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  1. Sorry for my late reply. I just too absorbed writing a prologue for my web novel series, now with grammar check by Word! (lol). Thanks for the offer, I could use some grammar/vocab help since I'm not a native speaker as well. I don't even remember when the last time my house has a dictionary. And yes, I'll send you some draft (if I have one) for you to proofread. Maybe I should ask other Reborn authors as well.
  2. Blue Rose - Chapter 0: A (Not) Normal Day 6.00 A.M, Monday, 11 December, 1997, K city somewhere in Malaysia Aisha Ameera, 22 years old, woke out on 6.00 A.M as usual as always today. Since she have been woke out at the nearly on the same time her whole life until now, she has no need for alarm clocks. “Uuagh” – Aisha slightly moans while stretching her arms upwards. Opening her drowsy eyes, Aisha slowly takes a glance of her bedroom. If her female office mates sees the room, they would probably shock. Not because the room is too girly or too messy, but it’s too neat and clean. In other words; the room is too plain. A woman in early 20’s and beginning to start their career would probably take a serious approach in appearance. From clothes, to handbags, to make-ups and even to their room decorations such as posters of famous actors, collections of hair pin, nail polish and lipsticks of many colors. They make sure that they need to be fashionable at least. Yet, Aisha’s prefer a room which is white, neat and need no for expensive, useless extra decorations. She then quickly took a bath, and dressed for work. Though she maybe has a bleak sense in house decorations, Aisha is a different person when it comes to professional looks. She makes sure her work dresses are properly ironed, without a trace of wrinkles. Aisha also makes sure that the dress coordination look proper and suitable with professionalism. After donning her work dress, Aisha waste no more time and do her morning prayer. Though she doesn’t wear Hijab, but as a Muslim, Aisha is doing her best not to miss any of the daily prayers. She felt obliged to do so as thought by her late parents. Despite having bleak sense of fashion, as women, Aisha cares about her physical image. After prayer, Aisha decided to apply some make up to give the aura of confidence to her face. In the mirror, she saw herself. A woman with slightly dark skinned. Her big eyes brimming with confidence and her sleek black hair ran down slightly passed her shoulder. She took some of the foundation powder and applied it softly to her cheek and forehead. Then Aisha applied some of the lipstick with faint red color onto her lips to make it look natural and not too red. After that, Aisha decided to eat breakfast before going to work. It’s already 6.30 A.M by that time. She has an hour before going to work by train where it takes only 15 minutes for her to arrive at the office before 8 A.M. Before making the breakfast, Aisha turns on the TV and switched the channel to morning news. She then goes to the kitchen to make her breakfast. “I think I’ll eat some omelet sandwich and coffee for breakfast” – Aisha talked to herself. In front of her is an open corridor between the living room and the kitchen. That way, Aisha can still saw the TV while she’s cooking her breakfast. It is the TV1 morning news. “- Malaysia economy would probably suffer greatly from this worldwide economic meltdown. We now proceed to news from last night. The missing person incident occurred in K city from the last two week has claimed its 14th victim. The victim, Ngo Choon Hua, 32, was reported missing yesterday when his family realized he is coming home late from work.” Finished making her omelet sandwich and coffee, Aisha bring both to the table and slowly start her breakfast while watching the news. “Police conducted a search but find no evidence of murder, thus suspected the victim was kidnapped since there are no trace or personal belongings from the victim. The incident started when a family of four suddenly when missing with no trace and victims were went missing within 2 to 3 days gap. It is suspected that this is the work of foreign organ trade syndicate originated from Thailand. The police department encourages the citizen to report any information regarding the missing persons to the K City Police Dept. Missing Persons Taskforce.” “This city is becoming more dangerous lately” – Aisha thought. She slightly worried about the condition of the city she’s been living in. After cleaning up her dishes after breakfast, Aisha walks to the train station five minute walk from her apartment. This is the daily working day routine for Aisha. She reaches at the station on time when the train to her office arrives. While sitting on the train seat, Aisha can’t help but wonder. Seeing the train is packed with office workers and students, while remembering how the station still bustling with people, Aisha thought “Despite the news, looks like today is still a normal day.” Or that is what Aisha wished for. She doesn’t realize that yesterday is the last normal day she would have in her life. 4.25 P.M, Same day, Marketing Dept., White Pearl Cosmetics, J City “What do you mean, boss!?” – Aisha shouted. Her voice is so loud that it could be hear through the Marketing Department’s office floor. In front of her is her boss, Mr. Will, head of the Marketing Department. With heavy voice Mr. Will said – “The higher ups has decided to fire you from this company”. This is the second time he said that sentence to Aisha. “You know of this year’s economy crisis right? Of course, even our company was affected by it.” “So, to cut cost and settling debts with the bank, the company’s board of directors decided to fire 35% of the workers, especially those who has bad discipline record or doesn’t show any significant achievements” – Mr. Will continues. “But you know of me, right, Mr. Will? I have been an outstanding member of company in my 6 years of service. I have no bad discipline records, my performance is consistent and I even pulled many great projects for the company. So, why do I am still fired?!” – This time, Aisha even slams Mr. Will’s desk. “I know you’re an outstanding worker, Aisha. Even your performance, it never drops since the first day you started here. You have brought many great things for this company and I am grateful to you for that.” – Mr. Will said with heavy voice but sincere. “But, it seems that the Board of Directors (B of D) chose personnel other than you. You know the new rookie, Ms. Chang? The B of D took a liking to that rookie” “They chose that rookie than me?! She hasn’t even joined the company for a year and the B of D already deemed her that important?!” – This time, Aisha’s voice gone louder. Being fired because of some rookie is any senior worker cannot accept. “I’m too, agree with you, Aisha. The things she had done weren’t comparable to your achievements. But she has an outgoing personality and dare to take high risks in her projects. Those oldies are sure love hot blooded young lass. Well, maybe she even ‘treats’ them all nicely. I don’t have to explain that, do I?” – Mr. Will continues. “Nevertheless, I have no say on this matter, Aisha. I tried to convince them but their decision is fixed. I am very sorry.” – Mr. Will apologizes. “I would have to ask you to pack your things and clean your desk. I wouldn’t say today but I hope you can have it done soon. Once again, I’m very sorry, Aisha” “Don’t worry, Mr. Will. It can’t be helped. This is what the company decided. After all my blood and sweat, I am nothing but disposable human resource after I fulfilled my purpose. I’ll take my leave then. I will clean up my desk before next Monday, I promised” – said Aisha with emotionless tone. She left the Dept. Head’s office after that. Since she’s already fired, Aisha decided to break the rules for the first time in her career. She took an early leave that day. 6.30 P.M, Same day, On Train Aisha is on the way home in a train. Ever since she heard the news from her superior that she was fired, her mood is down the drain. She felt like dying. All of her effort in the last 6 years was all but wasted on fat ass, old B of D bastards. She was too mad that she’s going to thrash the office if she stays, so she decided to take an early leave to calm herself down. “This is my worst day of my life so far” – Aisha thought. “I don’t think something worse could happen”. There a saying that said, “Fortune strikes but once. Misfortune strikes but many times” While staring blankly, Aisha gets a phone call. She took out the bulky cellphone and saw her landlady, Mdm. Chia’s number on the screen. Her landlady seldom calls her except for something important. She’s expecting good news of the apartment is now hers since the rent she paid is now near to the original price for the apartment. “Hello, landlady, is anything I can help you with?” – Aisha asks gently despite her mood. From the other side, she could hear faint sound of crying. Aisha was just going to ask before the other side talks. “H, H, hello Aisha? This is me, Mdm. Chia” – Mdm. Chia speech stuttered from crying. “Okay. What happened ma’am? Why are you crying?” “Aisha, I am very sorry, Aisha. I am very, very, very sorry” – the landlady’s voice become more stuttered as she starts crying again. “My son, he borrowed money from a loan shark and, and, failed to pay back” “The loan shark then came to me, threatening to kill me if I’m not paying the debts” “S-s-so, I gave them the grant for your apartment” “!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” – Aisha is so shocked that she couldn’t say anything. “You can blame, Aisha, but this involves mine and my family’s lives. I have to kick you out of the apartment” “Your stuffs are already taken out from the apartment. Again, I am very sorry. I didn’t mean to do this” – the landlady then cut off the call. “What do you mean, kicked out?!!! Where do I live after this?!!! Did you know today I lost my job? Now I lost my home too?!!! Where do I suppose to sleep tonight?!!! Where do I live after that?!!! Answer me, you old hag!!! You think only your live is on the line here?!!! What about me?!!! Answer me, you bastard old hag!!!!!” – Aisha shouted to the phone that no longer on call. She cares no longer to the people staring at her losing her mind. 7.00 P.M, Same