Daniel Blackworth

The judges never told the participants any criticism after the judging. Everyone's speech was centered on the importance of communication.

This is a speech that I wrote for an Oratorical Piece Writing Contest. I only got 2nd place though. Can anyone give me advice on how I should have improved this or any other feedback?

W3LC0M3 T0 43B04N! 3NJ0Y Y0U4 STAY

Hmm.... there are no weapons here, Lucius thinks when he reaches the barracks yet finds no viable weapon to pry the barrel open, Wait a minute, I brought a halberd with me, after all! I believe I left in the main room, so I might as well get it. Lucius immediately descends down the stairs and reaches the main room. He paces towards the table where he placed his belongings and searches for the halberd, which he was not really eager to use. He finds the halberd underneath his possessions and proceeds to grab it. Lucius returns to the laboratory room with the halberd in his hand. He proceeds to the barrel with the mysterious inscription. With a great smash, Lucius slams the halberd hard into the barrel until it breaks.

Welcome to Reborn! Enjoy your stay here

Lucius inspects the barrel more closely after he throws the herring out the watchtower. Sa..t P.t.r? What's this?, Lucius analyzes carefully the possible combinations to the faded words, Saint Peter? That's the only combination I can make that are made of real words, but it doesn't make sense at all! Is there a Saint Peter anywhere? Lucius tries to open the barrel, so as to check its contents, but he fails miserably at this attempt. He tries again and again, but he still fails. This barrel is pried close. How should I open this?, Lucius analyzes and reaches a conclusion, Might as well smash this with a weapon or something. Coming to a decision, Lucius heads to the weapon room, thinking of getting a strong weapon like an axe.

What do you mean by sharing an IP?

Eviolite makes Porygon 2 more bulky and makes it an overall better pokemon.

You can either use a very fast ground pokemon or you can use a bulky pokemon that resists his moves.

I do believe the sign ups closed a long time and the RP for this has ended a bit recently, so you may want to try other OOCS with more recent posts. Please try not to revive threads with posts from 2 months ago next time :).

I'm applying for Marcus Adams. What do we need to do to be accepted?

To give an update, GMT +1 still has the highest amount and it is followed by GMT-5

Yes. I believe that some of the events that happened in my life would have gone a better path if I had chosen better decisions. Do you worry too much?

And that their shiny would be a custom made one that can only exist for them alone.

If you're referring to Dunsparce, it can either be found in Beryl Cave or under the Grand Staircase. If you're looking for the guy who does the trade, then he can be found in the inside of the Nature Center, in the 2nd floor, I believe

Plop, plop, plop Lucius turns quickly as he hears a sound of a falling object somewhere in the room. As he looks to the direction of the sound, he sees a herring plopping about on a wooden barrel in the far corner of the room. Oh, it's just a herring, Lucius thinks as he turns back to the journal he was reading. Wait, a minute. That's not supposed to be here! Lucius realizes and he quickly turns around again and runs in the direction of the herring. Lucius reaches the wooden barrel with the herring on top, and inspects the herring. He finds that the herring is still alive. The herring is not the 'dangerously waiting for death' alive type but it is the 'actively wanting to escape' alive type. Why is this herring here? From its looks, it appears to have been here recently. But, there are no bodies of water near here, Lucius analyzes, Wait.... is this related to the strange things happening mentioned in that journal? No, I refuse to believe that it's part of it. I am a man of science, not a man of superstition. Keeping a calm head but still afraid of the strange incident, Lucius throws the herring out of the watchtower.

There's Magneton, Xatu, and Excadrill which you could use. Also, this part of the forums is for Reborn actually.

It's allowed, I guess; it's basically your choice on how you want to play the game.

Nope. I do believe he means that the virus is non contagious anymore. So, the pokemon's considered a survivor since it's pokerus is dormant and cannot affect other pokemon anymore.

Is the weather windy? That's part of the requirements, you know.