Darvan Korematsu

@Omega

Well then welcome I guess. One look at my prof pic will tell you all you need to know.

Just realized I had two characters that have the potential to Mega Evolve. Honestly, I don't wanna touch that with a ten foot/meter stick. I just like having my characters to develop who they are and not let Mega Evo dominate who they turn out. The subplot I have for my Latias works out where she obtains a Mega Stone, but again I want nothing to do with Mega Stones for right now.

Indeed what these guys said is right. Just can it and one of you settle for something different. It's not a good sign when a third party has to come in and break up the debate. I've been looking around at certain places the Senpai has touched, and it wasn't pretty. Looking forward to Ch. 2 reopening. Yash has something cool planned for the Lati siblings. EDIT: Prolly gonna want to mark up which characters belong to who. Makes it a lot easier to see who to talk to about certain things.

Well I'd suggest replacing Cofagrigus with Gardevoir. I've used her on two playthroughs, and a Calm Mind Moonblast will decimate her most of the time. Otherwise, Infernape can cover EVERYTHING that Gardevoir can't. Malamar dies if you can use a strong Fairy or Bug move early w/o Superpower buildup. And Tauros are the best way to go on Route 1 with grinding b/c they are less bulky that Bouffalant and easier to kill.

Read a dark fanfiction story by affTwill on Fanfiction.net. I can't remember the title right now, but I do remember it was a Pokemon fanfic with a Gardevoir who has some interesting motives. Also been reading some stories by Kenneth Oppel. He makes high fantasy stories. The -wing series he made was about a bat, but it sounds way more awesome than you'd think. Also the Airborn series about a kid enamored with zepplins and his adventures on such vehicles

I'm not saying it's bad, but it's small shit like that that gets me Tyran and the others too. Like you slung together a completely new story element barely out of the gate and talks of a ch. 3 when pretty much no one has looked at 2 yet. Also I'd cut the 6-char limit because you yourself will get tangled in the web of story and blow this up if you screw up on the plot. EDIT: we're just trying to help you make this better. Please heed our advice. I'm done for now b/c I have class in the morning.

Welp he did it. Ch.2 already up.

Jesus Christ that was a fast RP chapter. I'm used to a week or two, but two days? Wow. I guess that's fine for a dry run. I used to co-host two RPs - for Pokemon and Walking Dead - on Reddit and I'll say that chapters usually would have gone about the time I'm used to. I'd also like to voice my opinion on how six characters is a little over-extending. Heck, when I made my two characters, I made them as simple as possible by making them travel together so I wouldn't have to remember illogical, complicated webs. Also as Commander and Wander have said, some didn't post at all. Yash and I talked about a subplot that me, him and EonicEevee could work together on, because the Lati bios fit hand in hand with each other even though I (making the latter Lati character) never intended it. Still haven't heard from Eonic at all on the sign-up. Either way, you did a good job for your dry test run Tyrannt, and I give you credit for that.

Well I'll throw my 2 cents for suggestions on teams. I'll stick to team one for this round. The team needs a little polishing and you should be able to make it work. Ferrothorn. Imo, Toxic should be a no-no on Ferro. Either swap it for protect or thunder wave for scouting or speed control respectively. Solid for the rest of it. Dusclops/Delphox I know that Frisk is a good ability, but I'd suggest something a little different. Swap Dusclops for Prankster Sableye and slap aFlame Orb on it. You can send it out on walls or tanks and Switcheroo it for Lefties. Beware of Mega Stones and getting burned by Orb. Delphox I'd replace with Talonflame, because it's more than viable, and once you use Gale Wings Brave Bird off para so many times, you'll understand why it's OU. Rotom-W Either run a legit Ice user or drop HP Ice for something better like Protect or T.Wave. Would do T.bolt over Volt Switch to net more damage since you don't do the Choice Sets. Beedrill Good generic set. Moving on. Cloyster Focus Sash it since you don't run one Sasher, and replace either Rapid Spin or Exploshun with Shell Smash. Shell Smash is about half the reason it was so amazing last gen.

Alucard and Ulkina "I don't know who I am." Alucard said. "You could call me a Wanderin Soul, but I prefer Alucard. I'm traveling with a Latias named Ulkina. Please wait while I go talk to her, then you tell me about yourself buddy." Ulkina resumed humming to herself, completely forgetting about the large Pokemon that scared her a while ago. She heard some rustling from some bushes and then squealed happily as she saw Alucard plop face-down on the ground,grabbing a map. "Brother you're back!" Ulkina shouted. Alucard dusted himself off and swore to himself. "I found nothing Ulkina except this shoddy map. I wouldn't say it's useful but it is supplementary. " Ulkina grinned. "Better than nothing am I right?" Alucard nodded. "Ulkina. I also saw another purple Pokemon in that clearing. It was a Haunter. It wanted us to go to this place called the Sky Kingdom." "Why though brother?" Ulkina asked "I dunno, but I'm for it if we can get some decent food and shelter." Alucard said. "Nya, then let's do it," Ulkina said. "Ok I guess. Also don't be surprised if someone follows us. I think that Pokemon talking to me back there didn't have intentions of leaving us alone."