day, K City Train Station When Aisha arrived at the station near her (former) apartment, Aisha walks down the street selflessly. She felt like dying. This is the worst of her entire life. First, she lost her job to some naïve rookie, after that, she lost her apartment to landlady that don’t know how to teach her son. In other words, she no longer cares what would happen to her. She walks following the path to her apartment she’s been living from the day she start working with Pearl Cosmetics in the Marketing Dept. She thought her live beginning next year would be good with living in her own house and the pay raise from the company. Who thought that such peaceful life could be overturn so easy? Still, life goes on. As a Muslim, suicide because of given up of life is one of the worst of sins and Aisha doesn’t want that. She swallowed all her despair for now and need to face the problem with clear head and calm mind. She decided to stay at a hotel tonight, and went to get her clothes left in front of the apartment. Aisha walk passes the street that usually filled with sea of people, bustling from those who back from work and those who out to enjoy night life. “Sea of people” - As Aisha thought of that phrase, she realized something. There’s no sea of people around her right now. At the street that is usually bustling with people at this time, only Aisha stood there. There’s not a single soul besides her. The neighborhood that usually filled with noises and voices now is quite as not a single living being at the place. The quietness makes Aisha felt a cold sweat drenched around her neck. “!!!” – Aisha shocked. She snapped out of her panic when she spotted something amidst the weird atmosphere. In front of her, not too far away, Aisha saw a faint figure. From the shape, it looks like a human figure. The figure suddenly moves slowly towards Aisha. As the figure is getting nearer, the street lights illuminate its form. The figure is actually a woman in white night dress with her hair covered her face. After some distance, the woman stops walking. “hEY, YOunG MiSs, arE yoU ALOne?” – The woman speaks with a soft voice but her manner of speech is somehow in irregular tone. “……….” – Aisha remain silent. She got a hunch that if she talks, something bad will happen to her. “HeY, Are YOU AlONe ?” – The women asked Aisha again. This time, there is more pressure in her voice. “…….” - Aisha still remain silent. “sO, yOU’re ALoNE tHEn? How aBOut yoU Let mE ….” – said the woman. Her body trembles strongly as she talks. It makes Aisha cringe. Aisha prepared herself for anything that is going to happen. Her hunch is getting stronger and stronger as the longer the woman in front of her trembles. She is never an occult person but she does know some scary stories from her childhood. This kind of situation is similar to the stories she heard. “ThEN……” “ cOuLD yOU LeT me EAT YoU ???!!!” – The woman shouted. Her soft voice earlier changed into an eerie sound. Aisha quickly turns backwards and dashes. She is running as fast as she could. Even though it’s all in the far past, Aisha is once an athletic person. She confident the she could lose the creepy woman with her speed. But Aisha is wrong. She is terribly wrong. As Aisha run, she could feel something is chasing her back. Aisha didn’t dare to look back. She is too afraid. She afraid of seeing something she shouldn’t. Yet, she has this irresistible urge to look back. While maintaining her speed, Aisha turns her head and takes a quick glance. She regrets it. Aisha regrets that she looks at her back. This decision is something that she will regret until the day she dies. When she turns to look, Aisha saw a grotesque figure of the woman, running on fours. Her skin is dark bluish in color, like the color of a dead body. What Aisha cannot forget is the woman’s face. But it’s no longer a human’s. It’s a face that can no longer describe as a woman but creature. There are no lips. No eyebrows. No form of nose. It’s only a mouth, pair of nostrils and eyes forming its face. The skin of its face is darker than the other body parts. The part that Aisha cannot help but look at it is the eyes. The eyes are the most monstrous part of the creature. They are round and large as an egg. Faint bluish light emitted from them. They devoid from any form depicting eyes. Aisha felt like barfing the longer she looking at those pair of ‘eyes’. She turns her face forward and dashes faster than before. Aisha takes the way to the back alley of the neighborhood, hoping to lose the creature in the labyrinth like alley. After 6 years living there, she knows the back alley like the back of her hand and confident she could escape. The back alley is covered by pitch black darkness. Only sliver light from the moon illuminates the path of the alley. One could easily get lost in the dark if they don’t have any flash lights with them. Aisha runs hastily through the back alley. She’s running out of breath and need to take a rest before continuing running. Yet she can’t. She could not yet stop. Aisha felt that the creature is still on her tail. Turn right. Turn left. Aisha takes any turns she could find. Not long after