Pyon Pyon Kyuu!~

Lotus Contiello, Countess Sybil Contiello, Count Heinrich Contiello, Azegeor, Lord Cyllis, Redeemer Riika, Father Babble, Barbara, Iidrra, Look, a lot of people ok? Time: 1st Day, of the 1st Month, of the Year of Rebirth. 3:00 PM It wasn't long before Lotus attempted to talk to someone else at the table. She could socialize a bit right? Get to know the other guests. Her first thought was to talk to Barbara, a servant like herself. But it would be rude to talk to Barbara and ignore her superior. "Father Babble" Lotus began with a slight smile and graceful look. "What do you recommend to eat? I am not used to this food, so I would like to try a little bit of the tastiest thing. Only what the Father recommends of course." She spoke softly as if speaking to a child, taking the earlier words of Sybil to heart. After all, the last thing she wanted was to offend someone. "What about you Barbara, do you recommend anything? "

Note; I did not read any of this just mostly skimmed through it so take my criticism with a grain of salt. So Battlefield of Love has a very simple stat system. It works perfectly because there is only a necessary roll, and very very simple stats. To emulate something like combat you need a complicated yet simple system... This doesn't look simple. I recommend you look more into DND and the stuff they do.... For example the "luck" stat is completely unnecessary. That can be emulated with dice rolls. Overall luck stats don't make sense in video games, as a character's "luckiness" is hardly ever actually taken into account. They usually represent things that don't make sense. If it was a casting stat or something it would make more sense... Two cents \o EDIT: Also after reading, sorry to say this but ew Acqui. I hate the "to hit" calculations... Rolling dice is a lot easier (made a lot harder by the fact Reborn doesn't have a dice roller.)

Well guess who is still going to keep midas touch :^)

Also question, would it be possible to over the course of this RP gain new powers? Like evolution upon the properties of our current powers and their limits?

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Name: Marianne Anna Rose Aria of the North and the Sky Van Der Rosesen, uses the alias "Garden Gold" Age: 17 Gender: Female Generation: Generation 3 Power: The Midas Touch - Marianne has the Midas touch, her right hand turns things she touches into gold and her left hand has the power to revert it. Unlike the legend, she can actually control this power. She can choose what she turns and what she reverts. In general it takes her 5 seconds to turn a 5 foot cube into gold. She cannot lose contact with the object she is turning into gold or it won't fully turn into gold. Additionally, she cannot turn living things into gold. While when she touches non living material it literally turns into gold, if she touches a living being she can only cover them in a sheet of gold. The gold she creates is pure, a perfect conductor, heavy and durable. Sub-powers: Marianne is blessed with above average strength, literally able to lift and manage thrice her weight in gold. While not a power in itself, Marianne is taught in various armed martial arts, and in the unarmed arts of judo, capoeira, and boxing forming an unorthodox fighting style that is mobile and strong. Character summary:Marianne was born in Deiville City. Her father is the prestigious owner of the Rossen Company, leading the market in jewelry making. He fell in love with an altered woman. Knowing that she could not leave Deiville City, and that neither would his child he set up the Rose Garden Building, a 25 story skyscraper in the center of the city that serves as the family's center of operations. This is where Marianne was born, and where she lived her whole life. Her mother disappeared after her birth, refusing to take part in raising Marianne. Her father had a similar reaction, he acknowledges Marianne as his heir but he refuses to live with her or raise her, instead living in Oslonia far away from his daughter. So, Marianne was raised by her butler Shinobu. Over the years she has come to terms with her place in life; she will inherit her father's company even if he hates her. She will do everything to perfect herself into the perfect woman, but this still leaves her with spare time. Marianne dedicates her spare time under the alias 'Garden Gold' stopping crime in any way she can. By stopping crime, and getting involved with the criminal world she hopes one day find her mother. And finally ask her; why. Why did she have to be left all alone. Personality wise, Marianne isn't the easiest person to deal with. While deep down she is kindhearted, she has formed a shield around her heart. She puts up a "rich girl" act, treating others as if they were below her and letting others do work for her. She is quite intelligent and resourceful when she needs to be, but ignorant in some aspects such as life in the outer parts of the city. Appearance: Marianne is tall for her age, being about 1,80. Her eyes are rose colored, and her skin a perfect shade of white. She has long purple hair going down to her back. She wears a rose shaped ornament to keep the bangs off her face, tying her hair in a small bun to the left of her head. She has fairly robust features, her chest is large and her arms and legs show muscle from her training. She tends to wear elaborate dresses with complicated frills, and even more elaborate earrings and jewelry. Her 'Garden Gold' costume consists of a skintight gold suit, with a white cape. She wears a golden masquerade mask that full covers her eyes and nose in a beak shape. Marianne also turns her hair into gold, making it lose it's color and then tying it into a thin wire like a braided ponytail. Extra: Marianne is currently a student at the most prestigious school in the city. After she graduates she has announced that she will be studying law, and then returning after her father's retirement.

