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  1. Back when I had Pokemon Crystal, the breeder guy would give you a random Pokemon egg. When it finally hatched out popped a shiny Pichu. Then the game's save file burned out. Rest in pixels my little friend.
  2. Chapter 2: Beginning with Tragedy Darkness swallows the magnet train as it passes through a tunnel underground. As it glides like a ghost across the tracks, the lights inside the cards flicker on, returning sight back to its passengers. Some sit lazilly in their seats, talking to friends or reading the newspaper. Raviel leans against a pole meant to be held onto while Ame actually keeps the metal wrapped in her fingers, case for any sudden stops. The young man has a grim look on his face, one that Ame clearly notices. "Do you have regrets?" she asks. "What do you mean?" he questions, trying to render his face unreadable. Ame sighs, "Your Gengar..." Raviel shrugs, "I raised him from a Gastly, what do you expect me to say?" "I understand," she touches a Pokeball at her belt, "If I had to let go of my first Pokemon, I wouldn't be fine after a day." "It doesn't matter anyways," Ame tries to change the subject, "We have a strict policy about no Pokemon outside the region." "Why's that?" Raviel cocks his brow. "Reborn is unstable as it is," she explains. "It is feared that bringing in foreign Pokemon could cause an environmental collapse." "So this was going to be a fresh start no matter what?" Raviel says, a bit brighter than before. "Well, you are a champion," Ame jokes. "A trainer of your caliber should be fine." "What starter will I get then?" he asks, his curiousity peaked. "You'll just have to wait," Ame says as natural light floods back into the cars. The train slows to a stop as it pulls into the station, and the doors open. What greets them is something unusual. A large mechanical device, covered with wires and a digitial clock built in the center. The timer is counting down, leaving only ten seconds left. Ame is the first one to realize what it is, grabbing Raviel to and throwing themselves out the window away from the bomb. The deafening explosion rips the train apart, turning many innocent lives to ashes. Shrapnel tears through the rest creating a sea of corpses in what is left of the cars. Sirens blair out in the distance as the police rush to the scene. The chorus of painful moans nearly drowns out the cries for help and crackling fires. Raviel opens his eyes, groaning from the jarring slam against the stone ground. Looking up, he finds Ame on top of him. She's not moving. "Shit!" he grunts as he pushes her off of him. Ignoring the throbbing in his side he gets on his hands and knees, and presses his ear to her chest, listening carefully. Her heartbeat is lacking, a subtle thump. No one could hope to live with it. Fearing the worst, he begins applying chest compressions to the best of his abilities. After a minute of the rythmic pressing, he checks agian. There is no pounding. He tries again. "Hey, hey," a voice calls out, "What are you doing?" Glancing over his shoulder through the sweeping smoke and dying flames is a girl with hair of green. A bright yellow shirt and orange skirt has her standing out like a cheerleader. Of course, the pom-poms in her hands do suggest the same. "Hey," Raviel says, ignoring the loudest of the out outfit , "Are you a trainer?" "Pfft," she laughs, "I'm the Electric Gym Leader!" His eyes flash with hope, "Quick, give me one!" She looks confused, "Huh?" "I said give me one!" he shouts loudly. The electric girl jumps at the dark look on his face. She fumbles at her belt for a Pokeball, but manages to get one free. Tossing it to him, he catches it with one hand. Without so much as asking what it is he opens the ball. In a bright flash of light a Helioptile appears next to him. The little lizard is shocked when a trainer that is not the girl stands over him with such a wicked expression across his face. Out of fear, it lets out a strong Thunder Shock. "That's it," he grits his teeth as the electricity runs through every muscle. He grabs Ame's chest channeling the Thunder Shock through him, and into her. Her motionless body suddenly convulses, and her eyes open. It takes Ame a moment to realize where she is when she finds Raviel kneeling over her. At first she is relieved, but soon her eyes follow his arm down to wear he has his hand touching her chest. Her soft silk white skin turns a deep red as she screams. Before Raviel can comprehend what is happening, a hand comes across his face. Whap! "Ow," he shouts, the hand print throbs against his cheek "What the hell was that for?" "What were you doing?" Ame sits upright, blushing like a bride now that she realizes the green-haired girl is there, "And Julia, what did you do?" "I was saving your life!" Raviel shouts. "I didn't do anything!" Julia objects. "I would never boom the station." Ame sighs, rubbing her temple, "Yeah I know..." she then looks to Raviel. "And...thank you for saving my life." "You're welcome," he cannot help but smile a bit. "Well I have to deal with this," Ame groans, looking at the destroyed train station. "I will meet you later to give you your Pokemon. Head to the tower down the road, you can see it from here." Raviel helps Amethyst to her feet, watching her walk off toward the police officers. They crowd around her, and he is shocked to see how well she transitions. The girl with the white hair takes charge as if it were second nature. He is lost in awe for a moment, until Julia waves her pom-poms in his face. "Pop Quiz!" she shouts, nearly making him jump. "Are you going to take the Reborn League Challenge?" "I guess that's why-" "Hurray!" Julia barks, throwing her hands in the air and waiving them around. "That means I will get to battle you soon! Can't wait! See you then!" Raviel leaves with a smirk, "Well this is certainly a fun way to restart my life." Along the way, he notices the refugees that managed to escape the train. They all appear to be leaving the station behind and heading for the tower off in the distance. It soon looms over