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Steelix.

Prologue II is now out. It took a while of procrastination and thinking to complete (and there still might be issues that my sleepy form will recheck tommorrow morning) but I finally completed it. Please enjoy and provide critique.

Pretty deep. I like the metaphorical way you compare emotions to flowers, and it all weaves together a very gratifying piece. Bunch of grammar inconsistencies, but I'll put the details in spoiler though: Either way, great work, and write more of these.

To clarify another thing, Jhin isn't literally "dehumanizing" his victims. He treats them as puppets metaphorically and with contempt in that they are tools for his work. And the sanguine thing: I presume you got it from this sentence? "Blood emerged from each puppet like a wondrous display as they decorated the golden hue of the harvest with a sanguine red" In this case, sanguine is more of a supplementary/descriptive word than a noun in itself. Taking off the red would make the sentence sound odd. I have used sanguine individually in another message as well: "Every composition I composed was one of sanguine, leaving behind fitful traces of my work as minds were shattered and corpses were twisted to my liking" Sanguine can act as both a noun and an adjective here, which is why red isn't needed.

This is a story whereby in, Jhin's point of view, speaks of his development from the beginning of his life to become the Virtuoso. I intend to give him interactions in all sides in every civilized section of Runeterra with the obvious exception of the Shadow Isles and Shurima. For now, the prologue will speak of his childhood and how he has escaped, with the next few chapters of the prologue speaking of the creation of his weapons, and his first kills with his improved tech. From then on the interactions are a toss up. Jhin will either successfully or unsucessfully kill his target be it for himself or his clients (so about from the obvious Zed and Shen, champs like Akali, Lee Sin, Master Yi, Sona, Katarina, Viktor, and many others will spar with him or just get killed) starting with Ionia after his debut in the prologue. My pattern will center around four chapters in each region (so there's gonna be four Demacia, Noxus, Zaun, etc centered chapters) since he does roam around and does kills in nations. Might even do more if I find it my fancy. Jhin will not always successfully kill his desired targets (particularly champions) but will have success in some, and will escape/elude any failed "performance." The ending of this will probably center around Jhin -- after finishing all his relevant masterpieces and finishing his career -- to find the "perfect death" he sees for himself. He laughs in game when he dies,meaning he even takes pleasure from his own death; he is intolerant of falling uglily and even if he has to die he will do it beautifully, which is how I intend to end this, if I do. I appreciate your criticism. Feel free to PM me about the details, and checking dictionaries, you're right about the misuse/redundancy of punctuation. I'll get to work on it later.

Happy birthday, given from me as someone of Malaysian descent like yourself. I hope this year will be a great one for you.

Perhaps. I've actually studied cuisine before in the past, but I hope what I'm about to elaborate isn't so complex. Given our timezone difference I usually manage to catch you when it's morning/afternoon for me, so I'll only add breakfast suggestion for now. Nothing perks me up better than roast black coffee in the morning, which I have on a set basis irl. I have a preference for arabica beans, more than most. Otherwise, I also drink a wide variety of teas ranging from English Tea (such as chamomile and Earl Grey), Chinese Tea (Pu'er or chrysanthemum), or plain Japanese ocha (green tea.) I'm not picky when it comes to the main course more than the beverage, but I have a knack for French cuisine despite my nationality. If I'm in the mood for something sweet, I have a preference for pâtisserie (French pastry), or at least creme patisserie on a custom pastry. A basic sandwich can also appeal; any sandwich could do, such as a foot-long or a croque-monsieur. Of course, a bit of fruit can also act as an appetizing desert.

Stefan and Adero As the two men accepted the preposition, the mysterious man then inclined the mammal-like figure to stand before them. For several moments, the man beside him -- Adero -- stood still as the ferret's glowing eyes peered into his, as if to transfer or imbue something into him. Eventually it was his turn. Taking a deep breath, Stefan's scarlets met the ferret's eyes. The latter's glowed, and a strange, verklempt sensation began to envelop the young man; he stood still, unable to move, unable to dart his eyes to test the reaction, nor move a limb to interrupt it. Something was flowing within him -- it was warm, warm to the senses, almost painful after several moments; his eyes urged to cringe in an attempt to quell the pain as it grew, but the fact that he couldn't move made it all the more excruciating. Eventually, it stopped. The relief of the pain gratified him, somehow, as he set himself still. "What have you done to us?" Stefan asked, as his session ended, trying to collect any change his body displayed after the puzzling ritual.