that, she no longer felt the creature’s presence. Aisha stopped running and took a look at her surroundings. “Did I lose her?” – Aisha thought. Relieved, Aisha rest her back on the wall and took a breath. Finally, she is freed from the creepy creature. After a while, Aisha rested enough. She got the clue of where she is and decided to go back to her former apartment. “I think I should go now” As she said that, Aisha felt like she’s going to puke. The air becomes stagnant and a sudden shiver caught her body. She can feel a dreadful presence above her. She is afraid to look. Yet Aisha cannot resist the urge and look upwards. “FOuNd. yOu. YOunG. mIsS!!!” – A eerie voice can be heard. The creature is crawling on the alley walls. Her eyes are looking directly towards Aisha. Aisha trembles. She is too afraid that she couldn’t move. Yet Aisha managed to steel herself, albeit a little and dashes as fast as she can once again. Turn right. Turn right. Turn left. Turn right. Aisha takes random path that she found, hoping to lose the creature once again. But this time, it is different. The creature is chasing her on all fours while on the wall. Aisha can longer spent time to take a glance. The only think she could focus now is to shake this creature off again. “wHere. aRe. yoU. GoINg. YoUng. MISs??!!!” – The creature shouted. Its eerie voice intensifies Aisha’s fear more. Another right turns. Another left turns. This time, Aisha is doomed. She found a dead end in her way. “What? There shouldn’t have any dead end here??!!” – Aisha shouted. She cannot believe there is a dead end. She knows that there no dead end in the back alley as the people usually use the alley as a short cut to the main street. Placing a dead end would, without doubt, incurred wrath from the residence. Yet she encountered a dead end. A dead end that supposedly didn’t exists. Aisha turned her back to the dead end and saw the creature, standing not too far away in the distance. “no. MORE. HiDe. AnD. SeEk. YOunG. MiSS” – The creature talks with its eerie voice. A big smile appeared on its face, like a hunter cornering its prey. The creature then slowly approaches Aisha. Aisha could no longer move. Her body no longer obeys her control. The fatigue from running combined with fear rendered her body petrified. Aisha does nothing but just resolve herself to fate. She could no longer move. She could only pray that the despair will end quickly. “What a bad day I had” – Aisha thought. The creature is getting closer and closer to Aisha. 5 meter “First I lost my job.” 4 meter “Then I lost my apartment.” 3 meter “Now I’m going to be killed by this ghost.” 2 meter “Really, what a bad day I had. Haha” – Aisha let out a fake laugh. One meter “NOW. Let. mE. Eat. yOu” – Said the creature while extending its skinny hands. Aisha slowly closes her eyes. She doesn’t want to see the creature’s grotesque face if she were going to die. But suddenly, something strange happens. Out of thin air, bluish green colored flames engulfed the creature. With faint light emitted from the fire, Aisha could see three figures at least 4 meters away from the creature, who now rendered immobile with flames burning its body. In the distance, Aisha could hear the figures are talking to each other. “Hmm. Looks like it’s already at stage four, Boss. My flames can only cremate its body; it would do nothing to the thing inside. It not long for it to start moving again” – said a man. From the voice, he is a young man of early 20’s. “I have offered exorcism prayers as well and it doesn’t work on that one too. I’m sorry for my incompetence, Boss” – said a woman. From her accent, she is a foreigner possibly from Europe. “Don’t mind, Isabelle, it’s not your fault if you’re exorcism doesn’t work. That demon already reached Stage 4, we should expect as such. As for Aizat, well, you’re just an average mage with this kind of magic, I couldn’t expect more of it” – a man speaks. He has a deep voice, he probably at late 20’s to early 30’s of age. From his accent, he is a native English speaker. “Boss, that hurts, you know?” – Aizat complained. “I’m apologized once again, for leaving this to you, Boss” – Isabelle apologizes with respectful manner of speech. “Don’t apologize, Isabelle. Besides, isn’t this is the reason why I lead this time’s business? I already expect we would need my powers to solve this” – said the ‘Boss’. After a few seconds, a sound of gunshot could be heard in the alley. Aisha saw the creature in front of her, still engulfed in flames, falls to ground, no longer moved “Am I, saved?” – Aisha thought. Her consciousness fading and her knees weaken. Aisha begins to faint. As she falls to the ground, her sight already faded. Still, she can hear the people who saved her. “Boss, there’s a lady there!” – Aizat shouted. “Most likely, she’s the one that the demon is chasing” – said Isabelle. “A one lucky young lady isn’t she? If we a little bit late, she would already become that demon’s meal for tonight and we have the 14th missing person. Well, if you call being targeted by a demon is lucky“– said the Boss. Aisha’s mind faded after that. 6.00 A.M, 14 December, Ward 4, Room No. 5, K City General