him like a titan, its shadow casts itself over the destruction he left behind. "Well, I believe this is where I need to be," he says to himself. He begins his climb up the steps. Halfway up the stairs he finds a young woman that appears to be waiting for him. She is elegant looking with hair as dark has his and eyes sharper. A gray kimono wraps around her figure. He stops, his breath taken away. "Are you Raviel?" she asks. "Yes," he answers, "And you are?" "Victoria," the girl answers with a sweet smile. "Ame asked me to help you. I'm starting on a new journey too." Raviel nods, following her up the steps. Once they pass through the double doors, he is thrown by the shear size of the tower's interior. People of all sorts are working. In one area stands a Pokemon Center, treating humans and Pokemon alike from the blast. Across the way is a Pokemart, handing out free potions. And down the hall appears to be a labratory area. Standing there is Ame. "Back already?" he asks her. "We caught the culprit right away," she says. "He's downstairs in interrogation." "So does that mean we get our Pokemon?" he asks, trying to hide his excitement. Ame looks at him oddly, "We?" He looks over to Victoria, who explains, "Kiki asked that I journey through the Reborn League as a part of my training. She requests that I start over." "Well, I normally reserve the starters for new arrivals," Ame says, "But I think I'll make an exception, for Kiki. If it is okay with you, though, I'll have Raviel go first." "That's fine with me," Victoria answers. "Good luck, Raviel." Ame motions for him to follow. They climb a flight of stairs together, neither speaking a word. With every step, Raviel's heart seems to beat faster, as the anticipation starts to get to him. At the top of the steps, the sight makes him dizzy. Three tables of red, blue and gree sit perfectly in the room. Six different Pokeballs sit precariously on each one. "These are the starter Pokemon that get handed out to new trainers from every region," Ame explains. "The colors represent the type: Fire, Water, and then Grass." She looks over to Raviel, who remains speechless. "Is something the matter?" she asks. "A bit overwhelming," he confesses. "Going from a three to eighteen is something." "Please take your time then," Ame reassures him, placing a hand upon his shoulder. He slips out of her touch as he storms toward the fire table, grabbing Pokeball. "No need," he says, his eyes set ablaze. "I am choosing this one. It is the same Pokemon my hero started with years ago. A pokemon that I have wanted for years." Picking the ball off the table he gives it a throw, grinning from ear to ear. "I choose you..."
  3. I thought so but just wanted to double check.
  4. So for training and whatnot, what size is Pumkaboo and Gourgeist. I know they are all the same size. What stats did Ame go with if anyone knows?
  5. Best thing to do is have a magneton with sturdy and Thunderwave. He'll hit you and you paralyze him. Then keep using Thunderwave as he will use Full Heals. Eventually, he will run out which will give you the opportunity to hit him hard with attacks. Or you can use Gengar/Mismagius and OH-KO with Destiny Bond/Perish Song.
  6. Well it is this time of year where we all dress up and go trick-or-treating. Or if you are my age you dress up, go out partying, and wake up with the feeling of an anvil smashing into your skull. And sometines as someone my age, it is hard to come up with a costume. A friend of mine for example is having a difficult time thinking of a last minute costume to a party happening in a few days. So in a curious notion, and as a place to help him, what is everone dressing up as? My fiance and I are dressing as Cosmo and Wanda
  7. We all know that Pokemon have unique type combinations. Some of them are really cool, while others are horrid. Yet type combinations act as a unique tool to allow for fun battles and a variety of strategies. However, not all possible combinations are avialable in the Pokemon World, or are exclusive to a legendary. Now I wonder what type combinations you would like to see in future generations or pokemon having rare type combinations. Personally, I have wanted to see: Dragon/Steel (Dialga is the only one...I want a regular one you can get in the game) Poison/Steel (Beautiful combination, though a x4 weakness to ground.) Ghost/Fighting Dragon/Bug (Dragonfly, come on Nintendo)
  8. Okay, some readers saw me try to write a story based on Pokemon Reborn. Well after writing I did not quite like the quality of the work, as it was definitely not my best work. Though hasty, I have decided to scrap the original and create one with a bit of a darker undertone. Chapter 1: Champion Arise "Delphox, now!" a trainer barks to his companion. The Firefox answers the command of its trainer, fire spewing from the end of its wand. On the receiving end of the Mystic Fire is a colossal Emboar, who charges forward, using Flare Blitz to counter. The giant boar storms through the flames and crashes right into the magical fox. Delphox flails, unable to endure the tremendous strength of the Fire and Fighting Type Pokemon. It falls flat on its back, twitching a few times before it stops moving. Behind the owner of the fallen Fire and Psychic Type, a horn blares loudly. The siren sound signals that his Pokemon is no longer able to battle. Clenching his fist, clearly frustrated, he reaches for the Pokeball at his belt. The small round orb enlarges, allowing him to shoot a bam of red light at the unconscious Delphox. The fox's body turns into that same red light, as it is retracted into the ball. He says nothing else, but hears the sound of the crowd around him. It is all boos, followed by japes and a mixture of unfriendly curses aimed toward him. He ignores the group of angry spectators in the stadium. His eyes turn up to the large screen, seeing the blown up image of himself and the other trainer. The opponent, Derek, has all six of his Pokemon active in the battle, save for the fact that five of them are in the red after the bouts with his team. He, on the other