timeline. Almost like she dies in the end... So basically, the question those twin arseholes should be saying, "Would you sacrifice one peson to save the world, or save one person so she would die along with the rest of the world?" It's a stupid question is what I'm saying. God, I would have taken that Heracross over Madame X. Thanks a lot, Rejuvenation. Good to see you defending yourselves quite easily. I just "love" the fact that apparently the player decides to surrender to a bunch of toddlers depsite having literal murder machines in his pocket. Especially since most Pokemon in this timeline are dead, and there's no gimmicks for the enemies to pull out of their rear. No Megas, No Z-Moves, No Dyna/GigaMax, No Terastallize, nothing! Heck, Rose can probably defeat them all with a sneeze if she wants to. Say, what do you think of Terastallize? I give credit to GameFreak, it's not as braindead as Dyna/GigaMax. Megas are still better though. Crystalizing sounds cool...if you know, it doesn't make the Pokemon look weird and hideous. Although I do feel concern about the balance of the game. Imagine a Dragon with a Steel Tera Type....then again, that's the same problem Megas had, and I love Megas. Megas are still cooler, though. Love makes the body grow strong, obviously. Huh. Actually, considering the Spin Off Episode, love does has something to do with why he is a walking skeleton... ... ... ...Am I an idiot for actually, legiitmitely, honestly believed what that fish said, before Zolt pointed out the facts? Sheesh, Melia is very bad at being genre-savvy. And recognizing the obvious. And not acting susipicious. Typical Melia. See, look on the bright side! This apocalypse also probably(and hopefully) killed a bunch of idiots/arseholes like politicians, politically obsessed morons, SJWs/Wokes, and people who unironically believe Thomas the Tank Engine is authoritative bullcrap. In 2022. Yes, I meet another person like that some time ago. I wouldn't be surprised if this "person" genuinely think sHenry the Green Number 3 is locked for eternity in that tunnel. No seriously, how do people genuinely believe that? HAHAHA. I laughed just like you ordered me to. Did I do it right? That's it. That's my whole problem with v10. Vivian doesn't really have to sacrifice herself. Just kick Indriad's butt and boom, world saved. What he's going to do, fight you off with just a Gardevoir? But of course the player character doesn't share or talk about Indriad to other people. Why would he do something that is common sense? He's the only one right now who knows about Indriad and Maria's fiasco! People talk crap about Pokemon Insurgence for their cults, yet those 5(actually 4) cults in that game are pansies compared to Indriad's whole deal! But if Vivian doesn't sacrifice herself, Aelita wouldn't exist. Heh, Ironic. For Aelita to live, Melia must let Vivian die. Sort of. It's a bit more complicated...oh who am I kidding? What happens is so freaking bizarre, I doubt anyone could have predicted that from the beginning. And it somehow gets even MORE bizarre! ...I can't belive it took me this long to realize that Kenneth and Tesla got married in thsi timeline. For some reason my brain didn't process that step-daughter line... I clearly ate too much Durants...by accident of course. Okay, is throwing oils on girls a reference to something? Because I genuinely curious. I agree, that's really smart of Kenneth. An Aeviumite using their brain. A very rare phenomenon, even rarer than catching a shiny in mainline games. So bravo, Ke-wait, he's from Kanto...I take it back. Aeviumites are brainless. As expected. Urgh. I hate working with the evil guys. Even as a kid, I dislike this trope and found it really boring. I know there's the whole 'temporary alliance' and 'common problem that only both of them could solve together' stuff, but if I'm a hero, I hate having to lower myself to work with guys who were constantly trying to kill the heroes. And it's amazing how I rarely, if at all, see the bad guys try to backstab the guys and betray the heroes. Because, you know, bad guys. I know you only want to rule for your own lust, but you'd genuinely be the best ruler for this world, mainly because you're literally the strongest and smartest people in that timeline right now. And you probably won't kill people willy nilly, and instead have more valid reasons to do so. Like people who yells "This desert character is too white!" about an ASIAN, WAIFU, GACHA game yet act deaf when white/Japanese characters are turned black. Friggin hypocrites. It's just like you said, there's no such thing as true equality.
  8. Have you checked the multipleform.rb folder? Remember, it's titled multipleform.rb, not pokemonmultipleforms.rb
  9. I can give feedback about the Dynamax forms, huh? Well, most of the dynamax forms are okay(Dynamax Gengar is op!) but I'd like to see a different ability for Dyna Duraludon. Like Magic Guard. Steel Beam + Magic Guard will be so awesome... But of course, if you think my suggestion is too op/silly, feel free to ignore it.
