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8/10 Cute, nice colors, but something about the style feels weird to me...

8/10 Eh.

Never ask Nagi to comfort you. She's shit at it.

Nagi looked at the kid who was definitely in shock after killing somebody else for the first time. It was definitely something she knew the feeling of all too well. She had definitely not dealt with it well when it happened to her. Otherwise, she would not have been here. But, even then, she had been a magus for a fair amount of time before it happened to her. This girl was likely not even a month in with her powers and she was being forced to see a grim reality. No matter how much Nagi liked to distance herself from others, she sure as hell did not want to see someone driven to a similar path as her own. "Look, kid. You can still remember the impression you had when you sliced into his flesh, right? Then let that memory stick. The fact that you can react like this means you at least have some understand the weight of another person's life, after all. You have yet to fall far enough to become a someone like me who drenched in the blood of others." Nagi tried her best to say something comforting…tried to. Of course, the assassin was never the best when it came to comforting others. After finishing her little speech to Kindle, she let the transformation break and returned to her normal form. "Mage hunters, huh. Yet they couldn't even mask their presence. What kind of hunter or assassin can't even…" She trailed off before realizing she was going off on a tangent. "The possibility of an impending faction war is starting to get worse and worse if the Peacekeepers are attacking a Preserver Lieutenant, huh…" She gave a quick frown and sat down on the couch where she was sitting before. "Then, let's continue setting up this meeting. Last I remember you were positing conditions."

After some self-deliberation, I might end up just going for Trapinch. Though…I'm still gonna have Mie press all the buttons because I can.

I don't know what I want... I'm just gonna have Mie press all the buttons. Maybe…not sure...

You're fanboy ranting over what Commander's character said. Just remember that.

GRIMM DRAGON! GRIMM DRAGON! WE GOT A GRIMM DRAGON HERE!!

So hold off on Confuse Ray, then. Got it. Though I'm not sure what move set changes for Vulpix would be feasible at this point...

I really can't think of anything to add onto Snorunt's move set since it's pretty good at this stage. Vulpix's though…would it be too OP for her to have Will-o-wisp and Confuse Ray at this point. She already has Will-o-Wisp at the moment.

>Starve Venom Hype >Earthbound Gods Hype >Yuya still not summoning OERD >Yu's becoming one Hype Why isn't it next Sunday yet?

Isolda Grace, Lilith. Time: 1st day of the Year of Rebirth. Afternoon 1:32 PM "A friend, huh…" Isolda took another short sip out of her glass. "Well, there's nothing wrong with considering me a friend. We do see each other on a near-daily basis." She put the glass down and focused on Lilith while holding her arms up with her elbows and resting her head on the back of her hands. "Though, we never really talk too much. So, since we have time before the Benediction, how about it? Let's get to know each other better." Isolda rarely made much contact with others outside of the maids who she sucked blood from in the recent years. Perhaps, having a friend to converse with would help pass some more time. After all, the undying had an eternity to live and living in an isolated definitely became boring at times. "So, feel free to ask any questions to this great Isolda before you." She gave a simple smile to the friend across from her.

Nagi's looked upon the unconscious form of the man who she had knocked out. The air around her began to decompress and diffuse as it returned to a normal atmosphere. She put her foot on the man and nudged at him. He was not dead but she had not been able to incapacitate him while keeping him conscious. That was definitely annoying. She then turned back to Hikaru and Kindle and walked towards them. "Tch. I guess that's what happens when I'm way too used to consistently delivering lethal force." She flipped her long black hair as she left a scowl on her face. "So much for interrogating the bastards immediately. So, do either of you have any idea as to who our little assailants were."

8/10 Pretty decent. Style is nice. Background is just eh...

I'm pretty sure the "Or so one would think" portion of the summary would be a red flag...

Joke's on you all. I already write fan fiction.

Best girl. Nobody can deny.

You're better off than I am. Whenever I see an insect flying around that has that signature yellow and black, I kinda freeze up or run for the hills…except the hills have more bees!

From personality alone, the ones who would unconsciously deck the person using Wake-Up Slap would be…Nikki (who's awake), Johanna, and possibly Lloyd. Then again, slapping people awake would be out of character for Yuzuki…Nikki on the other hand...

Nyahaha. I was just making a joke about how Yuzuki's glasses never left her face the whole time. The two who are awake should slap the others into consciousness.