hand, has been reduced to his last partner. Above his picture is his name, Raviel. "Oh, it looks like Raviel is down to his last Pokemon," an announcer shouts through the sound systems. "Meanwhile, Derek still has his entire team. Will Raviel's last Pokemon be able to make an amazing sweep and win him the title of Kalos League Champion?" "No way, he sucks," someone from the crowd jeers, answered soon after by laughter. With his last Pokemon in hand, he ignores all the taunts and booing that surrounds him. Unlike the normal red and white balls that most trainers carry, this one is a bit different. Strange circles of green surround a black surface, known only as a Dusk Ball. A ball that is best to capture those in caves and at night. With a subtle grin, he hurls the ball out... And in a flash of light comes his final Pokemon. The evil-looking Shadow Pokemon apppears with a wide grin, eyes glowing red as it looks unto the Emboar that towers over it. "It looks like Raviel's last Pokemon is Gengar!" the announcer shouts, "No doubt a trump card that he has used throughout the tournament, but will it be enough to win him the title of Champion?" The crowd again answers with boos, clearly hating the trainer and his partner. Again, he pays them no mind. He only nods, and Gengar attacks. The ghastly Pokemon seems to be perfectly in sync with its trainer as it floats through the air. Emboar reacts to its trainer's startled command, aiming to crush the ghostly doppelganger with a Hammer Arm. Yet when the boar's fist comes crashing down, it fazes right through Gengar. "Gengar," Raviel says, "Its time..." The hated trainer lifts his arm up in the air, showcasing a most unusual bracelet clinging to his arm. Suddenly, it begins to glow. On the field, Gengar opens its mouth, letting its long tongue to come slither out. Kept in the creature's mouth is a mysterious stone that matches the one around Raviel's wrist. It too begins to glow. "Oh no," Derek shouts, realizing what is about to happen, "Emboar stop him! Use Flare Blitz." Yet it is too late, as Gengar transforms on the field. The bright light has brought the crowd to a hush, all watching the metamorphosis. Gengar appears to sink into the ground while spiked frills seem to burst about its body. Lastly a golden third eye opens up on its forehead. "Unbelievable," the announcer breaks the silence. "Raviel managed to keep this trump card hidde throughout the entire leage battles. Mega Gengar!!!" "Gengar," Raviel says coldly. "Geng?" his Pokemon cocks its head, waiting for its master's orders. "Wipe him out," is his trainer's answer. "Gengar!" ... "Oof," Raviel grunts as a fist is thrown into his stomach. He falls to his knees, overcome by the pain as a boot lands against his cheek. The league champion lays sprawled out onto the floor, his lip split. He does not move, as the barrage of kicks comes from two additional men. All that he can do is curl up and endure the pain. "Hey!" a young woman's voice barks to the trio, "What the hell are you doing?" The three see the woman to be a white haired beauty with icy blue eyes that seem to burn into their souls. A gaze alone fills them with dread, causing them to leave Raviel be, bolting down the alley from which they came. Feeling the bombardment over, Raviel gets to his knees, coughing up blots of blood. When the throbbing in his gut subsides, he looks up to his rescuer and sees the girl as well. "What are you doing?" the girl asks, offering a hand. "Getting my ass kicked," he answers. "I saw, but why?" she insists, reaching into a pack to find a cloth to wipe the blood off his face. "Did you catch my battle?" Raviel says, dabbing away the blood from his split lip. "You were good," she states. "I'm not well liked," he answers, handing her back the crimson-stained rag. "A few of my fans were thanking me for making them lose all the money they bet against me." The girl nods, "I noticed. I don't understand why." "I'd rather not get into it," he says, dusting himself off, "I don't need another enemy." He pauses a moment before realizing something, "Wait, who are you anyways?" "My name is Ame," the snow-haired woman answers. "I come from a distant region called Reborn." "I'll pass," Raviel denies her. Ame jumps at him before he wonders off, "But your such a strong trainer. The way you and your Gengar battled was mesmerizing." "I really don't want to go to a whole new place to be hated," Raviel sighs, walking past her. "It's a new start!" she shouts. He stops, "What do you mean?" "Reborn is a place of renewal," Ame answers. "You will not be the first person there with a dark past. No one will know who you were, just who you are." Such words are almost too much for Raviel to bear, as if he is about to burst into tears. He wipes his eyes on his sleeve to not show her any weakness. "I would give anything to get that chance," he looks at her. "Alright, I'll help you, to have a new start." At his belt he grabs the Dusk Ball, and tosses it in front of Ame. She watches as his faithful Gengar emerges, grinning like he always does. Yet when he turns to his master, the Shadow Pokemon finds a most disturbing sight. Raviel has the Pokeball that houses his powerhouse, and is in the process of pulling it apart. Gengar frowns as he watches the Dusk Ball that he had been captured since he was a Ghastly be ripped in half. "What are you doing?" Ame gasps. "I am starting over, that means my Pokemon too," he says. "The rest of my team will do fine with other trainers..." "Gengar?" his Pokemon looks sad. "You and I have been together too long for you to listen to another trainer," he looks at his faithful friend. "So I'm setting you free." Gengar looks confused, "Geng-" "No," Raviel shouts at the Shadow Pokemon. "You're not going with me. Get out of here!" Gengar frowns for a moment or two, but the frown flips to its usual smile. It looks to Ame, and then to its former master before it dives into the floor, disappearing among the shadows." "Are you sure about that?" Ame asks. "Yeah," Raviel answers, tossing the pieces of the Dusk Ball to the ground. "Let's go."