Ulkina Caught off-guard by the large Pokemon staring her down, she couldn't help but cringe in fear as the Pokemon rambled on about war but she didn't understand why. "W-why do I need to go? I n-need to wait for brother or he'll be displeased." Alucard He made way to the place Ulkina was, but was stopped by a frantic Haunter gabbling on about a battle or war or something. He simply shook his head. "What battle? I came here right at the end of it. I have to meet my companion."

Aye ok. Had some homework to take care of. On it.

Alucard "Hell is reeks!" Alucard exclaimed to himself digging through the bodies. All these soldiers had nothing interesting on them except for armor that didn't fit. He looked around seeing four different emblems indicating some sort of differentiation between the corpses. Suddenly a hack and spluttering cough caught his attention. He wheeled around to see a poor Gallade with a jagged bone through it's stomach, coughing up blood on itself, staining itself with the crimson liquid. Alucard proceeded to feel around the Gallade's armor for anything useful. The Gallade winced as it felt Alucard pordding it. "What are you doing?" The Gallade weakly asked. Alucard sneered, "What does it look like? I'm scavenging you for useful stuff." The Gallade wheezed. "I got nothing interesting on me. Please leave me to die. My kingdom has abandoned me and I have fulfilled my duty." Alucard smiled. "I'm genuinely sorry for your loss." He then saw a piece of paper on the ground and unraveled it. "Nohing interesting huh?" He then looked over the Gallade, with his eyes glowing a bright pink. "Relax my friend. You will die a warrior's death. I bid you a farewell because you won't be awake to see your last." The Gallade then drooped over and started to lightly snore. Alucard nodded looking at the paper. There were several inscriptions on the map. Four different kingdom names and little landmarks dotting various places. "Hmm, looks like we're in a Meadow of Dratinis. Guess I better get back to Ulkina and tell her." And with that Alucard stopped searching and went for Ulkina.

A big one I've wondered is where the kingdoms are exactly. Like a map of this place would be much appreciated, because my duo Gengar and Latias are just roaming around, but the Gengar finds a writhing soldier willing to cooperate on the location. Like how would I go about that, like where to go, and why, and maybe directions.

Heh it pays to scavenge through the bodies of the aftermath. Let my main search and leave my alt hidden behind a tree because of reasons. (Hint: leaving her to be kidnapped or sommat)

Alucard and Ulkina. The ghostly spectre and petite dragon floated above the ground rather than walked for once. Alucard couldn't put his finger on it, but something major had just happened, judging from the howls and blood-curdling cries he and Ulkina had heard earlier. Ulkina, the Latias, trembled, shaking violently. "B-brother, what was the scary noise?" Alucard patted Ulkina on the shoulder. "It was probably nothing Ulkina." The two of them hopped over a small fallen tree to look at a large clearing, which to their fear had a mass amount of carnage strewn across it. Armored bodies lay bruised and bloodied either writhing or unresponsive. Alucard looked to Ulkina and nodded. "You wait here. I'll look at the bodies for anything of use and we'll go." Ulkina nodded in return and turned around humming to herself while Alucard rummaged through the strewn out bodies.

Y'know what? I'm gonna put my first thing on the chapter 1 thread if people are already talking subplots with me already.

4/10 for sniping me

"Do I really have to put up with this bullshit?" -Every irked person at one point or another.

If I were Champion, I would organize an E4 with different team styles rather than types. For instance, a stall team, hyper-offense, weather, and mono team. I as the Champion would run a balance, because not just one strategy would normally work. The point of mastering battles is to have an excellent prediction and solve-all team. This won't always work, but the joy of being the Champion is knowing there's someone stronger than you. If I were Champ Name: Darvan Region: Vrika (making up names) Age: late 20s Gender: Male Attitude: (see Volkner from Gen 4) Team: Mamoswine, Breloom, Aegislash, Talonflame, Sylveon, Greninja.

I would not be surprised if this becomes a thing, considering Ame has been known to hide doors behind pillars and trees, has an in-game version of methamphetamines, and created a dude that lives alone in the woods with a house full of Pikachu.

I love when random shit just unintentionally falls into line like it does. I made one of my characters (a Latias) have a fitting bio with Eonic's Latios bio and I didn't even read up that bio beforehand. If this app gets approved, a pretty interesting subplot could arise. Still waiting for approval btw. EDIT: Post #96 is the app original.