Shamitako

But Omega Squad Teemo

Well, as I've said on the few occasions that I still run across you on Showdown, you've grown up plenty. Perhaps last time you were 14 you acted 12, but this time you're 14 and you're acting 20. So basically you grew eight years in zero, that's a pretty big achievement. Unlike a lot of people, you've learned from your mistakes, and in a way that's much better than never making them Honestly, we've had plenty of painfully immature people run through here--and I doubt many of them can blame it on actually being young--I'm glad you're one of the ones that stuck around to grow up With Hope, Lexi ^^ P.S. Since I wrote in second person I didn't get to call you Azert, thus I'm doing it here

People who think supports can't carry are annoying and dumb. But hey, they're why I can carry from support so easily since nobody on either team thinks I'm important

For every amazing and improbably arrow there was a point-blank fail. But it was fun anyways And let's be real, that one completely blind arrow into the fog of war to kill the fleeing GP totally makes up for all the fails

Haley One moment she was falling infinitely, the next she had collided with the floor of the library. Her nose was aching from the collision, but not as hard as it would be if she'd actually dropping out of an infinite sky. It seemed that her odd dream with the Trick girl had caused her to fall on her face. She pushed herself up and rubbed her nose a bit. "I'm fine just hurt my nose." She answered Arturia. It took her a moment to notice Trick was also present here as well, but when she did her face lost a bit of color. "Wait." She said, "Is this even reality? That's the girl who was messing with me in my head." "This is as real as any reality." Trick answered, "For Arturia it's a bit less real now." "Wait, Trick, what'd you do to her?" "Fingersnap~~" Trick snapped her fingers in the obnoxious way she did and the lights went out, but Arturia was still perfectly visible as though the lighting had changed for everyone but her. Haley didn't know what that meant exactly, but she got the feeling it wasn't good. "Alright, enough of you and your library." Haley told Trick angrily, "We're leaving." "I'm going with you." Trick insisted, her voice now returning to its original cheerfulness, "Fingersnap~~!" The lights came back on again, Trick stood directly in front of Haley, her maddening grin splayed across her face. Something about it felt more human now, but that just made it even more unnerving. Haley pushed her aside somewhat forcefully and strode towards the exit. "Come with us if you must you little devil, but we're not staying in this freaky place any longer." she snarled

Layla "Ah, lovely idea, we'll go all detective on this ghost story. It'll be a good experience for you all." Mother Opium said cheerfully. Layla stayed silent. She couldn't help but feel like something was lacking right now. Despite knowing that the Descendant of Adam was around, she still couldn't manage to be at ease. There was more going on in this school than just some superpowered girls. She couldn't put her finger on who was doing it, but she didn't need to be Nayru to puzzle out that they were all being played. "Oh by the way Esyllt, when your stomach starts hurting in about five minutes, the bathroom is just across from the kitchen, please don't miss the bowl." Mother Opium continued in a perfectly innocent and cheerful voice, "I'm sure you know where that is." It seemed that Esyllt was being played by the mother of the school. Perhaps that was all that had her nervous and there was nothing more sinister occurring. (OOC: GET BAITED SON. THE CAKE IS A LIE) Trick Trick's body flared up even brighter in reaction to Arturia's light, but the flames stopped spreading. The light began to drain into her, as though she were some form of black hole. "I told you not to let your heart die." Trick whimpered. And then, much to Arturia's horror, she saw herself burning just as Trick had been a moment before. It was entirely painless, but that only made it even more disconcerting. "Fingersnap." Trick said dejectedly. Her fingers clicked together soundlessly, but to Arturia this was like a trumpet heralding the arrival of death. The flames burned an empty blackness over Artuia's chest, and a pitch black blob in the vague shape of a human heart flew out, sliding soundlessly into Trick's chest. The suctioning of Arturia's light stopped, and her powers flared up around her again. The flames receded and her body returned to being normal. But she felt hollow and cold, "Now you're dead people." Trick said sorrowfully, "Fingersnap~." She snapped her fingers again and Arturia heard a muffled sound from Haley, like the tail end of a dying scream when screamed into a carpet. (OOC: For future reference, trying to revive ghosts is bad)

9/10

Oh lovely, that was right. Perhaps the Lux one will still be wrong... Also, unrelated, but can someone please explain to me why anything below Diamond is considered "low" elo? Because I was under the impression you were already top fifty percent somewhere in Silver. And last I check you don't usually call something low when it's more than halfway up...