  9. So I am playing Reborn now and I have a Raichu. It is a great power house, fast too...but one day I'm under the grand staircase and run across a Diglett with Arena Trap. That is when I realized I had nothing but Electric-Type Moves. So are there any moves that would go good with a Raichu? Right now, he has: Thunderbolt Nuzzle Electroball Nasty Plot
  10. "I am become death, destroyer of worlds." -J. Robert Oppenheimer (Creator of the Atomic Bomb) "The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is that good men do nothing." -Edmund Burke "The web of deception I have woven with my performances are about to ensnare this world." -Gentleman Phantom
  11. Steelix: Big Bertha Crustle: Mr. Krabs Seviper: Black Momba (Don't know if that fits nor not) Cacturne: Pokey Swagpert: Poseidon Altaria: Puff Dragon Tauros: Minno (Like Minotaur) Tyrantum: Reptar I am one of those people who never nickname my Pokemon so here: Charizard (M) Raichu (M) Florges (F) Mismagius (F)
  12. Well, there were a few I completely forgot about, Seaking and Swampert.
  13. Whenever I play through Pokemon, having a Water-type on the team always seems to be a must. And Reborn is no exception, but it seems that the pickings are a bit slim on them, at least early on in the game. So I beseech you, and of course this is obviously opinionated, which is the best Water-type to tackle the region. Personally I like the fact that Kingdra was added, though I'm debating on using a Sharpedo.
  14. Chapter 3: A Fern in my Side "Charmander use Ember!" Flames dance from the lizard's tail as it scorches a dog-looking Pokemon. Its black fur stands on end, as it remains standing. The dark-type, Poochyena stands alongside another canine Pokemon, a normal-type known as Lilipup. Two trainers stand side by side commanding their side of the battlefield while Derek stands alone. A new partner stands beside Charmander, one that the former champion rescued from an abandon house. The little gray, cat-like Pokemon stares at its enemies with wide, yet empty eyes. It seems blank, even as the Lillipup comes at it, ready to tackle the odd Pokemon. "Espurr," Derek alerts his team, "Hit it with Confusion. Charmander, follow up with Scratch." And the duo gets to work. The furry-faced dog is suddenly blasted backwards by a psychic force contributed by Espurr. When it hits the stone wall, Charmander rushes it, claws tearing into it. It falls over, swirls in its eyes tell it cannot fight anymore. "Poochyena, use tackle on that Charmander!" he shouts, as his gray-furred Pokemon gets up and charges. It gets in close, ready to hit the lizard, when the Charmander slaps the Pokemon across the face with its flaming tail. Poochyena does not see it coming, and collapses. "Alright, nice job guys," Derek smiles, returning both Pokemon to their Pokeballs. The happiness he shares quickly fades, as he turns his attention to the two young men, and the blue monkey they have cornered. "What is wrong with you two, trying to harm a Pokemon like that?" "Hey man," the one says, stepping away from the champion. "We were just foolin' around, that's all. Its a Pokemon anyways, it can swim." Derek looks ever more cross with both of them on his approach. Grabbing the one by the collar of his shirt, he throws him over the side, shouting, "Let's see if you can swim!" He turns to the other, but he has taken off already down the road. All that remains is the shivering water-type, Panpour. Derek steps closer, and kneels, "Hey, hey, hey, you're okay now..." The monkey peers up, the spout-shape fur on its head bounces as it sways. Seeing that Derek is not a threat, it runs to him, throwing itself around him, crying as if to thank him for saving his Poke-Life. The little Panpour lets go, and suddenly scurries off, not giving Derek the chance to capture him. "Hopefully he'll be okay," Derek says to himself, looking at the Pokeballs that hold his Charmander and Espurr. "Let me heal you two up and we'll get going." After a trip to the Pokemon Center, he finds himself in another part of the city, North Obsidia Ward, if he can read the map on his Pokegear correctly. He sees the desolation that has been inflicted upon Reborn. Decay runs rampant, no doubt from the earthquake that ravaged the city, according to Victoria anyways. He passes a few trainers he had already beaten, none of course wish to fight him again. "I think I've been up my team a bit," he thinks to himself, "Maybe I'll go find that Julia girl, and challenge her to a badge." While he thinks, he spots a rather unusual kid staring up at an abandon plant, muttering to himself. He adjusts the glasses on his face to get a look at the facility. "Is this the place, or was it the other," the young guy thinks to himself. "Ah, I wish Julia would have been more specific." Suddenly, he turns, realizing Derek has been watching him. "And what do you want?" "Nothing," Derek quickly answers, already familiar with the unfriendly people of the city. "Yeah right, punk," the guy says. "You don't look to be around here. I'm Fern, a real cool cat and number one at the Onix Trainer School." Not planning to be outclassed, Derek flaunts his own title, "I'm Derek, Champion of the Kanto Region. Except it does not work out the way he'd hoped. "Kanto? Ha, I heard that place is full of hicks who can't battle out of a paper bag. I guess if you're the champion, you are maybe decent. Nowhere near as good as me." "Care to wager that?" Derek grits his teeth, clearly a nerve has been struck. "Yeah man, I'll humor you," Fern says, tossing out a Pokeball with finest. Out pops an unusual looking Pokemon. A blue creature moves on all fours while an enormous lily-pad sits atop its head. "I'll make quick work of your Lotad," Derek smirks. "Let's show them what you got, Krikitune!" He tosses out a third Pokeball he has kept away. Given