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702 Okay, guess that sounds good. Take however long the gem needs.

700 Woot. So... Donphan's, Amirite?

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Dude... while it WAS a smart move, I'd really appreciate it if it only works on just the ones that others want sleeping instead 'all' of them (that's if keep it). Atleast personally, I have a decent battle plan, and this gives me a perfect way to 'deserve' the friendship evolution for Lucario. Plus, the ones in actual battle are not just gonna wake up happy like a Snorlax, they'd just go back to battle once woken back up if they have actual reasoning.On a separate note: Would it make sense for a 'Wild, angry Donphan' to try and go after the trainer in an attempt to 'take care of the leader spouting orders'? If so, I've got the perfect 'story' plan. If not, I'll just go 'normal' reasoning.

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Watching as Kiai's Forsight had 'identified' the Donphan, it caught the attention of the Donphan it was aimed at, as well as one that was running behind it. "Well, I guess we've got two to work with. Just means we should even the odds then." With that, he released Nikki right beside Kiai, who had immediately seen the two Donphan now heading towards them and was very suprised by it. "Okay you two, the main goal is to get them to leave, not to take them down. If they try to run back to the forest, let them. Got it?" They both nodded, Nikki doing so nervously, and moved their focus back to the 2 Donphans charging at them. "Okay, Nikki, Use Bubble. Kiai, try and Copycat Nikki and use Bubble too." Listening to the command, Nikki let out a Bubble Attack towards the Donphan and Kiai used copycat to do the same. While the attacks easily hit the incoming Donphans, they ignored what pain came and hit both with a Slam, having the 'follower' Donphan get 'Gooeyed' up after hitting Nikki. "Okay, that didn't go too well, but It's good enough for now." The Donphan's then began their next moves, having the bigger of the two start a Rollout towards Kiai while the smaller one stayed back and used Magnitude. "Kiai, do your best and Counter the Rollout. Nikki, use Protect." Listening, Kiai braced for the incoming Rollout while Nikki Protected. As the Rollout hit the Kiai, the Magnitude had reached and he took both attacks, Countering the Donphan with the pain of both attacks and launching it back. 'Okay, so far so good. Let's just hope Kiai can make it through it alright.'

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Aye Aye Leutenant. PM me if you have anything to use me for... fell so stalled.

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Hehe, well I had it right first and was confused by Tacos. To the un-editing. Can we atleast keep the 'Phanpy in the halls' there, even if it's nothing more than them 'play stampeding'?

Eh, I see no reason not to join in on the fun. @K_H: Uh, I'm pretty sure it's the background students that ran into the buildings, not the Donphan. Otherwise, I fear for Kage and Ryan.

Finding an area by the male cabin once they had gotten back, Robert was simply sitting there looking at Jet's Pokeball. 'You did good, Jet. You were able to finish it off. You ended up proving yourself powerful in your first battle...so was I doubting you near the end?' Looking away from the ball, his attention went to Kiai. Kiai HAD been watching the battle from the sidelines, so maybe he'd know something. "Hey, Kiai. During the battle against the Gibles, did you support Jet fully? Did you have any doubts in him?" Kiai simply shook his head no, and was a bit confused as to what he ment. Is there a reason that he'd doubt Jet? "Oh, I guess that's right. Not sure why I'd even ask, it's not like I even know why I was doubting him." Before Robert could his focus back on the Pokeball, Kiai had a shocked expression and pointed his paw towards the direction of the incoming Donphan, "What's wrong, Kiai? Something up-" Before he could finish, he saw the stampede of Donphan coming in, as well as students fleeing into the nearby cabin. With that, he got up and looked towards Kiai. "Hmm, did someone annoy a herd of Donphan. Well, it's not like it can be changed. How about we try to help scare them off?" With a nod yes and a 'Rio ru,' Kiai got ready and tried a Foresight on one of the Donphan, to 'snipe' it away from the group, in the hope that limited attention would make it more handle able, exchanging Jet's ball in exchange for Nikki's if necessary.

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676 And so, the dirtier jokes may soon die...

What do you think of Chapter 2? Did you enjoy it? Was very good, very story driven but that's really the point of this. What about my writing? Where can I improve? No ideas. Which characters under my control feel real / which characters need improvement? Phoebe, Alvin and Evan(technically he works as an NPC). They all show quirks that feel human yet amazing. Who is your favorite NPC and why? Really can't decide, so many just fit so well. Who is your least favorite NPC and why? Eh, I'd have to go with Kristen. Nothing against her as an NPC, but she's not the kind of person I'd like to meet IRL. She's good for what she was for, but I can't see much good until some positive light is set. What do you think about the darker parts I included in this chapter? (Hydreigon and Celebi) Perfect dark situations. I was shivering when reading it all. Which Legendary do you think will befriend your character? And why? I know well enough that it's all up to your choices... I'm just (secretly) crossing my fingers for a Sword of Justice, specifically Cobalion. Similar morality, ready to fight for their belief's... But yeah, I'm good with anything. What do you expect to happen in Chapter 3: Winter Cup? Mostly battles, but I think there were hints at 'something darker going on'. If your character was approached instead of Slade; how would he / she react? Refusal at the idea, confusion of how 'Team Aqua' came back, likely need to be held back before doing something out of anger. Is there anything else I can improve upon? Like before, no idea.

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