Zarc

I don't agree, in my opinion you are good at entertaining with your screenshots and your words , but if you want a tip, try to illustrate them with videos

I've been occasionally peeking at your current run because mine is kind of dying lol and it actually is pretty entertaining. Although for what you are asking, maybe try putting in more descriptive language? In your most current one specifically, the Lance one (I am very new to the forums, so I have not seen your earlier runs) it seems to not have much in a description. The screenshots alone tell the stories of the battles, which is cool, but for what you are asking I think just adding in more detail with text will accomplish that. (Also don't worry about it being boring, yours is way better than mine <3.)