Magus

Max woke in a daze, his head still foggy from the blast. He was teleported out of the blast by his Gardevoir at the last second. The local police department arrived and immediately he got to work. "You there form a search party, you set up a parameter, no one enters , you get me a list of all people at the train station." "Just who do you think you are" came a voice from behind. "Maximilian Christian Pokemon World Police, this entire crime scene is under my jurisdiction, can I help you." he said as he showed is trainer card and badge. "Actually yes there was a trainer on board, she came here to take on the Reborn league, but we must have got separated by the blast," said the silver head girl. "Alright on it", Max said as he made a mad dash back into the ruined train station. The building was in ruins, broken glass lay everywhere, the trains fallen, girders leaning, but no fire? There wasn't a fire and simple logic would say that every time a bomb went off, fire was always to follow, but not now. Max didn't like the feel of the place and just wanted to find the trainer and get out. He ventured deep into the belly of the beast until he came across a lone trainer unconscious. He shook her, a little violently, but she woke quickly. "Are you hurt, any broken bones, yes, no maybe so" She shook her and together the two made a dash for the exit. Upon leaving the area, the building began to sake violently, without thinking, Max picked up the trainer and sprinted as fast as he could and jumped out the building as it came crumbling down. "Dang haven't ran like that in a while. So how are you?, not hurt I hope." "No I'm fine, thanks for saving me, my name is Alice, I came here to Reborn to take on the league, you?" "Nah, I'm too old for that stuff, besides I'm here for police business, I wish you good luck in your challenge, you might want to go talk to the league organizer to sign up" Max said. He continued with "actually I wouldn't know who was the organizer if they were in front of me. "Actually I'm in front of you, my name is Ame, I'm the manager of the league, all trainers wanting to sign up must go to the community center for registration" "Well there you go, hey wait a second, since your the manager of this place, that would make you the mayor of this city?" "Yes", said Ame. " So tell me, why is that Reborn is in such a bad condition, and why haven't you contacted us earlier?" "We have, but there is a jamming signal, I'm the one who should be mad at you for not checking up on things, and relying on one of your spies to get information" Ame scowled. "Ahahah your right, whew looks like I need a burn heal. Anyways, about the bomb, I must ask do you have any leads on who might have done it?" "Well" said Ame, but was interrupted mid sentence. " DID I HEAR A BOOM?", said a girl who came running down the street very fast. "Well speak of the devil, here she is, that is Julia, Reborn's electric gym leader and demolition expert," Ame said with a little regret. "So your an expert on explosions?" said Max with a hint of doubt in his question. "Yup, I'm the best when it comes to booms and explosives," said Julia. "Then tell me why is there no fire, almost every explosive device causes a fire of some sort, but not here, why?" " Well that is a good question, but I don't know. Hey why the funny looks you guys?" said Julia as Ame gave some what of a dirty look. "Do you think she set of the bomb?" asked Ame. No she doesn't have a reason to have done it. Well back to square one with no leads." said Max. "Well I did see a shady guy running north on my way here," said Julia. "I might have a shot, go Lucario," said Max as his idea unfolded in his head. "Lucario, I want you to sense the area of its auras, find any black ones." "Well I'll be, I'm going after this rat, he shouldn't have gotten to far. I'll take him to the center once I get him," Max declared, and with that began to run down the street. "Alice you should go to the community center, I'll register you into the league and you can begin your challenge," said Ame. " I guess I'll go back to my gym until you guys get some more leads on who did this," and with that they walked away. End of chapter 1 So yeah wasn't lying when I said I going to attempt to write, probably going to advance the story once every Saturday or Friday. So did you like the first chapter? please give me some feedback and your thoughts. I also wrote a prologue to explain Max, the main character in this piece. To prologue http://www.pokemonreborn.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=5336

welp looks like Alice won time to go write.

No I has no T.V, time to go find it online.

Do I even need to say.

All I want is waterfall for Gyarados.

Not a bad idea Also Khayoz I'm not going anywhere.

To M I have been in the Reborn region scouting the area and I have found many shocking things. The lake that was once a pure habitat for pokemon has become putrid with sludge. Reports at the Jasper Ward police department have read that the forests in the area have come to life and are very violent. After the collapse of Yureyu due to unnatural earthquakes, and these events to follow have made pokemon flee the area and are becoming more and more scarce. I believe that if we, the Pokemon World Police investigated sooner, Reborn would not be in such a state. I'm asking you to look into the matter, and stop whatever is causing such chaos. I'm sending you a train ticket along with a map of the area. You should arrive in the Lower Peridot station at approximately 16:00, and with that I wish you best of luck. From L It has been four years since the formation of the Pokemon World Police, a large organization that spans all the regions to keep crime down. After the Galactic insurrection was stopped, and Ghetsis in bars, the world seemed peaceful, but why are these events happening? The detective pondered on these questions before going to sleep. " All passengers, the train will be arriving into the Peridot station in in approximately ten minutes" said the conductor on the intercom. The detective looked down at his belt to see the pokemon he brought with him. A Gengar , an , a Typhlosion, an Milotic, Dragonite, a Lucario and his first pokemon, Gardevoir. After a while the train docked into the station, and all was silent, but not for long, as the silence was broken by screams and a loud KABOOOOM. The detective felt a large wave of energy knock him down and then darkness. End of Prologue So this is the prologue, nothing really big yet, however things will pick up in the first chapter. There is a lot of M's back story I have yet to cover, but you will learn about him soon. As for the hero, he/she will be introduced next chapter come Saturday. As for M, his name is Maximilian Alexander Christian. I'm always looking for feed back, so please feel free to comment, and with that I give you a farewell.

Looks like Ame is trolling us..... again

Well sort of, first of all thank you community for being frikkin awesome. I've been here for a couple of months and have met some cool guys and for that I thank you for giving me something to do this summer. Now for the story, I want to know who should be the hero of the story. I've remember reading that the names of the two actually have cameo names and was wandering if anyone knew them. That being said, my story is not going to focus on them, they are going to be in it and do play a major role, but they won't be the perspective of this story will be from my character that I will use, which is why the gender will not be a problem as far as plot. Tomorrow, I will post a prologue, explaining my character, his name, and his purpose for coming to the Reborn region, the first official chapter will be posted on Saturday. On one final note, I want to say thank you to all those who worked on the game, and if Ame was the only one who wrote the story of the game, then that's boss. I used to write a lot in my free time, when I was a kid, but lost interest when I went to high school, and began to focus on math. Now I fee that motivation again and promise that this will be my best story I've wrote. So with that I give you all a farewell and thanks for letting me find my lost passion.

Yeast.

Banned for having a bansecption.

Banned for having a zombie play the cello.

Taboo

Bye Nickaboo, I'm glad I found you on youtube an good luck in Mexico.

personally I prefer Mamoswine because he gets iceshard making him an excellent revenge killer.

Didn't realize it was Shanco's birthday, well happy birthday. Just think next year you can legally drink in the U.S (then again, I don't know if Canada has drinking laws)

Sup, I'm transiting this message from 12,000 B.C from a rock. Any welcome to Reborn, make sure deposit your sanity in the basket bellow.

I'm so tough I didn't cry when Sephiroth killed Aeris.

Banned for having a shiny Ralts

Syther used wing attack It's SUPER EFFECTIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yellow

I can't believe I forgot the sages.