Hospital Aisha opened her eyes and finds herself in the hospital room. The nurse that was on duty that time quickly calls out for the on duty doctor. The doctor arrives in about a minute later and do examines Aisha’s condition. After sleeping for three days straight, Aisha’s memory is cloudy. She asks the doctor if the doctor knows anything about what happened to her three days ago. “I was told that you are attacked by a robber and because of shocked, you fainted. Luckily some people saw it and the robber were captured. Your belongings aren’t taken too. They’re the ones that contact the ambulance and have you delivered here” – The female doctor explains. “Do you know who the people who saved me are?” – Aisha asked. “Unfortunately, Miss Aisha, I don’t know. Even the identity of the one who paid your hospital bill is also unknown” - The doctor apologized. “Someone paid my hospital bill?” “Yes, it is one of the people who saved you the other day” After completing the checkups, the doctor leaves. Aisha was staring outside the window, trying to recall the incident that happened three days ago. But, she failed to recall anything. Her memories are too cloudy. Then, something caught her eye. On the desk next to her bed, beside the flower vase placed on the desk, there is a wax sealed letter. The letter was meant for her. After checking the envelope, she found the letter’s sender. “The sender is, Blue Rose Agency?” – Aisha talked to herself while wondering about the sender.
  3. Blue Rose: Prologue 8.30 A.M, January 16 1998, Blue Rose Agency, K City, Somewhere in Malaysia “Tap. Tap, tap, tap. Tap, tap. Tap, tap, tap” – Tapping sound echoes through the room. Blue Rose Agency’s office is just made up of a room with 8 meter length and 6 meter width; very small size for an investigation agency. Aisha is typing using the bulky old computer keyboard from 80’s. She is doing her usual job, writing the report about the case files that solved by the agency. The computer is quite high end except the keyboard, which is hard for her to type using it. “Could the Boss give me the newer keyboard? It isn’t that they don’t have money at all but this keyboard is as old as my late grandpa when he died” – Aisha complained. It is true that Blue Rose Agency has quite ample amount of resource in store. Even in the office, from furniture to desk phone to cabinets and even masks hanging on the wall as decorations, is at least 100 years old antiquity The Blue Rose’s Boss is said to be a noble from Britain with filthy amount of wealth. So, it isn’t much for him to get that amount of antiques. It’s just Alisha thought that using antiques as daily life furniture is quite absurd. “Finally, it’s complete!” – Said Aisha while stretching her arms. Writing a report using such brick of a keyboard, no clerk in the world would want that. Aisha hover the mouse to the print icon on Word and clicked it. The printer machine next to the monitor whirs, indicating that it is printing the report inputted by Aisha. While waiting the printer to complete the printing process, Aisha walks to the cabinet where they store the previous reports of Blue Rose’s case files. She randomly picked a file and opened it to see the content within. Maybe just a coincidence, but the file that she picked is actually contained the report on a case, which has a picture of her in it. In that instant, she reminded on how she could be a part of the Private Bureau of Paranormal Investigations; Blue Rose. It’s a day that she could never remove from her memories. Even if she wanted to.
  4. So, I decided to write a web novel series! Not that I wrote one before. This novel has nothing related with pokemon, so if you're expecting a fanfic, you're wrong. Any comments or reviews on my novel series can be posted here: Chapter updates: Updates? I don't know. Maybe weekly. Maybe when I have enough idea and time to write a chapter full of crap things that makes you want to say crappy things too. Synopsis: Aisha Ameera is an office lady in her early 20's with outstanding skills. She thought her life will be normal and smooth until misfortune came crashing down; causing Aisha to lose both her career and home in a blink of an eye. Not enough of it, she caught into a life threatening incident. She was saved by the Blue Rose Agency and offered a job by the Agency as a clerk. She accepted, not knowing that the decision will change her views on the world forever, for good or for worse
  5. Well, most people who played Reborn are the ones that bored with main game lack of challenge. Those who aren't familiar with Pokemon game may think this game is easy and finally get rekt by Julia. Even I was pushed to the limit of quitting after losing to Julia many times even when I grinded my mons near the level cap, but still losing. And that's only the first gym. The challenge of this game (aside from field effect with insane buffs) is the Leaders got their team typing covered. I assume even their mons has perfect IVs with EVs based on Showdown Meta. I get rekt by Shelly because not expecting that Masquerain has Hydro Pump plus decent speed, it OHKO my Arcanine. Plus Yanmega with Speed Boost and Ancient Power.
