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Little Odd One Out update: the hiatus is extended. I probably won't publish any new chapter before mid-March.
Study stuff is a bit tense now -- who would have guessed that procrastinating was only a temporary solution?
Still, given the view counter of the thread, it seems that you (or some of you) are still reading the story, and that's great!
Anyway, I guess I also wanted to share that I've finished the first draft of the first chapter of Part Three. I'm not quite satisfied of it for now, but I'll let it rest for a while -- Gabriel's subconscious really, really disturbs me.
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Small Odd One Out update: the hiatus is definitely going to be a long one. I don’t expect to update anything before a month at least, perhaps even two. There’s work I have to
go on procrastinatingactually do, that sort of thing.
Also, I’m kind of stuck figuring out character motivations because at least a few points make very little sense. I’m not going to go into detail because spoilers.
Here I just want to share my frustration with a certain underground event which I can’t imagine consistently.
The first point is that there’s a big plot hole I don’t know how to avoid.
The second point is that if I ignore it (after all, there are plenty of characters who do weird stuff for unfathomable motives, right?), I only managed to make up a few scenarios, none of them satisfactory.
Scenario 1 is boring and also undoubtedly artificial.
Scenario 2 is... rather gross and doesn’t really solve the conflict.
Scenario 3 is clever but somewhat naive, compared to what the parties involved are.
Scenario 4 is more realistic than scenario 3 but much edgier, quite disturbing, and I’m not sure how the good guys get out.
Scenario 5 is my only idea of resolution but feels completely like a deus ex machina and nullifies the conflict.
I’m trying to find scenario 6 which will solve this little riddle, because 6 is a perfect number, right?
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The second part of The Odd One Out is now fully online.
There are many drawbacks to trying to be Sherlock Holmes. Some are obvious -- but one which isn't often thought of is that you need a very particular kind of enemy to pull it off.
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They're outnumbered, outprepared, thoroughly outmatched. And yet they must not lose.
How can you fight so strong an enemy?
The Odd One Out has a new chapter.