Tses Posted December 2, 2014 Share Posted December 2, 2014 Is confusing a horde of Angry Donphan really a good idea...? Maybe. I cant use sherlock cause of the battle earlier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tses Posted December 2, 2014 Share Posted December 2, 2014 What do you think of Chapter 2? Did you enjoy it? It sure was enjoyable. What about my writing? Where can I improve? Your writing seems to me perfect. On the other hand i think I have to improve my writing. And I keep on learning many thing from you people. Which characters under my control feel real / which characters need improvement? Real: Evan,Lana Who is your favorite NPC and why? I don't think I have a particular favourite NPC. Who is your least favorite NPC and why? Alvin. Something doesnt feel right about him. What do you think about the darker parts I included in this chapter? (Hydreigon and Celebi) I liked them. Which Legendary do you think will befriend your character? And why? Hmm. The best to fit with her past is One of the dogs, or ho-oh. She is from ecruteak city. What do you expect to happen in Chapter 3: Winter Cup? Battles,battles,battles, and bad people. If your character was approached instead of Slade; how would he / she react? Probably, she would kept on listening to them, until she finally rejected them. Maybe she could have helped them for a while until she found out that, that it was the wrong thing she was doing. Is there anything else I can improve upon? Nope not really. Keep on doing what you currently do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tacos Posted December 2, 2014 Share Posted December 2, 2014 Ok, it's been fixed. Sorry about the confusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkLight Posted December 2, 2014 Share Posted December 2, 2014 @Commander: Is Zuko is growling at Danielle? I just wanted to make sure I get it right before I make a post after Chimchain's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Posted December 2, 2014 Share Posted December 2, 2014 (edited) Yeah it is Danielle (had to think a minute about how severe Henry's condition would be). Edited December 2, 2014 by commander218 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkLight Posted December 2, 2014 Share Posted December 2, 2014 Yeah it is Danielle (had to think a minute about how severe Henry's condition would be). Got it~ I was thinking that Henry had talked to Danielle and Kristen during these past few days on the trip, so it got me a little confused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sutoratosu Posted December 2, 2014 Share Posted December 2, 2014 Hmm... what to do, what to do... hmmmmmmmm.... He was right, ya know. what he said earlier... his team definitely needs more Status moves... EDIT: Wait... I think I am coming up with some craziness to try...I think I'll call it... the beacon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurorix Posted December 2, 2014 Share Posted December 2, 2014 What do you think of Chapter 2? Did you enjoy it? Yes, I enjoyed it quite well. What about my writing? Where can I improve? No, I think you've been doing a good job. If anything elaborate more sometimes but that's it. Which characters under my control feel real / which characters need improvement? Lana feels real, Redwood needs more time to shine! Who is your favorite NPC and why? I honestly don't have one Who is your least favorite NPC and why? Don't have one What do you think about the darker parts I included in this chapter? (Hydreigon and Celebi) I really enjoyed them, giving a more darker feel of an overall light hearted world Which Legendary do you think will befriend your character? And why? I think Victini because Slade is light-hearted and upbeat most of the time. Also they are both playful with other people and like helping others as well. What do you expect to happen in Chapter 3: Winter Cup? Fighting, RoG, and CHRISTMAS! If your character was approached instead of Slade; how would he / she react? :T Is there anything else I can improve upon? Not that I can see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chim Posted December 2, 2014 Author Share Posted December 2, 2014 (edited) I'm off to bed. Feel free to control the Donphans and try to calm them down. Edit: Or Jory / Snap can control them since they are still co-hosts. Edited December 2, 2014 by Chimchain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jory Posted December 2, 2014 Share Posted December 2, 2014 I actually just posted. I hope that didn't seem OP. If it did I can always edit it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurboAura Posted December 2, 2014 Share Posted December 2, 2014 (edited) I actually just posted. I hope that didn't seem OP. If it did I can always edit it.Dude... while it WAS a smart move, I'd really appreciate it if it only works on just the ones that others want sleeping