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    Well, it's been a long time. The number of views has quite bounced, so I'm assuming people are still reading this story, which pleases me. Also, over 1,000 views is amazing. I hope we'll reach new heights. The next chapter is (thankfully) shorter than chapter 14. It's mostly filler, because Gabriel needs a bit of rest after the demented 30 hours or something he has spent in Reborn City. Chapter 15: Investigations "Don't fall asleep now. We need you." Pain flared through my old wounds. I felt vaguely, but literally, shake
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    Hello! It's time for chapter 14, which is... a monster. Way too big. I really should have split it in half, but it wouldn't really have made sense, storywise. This length is why the chapter is in two different spoiler tags. Please feel free to give me feedback, criticism, or any kind of comment really. Also, I've seen that J-Awesome One discussed the possibility of writing Christmas Specials. Just to be clear about that: there isn't going to be one this year in my story. It just wouldn't fit in the overall theme. Also, snow would be too powerful an
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    Well, sounds like Gabriel is trapped and is going to die homeless in the short term. The End. ...Or maybe not, who knows? Chapter 13: Rescues Just my luck. What could I do? Option one -- running away -- was impossible. I didn't know where the exit was. That left another solution. I raised my hands slowly, trying to get some information on my surroundings from the ground -- I couldn't lift my eyes without having the flashlight blind me. "So, what are you doing on our turf?" the p
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    The next chapter is out! It's one of the longest ones so far, but I'm afraid it's going to be topped soon. Also, please, leave comments because I'm rather worried about my starting to freewheel. Chapter 12: Treats and Tricks As thanks for my time, the police officers gave me a tip: just west was another entrance to the Abandoned Railway, with interesting Pokemon, they said. There were mostly Woobats and Noibats, which didn't interest me, but there was a rarer Pokemon, a Klink. Its rarer Steel typing made me think they cou
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    Hello! It's time for a new chapter. We are starting with the "Obsidia Pulse" arc, and it's going to last a few chapters. Again, comments and feedback are really appreciated, as I really am sort of new to this (and way too talkative, I suppose). Chapter 11: Law of the Jungle When I entered the Obsidia Ward, I was quite taken aback by the plants coming to life. Of course, I had been told about that by no less than three different people: Victoria, Florinia, and the police officers, but it made a difference to see what they
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    It's the first time, I think, I'm commenting this story. I would just like to say that it's a very enjoyable read. That change-of-viewpoint chapter, while unexpected, was remarkably well-written (and, so sweet).
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    Hello! It's time for Chapter 10, a slightly shorter one. Just a note, which is quite fitting here, but doubtlessly applies to many chapters, released and to come: we see everything (or almost) from Gabriel's perspective, meaning that none of his thoughts are intended to be ideal, or sound, or anything. This, to explain some of his overall behavior. Chapter 10: Dewilish The sun was setting when I left the Gym. It had to be at least 8 pm. The weather was clear, with only a few clouds in the light blue sky, but it had become noticeably c
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    So it's time for the... well... long-expected moment, where you can all see for yourself how much Gabriel is worth as a Trainer. After some 35-40 pages (the counting is quite shaky), he's finally going to get to fight Julia. Enjoy! Chapter 9: Power Madness It was now late in the afternoon, and my team, however rested, probably wasn't ready to take on Julia. But still, I could have a look at the Gym and train there, maybe even watch her battle to get an idea of what I would be facing. The good news was that the Gy
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    Hello Candy! Thank you for your comment. I definitely read most of Vanilla's adventures, but my post's estimate was indeed based on the beginning of your Season 1, because it was the easiest one to access it corresponded to the only part where I had a clear enough outline. The whole content so far corresponds to roughly 40 Word pages, possibly more, which is, if I recall correctly the rough comparisons I had made, about the double of what you wrote up to Julia. I think the comparison is going to hold until Corey at least, maybe till Pyreous Mountain (although that point is well beyo