  10. I think you're supposed to head to Radomus after that.
  11. Is it possible to have a document detailing the base stats and abilities of the new custom megas?
  12. It apeears I have more questions...How do you evolve Sliggoo into Hisuian Goodra?
  13. I see. Thank you very much. Another question(I seem to have a lot of these) I notice in the included excel file, it details how to evolve the gen 8 pokemon, the eeveelutions, and hisuian forms. Except for a few, like Hisuian Lilligant and Basculegion. How do you evolve those two?
  14. That's...interesting. is there any guide on how to do that? For my personal use, of course
  15. Another Reborn gen 8 mod? Awesome! After I finished playing the other version, I definitely need to give this one a try. The eeveelutions look gorgeus.... Just a question, and sorry if this is a dumb one, but what does the "PBS files for personal use" means?
  16. Maybe I did something wrong, but I can't seem to evolve Applin into either Flapple or Aplletun. I tried leveling it up by having it holding either Tart Apple or Sweet Apple, but nothing happened. I tried using the Tart Apple or Sweet Apple, but the use option doesn't appear. Only give or toss.
  17. "ghost haunting the staff area of the Grand Hall." Sorry for asking a dumb question, but when is this available in game? How to access the staff area of the Grand Hall? Also, yes! Hisuaian forms let's go! And Aevian Mareep is available in this game? Awesome. I always loved that adorable icy/electrical sheep.
  18. Sorry for being dumb, but the gmax mega stats you displayed, I assume are arranged in this order, right? HP Att Def SpecialA SpecialD Speed
  19. Replying to the replies from before chapter: Does Covid affect the mind? Because I just remember something interesting. When I got infected, nearly my entire family got infected as well. Despite the fact we took 2 stabs. Heck, my dad got three stabs and he got infected first! Maybe the vaccine is... Wait, wait, wait! What am I talking about?! There's no way big corporations would lie to us, right? It's not like they have dark, messed up, courtroom histories behind their back, right? And science is always true, and can never, ever be brought by money. Nope. Nada. Zilch...whatever that means. Eheheh. Sorry. I get a little...passionate about my favourite childhood show. Okay fine, I'm still a kid at heart. Mock me, it's not like I care but actually please don't At least I'm not obsessed with politics like a certain group of people...wait, what am I talking about? That's an extremely low bar. So you like salty stuff? Same. Although I never ate salted peanuts... Man, googly eyes Ana is a hilarious sight. She'll make a great laughter weapon though. Point them at enemies and they'll die from laughter. Or from shock. Whichever's more deadly. ...So Pretty Cure X is your huge weakness? *Imagine her face replaced by Madame X* Such a lethal combination. Especially since I'm a PreCure faaaa-I mean, uh, I, uh, umm, err.... ... ... ...This is why I barely have friends. At least I don't support that Netflix trash, Cuties. Wait, no! That's an even lower bar. I need better comparisons. It manages to have way more content than big budget canon-game cities at least. Oof. Not even a full restore can heal that. Suck it, GameFreak. Or Nintendo. Or whoever's responsible for Pokemon's quality downfall. It only took one guy with a sword in neolithic times to completely fuck up that harmony. Sorry for being dumb, but which character are you talking about? I don't recall v13 expanding on V. Or that red traitor girl. Or the Ana quest. So this whole thing still has many questions. Just like nearly everything in Rejuvenation. And even if it had answers, I doubt it'll satisfy me. *Cough cough* v13 *cough*