First chapter of the Prologue is out. Posts may be given.

Mind of the Virtuoso Since the persona is a four fanatic (literally, an obsession to the number four) I've decided to adhere to his fascinations and make chapters go like this. Links to each chapter will be placed beside the chapter listings below. An arc will feature four chapters before a new arc begins. Prologue: The Becoming I : I am Jhin II : Whisper III: Death in Four Acts IV: Curtain Call Act I : Ionia: The Performance Begins I : A Visage without Eyes - Lee Sin II: A Quiver without Stride - Varus III: A Star without Dazzle - Soraka IV: A Crest without a Gleam - Karma Act II: Noxus: A Gauche Canvas I: The Sinister Blade - Katarina II: The Conspicuous Performer - Draven III: He Who Almost Stole my Canvas - Singed IV: Who's the Madder One? - Mundo Special Act: The Eye, the Shadow, and the Fist

Care to witness the life of a renowned psychotic artist? Salutations, and here goes. A useless guy's gotta do what a useless guy's gotta do to at least try and be productive. I have had little leeway for writing recently but figured I'd start something by myself that would be deemed productive. So I've decided to make this: Mind of The Virtuoso. Some people will scorn or give any obvious first reaction when they see this. Don't worry. I'll give credit for what's not mine right here. This is just a personification of a character that I admire, and he doesn't belong to me in any way apart from my drabble of thoughts that make this series. Take note that due to the nature of my writing none of the official lore is going to be copy-pasted literally here too. I hope that clarifies things sufficiently. So let's start by introducing the persona. Anyone who knows League of Legends should know who The Virtuoso is. But for those who don't, here's League's most accurate explanation of who he is: As Hukuna would best put it from our conversation a while back, trying to think and write through the thoughts of someone as criminally insane as Jhin stands as a very steep challenge, but personally a very interesting one. Thinking of personal monologue from some character backgrounds, I've had a few options to choose from such as Nasus, Riven and Yasuo with their respective pasts. Regardless, Jhin, while arguably (or unequivocally) the most difficult to write, was my preferred champion to write of here. I consider myself a Jhin main as I've been utterly enthralled by his design and character even since his release ( as well as the best login music Riot has ever offered so far). Interest sparks motivation, so while it's not really original (the characters and background, for the most part) it's good writing practice, to test a new form of writing style (first person), to use time productively and avoid procrastination, etc. I know my writing is shit substandard and rinky-dink, and this isn't exactly as appealing as other works here, but bear with me. I need to improve if I'm going to fit in. Criticism would help out so I can reevaluate myself. Note: The first Chapter -- the Prologue -- and other chapters -- will be posted below with GoogleDocs because my chapters tend to be very long. So sit back, and I hope you enjoy the show!

Ayy, Happy Birthday Colin!

My Bisharp, really. Be it in standard laddering play, Reborn, even since gen 5 when it was UU, it's done me a lot of work and is easily my best used and most favourite physical sweeper and favourite Pokemon together. I personally think I'm good with Sucker Punch mind games after lots of games with it.

Stefan and Adero Stefan surmised on the power he could wield, even if a fraction -- of these people that managed to stop something as deadly as a giant arachnid, perhaps more of its capabilities he had yet to see. Guns weren't enough for the path he took; the path he took to restore his family's name from the people who tarnished it, and lo and behold, an opportunity walks on his pedestal beyond his anticipation. Of course, he was requested to keep such newfound power inconspicuous; thought it inspired a frown at such a thought, he ultimately decided the products he would garner were worth his hassle, wondering what benefits a gunslinger would add to the mysterious organization. "Have it your way." He muttered, placidly. "I'll join you, then."

I'll get posting on the thread soon.