+Infinitas

[Will]

Ok, I'm gonna try and work in some action-ish scenes, maybe some Pokémon battles after this page...

[i][b]Say hello to Kajj! I don't know what else to put in this bit of dialogue...[/b][/i]

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[dorogon]

Holy blezerker a new +Inf is up.

[Ninpen]

New meme: LOLBULLET.

[N8theGr8]

>Blez picked up the wrong Map

>Assos "Son of a bitch, Blezerker"

Hardest laugh I had in a long, long time. Thanks Will.

[Blezerker]

[quote name='N8theGr8' post='5086' date='Sep 28 2010, 09:04 PM']>Blez picked up the wrong Map

>Assos "Son of a bitch, Blezerker"

Hardest laugh I had in a long, long time. Thanks Will. [/quote]


I gave them the map of texas for the lulz

[Will]

Finally some action is going to be put in soon...

[b][i]I love mountains...[/i][/b]

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[AZKnight]

Remind me why they're at the base of a mountain about to climb it? The story still seems to jump a lot.

[Ninpen]

Yeah, it goes from Kajj in the subway station to WTF MOUNTAINS?!?!?!

Aside from that, I liked the page.

[Will]

[quote name='AZKnight' post='5211' date='Oct 4 2010, 07:22 PM']Remind me why they're at the base of a mountain about to climb it? The story still seems to jump a lot.[/quote]
They're just checking the place out a bit, seeing around, etc.... In +Infinitas, Will likes to seach places thuroughly in order to find Amor's OT. I probably didn't make that very clear at all, now did I...?

[Ninpen]

*checks*

You haven't mentioned the OT anywhere in the story. So no, you didn't make it clear.

[Will]

Sorry, I'll try to add more details later in...

[Will]

So [b]THAT'S[/b] why he was on the mountain... It all makes sense! [color=#000000;background:#000000;' onmouseover="this.style.color='#FFFFFF'" onmouseout="this.style.color='#000000']I suppose...[/color]

[b][i]Generic Ursaring is generic.[/i][/b]

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[AZKnight]

Well the strongest Pokemon do seem to be on mountains. Mt. Silver, Stark Mountain....Ummm, Mt. Reborn >_>

Facial expressions are still excellent as ever. Like how Gardevoir looks exhausted from the hike, so often people fail to show the condition people are in and they just...stare. And then there was a bear! Besides that, good page. Feel like we're getting into a minor plot with this battle hopefully. Even if it just lasts this page and 2-3 more pages, that would be fine.

NON POKEMON FISH!!! O_O

[Will]

[quote name='AZKnight' post='5325' date='Oct 7 2010, 06:54 PM']Well the strongest Pokemon do seem to be on mountains. Mt. Silver, Stark Mountain....Ummm, Mt. Reborn >_>

Facial expressions are still excellent as ever. Like how Gardevoir looks exhausted from the hike, so often people fail to show the condition people are in and they just...stare. And then there was a bear! Besides that, good page. Feel like we're getting into a minor plot with this battle hopefully. Even if it just lasts this page and 2-3 more pages, that would be fine.

NON POKEMON FISH!!! O_O[/quote]
Thank you good sir.

I envisioned Reborn to be like Orre [i](Colloseum and XD: Gale of Darkness)[/i] where wild Pokémon are very scarce.

Non-Pokémon animals are going to be referenced, like, hypothetically, if I decide to point out what a cheeseburger was made out of, I'd say "cow" instead of "tauros."

And for what the mountain shall be called is for you guys to decide.

[Maelstrom]

Quick, get in the fetal position! Then it will be less painful when it crunches your spine in its jaws and then eats you.

[Will]

I thought Gardevoirs were supposed to [i]protect[/i] their trainers...

[b]Smudge, smudge, smudge...[/b]

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[Ninpen]

I think we encounter a dilemma:

Mainly, that we have so many characters to introduce, but you want to have it broken up a bit.

I don't quite know how to solve this: especially since, 20 pages in, the plot still hasn't [i]truly[/i] begun.

[Miss Kitty]

Will....
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TWIZZLERZ!

[Will]

Reasons why I love the Pokémon Sceptile.

[b]Fancy Sceptile is fancy.[/b]

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[Ninpen]

So strange, and so random.

AWESOME.

[AZKnight]

I like to see the items that Pokemon use drawn with them. I'm going to wager with Silva that it is a....Focus Sash. Either that or a Choice Scarf, but Sceptile is too fast to need that. Silva appears to have come out nicely, the head shape being spot on. The tail might be a little too detailed compared to artwork/sprites, but it still looks nice and is probably better for reality sake.

But dear lord I already do not like the attitude of Silva. Just...way too much talking and dramatic overtones. If you were to ask soup or salad, I think Silva would turn it into the next great Shakespearean work. And then to call the Ursaring a villain? For all you know it's a mother defending the territory and safety of her cubs. Pshaw!

[Ninpen]

Oh please, Knight. Comics aren't exactly Shakespearean in their execution, in that everything manages to totally make sense. Remember, this is a universe where random creatures exist that can defy the laws of...everything, really.

Besides, saying 'villain' is merely for dramatic effect.

You villain.

[AZKnight]

Yes, I know this. It was just part of me showing distaste with the character of Silva and making fun of him/her (I can't tell what gender name that is). Doesn't mean there is anything wrong with the characterization, I just don't like it. It happens and I'm allowed to poke fun at it. So keep ye mouth shut, villain!

[Will]

[quote name='AZKnight' post='5633' date='Oct 16 2010, 11:55 PM']Yes, I know this. It was just part of me showing distaste with the character of Silva and making fun of him/her (I can't tell what gender name that is). Doesn't mean there is anything wrong with the characterization, I just don't like it. It happens and I'm allowed to poke fun at it. So keep ye mouth shut, villain![/quote]
You are indeed entitled to your own opinion. Also Silva's a guy. Also I was trying to make him fancy. Also that Ursaring's a guy too, can't you tell by the things on it's shoulders? Their up if it's a guy, and down if it's a girl. Although I suppose that'd take some really specific knowledge to really tell... And they aren't THAT far up, so I suppose it can be a girl... *continues to rant about unimportant details for 5 hours* Also it's a Focus Sash.
[color=#000000;background:#000000;' onmouseover="this.style.color='#FFFFFF'" onmouseout="this.style.color='#000000']I, for one, have an opinion on Shakespeare saying that he is awesome. But still, opinions and such...[/color]

[Maelstrom]

Silva's held item sounds like it should be a [s]monocle[/s] focus lense.