That's pretty close to what I'm going for -rolls

Well don't slow down for me, most of the rest of people seem to be keeping up. And as Strat mentioned, my slow activity tends to kill things off

I noped out of Zero-G, including the anime. Particularly since the final season of the metal anime had such a satisfying conclusion for me, watching further would have just sucked on so many levels TBH As for the new ones, I'm going to guess based on the name they mimic the gimmick that showed up a long time back where some Beyblades explode when they run out of spin?

I'm going to take that as an 8 And they are depicted as crab claws in at least one of the official guest arts 6/10

I really hope it's not Lux TBH, particularly with the Star Guardian releases. Like, adding onto a theme that Lux started while at the same time providing a better thingy for Lux seems really dumb

I don't mind either way, I'm just helping because I enjoy doing so ^^ If you want to credit me you're more than welcome

Here, lemme make a couple revisions based on how I do sheets, it'll be a little closer to what Reborn's sheets are usually like. You don't need to use it exactly, but what you have right now is a little jumbled (and if you do use it exactly, that's fine too)

Enemy team was so confused as to why they lost, lmao. They kept sending four people top to stop me splitting, resulting in my team getting objectives elsewhere. Map pressure OP We'd have won sooner if Lucian didn't keep trying to teamfight. Luckily, Ahri knew her shit and did everything in her power to keep the team intact midlane until I either got an objective or everyone came for me Also, Susan was super salty that I was Teemo. He's the one who banned Gnar :c (He's also the one who picked Nasus into Teemo and then complained about how hard the lane was all game)

Alright, so a couple things. As mentioned, standard etiquette rules should probably exist. Here's a couple of my rules for TTG which cover them to an extent Instead of this rule, I recommend setting up your character sheet section sort of like this: Character Sheet (items with an asterisk are optional) Forum Name: Character Name: Gender: Age: Personality: Weapons*: Powers and Abilities*: Favorite Color*: Number of Orangutans: Backstory: Other*: Obviously not this exactly, but following a similar setup. This way you can just tell people what's optional and what isn't. Trust me, it saves a lot of hassle to just tell people what they can and can't do

On a more personal note, I'm considering joining and running a K'th'l character. I never seem to get to use them No idea if I'll have the time, depends on the pacing, but consider me interested

Hihi, am Lexi, Ima go through and just give you some critique. Don't take it too seriously, most of it will just be suggestions since I can't hound you about grammar like I had to with people on DC 1. Most RPs around here use a predefined character sheet, and in my experience making character sheets freeform results in a lot of inconsistencies. You can also go for an introductory paragraph format or the like, but based on a previous thread I think most people are more comfortable with sheets over paragraphs 2. Yes, definitely. even if you don't want to explain every detail, you should give a basic outline of different races. And whenever someone invents or imports one I recommend having them write the summary 3. This formatting is fine and the whole thing flows together well. I'm not a fan of text being over the forum standard, makes it much harder for me to read through quickly, but that's just preference In the future, don't feel obliged to do this, most RPs here aren't Pokemon-related ^^ The biggest issue I see is that you're completely lacking in any form of plot. You've done an absolutely amazing job building the setting, but you don't really do much to explain why the PCs are in the setting or what their goal is. Even if it's just going to be a sandbox (which I should warn you likely won't work) you need to give people a springboard to get them started I also recommend you write out your rules more clearly and include some form of mention of standard RP etiquette. It shouldn't have to be said, but you definitely want to put it up anyways in case someone does fail to follow it, otherwise you'll have little basis for dealing with them if the need arises. If you need some help in understanding what the standard RP etiquette around here is I'll be happy to clarify that for you