to him by a young girl with violet hair, this bug type became quite the powerful ally upon its evolving. The cricket like creature comes out, its arms looking like a pair of dual blades. Fern laughs at the sight of it, "Wow, you're a champion? Only noobs use Pokemon like that." "We'll see about that," Derek grins. "Alright Krikitune, Fury Cutter!" Krikitune moves quickly, faster than either his Espurr or Charmander. Its blade like arms glow green as it closes in on Lotad, and strikes. The poor odd Pokemon does not stand a chance, being wiped out in a single blow. Fern looks in dismay for a second, but then calls back his defeated Pokemon. He then tosses out another grass-type, a slender looking snake. "Snivy," he shouts, "Use leech seed." His creature obeys, shooting out seeds that strike Krikitune before it can get away. Vines sprout from the seeds, covering the insect-type with an armor of sprouts. Yet it is nothing good for Derek's Pokemon, the vampire-like plant begins to suck away the energy, feeding it to Snivy. Even injured, Krikitune takes its orders, as Derek calls out for another "Fury Cutter". Moving a bit slower, it strikes Snivy, knocking him out in one fell swoop. Fern looks just as dumbstruck as the first time his team member fainted. "Go, Budew!" he shouts, throwing out his last Pokemon. A small creature with a closed flower on top of its head comes out. Well aware of what this Pokemon is capable of, Derek withdraws his Krikitune, and calls forth his Charmander. "A fire-type, talk about cheap, man," Fern taunts. "Then don't have a team made up of grass-types," Derek answers right back. "That's basics of battling." "Shut up!" Fern becomes angry, "Budew, use Stun Spore!" "Charmander, Smokescreen," Derek answers right back. Before Budew can spray the area with neurotoxic pollen, Charmander covers the field in a thick, smoky mist. The little grass-type looks for its enemy, but cannot find it in the shroud. Charmander attacks from behind, before the poor Budew can even fight back. Its flames scorch the little flower, knocking it out. The mist clears, leaving Fern agitated and Derek victorious. "Whatever man," Fern grits his teeth. "I got places to be anyways." The young man takes his Pokemon away with him, purposefully shoving his shoulder into Derek, nearly knocking him over. Left alone again, Derek seems irritated by the meaning, muttering, "Jerk" under his breath. He decides it would be good to heal up before tackling the gym leader. He walks back to the Pokemon Center. Half an hour later, he finds himself outside the Neo-Circuit Power Plant, otherwise known as Julia's Gym. Going up to the door, he is shocked when it opens up on the other side. None other than Julia meets him, and she looks at him like a savior. "Derek!" she shouts at him, despite him being a foot away. "Thank god you're here. That guy Ame caught wasn't alone. It's a group that likes to blow up stuff. Not that I blame them for booming stuff, it's fun, BUT NOT IN THIS CASE! They want to blow up my gym!"
  15. When I was a lad, I played through my Blue version. In the Safari Zone I came across a little snake named Dratini, the first Dragon-type I have ever met. It was mediocre, nothing to scream at, but I kept using the little guy. Then he evolved into Dragonair, and yet still nothing to sneeze at. I kept leveling him up, not knowing the potential hidden. And then it happened. My Dragonite evolved and sealed it within my heart through the generations. Like its name, my faithful warrior, my knight, will always be my signature Pokemon.
  16. Chapter 2: Through Fire and Cain Reaching for the Pokeball, he picks up the perfect partner. Tossing it in the air, the ball opens up, bursting with light. It shines onto the floor, taking shape as the Pokemon is released. As the light fades, a small lizard is sitting at his feet. Its orange scales dance in the shadows of the embers on its tail. The little one looks up at its new master with eyes full of hope. An adorable creature in all sense, yet it boasts power. "So you choose Charmander?" Ame asks the champion. "Yeah," Derek answers, glancing down to the little lizard. "You okay with that, little guy?" "Charmander, Char" the starter says, smiling as best as it can. Ame smiles, watching Derek return his new-found friend to its Pokeball. "Would you like to give him a nickname?" "Nah," Derek shakes his head. "Never was creative in that..." "Very well," Ame reaches for something in her pocket. "I'm sure you know the drill. Pokedex and such." She hands him a red device that is all too familiar. Along with it are five Pokeballs, ready for him to catch a full team. He takes them, and opens up the Pokedex. As expected, the pages are completely blank. Although it is not his job to fill it up in this place, it will be good to keep it handy. Next, the balls are placed at his belt, ready to snatch up any Pokemon he wants. A few minor gear tags along with the bulk of his new setup. With everything situated, he returns to the main room, where Victoria is waiting patiently. "So what Pokemon did you pick?" she asks enthusiastically. "Yeah right, like I'd tell you," Derek sneers. "Pardon?" she looks quite confused. "You are going to pick a Pokemon that has type advantage over mine," he accuses. "I've dealt with enough 'rivals' in my journey." She laughs, "Don't worry, I'm not going to do anything stupid like that. I already know what I want." Derek blushes, feeling foolish for his behavior. He steps out of the way, allowing her to meet with Ame to get her own Pokemon. Not long in the lobby he eyes a rather attractive girl. Everything about her is violate, from her hair to her attire. She is intoxicating, so much that he blushes upon her approach. She notices his gawking, and giggles, making his heart leap up in his chest. Getting closer she gives him a