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  1. Chapter 3: Beginning Journey "Great job, now finish it up with tackle!" Raviel yells to his starter triumphantly. The turtle Pokemon, Squirtle, curls up into its shell and launches itself at its opponent. The spiky rabbit like Nidoran male tumbles to the ground, eyes spinning. On the other side of the field, a feminine boy looking every bit defeated. He stamps his feet, causing the boots to make thumping sounds on the concrete. Soon enough he gets his composure back, flicking back his long violate hair. "My oh my, cute and strong," Cain muses. "Don't get distracted," Victoria shouts a
  2. Chapter 2: Beginning with Tragedy Darkness swallows the magnet train as it passes through a tunnel underground. As it glides like a ghost across the tracks, the lights inside the cards flicker on, returning sight back to its passengers. Some sit lazilly in their seats, talking to friends or reading the newspaper. Raviel leans against a pole meant to be held onto while Ame actually keeps the metal wrapped in her fingers, case for any sudden stops. The young man has a grim look on his face, one that Ame clearly notices. "Do you have regrets?" she asks. "What do you mean?" he questions, tr
  3. Okay, some readers saw me try to write a story based on Pokemon Reborn. Well after writing I did not quite like the quality of the work, as it was definitely not my best work. Though hasty, I have decided to scrap the original and create one with a bit of a darker undertone. Chapter 1: Champion Arise "Delphox, now!" a trainer barks to his companion. The Firefox answers the command of its trainer, fire spewing from the end of its wand. On the receiving end of the Mystic Fire is a colossal Emboar, who charges forward, using Flare Blitz to counter. The giant boar storms through the flames
  4. Chapter 3: A Fern in my Side "Charmander use Ember!" Flames dance from the lizard's tail as it scorches a dog-looking Pokemon. Its black fur stands on end, as it remains standing. The dark-type, Poochyena stands alongside another canine Pokemon, a normal-type known as Lilipup. Two trainers stand side by side commanding their side of the battlefield while Derek stands alone. A new partner stands beside Charmander, one that the former champion rescued from an abandon house. The little gray, cat-like Pokemon stares at its enemies with wide, yet empty eyes. It seems blank, even as the Lill
  5. Chapter 2: Through Fire and Cain Reaching for the Pokeball, he picks up the perfect partner. Tossing it in the air, the ball opens up, bursting with light. It shines onto the floor, taking shape as the Pokemon is released. As the light fades, a small lizard is sitting at his feet. Its orange scales dance in the shadows of the embers on its tail. The little one looks up at its new master with eyes full of hope. An adorable creature in all sense, yet it boasts power. "So you choose Charmander?" Ame asks the champion. "Yeah," Derek answers, glancing down to the little lizard. "You okay
  6. Chapter 1: The Reborn Region Darkness consumes everything. Natural lights of the passenger cars bask in a white glow, as the train is swallowed by the tunnel. The old steam engine powers through, its wheels clacking along the tracks. Smoke fills the little space that the steel does not, the operators forced to wear breathing masks just to work. Meanwhile, the passengers are a muck of businessmen and travelers coming to Reborn for various purposes. Two, on the other hand, come for more specific reasons. Ame and Derek sit toward the front of the train, seemingly discussing the happenings
  7. This is a fun little story I have had in mind of writing today. I am not entirely sure that it belongs here, so do not yell if I'm posting in the wrong spot. Now, ladies and gentlemen, sit down and relax, as I spin a tale of an adventure reborn anew... Also if members would like to be included in the story, please message me with your desired name and Pokemon. I'll try to incorporate everyone. Chapter 0: Champion Reborn "And your name is...Amethyst?" the young man looks at white haired woman curiously. "Ame is fine, Derek," she answers, clearly knowledgeable of him. "Will you listen to
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