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    Chapter 8: War Declaration "Sandile, Budew, out... Keep wary. Rowlet, further... in the corridor... warn me... if they're coming... Be... discrete." Fern panted. I walked in the path we had neglected, taking left instead of right at the crossroads. I tried to be confident, quiet and fast. There were probably no grunts there, and I had the instructions for the panel control. It would work fine. It was funny how trying to make up reassurances for myself helped sped up time. Or perhaps the computer was just this close. And the area was empty. Perhaps al
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    Time for Chapter 7, the longest chapter so far. I apologize for it not featuring any screenshots. Let's just say that exploring an enemy base isn't easy for people who never did it before. Also, there's a "surprise guest" at the end of the chapter. So please feel free to give feedback on that scene, if not on the rest, because I'm not sure if I showed him well. Anyway, enjoy! Chapter 7: Recklessness The room we were standing in was packed with metal shelves, most of them filled. Fern and I could only walk in
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    You probably noticed, but I changed the overall title. I'm really bad for these things, so I may change it again from time to time. Maybe at some point I'll find something I really like and keep it that way. Chapter (and part) titles should remain unchanged. So it's time for the next chapter. As always, I'm welcoming any feedback. Chapter 6: The Fantastic Four After a snack -- it was clealy the afternoon, maybe as late as three -- I found my fellow challenger in considerable anger before Julia's Gym. He was
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    So, it's time for the next chapter. It's again a "short one", where the exploration of the Peridot Ward is completed for the time being, and we join again the game's main plot. @J-Awesome_One: Yes... That's not as much of a character trait as some preparations I make for the future of the run. I don't know which Pokemon will become useful and when (I'd like to try Noivern, and Swoobat will come in handy from Florinia to Shelly at least, for instance... Kricketune is really a blessing and Gulpin is bound to do the job for a little while; on the other hand, I don't really expect Pan
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    @J-Awesome_One: Thanks for the support! I am planning for quite a few deviations from the storyline, be it about sidequests or the main plot, I hope I can keep on surprising you! Just so that I don't forget to say it, for the sake of the modified storyline, I'll make "doctored" screenshots. Some of them are going to be quite clumsy, as I really am no good at this part and don't have any kind of advanced software. So I implore your leniency, as they are more for decoration, while the heart of the endeavor is the text. Anyway, on to Chapter 4! This one and the
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    @SansTheSkeleton: The "Part" is more like a season in other runs. So it won't correspond to the episode split, but probably to some 3-5 episodes, as of now I've planned for five parts. The first part, in my current outline, should end after Corey. The ratings will dip in the negative, but this probably won't occur before a while. So it's third chapter time, where Gabriel sets out to discover Reborn City. You can say the journey really starts there. Again, any comment or feedback is welcome. Chapter 3: The Decaying City
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    First, thanks for the replies! About your remarks: @Angelkitsune: your question about Gabriel's physical appearance actually got me thinking a bit more than it should have. I was using Vero for the screenshots and th playthrough (as you can see in the chapter), but that's mostly because he's the least unsimilar of the player characters (and I really can't draw or sprite). For Gabriel, he's white, has green eyes with short brown hair, and is about 1.75 meters (5'9'' for American readers) tall. For the picked Pokemon and interactions with Cain, well, you'll see just below.
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    Hello ! So I've been reading a few playthroughs/fanfictions on the forum, most notably Vanilla's and Matthew's adventures, and I wanted to try one as well. Sorry for the title, I usually struggle with these things. I wanted to add "terribly-titled" (because it's bound to be) but some expletive guy with a huge hungry dragon-like green familiar (I think it was a female, they're supposedly always fiercer) told me these words were his. He sounded pretty upset so I thought best not to defy him. A couple of things about how it is going to work: it is going to be
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    Well, it seems that most of the characters of the game are females, so obviously you can't have only males as insufferable people. What honestly surprises me is that nobody (in game) yet has decided to engineer an "accident" against Karen. I mean, she has weird powers letting her murder and mind-control on a whim, which she does, and she's allowed to move freely (as opposed to, say, there is an official group of mind-control-immune people specifically tasked with preventing her from abusing her powers). Second, she's not a real villain in the game, which lets one suppose that she'd be an
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