musing look with grey eyes. "Hey you're cute," she giggles. "Thanks, you're pretty..." his voice trails when he hears her voice. "Holy crap your a guy!" "Me oh my you are sharp," he giggles again, sounding just as feminine as before. "What's your name, cutey?" "Uh, it's Derek," he says, feeling awkward with every passing second. "You?" "My name is Cain," he says, stepping closer, even the way he moves his hips would suggest he is a girl. "I came here to get a Pokedex from Ame. I'm starting over on my journey through life." he eyes the Pokeballs. "Are you a new trainer too?" "Yeah," Derek says, grabbing the ball that contains Charmander. "Hm-hm-hm," he muses, "Then I challenge you to a battle!" Pretty boy Cain takes the Pokeball at his belt, and tosses it out inside the center. A bright flash of light reveals a Pokemon as violet as the boy's attire. Spiky rabbit-like ears stick out on its head, while a prominent horn jets from its forehead. The creature gives a little battle cry, hissing through its over sized front teeth. Seeing the opponent's Pokemon, Derek tosses out Charmander, his lizard comrade appears, swaying the embers of his tail into the air. Cain is at the ready, prepared to deal with the fearsome fire-type. "Charmander," Derek gives the first command, "Let's use Flamethrower." Charmander roars, rears back his head, and...nothing. He looks to his master for some answers, looking like he is not sure what to do. Derek is dumbfounded, making such a rookie mistake. "You don't know that move, do you?" he asks his Pokemon. Charmander shakes his head, looking away from the opponent. Before he can turn back, Cain's Nidoran tackles the lizard, sending him flying into the wall. While the little violet does not appear all that daunting, it packs a punch. Charmander falls, unable to battle. "Wow," Derek calls back his Pokemon, the sting of defeat has yet to work its way in him. "Your Nidran is really strong." "Thanks," Cain calls his Nidoran back to the Pokeball. "Come walk with me, we'll get healed up." A convenient Pokemon Center is just around the corner, and the nurse heals up their partners. While they wait, they are joined by Victoria and Ame. "There you are Derek," Victoria answers, holding a shiny new Pokeball in her hand. "We were looking for you." "Oh, I took him," Cain steps in. "Me and Derek had some fun." he grabs Derek's arm and gives him a week." Victoria and Derek blush simultaneously. She even gasps, "Derek...I didn't know you were like that." "He meant a battle," Derek says, puling himself out of Cain's grip. "Anyway, Cain I think you have to go talk to Ame about something..." "Oh right," Ame says, "You wanted to start over too. Come with me then." "Yes master," Cain giggles. "Master?" Ame turns back. "Noooothing," he muses. Ame looks at him as if he has a second head, but then walks off. Her 'servant' follows, almost skipping as he stays close to her rear. They leave Victoria and Derek alone. Neither says a word, as they know what's going to happen. He takes his newly healed Charmander, and she takes out her brand new partner. Both toss out their Pokemon. "Let's go!"
  17. I think Mega Bisharp would be cool. Maybe make him look more kingly like the chess piece. More blades! Torkoal should get a mega too. Make it a Fire/Steel type with a boost in SpDef and SpATK. A fire version of blastoise
  18. Chapter 1: The Reborn Region Darkness consumes everything. Natural lights of the passenger cars bask in a white glow, as the train is swallowed by the tunnel. The old steam engine powers through, its wheels clacking along the tracks. Smoke fills the little space that the steel does not, the operators forced to wear breathing masks just to work. Meanwhile, the passengers are a muck of businessmen and travelers coming to Reborn for various purposes. Two, on the other hand, come for more specific reasons. Ame and Derek sit toward the front of the train, seemingly discussing the happenings of the region. The champion sits with his arms folded, listening carefully, but showing clear signs of being cross. "I still don't understand," he growls. "Why can't I bring any of my Pokemon with me?" "Because," Ame sighs, "The region is already unstable. We fear bringing in those from other regions could cause a collapse to our environment." "You call on a champion, but do not allow him to bring him the team that made him one," Derek grumbles. "So what am I suppose to do then?" "Start over," Ame smiles. "I'm sure a trainer of your caliber could do something simple like that." "Will you be providing me a starter then?" Derek asks. "Indeed," she nods. "Once we get to the station, I will take you to the restoration headquarters." Derek seems to smile at the thought, "As much as it is disappointing not to travel with Dragonite, it will be nostalgic to start anew. I guess I can live with it...for now." The remaining ride is brief. A shrill cry of the train whistle sees to silence whatever conversation they had left. Steam slithers across the approaching station platform, as the engine comes to a halt. The doors open, and they are greeted by a large mechanical device. It is covered in wires, with a large clock at its center. Red numbers count down to zero, only seven seconds remaining. Ame is the first to realize the threat, wrapping herself around Derek and throwing them through the sealed doors opposite of the bomb. "Get down," she screams. KABOOM An explosion destroys the station, the train, and many innocent lives. Fire sweeps through like a vicious serpent, devouring those who are spared the shrapnel. Smoke billows from the station, while the screams of dying fill the air. Survivors manage to escape, but many are horribly injured. Ame remains still, Derek pinned underneath her. "Ame," he groans, "You okay?" She does not answer him. Their faces mere inches apart, he