instead 'all' of them (that's if keep it). Atleast personally, I have a decent battle plan, and this gives me a perfect way to 'deserve' the friendship evolution for Lucario. Plus, the ones in actual battle are not just gonna wake up happy like a Snorlax, they'd just go back to battle once woken back up if they have actual reasoning.On a separate note: Would it make sense for a 'Wild, angry Donphan' to try and go after the trainer in an attempt to 'take care of the leader spouting orders'? If so, I've got the perfect 'story' plan. If not, I'll just go 'normal' reasoning. Edited December 3, 2014 by TurboAura Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Posted December 2, 2014 Share Posted December 2, 2014 (edited) Dude... while it WAS a smart move, I'd really appreciate it if it only works on just the ones that aren't already battling instead 'all' of them even if you keep it. Atleast personally, I have a decent battle plan, and this gives me a perfect way to 'deserve' the friendship evolution for Lucario. Plus, the ones in actual battle are not just gonna wake up happy like a Snorlax, they'd just go back to battle once woken back up if they have actual reasoning. I have to agree here especially how it was handled. If you're going to do something that'll affect other players vastly, post something here to make sure they're okay with this. Secondly, sing is very unreliable no matter what logic you use. The stampede would've blocked out almost all sound unless they were very close (angry Pokemon are also very hard to put to sleep because they probably aren't using their hearing as much). On another note, you probably don't want to be hit by one of those things unless you want to end up like Henry. Edited December 2, 2014 by commander218 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevaleresse Posted December 3, 2014 Share Posted December 3, 2014 I'll get a reply in later tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jory Posted December 3, 2014 Share Posted December 3, 2014 I put a LOT of qualifiers in my post to make sure they weren't all asleep. I said that at least several (i.e. the ones you guys were battling) were still awake. If you all still want me to change it I will, but I by no means said all of them were asleep. The purpose of Jacob's action was to put the ones that weren't involved with anyone to sleep I changed the last part to make sure anything battling stayed awake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurboAura Posted December 3, 2014 Share Posted December 3, 2014 (edited) I put a LOT of qualifiers in my post to make sure they weren't all asleep. I said that at least several (i.e. the ones you guys were battling) were still awake. If you all still want me to change it I will, but I by no means said all of them were asleep. The purpose of Jacob's action was to put the ones that weren't involved with anyone to sleep I changed the last part to make sure anything battling stayed awake.*sigh* I guess it works if you only put the 'extras' asleep. I guess a lot of others are going with it, just realized that Robert will (reasonably, but kept in his subconscious) resist wanting to punch Jacob in the chest after what happens to him. Robert is gonna be VERY lucky to barely avoid a hit from a Donphan like Commander warned. Just realize; if this goes the way I plan, the 'bigger' Donphan will want Robert to 'faint', if you catch my drift. Edited December 3, 2014 by TurboAura Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jory Posted December 3, 2014 Share Posted December 3, 2014 *sigh* I guess it works if you only put the 'extras' asleep. I guess a lot of others are going with it, just realized that Robert will (reasonably, but kept in his subconscious) resist wanting to punch Jacob in the chest after what happens to him. Robert is gonna be VERY lucky to barely avoid a hit from a Donphan like Commander warned. Just realize; if this goes the way I plan, the 'bigger' Donphan will want Robert to 'faint', if you catch my drift. Ok I mean I guess if helping to stop a stampede of dangerous Pokemon makes Robert mad then I won't argue with you. And yeah, the intent the whole time was to just put the "extras" to sleep. The others would be too focused to be totally conked out by an AoE Sing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurboAura Posted December 3, 2014 Share Posted December 3, 2014 (edited) Ok I mean I guess if helping to stop a stampede of dangerous Pokemon makes Robert mad then I won't argue with you. And yeah, the intent the whole time was to just put the "extras" to sleep. The others would be too focused to be totally conked out by an AoE Sing.Eheh, I guess I was being a bit to specific there. Let's call his 'initial feelings about it' being blind rage, due to his own mistake in it not allowing him to be prepared for the sing and what would happen afterwards. Of