I'm no certifiable expert on mapping, but I've noticed your maps seem to be bit blocky. Most people try to round out edges to make them more interesting. The river also kind of bothers me by how straight it is. Also, I'm not sure of the purpose of this map, but there seems to be a lot of walking, I hope you plan to populate it with trainers, but I feel like you can add a bit more to make it not feel as empty as it so far seems to me. The flowers help, just not enough.
And hold on, you just copied your first map and made some edits to make it into a second map, didn't you? You didn't think I would notice that even the flower placement was identical on the left half of the map!
So I'm a bit confused on this, because at first I thought you were making it like this because you planned on at some point in a game switching one map for another, to make it seem like someone cut out a new path for you to tread down, but then I realized another path entirely disappeared...
Oh! I get it, you were just indecisive on whether you wanted the player to exit from North or South.