does not feel her breath on his. Eyes are closed, as if she is asleep, but he fears the worst. He grabs the back of her head, pulling their lips together to fill her lungs. But as their lips touch, her eyes open wide. Red flushes across her face, and then she thanks his concern with a slap across the face. Derek yelps, markings of her hand sting his cheek. "What the heck was that for?" Ame says, blushing like a bride. He rubs his face as he looks up at her, "I thought you stopped breathing..." "So you kissed me?" she seems angrier. "No," Derek defends his actions, "It was C-" "Hey, hey," a voice calls out to them. Looking over, through the pouring rain and sweeping smoke of the dying fires comes a girl with hair of emerald green. A yellow shirt and skirt makes her stand out among the others, while the pom-poms in her hands make her a bit of an oddity. Ame realizes that she is still straddling Derek and gets to her feet. "Julia..." she speaks coldly to the girl, "What did you do?" "That wasn't me!" the girl gasps at the accusation. "I would never boom the train station. You know that Ame." "Yeah," she answers, rubbing her temple. She then turns to Derek, "Look, I have to go deal with this matter. Meet me at the restoration tower, I'll give you your Pokemon there." Before Derek can even get to his feet, Amethyst is off and walking, police officers swarming around her. He is left with the cheer-leading-looking girl who looks at him with bright eyes. "Can I help yo-" "Pop Quiz!" she shouts, making his heart jump to his throat. "Are you going to challenge the Reborn League?" "I guess..." Derek answers, "But-" "Hurray!" Julia shouts, throwing her pom-poms in the air, waving them like she does not care. "That means you will be battling me first. Can't wait! See you then!" Julia jumps up and down as she scurries off, leaving Derek in a state of confusion. "What have I gotten myself into?" he wonders, but smiles nevertheless. Left alone, Derek goes to the only place he knows, the large tower off in the distance. He leaves the destroyed station behind. A short walk through concerned citizens and mourning family members, he finds himself at the steps of the tower. There seems to be another girl waiting for him. Quite opposite of the energetic Julia, she appears to be calm and clearheaded. A battle kimono drapes across her form, while her black hair is matted from the downpour. "You must be Derek," she answers. "And you are?" he asks. "Victoria," the girl answers calmly. "Ame asked me to help you get your first Pokemon. I'm starting my journey too." The young girl leads the Kanto Champion inside. All sorts of people are insider, whether they are victims of the bombing, Derek cannot say. Yet at the other end of the tower, he spots a familiar face. Ame is already here. "You're back already?" he asks. "The culprit was quickly caught fleeing the scene." she answers. "We are interrogating him downstairs." "Oh wow," Victoria chimes in, "So does that mean you can get us our Pokemon?" "Us?" Ame looks curiously. "Kiki asked that I journey around Reborn as part of my training," she explains, "She says it would be best if I started over too." Ame thinks, "Well I normally reserve it for new arrivals, but I'll make an exception for Kiki. If it is okay with you, I'll have Derek go first." Victoria nods, and she motions for him to follow. Up a flight of stairs, takes them to a room with three sets of tables. Derek looks wide-eyed as he spots a large assortment of Pokeballs lying on the tables. "We have collected starters from every region," Ame explains. "The first table is grass, then fire, and finally water." Derek does not answer, causing her to ask, "Is something the matter?" "I'm just not used to picking from eighteen," he chuckles. "Three is what I'm used to, its a bit overwhelming." "Please, take your time," Ame says, putting a hand on his shoulder. He shakes his head, "No, I think I'm good. I choose..."
  19. Like I said before, these Pokemon are in my game. After hatching so many eggs, I just went with those natures. But I do appreciate the feedback and probably change up some of their moves for Pokemon online.
  20. This is a fun little story I have had in mind of writing today. I am not entirely sure that it belongs here, so do not yell if I'm posting in the wrong spot. Now, ladies and gentlemen, sit down and relax, as I spin a tale of an adventure reborn anew... Also if members would like to be included in the story, please message me with your desired name and Pokemon. I'll try to incorporate everyone. Chapter 0: Champion Reborn "And your name is...Amethyst?" the young man looks at white haired woman curiously. "Ame is fine, Derek," she answers, clearly knowledgeable of him. "Will you listen to a request?" Derek nods, finding a seat on a rock as he listens to the girl's tale. She recants of a region far off in a dire need of powerful trainers. Though he appears to listen, he is rather uninterested. His eyes shift to the trees, watching a Darmanitan swing from branch to branch as it playfully chases after a Pichu. A Salamence careening across the sky catches his gaze, carrying a few Bagons on its back. He smiles to himself. Ame notices his lack of focus, clearing her throat to catch his attention. "Did you catch any of that?" she asks, suppressing her irritancy. "Yeah, yeah," he answers, "Reborn Region in danger, blah-blah. You need the other region champions to come help. Why don't you ask them?" "I did," she answers, disappointment lingering in her voice. "All of them were dealing with problems in their own region. Even your brother refused to help." "Lance?" Derek looks at her with astonishment, "That's not like him..." "Well, he did," she looks crossed, "You're the only champion that seems to be doing nothing." "Kanto is a bit boring," he says, leaning back on the rock