I can see why you split gym battle and tourmaline conclusion into two chapters. Add Silver's backstory to E17 and you have quite a lot of drama in this part. I was silently hoping for "I have scars, you're one of them" line, that one was a BIG OOF.
Woow, Julia not so oblivious to everything that happens around her? I'd like to see more of that in game. At first when I played E17 I thought Julia will come to the rescue since she's the only one who saw mc entering the gym. Good thing we have plot armor.
Nonsense. I clearly remember talking to her multiple times whil