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Pokemon Rejuvenation Development Blog

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  1. Scottieboy2020
    I get the feeling you're an English teacher, or something similar XD I appreciate all the tips, and you have some very good points. I'm gonna have to go through and fix all those now so it doesn't bug me like crazy haha. I'll be honest though, I thought my paragraphs were fine. Also, in the original document, I did use italics, and in all the places showing internal thought. However, for some reason, it didn't show here and I didn't check to find out that it hadn't; So I do apologize for that slight mishap. Anyways, thanks for the constructive criticism Acquiescence! (I went through a
  2. Scottieboy2020
    Thank you VERY much Hukuna! I have a couple other chapters I could post, but I wanted to see peoples reactions to the first chapter. If anyone wants, I will happily post the rest I have.
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    Chapter One: Welcome to Reborn Seth McFarlane. 19. Youngest reigning Champion of three Leagues, brother and son to powerful gym leaders, and born in Johto, before his family moved to Hoenn. Now hiding in Reborn, contemplating his present situation in the third person. Does he move on from this lonely alleyway, in an attempt to find food and shelter that simply isn’t there, or does he stay, and catch hypothermia? ...The world may never know. I thought, bored and cold. But more than anything else, I was excruciatingly alone, as a coward should be. It had been six years since I had last held
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    hmmmm. I'm tempted to let it grow and start letting my Leavanny wreak havoc.... but at the same time? I'll just use Eruption right off the bat. My typhlosion and Noivern will deal with everything I face, and if there's a cradily, since i'm assuming this has to do with the E4, charlottes one sister... (can't remember her name) well, that's for my Lucario and Metagross.
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    Field effects are pretty cool, but... They drive me insane trying to remember all of it haha. Take for instance the Ice type gym leader. Nature Power turns into Mirror Shot. Which is great to have, since Steel beats Ice, but the only pokemon I have that can learn it is Leavanny, a Bug/Grass type. Both of Leavanny's weaknesses are highlighted by the Mirror field, which makes it extremely hard to fit in that Mirror Shot. I know Typhlosion can learn Nature Power, but I chose Charmander as my starter, and his line doesn't learn it. I know all of that from trial and error, fighting a gym le
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