What did you think of this Chapter? Did you enjoy it?
I kind of liked it. It would have been nice to get more interaction with the Pokemon, and I kind of got caught in such a way that I couldn't keep up with the action, though, so that took away from it.
Following up on that question; What do you think of this RP as a whole?
It's a good concept and you've been executing it pretty well so far. I'm eager to see what you do with it.
On to my writting in this, what do you think about it? Where could I possibly improve?
It's very good for the most part, with one major flaw; Eric gets WAY too much time in the limelight. The main characters are supposed to be Surge, the PCs, and to a lesser extent the professors. As I've commented before, your NPCs also end up with almost too much of your own personality in them. No other criticism at the moment.
Which Host Controlled Character's/ NPCs feel real to you? Which could use some improvement?
Eric seems pretty well developed, both due to and in spite of my earlier comments.
Who is you favorite NPC? Why? Explain.
I like Clemont. He kind of surprised me, but I like how he's almost portrayed as the real brains behind this operation.
Who's your least favorite NPC? Why? Explain.
Ray I guess? I like him as a character, he's well written and I understand him, but he's just kind of a dick sometimes.
What do you think of Professor Rowan and Oak? Should I try to fit them to the mold they're portrayed as in the games a bit more, or should we just get a bit more creative?
I think they could be a little closer to their in-game personalities, but then again that's not much to work with. I think what you're doing fits the vision of the younger professors.
What do you think of the battles that have been had so far? Do you disagree with the concept of Soldiers having no idea how to really bring out a GAOs potential in a fight at this point?
They're pretty good. It forces the players to get a bit more creative with their writing and makes logical sense.
How would you feel If I told you that the rules of conventional battling for the most part aren't going to mean anything in this RP? Do you feel this adds to the realism of the story? Should one try to fight fairly, even in war?
I wouldn't be shocked. One should fight fairly but shouldn't count on the opponent doing the same, in my opinion. This also depends on how you define "fair."
What do you think of the integration between the real world and the concept of pokemon done in this RP? Where can it be improved in order to make things more real?
It kind of conflicts with some of the canon explanations, but also makes a lot of sense on its own. I'd like to see an explanation for Pokemon being orders of magnitude stronger than their base organisms other than virus magic.
How would you feel if I tell you that a certain NPC/ HCG is eventually going to be forced to commit war crimes for their country?
Not surprised tbh, though I wonder who it will be.
Would you like seeing a bit of information about the world as a whole in the OP?
Certainly.
What did you think of the Mini-Boss battle for this Chapter?
Again, wish I could have been in on it a bit more.
What do you think of me as Host of this? Be honest, by now, I expect nothing less from you guys.
No issues other than update frequency (which can't be helped) and Eric getting too much screen time.