Yeah I see you point, I was mostly focusing on fleshing out his character to make him likeable and sympathetic so when the Team Xen moment came around it would be more of a gut punch because you’d care about Ren instead of being completely done with him as many players seem to be after the whole Goldenleaf section, but changing that section in the way I did takes away what little reason, as petty and stupid as it is, for Ren to join them. Thinking more on it I would probably take Ren’s betrayal out of the story entirely or rewrite Team Xen to be more morally ambiguous, however the idea of Gear