I don't actually see a problem with it. The three dudes were in the table completely distracted, and they only noticed Reggi and Sympohny because they literally walked up to them (and now Heavensea because she attacked). I understand what you are trying to avoid, but it's absolutely fine. Besides, I could easily just make a dude run to the elevator and shoot everything. You can write in your post "I don't think anyone has figured out I'm a cat girl" and then an NPC can immediately say "You are a cat girl". If that bad example makes any sense.

Lotus Contiello, Countess Sybil Contiello, Count Heinrich Contiello Time: 1st Day, of the 1st Month, of the Year of Rebirth. 3:00 PM "I'll... Try to be less formal, Your Grace." As if she didn't know the meaning of what she just said, she bowed her head low. Again she was having a hard time hiding her smile, it was amusing to watch the Counts be so romantic with each other. Lotus wondered how long they had been together. They were much much older than Lotus, she wondered if love could really stand for that long. She resolved to ask that question when she got the chance. "I refuse to disappoint you, Your Grace." With this said, she followed after the couple. When she entered the dinning room, she immediately became aware of herself. She fixed her posture, she tilted her head to get her hair out of the way, she quickly straightened out her dress. All of these things she never really took notice were important now! She had to look her best, as not to disappoint the Counts. She took her seat at the table, looking as emotionless as possible. However, she took every chance she could to look around and she always found something interesting. She took interest in the other guest's clothing, their mannerisms. Even the tablecloth was interesting. After all, this was a completely new experience for Lotus.

Blackseed "Get that door open, and use stealth. Scout ahead." The commander moved over to the woman crouching down. Even while crouching he was ways taller than the woman. She quickly lost he ability to speak as she coughed out blood. But she still tried to communicate. She breathed out heavily, made rasping sounds with her throat. And pointed. Pointed at Blackseed. More specifically at the weapon she had confiscated from the Yousei. "Either way, there's nothing I can do for her. I'm no field medic, she'll be dead in a few minutes. Bleeding way too bad, and her stomach is cooked medium rare." Rest of the Party "You know they don't pay us nearly enough for this." The Snow Yousei was saying, as he leaned his head against the table. He had long white hair, and red eyes. He was the clear typical albino Snow Yousei. As Reggi drew near he lifted his head. "H-hey guys who the fuck is this guy are we being invaded or something? Guys!?" His allies were clearly unresponsive. Almost like old-robots they got up. From their backs they drew two SMGs. The one on the right, a blonde man aimed his weapon straight at Symphony while the one at the left, a tanned woman, kept her weapon on Reggi. Then the Snow Yousei climbed on top of the table, his violet eyes looking lifeless... Wait weren't they red a second ago? From the table he picked up a bloody stiletto knife, and wielding it with the blade towards his back he jumped off the table. With lightning quick movements he came down on Reggi, slashing thrice at his armor with a maddening ballerina like spin.

Every day, I cringe at my own writing more and more and more and more and more and more and more and more and more and more...

Blackseed Kyle's helmet retracts back into his suit, revealing his face. He crouches down to look at the Flame Yousei, examining the wounds. "This ugly was attacked recently. I think the base is suffering a double invasion as we speak." He re-equipped his helmet and stood upright again. "Wouldn't want you breaking a nail, now would we missy? At least not one o' those. But it looks like you got that thing working so it might do you some good." Kyle pointed at the weapon Blackseed was holding. All of the lights seemed to go back on, and it looked just as functional as when the Yousei held it. The commander moves forward, going down the stairs. They clunk loudly, announcing the presence of the commander and he doesn't make any efforts to deafen his steps either. The stair case don't go on for too long, spiraling only once. They end with a metal door in the middle of the cave stone. Counting to three, Kyle signs his plan to Blackseed. On three, he kicks the door with all of the force of his armor easily knocking it down. He rushes in to the room, laser repeater in hand. The room is empty by all you can tell, but it is very dimly lit. There are machinery and consoles everywhere, some of them for mech maintenance, other pieces aren't recognizable. A large automatic door is ahead, probably leading to a hangar of some type by the looks of it. The panel next to it is covered in blood, someone typed n the keys while their fingers were drenched in the fluid. A very soft sound can be heard in the room... The raspy breathing of a woman. To the left of the room, a human woman lays against the wall. One of her arms lays over her stomach, her clothing black as if it was burned. In fact, her skin shows severe burn marks. She notices the Commander and Blackseed. She extends a hand out "H-help... Stop him. I don't know what he is doing, please stop-p him." Rest of Party The elevator panel was already opened, because someone clearly was trying to climb the shaft. In the elevator, you find another corpse. This time with a stab wound in their back. Outside of the elevator, the room looks something out of a nightmare. It's a large cafeteria, judging by it's size and amount of tables. But there are bodies, dead bodies everywhere. A few of them are still alive, but those are bleeding out. In the middle there is a group of three people, two humans and a Snow Yousei seating at a table calmly chatting. They seem completely oblivious to you or the rest of the cafeteria...

