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all my younger relatives have already seen zootopia so no one wants to be my beard for it ლ(́┰ω┰‵ლ)
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guys. guys. and gals too for that matter, look at me being inclusive. Iggy Pop is good again, and damn when Iggy is good, there's just no one better. The first lines gave me chills; "This house, is as slick as a senator statement This job is a masquerade of recreation" enjoy on your own risk. Thank you Shing for teaching me how to post videos, let's hope this works
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pros of gal pals: you can buy long cardigans and soft t-shirts at hm and pretend it's for them
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Viridescent's Wandering Art Thread [Art: Drawing/Feedback]
Halloween replied to Ironbound's topic in Creative Works
holly molly this is super fucking great. especially the personality you put into everything; look at them expressions! would that garchomp propose to me i'd probably be in jail isn't that bestiality?? ew be floored. anyway i do have sum criticism so time for Proper Capitalization of Letters™ to show how serious i am. The lighting on the Scizor; it looks like there's several small light sources that somehow only hit one point of its body in really sharp speculars, sometimes in the middle of parts that's otherwise in shadow, which drives me crazy. I'd also want some specular on the wings,- 257 replies
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my leg strength: all the force of a great typhoon – my arm strength: no kitty you'll have to walk
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Justin's Story Episode 5: The Blackwater-gate scandal
Halloween replied to Damage's topic in Creative Works
Man you're so pro at taking criticism, super kudos @ that one society progress sentence, it isn't the message that's confusing, it's the wording. It's like... It's two questions in one, ya know? So happy to hear about Cain thou, he's my fave too. It's like, I look at myself and I think "all these fucking kickass independent women and he's the one you like?", but the heart wants what the heart wants ♥ And I feel you about Fern. I'm writing Reborn fic as well, and it's like... Should I write him as the irredeemable douchelord assberry he is, or should I try to make him sympathetic somehow? I -
'Ello. Hope it's not too late for this; I enjoyed your short and thought I should give you some thoughts on it. First of all aaaahhhh post-apocalyptic warrior girls are my faves gimme more gimme more. Out of 16 paragraphs, some only a sentence long, 7 started with "she". While sentences starting with "she" will, quite naturally, occur frequently, in the beginning it was nearly every sentence, which... Yeah, you know where I'm going with this. "It was almost time…" for what? Haven't filled out your daily get-attacked quota? And then the alcohol. I know I'm reading into t
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webcam doesn't add 10 pounds but instead opts to shave my hairy-ass arms http://img.pandawhale.com/post-29539-thanks-I-guess-gif-Imgur-young-NWus.gif
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Justin's Story Episode 5: The Blackwater-gate scandal
Halloween replied to Damage's topic in Creative Works
Okiedokie, inspired by a certain excellent thread on writing critism, I decided to give it a go. And to start it off, I will parrot everything Code: PIRULUK (what a fucking awesome name) said. It does bother me a bit that it is script format... And yet isn't script format. Script format is harder to read to begin with than a regularly formatted story, so I do think you should take it all the way if you wanna to stick with it. Secondly... I think you should go back and edit the the earlier posts as well to make the text smaller. I had to copy this entire thing into Evernote and then -
I'm slowly morphing into one of those semi-vegan healthy food nuts I've spent my whole life making fun of
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There's just nowhere near enough pictures of my cats on this site http://i.imgur.com/4qyH77t.jpg
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42, the answer to ultimate question of life, the universe and everything.
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Here too, suddenly it started snowing outta nowhere 39 let's do this gaaaiz
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Writing 101: The Importance of Feedback and Criticism
Halloween replied to Commander's topic in Creative Works
aah this is real helpful man, thankchuu. no seriously what did you do with "setting the world" i hate it when i don't catch puns -
That feel when you're trying to eat a kiwi and there's a spoon on the kitchen counter which you can't remember what you used for, but hey, how bad can it be; and then 30 seconds later your eyes are tearing up and you're dry heaving because fuck – cat food.
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4ever 21
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going through the "what do you look like" thread like https://media.giphy.com/media/QAzTPBmKzS9gY/giphy.gif
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why is this goddamn game making me learn chess
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