formation, "I'm the only champion that can travel." "Then travel to Reborn!" Ame demands. He lets out a yawn, "I think I'll perform my champion duties instead. Just stay in my den and wait for challengers." Ame looks around and takes in the place he calls his den. It is an enormous cavern that houses several acres of land. A forest surrounds them while a mountain sits off in the distance. She even had to cross a few lakes just to get to him at the base of the mountain. And every single Pokémon belongs to the Champion of Kanto. The woman with the white hair is not ready to give up, as an idea comes to mind, "Then I challenge you!" "Oh?" he sits upright. "But if I win, you come to the Reborn Region!" she shouts at him. "Alright," he agrees. "We will have a one-on-one match to decide it then. Fair enough?" She nods. Derek takes his fingers in his mouth, and lets out a shrill whistle. A second later, a shadow looms over Amethyst, crashing in front of her with so much force it craters the ground. Dust kicks up, as the ferocious form of a Dragonite has appeared. Despite how menacing his Pokemon looks, she shows no sight of fright, throwing out a Pokeball of her own. In a flash of light, an Absol appears. The disaster Pokemon meets its opponent with a vicious howl. "Absol, Swords Dance!" Ame commands. Her faithful companion becomes enveloped with blades, his attack power skyrockets. "Not bad," Derek smirks, "Dragonite, Dragon Dance." His beast boosts his own stats, raising speed and attack. "Now, fly!" The dragon soars to the skies, clear out of range of Absol. Higher and higher it climbs, until it is only a speck. And then, a light rockets down at Absol in the form of a Hyper Beam. Ame bellows a command, as it dodges at the last second. The ground around them is shredded, but Drake keeps his composure. In the wreckage, Absol emerges, having escaped the brunt of the attack. "Now, Absol," Ame gives her commands, reaching for the necklace draping around her elegant neck, "Mega Evolve!" Again Absol is enveloped in light, as it body changes. Its fur lengthens, appearing to gain wings. The horn along its head thickens, curving like a crescent moon. The light breaks off it, as Mega Absol takes the battlefield. "What the heck is that?" Derek gasps. "I guess you haven't been to Kalos," she says with a smile. "Its called Mega-Evolution. Now, Mega Absol, Night Slash." Its horn becomes enveloped in a dark shroud, as it thrusts it like a sword. Darkness shreds from it, the black shockwave shreds through the air, and strikes Derek's Dragonite. His faithful beast plummets, taking a critical hit from the attack. "Dragonite!" he cries out to his partner, "Don't give up, use Dragon Claw!" "Don't let it," Ame orders, "Finish it with Night Slash!" Hearing his master's command snaps Dragonite from the freefall. It fans its wings just before it hits the ground. An aura surrounds its claws, its arms glowing with a blue hue. Dragonite roars as it meets Mega Absol's shadowed horn. Their attacks meet, erupting in an explosion. Both Pokémon are consumed in the blast, covered in a light that blinds both trainers. The light fades and the dust clears, and both Pokémon appear among the uprooted stones and fallen trees. Absol has fallen, losing its mega-form. It does not appear it can continue. Dragonite leans against a pile of stones, yet it remains standing. With a sliver of its health, and high level, it has emerged victorious. "Looks like I win," Derek says, reaching for a Pokeball at his hip, "Dragonite, time to rest, buddy." A red light hits his dragon, and he is sucked into the Pokeball. Ame does the same for her Absol, placing a kiss on the ball when her Pokémon returns. She hides her disappointment, thanking her partner with a soft prayer. Having no more champions to call on, she turns to leave... "Hey wait," Derek calls out for her, causing her to turn. "Ame, tell me, are there other trainers like you?" "Yes," she answers, hope found in her words, "Some even stronger." A smile reaches his face, "Well then...it looks like you got yourself a champion. Count me in!"
  21. This team I actually used in my X adventures, and often play battle people when I'm online. Some of the items are fake, and need to find in the games. Delphox (M) EV: SpATK: 252 Spd: 252 HP: 6 Ability: Magician Nature: Modest Item: Flame Plate Moves: Hypnosis, Wish, Psyschock, Fire Blast Greninja (M) EV: SpATK: 252 Spd: 252 HP: 6 Ability: Protean Nature: Quirky Item: Expert Belt Moves: Ice Beam, Dark Pulse, U-Turn, Surf Florges (F) Ability: Flower Veil EV: HP: 252 SpATK: 252 Def: 6 Nature: Calm Item: Leftovers Moves: Wish, Calm Mind, Aromatherapy, Moonblast Aegislash (M) EV: ATK: 252 Def: 126 SpDef: 126 Spd: 6 Ability: Stance Change Nature: Jolly Item: Steel Plate Moves: Iron Head, King's Shield, Shadow Sneak, Swords Dance Noivern (M) EV: SpATK: 252 Spd: 252 HP: 6 Ability: Infiltrator Nature: Timid Item: Shell Bell Moves: Hurricane, Draco Meteor, Flamethrower, Roost Venusaur (M) EV: HP: 252 SpATK: 252 Spd: 6 Ability: Growth/Thick Fat Nature: Modest Item: Venusaurnite Moves: Energy Ball, Sludge Bomb, Synthesis, Hidden Power (Earth)
  22. Hello there. My name is Raviel the Phantom, though most people just refer to me as Rav (A few girls call me Ravi, but is neither here nor there). While I have been playing, and restarting, Reborn game for quite some time, I have just recently joined the forums. A little bit about me is that I am a writer. I have published books, won contests, and etc., and would love to create a fun story based on the game, though not sure where I would put it. Another fun fact about me is that I love Dragon types. I think if I had a signature pokemon, it would definatley be Dragonite. So I look forward to speaking with the lot of you in the future.
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