Well there isn't much to say because it's short. Really really short (and that's rich coming from me.) The writing itself is high quality. Good sentences, good descriptions, good everything. However in terms of setting and character, we know nothing. But that's due to how short it is. I'm guessing you will continue expanding on this if you feel like it, and if you do it could be something cool. Writing is high quality but short. \o/

Sora Evelyn "Anime huh?" Nicu grinned a bit mischievously. "So you are the Otaku type of girl. Didn't really take you for one." He kept at his work, sweeping the dust into a bag. "Don't you like sports? I've heard the school has some pretty good teams." When Evelyn came out of the shower rooms, he lifted up his hand in a greeting. "Hey, welcome back." Seema Every locker; locked. The ones that were opened; empty. The towel racks; no towels were racked. No matter how hard Seema looked, there were no towels in this shower room. Almost as if it was some prank, or evil act of god... Maybe there were some towels in the boys locker room? Or maybe in the storage shed! But to get there, Seema would have to go through the gym and obviously pass through the other and... Nicu DUN DUN DUNNNNN

Blackseed The Flame Yousei barely notices as he is killed, it's almost as if he was already dead. He falls over and doesn't resist. He simply goes limp. The weapon he dropped, powers down immediately after coming into contact with the floor. Kyle emerged from behind the crates. "We'll need to recover that and take it back to the ship, it's definitely something Freya will want to get her hands on." From the center of the room, you can take a new view point. There are only two entrances into the room, the one you came from and a path straight ahead that goes down some stairs. The walls of the room are stacked with metal crates, a few of them open containing ammunition and energy cells. Others are closed shut. A wooden barrel stands near the left wall, the wood tainted red near the lid. A strange stench of burned meat comes from the barrel. Rest of Party The constant barrage of weaponry and attacks against the metal seemed to do nothing at first. Until the first bullet left a dent. And then it cleared through leaving a hole. Soon enough, the elevator panel and the elevator doors seemed to be pieces of swiss cheese. The metal creaked loudly, announcing that it was going to fall. The metal plates no longer able to hold themselves against the wall simply fell forward against the floor revealing the elevator shaft. Looking into the elevator shaft reveals that this is the top floor. By looking down, there seems to be one other floor where the elevator is. The panel into the elevator seems to be open too, as light can be seen coming from the elevator.

Blackseed and Kyle "This thing makes less noise than a ballistic gun" Kyle said as he raised his weapon to take aim at the Yousei. "But it will still alert anyone nearby. Try to kill him silently, I'll cover you." He kept his barrel firmly aimed at the Yousei. The Yousei now seemed to have calmed down, or maybe he was just tired. His face was looking down, and he looked as if he was trying to catch his breath. The wounds on his arms just seem to bleed more and more. Rest of the Party The elevator panel first roared to work... Then stopped, and roared again. After a few more seconds the panel turned blue... And another message came up. 'Please see administrators for access'. It looks like the elevators are out of order.

7/10 dat butt. However too meaningful for me.

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Blackseed The cave, was a cave like one would expect. Until you spot a small metal cargo box. Afterwards, a wooden barrel. Slowly, wires start appearing on the walls of the cave. It starts becoming more and more clear that this cave path is used by human beings. On the top of the ceiling a few lights begin to show up, illuminating the place. This is definetly a long standing hideout. They've had time to set up lighting, and store so many crates. The cave widens to a square like room. The middle of the room is very well lit, shining almost like a spotlight on a large Flame Yousei standing in the middle. The Yousei is tall enough to challenge even your own height, his horns leaving him a few centimeters taller. Muscles he does not lack, his red skin bulging with power. However, he is bleeding from his arms. And breathing very heavily. He takes a few more breaths, and shouts up at the ceiling, roaring in pain. Or maybe, anger? Frustration? His arms hold a canon-like device, the barrel glowing with pink energy. It looks quite heavy, but the Yousei is holding it with ease. Whatever it is, it's clearly a weapon, and clearly dangerous. The man seems completely unaware of your presence, probably due to all of the cargo crates in the room blocking his vision. "A bit dangerous to go alone don't ya think?" Kyle walked behind Blackseed as silently as he could. However, silent for a man in power armor is not very silent at all. "I don't think he's seen us yet." Reaching to the back of his armor, a rifle dropped from a back compartment. It looked reminiscent of old winchester repeater rifles, but instead of being made of wood it was made of metal painted to look like wood. "How do you go about this? That scary face of yours might be enough to get him to drop his weapon and surrender." Rest Of The Party The path the party followed was dark, but somehow seemed to get slightly cooler. Soon your feet start stepping on metal, instead of the stone cave floor. Soon afterwards the cave's walls start becoming the same metal on the floor. Then it becomes complete illuminated a bit ahead, with lamps on the ceiling and red lights flashing on the walls. You soon reach a metal wall, with a pair of elevator doors in the middle. However, the floor here was sticky. On closer inspection, the stickiness turns out to be a pool of blood. Following the pool of blood leads to a body, a human slumped against the wall. A knife is lodged into her neck. The victim, a woman, had her arm on the knife's hilt as if she was trying to pull it out. On the opposite side of the room, another body lies dead against the wall this time with stab wounds all over the stomach. The corpse was of a male Snow Yousei, blood staining pure white skin.