  6. Because this is Reborn, people! Ame even said strong trainers flocking in Reborn, so you expect the Gyms are easy walk ? Ready to get rekt ~ P/s: My friend who introduced my to Reborn quit the game not finishing even Julia. It would have quit too if I don't play my mons well.
  7. Who released their Abomasnow here ? Answer me ~
  8. Ame, what the relationship point does ? Is it the similar to certain games like Persona series or there are some pokemons and items that can only be acquired by achieving certain level of relationship ? Or its just dating sim ... PLUS ULTRA!!
  9. I changed my Meteor Admin, Rival and Gym Music with Persona 3 musics. Though the original music is more fitting but I somehow like my edit. Sorry for changing the music btw.
  10. Thank you for your reviews! I was afraid someone wouldn't point out the mistakes since my English is very average. Imagination only won't produce a good writing ~
  11. I got my own version of curse with technology. No matter just how much external HDD I bought. They tend to fail after 9 months to a year of usage. And I'm absolutely not rough with them. Of course the memory tends to be near full (that's why we buy external HDD do we ?). I defrags them regularly and avoid junk files or virus but they still broke after a set of time. I've seen others use it the way I do but their last until 2 to 3 years. I'm despaired by this. Not just the money I spend but my anime stash as well ...
  12. Your writing's good. Now I need to research more Pokefacts for my fanfiction too. (And my grammars too, I bet the reason I have so little views because of that) When you strike an over-the-top pose with great seriousness
  13. My mons suddenly gone lvl 100 after using online battle. What happened ?

    1. Scottieboy2020

      Scottieboy2020

      did they stay level 100 AFTER you went offline again?  or was it just in the online battle?

    2. Nyaagisa The Maid

      Nyaagisa The Maid

      even after I stay offline. I had to use whole damn of common candy to de-level them.

    3. Scottieboy2020

      Scottieboy2020

      ...I'd submit that as a bug report on the forums... I haven't had that one but that seems like a major exploit that people may take advantage of...  Kind of defeats the purpose of the game.  Even if they don't always obey you they'll still deal a ton of unfair damage.

  14. Hello, Nagisa Hideyoshi here. Any comment or review about my fanfiction is here. Well, I don't have much talent in writing but I hope you guys could give feedbacks, whether good or not. Any notifications about the fanfic is also here. Also, don't expect new chapter out so fast. I'm a working adult so, work takes priority but I promise that this could go on ... Read my fanfic here: http://www.rebornevo.com/forum/index.php?/topic/23119-nagisa-hideyoshis-fanfic-tale-of-the-weakest-champion/ If you think it's interesting, feel free to add some spice to it by giving suggestions too ... "Trap is life, Trap is love"- Nagisa Hideyoshi
  15. PROLOGUE: RESTORIA LEAGUE'S CHAMPION She cannot believe her eyes. She cannot comprehend what is actually happening right now. "How. How could this happened ??!!" "Why it must be you ??!!" In front of her is her dear partner, the first pokemon she got, her sword and shield. A master of swordsmanship and courtesy. And in his full glory of Mega form. A Mega Gallade, pokemon that is feared for his fighting prowess and speed. Yet, the feared sword master is now hanging with his last ounce of stamina. The strength he had left is so little that he couldn't even use telepathy to speak with his Lady Trainer. All he could do know is stayed focus for next instruction and not averted his eyes from the opponent before him. Across the battlefield, a mountain top littered with crystals and rainbows up above the sky, stands a smiling giant. A Snorlax, with a jet-colored belt tied along his waist, standing calmly without even a scratch. Behind him is his Trainer, a beauty wearing jet black gothic lolita dress. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Reiss Kujikawa Eden. She is a 16 years old Pokemon Trainer. She was born into a family of exceptional Pokemon Trainers. Her father is a master martial artist and also the Fighting type Gym Leader in her region league, Lacross Region, and ought to be the strongest among Gym Leaders. While her father is an exceptional trainer, her mother is no normal women either. Before retiring, she were feared as the most merciless among the Lacross League's Elite Four and specialized in using Dark type pokemons with must-not-be-mentioned strategy. It is rumored that the first Lacross League Champion would shiver when hearing her name and if she doesn't decided to retire, there will be no Lacross League Champion until now, saying that she were holding back during her battle with the first Lacross League Champion. Of course, children take over their parents. Since her childhood, Reiss shown great potential as a pokemon Trainer. Moreover, she undergo