  20. Man. Getting infected sucks. Thanks a lot, vaccine. Cue Doctor types ready to use Outrage Ah well, could be worse. I could be dead. You know, from the first impressions, Dylan sounds like a damn serial killer. Thankfully, we later learn out that isn't the case. But sheesh, the vibes he gives early on are freaky. Unless v14 drops a bombshell where Dylan is some sort of serial killer with his alternate persona and stores their corpse under his house. What? This is Rejuvenation. Weirder/Edgier things have happened. Man, I hate those overanalyzing art/fiction types. The type of people who probably think every art is political. The kind of people who think the horny Shakespeare is a masterpiece(A fact that I just learned recently). Like, not everything has some grand meaning or crap. Analyzer: Oooh look! The sunset indicates bla bla bla emotion bla bla bla tragedy bla bla bla end of- Author: Err...no. The sunset is....just sunset. This is why I don't really buy into that "death of author" whatever. That everyone can interpret art in any way. That's just...wrong. Because by that logic, people can interpret Thomas the Kids Show as a facist/dystopian/whatever nightmare. Which is an incredibly re******************m*d*r*t*r*re*************** thing to do. Like, so stupid. Like, if you unironically say that you need to get your brain checked. Like, I meet someone who, unironically, in 2022, on Twatter, said that Thomas the freaking Tank Engine is fascist! You wish I was kidding! "Oh noes, those trains are forced to work endlessly! And they get threatened by scrap if they don't perform well! Oh how cruel!" Gee, I wonder why. Maybe because they are literal metal machines? That's what they are build for? What else do you expect a locomotive to do? Be Chugginton? Like, am I weird for not being sacred of Thomas when I was a kid? I watch the classic episodes just fine, no hiding under the blankets....okay, maybe the episode where Number Green 3 thought a ghost haunted a lonely station and opened some gates did spooked me. And there is the canonical fact in the original books that thousands of steam locomotives got scrapped... Okay, so Thomas and Friends is kinda grim at times....especially since there's several canonical characters that barely avoided the cutter's flamethrower. And since they are steel types, fire is well, duh. But these rather dark stuff has nothing to do with facism/authoritarian/dystopian crap. Thomas and his machine pals is still an innocent kids show by the end of the day. Then again, that "thomas is fascist" person also unironically said that kid shows that teaches morals is propaganda/political or some crap. So that should give you an insight into his IQ. Ominous fortune telling is ominous...Hmm? Wait a second. I seem to see another prophecy? Hmm...this says...you're gonna go balistics on Team Bladestar? Because they stole someone's eyes? What's that all about? So have you seen the new Gen 9 trailer? Thoughts about the starters? How many Pokemon do you think will get Dexited? How dated will the graphics look? And most importantly, How much lazier do you think GameFreak can get? Even lazier than "Hur dur, les mek Pokeman bIg"
  21. *blows dust of keyboard* Sorry for not commenting for a while. I was...busy....with stuff... Maybe the curse makes her more bitchier as time goes on? You definitely need to cure her as soon as possible. I would had thought Melia, a teenage girl would say something along the lines of "Fine, as long as you stop being a bitch." Or the PG variant, "Stop being a jerk/butt /meanie " Agree with you on the whole friendship crap. Calling Melia a "friendship whore" is an understatement, but boy is she a friendship whore. My dad recently brought that...ring thingy for his work, and I still not sure how to use that thingy. Ooof. Fans of the annoying-babbling-psychopathic-pervert are gonna have a fit hearing that from you. Sorry. I meant to type "Deadpool fans". Silly keyboard! Is that magic Asian man closet thingy a referance to something? Because I'm not getting it. Good news(if you're interested in Falinks)! Falinks can be obtained as an overworld encounter in that pyramid place where you fight Bladestar losers I played v13 and I don't recall Erin having anything important to do other than knowing that whole Miera region. Oh, but there is that double battle where the MC is trying to impress Taelia or something. Which I did easily enough, and most certainly did not get my arse kicked by Melia and Erin despite having Aelita on my side. For a "non-serious" you white twat, why do you have a crested Zangoose? Kinda funny that Erin in v13 says she "care" for Kanon when she(I think) still says the same thing to Kanon here. You really hate maid Kanon, huh? Fair. Because in v13, he still hasn't had a Pokemon! Even in that KanonxErin story section(which is very annoying, and the reason why I took so long to finish v13) Erin has to all the Pokemon battles! Get a damn Pokemon already! Even if you suck at battling, at least it's better than nothing!
