Please finish this game. I love the idea. I just love it. Just a small thing you'll have to take into account as the game may otherwise have some ludonarrative dissonance: you are supposed to be in a military society where people is heavily controlled by the army and the police, but, however, a student is allowed to travel freely across the country from a city to another defeating gym leaders. Maybe you should think about controlling where the player can go in order to build the atmosphere and make the player believe that he is there.
If you ever happen to need any help with coding, please don't hesitate to ask me for help. I don't usually help with fan games but I'm in love with your idea. I'll help in everything I can in order to help this project, and well, coding is my thing.