martial arts training by her father and tought tactics by her mother. With mental fortitude and intellect gained from her parents' teachings combined with her talent, she is already on the victory road to glory. Living in a Dojo plus Fighting-type Gym, she has a knack of using Fighting-type pokemons. Ever since she got her male Ralts, a Psychic/Fairy-type Pokemon, she've been aiming to raise her Ralts into Gallade, a pokemon with an image of knight. At least, in her imagination. With fate by her side, it's just matter of time till she become a legendary-tier pokemon trainer and league champion. When she reaches 14-years old, she embarked on her journey to conquer Lacross Trainer League. It only takes her half a year to conquer the league and became Lacross League Champion also the fastest and second Trainer to become a League Champion in Lacross region. After Lacross, she embarked for a journey to Kanto to conquer Kanto League. It takes her another half a year to replace the current Champion. She once again embarked on journey to challenge another league, this time Johto League. Also, takes her half a year to become Johto League Champion. Winning 3 leagues within a year and half, she became the hot topic across the world and placed among legendary trainers. After Johto, Reiss set her eyes to Reborn League. The rumors of Reborn League is a very challenging league and a lot of strong trainers flocking in Reborn legion, piques her interest. Indeed, Reborn is a challenging journey. The region is corrupted with pollution and has very little pokemon population. On top of that, since the region were just reopened, it's quite lawless. Yet, even such condition pose no threat to Reiss. With her mental strength, even such lawless place is nothing but slightly hard to find pokemon. What give her excitement in this region is the strength of the Gym Leaders and some trainers. Previous leagues not yet introduce terrain advantages, so the Gym Leaders and Elite Four has no advantage. In Reborn, with the usage of terrain effects and advantages across battlefield, Reborn Gym Leaders gave Reiss and her team the adrenaline rush they seek. It takes her a bit of time to win Reborn League, a year and half. After becoming Reborn League Champion, she decided to take a time off and gave her Gallade plus her pokemon teams a short rest. It was during this time, Reiss found a Galladite and her dear Gallade able to reach his peak of strength. After six months of rest, Reiss and her team prepared to conquer another Pokemon League. This time is in Restoria Region, a continent that just reopened just like Reborn but after nearly 90 years disconnected from the world. From rumors she got from Ame, Reborn League's moderator, Restoria Region once raged by civil wars among them and they even used pokemon in war, resulting near extinct pokemon population as the aftermath. The civil war even resulted to weird conditions across the region; multiple climates and unstable weather, maybe the caused by pokemon weather summoning moves used during the war. The League were reintroduced to stimulate economy and has been opened for two years already. Though there are already a League Champion not long after the league were reintroduced. Ame also added that Gym Leaders there use the combination of terrain, climate and weather conditions for their advantage, giving destructive effect to even simple pokemon moves. According to Ame, even Reiss' fellow rival, Cain, despaired at Restoria Region. Hearing such inviting challenge, Reiss prepared her Gallade and main team roster, then embarked for Restoria Region. And Ame wasn't wrong. Restoria League is a real deal, even for legendary tier Trainer like Reiss. No wonder her rival, Cain, felt despair although he's challenging Gym for the type he specialize in, the Poison-type Gym. For each gym, it takes Reiss four to seven times of re-challenging the Gym Leader for each types. The only gym that cause Reiss so much difficulty is her father's own gym back in Lacross League. Back then, her father knows all her tactics and team's strength, added with his pokemon's fighting specialty. It takes her seven times until she finally defeat her father. In this Restoria League, every Gym Leaders gave her the same difficulty. Yet she perservere and continues to win despite so much losses. Reiss' Mega Gallade proved to be her lucky charm. Everytime when she's in dire state of losing, her gallant knight strive the crisis with his speed, evasion and critical damages. Even when she faced Restoria's Elite Four and much more crisis befall her, Reiss' Mega Gallade, Gawain, still remain her spark for comeback. That's what Reiss believe until she defeated the last of the Elite Four. His words after their battle spell the doom before Reiss. "Reiss, you and your team are really strong. You and your Gallade together are much more stronger. Yet, I want you to remember my words and never, ever, forget it ... Even with this level of strength and tactics, you doesn't have even a grain of sand of chance to win against Restoria's League Champion." Reiss' make sure she remember that words but she only thought that the Restoria's League Champion is two or three times harder than Elite Four. Even if she won't win in first or second try, she will win sooner or later. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Reiss look sharply at the Restoria's League Champion. Or, it's to more that she recognize that person, no, she could never not recognize that face. The Restoria's League Champion is the weakest trainer that she ever know in her whole life. "Heh, you still wearing goth loli dress like that ? I don't know if you're a homosexual but guys that fall for you are sure heartbroken when they knew you actually a guy, Mel" - Reiss concealed her despair with sarcasm towards her opponent. "Is that all, Reiss ?"- Mel answered with a very sweet and girlish voice. Anyone who heard it are sure mistaken it for young girl's voice but the reply contains no emotion at all. Reiss heart filled with rage, yet she still maintained her composure. Seeing Gawain standing with a little energy he had left, Reiss racked her brain for any strategy she could think. Yet she couldn't find any. Mel's Snorlax is too much strong. It had KOed five of Reiss' pokemon in a row. Even though Reiss team is make up of Fighting-types, that Snorlax defeats them without taking too much damage. Reiss remembered the Elite Four's reminder on how she doesn't even have a chance of winning. Reiss cannot accept this. Losing to the weakest pokemon trainer she know would bring shame to her reputation as 4 League Champion. Losing her composure, she orders Gawain by using telepathy. As a Psychic-type pokemon, Gawain could use telepathy and converse with human language but this time, he couldn't even spend any strength to meaningless conversation. "Gawain, use [Close Combat] !!" - Reiss shouted in Gawain's mind Without hesitating, Gawain muster all his strength and dashes towards his opponent, greatly reduce the range between them. Then he rush Mel's Snorlax with his fists and elbow blades, using all his martial art techniques that he hone for years. "Master Smile, evade the attack" - Mel softly order his Snorlax. As a pokemon with human intelligence, Gawain cannot comprehend what happened next. Even Reiss felt like she was dreaming. Mel's Master Smile evaded Gawain's [Close Combat] rush like it's nothing. A large pokemon like Snorlax could never evade high speed attacks like that, all they can do is guard against it. Yet Master Smile is doing the impossible. He evade Gawain's attacks by hair's thickness and not taking a single damage. After Gawain's [Close Combat] finishes, the Snorlax called Master Smile retreat by three steps back and taking offensive posture. "Master Smile, use Giga Impact" - Mel said to Master Smile. At the same time, the energy from the littered crystals and rainbows aura resonated. Master Smile absorbed the resonating energy and dashes towards the weaken Mega Gallade. Like announcing his victory, Master Smile roared and it's paws pounds his opponent. [Giga Impact] The very mountain range is shaken.
  16. Hello Reborn Evolved. This is my first time posting my pokemon fanfiction here and I hope you'll enjoy it. Any comments or review can be posted here: http://www.rebornevo.com/forum/index.php?/topic/23120-nagisa-hideyoshis-fanfic-comments-review-and-notifications/
  17. THE HYPE IS REAL. THIS DAY, HUMANITY RECEIVE A GRIM REMINDER...

    REBORN EPISODE 16 IS NEAR ~

  18. Oh no, this ticks me off ... First he is 3 League Champion and born with silver spoon but now he's a homeless guy with no Pokemon ? Now I want to read more ...
  19. It's bugging me for a while now, but why Rainbow effects are considered a field instead of weather ? Since it can be created by combining Sunny weather and Rainy weather, it's akin to a weather effect rather than field effects. At least, only I felt that way Don't.Ever.Let.Your.Snorlax.Has.Insomnia
  20. If I were a Gym Leader, my type probably be normal Normal-type gym: Team Type: Normal Pokemon: Chansey, Braviary, Wigglytuff, Zangoose, Snorlax (Main), Exploud Puzzle: Labyrinth covered with rainbow (even trap holes are hidden with rainbow). Good luck finding the way to me or finding exit Field: Crystal Field + Rainbow weather (Imagine crystal littered mountain top with rainbows above, beautiful isn't it?) My tag line would be: People always find themselves bewitched by beautiful things up above, not knowing they are falling down a cliff. You don't want to face a Snorlax when it's like this...
  21. I once used Grimer and Muk in early game to counter Fern and Julia. It was good 'ol days stalling them... Many don't think you're useful. but you're the Great Witch of Poison Stalling
  22. Deal with it people. why not go build a good team for upcoming E16 instead ? You can expect Fern kicking your team again or just being a sore loser in the next episode...
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