  22. To be fair, how do you explain to someone who's one temper away from a murder, that that person is one temper away from a murder, without upsetting the person so that the person is zero temper away from a murder? Keep in mind, this isn't kind, sweet, hot, waifu for laifu Aelita, but cursed Aelita, who could snap when someone looks at her wrong. Those damn Garufags... I'd never got into the Funko Pop craze. And from what I seen, that's a good thing. Maybe the serum colours respond to blood type or something? But that sounds kinda lame...Just as the decision to remove the vaccine scene...but then again, if Jan decided to keep it, media will probably be buzzing with headlines like: Pokemon fights against Vaccines?!!!! Pokemon fangames: A tool for Alt-right Propaganda? Why you shouldn't take vaccine: according to Pokemon And other crap like that. They could just give you strong Tms. Like Scald, Earthquake, Toxic, etc...It took way too long to get Scald in this game, I started to think it's a myth... I'm not a fan of Erin, but she doesn't deserve to be punished by her Grandpa just because someone else screwed up. Actually, I hate it when someone gets punished just because the person under their care gets into trouble. Like, for example: Stupid parent: How dare you put your little brother in harm's way?! Elder brother: What?! It's not my fault. I told him not to play with the scissors! It's not my fault that brat is a crafty moron. Stupid parent: Whatever it is, your brother is now in the hospital. So now you must be punished for doing your job properly. Elder brother: Again. Not my fault! I tried my best! Stupid parent; No excuses! For a month, *insert punishment here* Elder brother: Oh screw you! *Punch the idiotic parent* Thankfully, this had never happen to me. Otherwise, well...you can guess what'll happen. Stop cockblocking ruining Sean's attempt at helping, Staraptor! Sheesh, annoying birds... Can I call Pink Aelita Bitchelita? Because God, she is a bitch. Return to normal quickly, please! They could at least use a Psychic Pokemon/Meditating Pokemon to help exorcise Aelita...there's already a bunch of Pokemon that deals with Meidtating/Calmness/Mind/etc. Personally I'd go for "Good night" 'Sleep tight." "Lights out!" "Shuush..." Uesless pieces of papers. Piss has more use than those fragile papers slips. Man, if you think this whole...exorcism is mental, v10 would be insanity. Which v11 surpassed. Which v12 surpassed. Which v13 surpassed... Starting from v10, I starting to realise(I'm kinda slow) that the game will keep on getting weirder and weirder, and I still keep getting surprised. Forigve me for being dumb, but why are the Tao Trio dicks? And Kyurem eats people? What? If they're gonna worship a legendary, they might as well worship Rayquaza. There's already that Zinnia tribe, that devotes their lives to Rayquaza and get cucked by the Champion And I can see why. Rayquaza is awesome. Ever since he descended upon Earth to pimp slap those two idiots, I was a mega fan of him. His Mega is so strong, the Smogon players broke into tears and have to ultra ban him. Mega Rayquaza is way too powerful for this mortal world! Wait, really? Huh. I either don't recall the Internet being that slow or I was born pretty late into the Internet era. I mena, Youtube connection is still laggy but I don't recall being that severe. Not to mention I live in a non-First World Country, so I thought the laggy connection is because well, my country's not fully developed at that time. Isn't it interesting that technology somehow made people smarter AND dumber?(Emphasis on the latter) Is that why corporations are selling tons of Rotom appliances nowadays? To made people dumber to for...conspiracy purposes? Honestly, when me and my brother were young, we thought that Electric ghost is a legendary. But apparently you can order one through the mail nowadays.
  23. Well, if you insist. Remember Carotos Mountain? At the lava area, before going into the Garufags chamber, you can find a sleeping Aevium Paras. If I recall correctly, you need a Spice Powder to wake it up. To evolve it though, it's best if you ask someone else. That part is a bit confusing to explain... Not even those "equality justice warriors" online treat everything equally. Like, if an originally white character is changed to black, these "warriors" would be silent. But if it's the other way around, boy the outrage can power half of the Africa continent. ...I can't believe I forgot that part. Urgh. And to make matters worse, those still exist in v13. There's still moments where your victory would amount to nothing, and the villains get away scot-free. Just to be sure, you knew the reason why the league was formed in the first place, right? So you knew that the Aevium league took it's inspiration from the most mismanaged league ever? You know, I would assume the curse messed up Aelita's emotional and logic circuit, which explains why she keeps blaming herself for what happened. But that doesn't explain why the other characters keep blaming her. She did nothing wrong, you idiots! She(in my opinion) contributed the most and didn't act like a stubborn idiot and abandon others willingly. The other characters are practically gaslighting her. You know, among all the Xen commanders, only Zetta's the one that I might consider let alive. He's stilll a piece of crap, but considering his circumstances, I'll be lentient on him(like being a chew toy for my Incineroar). Which is more than I could say for the other Xen commanders, who's actions are so horrible yet don't match their motives and circumstances Nimrod: I have a sick daughter, which is why I shall torture other people's daughters! Madelis: I have sister issues, which is why I torture orphans! Nastasia: I changed my name(assuming she's actually Anastasia), which is why I'm a bitch! Geara: I have a small penis, which is why I overcompensate by being the absolute worst! There's no other choice for them, other than the death penalty.
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