course, he'd be able to shake it off/ 'forget about it' once he settles down from the threat, but when he's gonna have a Donphan try to flatten him... Yeah, short blind rage fits it well enough.Also, we wouldn't have really have thought that it affected ALL of them if not for asking if it would be seen as 'OP.' Water under the bridge? Edited December 3, 2014 by TurboAura Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jory Posted December 3, 2014 Share Posted December 3, 2014 Yep. Let bygones be bygones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tacos Posted December 3, 2014 Share Posted December 3, 2014 I'll let Kage introduce them both to the outside, since he needs to find the teachers anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephyrus the Priestess Posted December 3, 2014 Share Posted December 3, 2014 >> guys why you active when I is not around either way I'm not sure if I can post until later, I've been clogged up with school stuff and whatnot... bunny pls if you have to (or... I dunno, I'm just going to make it as though Raiza did something when I get to post. I can't right now and nor do I want to type a rushed post after having to read through two or three pages of OC/IC :c ) Also, is the whole thing over? D: I just skimmed the IC thread and holy sh what the flupp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chim Posted December 3, 2014 Author Share Posted December 3, 2014 You can still jump in if you want to. There are still some running around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jory Posted December 3, 2014 Share Posted December 3, 2014 You can also present it on a -5 or -10 minutes timeline and then at the end of your post catch up to the current events. That's what I tend to do if I've missed a large portion of IC events. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Support Squad Felicity Posted December 3, 2014 Support Squad Share Posted December 3, 2014 Well, Doux helped and hurt the situation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K_H Posted December 3, 2014 Share Posted December 3, 2014 What do you think of Chapter 2? Did you enjoy it? It was well designed. What about my writing? Where can I improve? You're doing great! I'd say you're doing mostly fine, although it could be a little more elaborate. Which characters under my control feel real / which characters need improvement? I don't know who feels real, but Redwood needs more Screen Time. Who is your favorite NPC and why? I don't usually form opinions on NPCs. Who is your least favorite NPC and why? See "Favorite NPC". What do you think about the darker parts I included in this chapter? (Hydreigon and Celebi) Those. Were. AWESOME! Which Legendary do you think will befriend your character? And why? I don't know for sure, but if i had to say, it would probably be one of the Swords Of Justice, and of those, most likely Keldeo or Coballion. Kenny's kind of ambiguous, even to me, but it definitely feels like he views his Team as friends, as evidenced in Chapter 1 where Kenny and Ryu acted together in their first fight against Henry and Zuko, as well as his reaction to Zorro's fooling of Henry the next day. Heck, Eve was accepted because he felt sympathy for her, and Otto is currently an Honorary Member! It also definitely feels like he's energetic and willing to fight for his beliefs, even at great risk to himself. that, and the fact that he has a strong Moral Compass. What do you expect to happen in Chapter 3: Winter Cup? Battles, perhaps a ROG Intrusion, and the Winter Holidays. If your character was approached instead of Slade; how would he / she react? If Kenny had been approached, ROG's Plan would've failed before it even started. Kenny's usually mistrustful of those he doesn't know, and as we saw in the Why section of the "Legendary most likely to Befriend Character" Question, he views Pokemon more as Friends and Allies, rather than as Tools. this means that there's a conflict in views between Kenny and ROG. plus, he'd also be very likely to report the experience to the Higher-Ups once he'd finished with them, having a somewhat strong sense of morality, also stated in the same question. Is there anything else I can improve upon? No, not really. (Except perhaps making the Events more Involving.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurboAura Posted December 3, 2014 Share Posted December 3, 2014 (edited) So, does it last until 'every last Donphan goes down,' or do the students have to last until a certain point? I'm good with either, but I'm assuming that the 'extra Donphan' that were put to sleep would end up waking up after a while and threaten as an almost 'continuous stream' of Donphan's until Chim says they've retreated. Edited December 3, 2014 by TurboAura Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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