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Just a little update: Im planning on making spinda this weekend. saw that it was yellow and dont want to loose it...

I'm stuck at the braille puzzle. I followed this pattern: middle, NE, SW, SE, NW, NE, SW, SE, NW, middle. I downloaded 4.0.1 and restarted the game. Help?

Uhhh... I know the slakoth line was released? So you could do that? Just saying...

Alright, the backsprites for plusle and minun:

I just wanted to say that these look really good. Only treecko stands out a bit though. Because the rest of the line has 'extra' colours (green, blue, red...). Maybe you can give the tail a different colour to match the other sprites? But it lookes amazing either way

Actually, that's what I meant as well. I just worded it poorly. But thanks for clarifying anyway

Alright, so I just started playing this and wanted to give my opinion. I'm currently at the second gym leader so I'll only give my opinion on the content up to that point. I'll start by saying that I really like the game so far, mainly because of the story. I'll name some actual examples so it's clearer. I like the moment when you discover the bomb. The sudden change in music really gives the feeling of urgency and something bad happening. The only thing that upset me is that we left the sylveon below decks behind... Just kidding! It didn't really upset me, but it is sad for the sylveon. Maybe remove it after you've found the bomb? Or maybe you could do something with that sylveon later on in the story somehow? Personally I'd like that, such a small detail coming back later in the story. But it's up to you. One thing: after we find the bomb we have to go to a certain spot on the deck. I talked with all the people there and two said the same thing as before the bomb. Considering the current situation, it's a bit weird. Here's what they said: 1: im so excited. The captain said we'd arrive soon. 2: Did you know that the ayrith region has six seperate islands which are all entirely unique? Also, each island is ruled by, some are nice, others... not so much. Dont worry though, this ship is going to cellia city. Its really warm and everyone is so nice there! Just a small thing you might want to change. Alright, after that. First of all I really like the fact that you can choose an alternative starter pokemon. It's a bit different form other games and that makes it interesting. But I am curious as to what happens to the pokeballs you leave behind? Maybe you can use that later in the story? Like, you encounter the people those pokemon originally belonged to? (if they survived, that is...). Also, Connor's character. At the beginning he's a jerk, but as the story proceeds you find out he's not so bad after all. In my opinion this makes him a well created character because he's not perfect, he's 'flawed'. And it gives a bit of character development. Also, love the tiny hints that he's afraid of the dark. Maybe you can let that come back later in the story? You also give a good explenation as to why he has a 'weaker' team. Just one sentence and it's explained. A couple of smaller points: I think the fire animation when you talk with Connor also looks nice. There's also some dialogue that doesn't fit in with the current intro, but I think that's been said already? When I evolved my flabebe at level 19, it's level dropped back to 16? Not a huge problem, but I thought I'd mention it. Also, the ring where you fight Kuiki? There are some of the old sprites of the villagers left. And after the first gym, when Ava catches up to you? She gives a nice hint about you going back to Connor and Scarlett. I thought I'd try it out and there was actually a point to it! In the mountain, I think it's the first battle, there's a small typo. He says: just because you bet me. (has to be beat). And whenever I encounter a scatterbug there's no sound, no pokemon 'cry'? And I read somewhere that we could give potential ideas for the game? I've got one: Maybe you can use a pokemon's 'power' at some point in the story? A power that's mentioned in the pokedex? Here's two examples: - Beheeyem: it's pokedex entry says: it can manipulate an opponents memory. Maybe have someone use a beheeyem to change of wipe someone's memory? - Gothitelle: it's pokedex entry says: when it learns its trainers life span, it cries in sadness. Use that to foreshadow a death? And you might want to use cresselia at some point? Because the theme has a lot to do with dreams and so does that pokemon? But it's up to you if you want to use it!

So two different ideas for plusle and minun. One I reversed the colours and the other I used different colours altogether. Plusle: Minun:

For plusle and minun I had this idea to make electricity come from their cheeks. I haven't changed the colours of the body yet, I'll do that later. First, I wanted to see what you thought of my idea and how it looks.

That's alright. And here you go: If these are alright, I'm claiming spinda next.

Uhh... I'm not sure if I understand. From my perspective the one on the top left (green body) already has purple smoke? Do you mean the one with the purple body?

I made the purple and green less bright. If you just dont like the colour combintion, two alternatives:

Once again, I had two ideas in my head I can't decide which one I like more... I tried to go for green smog/purple poison? Just pick your favourite! Out of curiousity: which one of the mega swampert did you choose, Jan? And if these are approved, I'm claiming spinda next.

So, I made the mega a bit different, but I think I can get away with it... cause its a mega And I made two different versions (I had one thing in mind and changed it halfway. Decided to just post them both) Also, Jan, do you have the rest of the mudkip line complete now? I did post all of them a while ago, but I'm not sure if you got them and if they're all allright now? And, if these are alright, I'd like to claim plusle/minun as well and, yes, I'm counting them as one line...

You know what, I like that solution. Lets go with that. Do you prefer marshtomp to be pink or red? Some people mentioned that red might be better for the consistency, but I made it a slightly different colour on purpose: because the non shiny colour is different as well. And can I claim torkoal? I have something I want to try and I did finish the swellow line already...

Soo... I'm not entirely sure what to do either. I already liked that one. But I tried some different colours, maybe that's better? Edit: and because it was suggested: Made the whiskers gray...

So, hopefully these are all better now. I know I still have to finish the mega, but I'd like to claim torkoal already. After all, I did already finish the swellow line...

Whelp, and I just thought I was getting better... Just kidding. I completely missed that, thanks for pointing it out! I still like the one on the right better though...

So, I made two different versions. I think I like the one on the right better.

I think the white looks much better indeed. Ill have to see if it fits with the evolutions as well. Edit: So I think it suits swampert as well. I dont like marshtomp though. I either have to change the white in the middle or the white on his belly (the round part). What do you think?

Do you mean like this? Or do you want the whiskers to be an entirely different colour altogether?

I'm pretty sure you can. I think Jan's fine with it because it's the same line and it keeps things consistent. Edit: here they are. I'm so glad I was fast enough to claim these. I already made the front sprites of the mudkip line and had this really nice idea for swellow... Obviously I still have to make the backsprites and the mega. But I thought I'd wait to see what you think of them first.

I was literally pressing f5 every ten seconds for the past 10 minutes

I'd like to do the mudkip line and the taillow line.

I already made a skarmory before gen 2 started, so I decided to post a new one. There's a slight difference in the green on the wings. I'll make a backsprite of whichever one you prefer. If you like them of course. Edit: so I just realized that the backsprite doesn't show the green part at all. So, here's the backsprite Unless if you'd prefer to have the back of the wings green as well