Shamitako

Slowly lowering my suck level on Elise TBH tho, we only won because Kennen spent his time demoralizing the enemy team

Onyx "I'd rather kill this freak now and take out Lancer later." Onyx said after a short deliberation, "Keep it off Lancer for as long as you can, try to set it up for the shot." There was also the matter of Onyx having Lancer's master's life in her hands. Her hope was that Berserker could weaken Lancer enough that she could kill Lancer's master before Lancer could kill her. The concealment spell she had put up wasn't just to mask her from Berserker, but also Lancer. That just left how she was going to keep him alive long enough to take out Berserker. The easiest was to just stick him to the ceiling with magic, similar to how she walked on it herself. She swung him up and then used a spell to create vacuums that attracted his feet to the ceiling above him and allowed those to take him the rest of the way up. Unlike Onyx, his hair and clothes still followed the laws of gravity, making him look slightly absurd. He also wouldn't be able to easily maneuver about since he was unpracticed, giving Onyx the advantage in a fight. Although it was an easy spell to undo for even the most inexperienced of magi, so he could always just detach himself and drop to the ground--assuming he had a strategy for surviving the fall. "Hope you don't mind, but you were getting heavy." She said, smiling sheepishly.

9/10 would be perfect but something feels off with the saturation or maybe proportions

(OOC: Not sure how many thingies I'm going to output tonight, but starting here) Alexus Alexus could be dense at times, but she quickly picked up on what Arturia needed. "Alright, good. The next part is fairly easy, just imagine having a storm around you." She said, "Luckily for the both of us you've got a Fury modifier, which is super easy to use. Just thinking about the storm will make it appear." To demonstrate, Alexus focused her Water element into the storm around her. "There's some fancier applications of it, but as far as I know there's yet to be a natural human who's successfully done more than the storm."

There was actually a discussion on sandbox roleplays not all that long ago and why they tend to go badly here. I think the only currently active and successful sandbox-style RP is Fate/Reborn Personally won't be joining, but I wish you the best ^^ You may soon realize why they all have rules and if I were joining I would totally not abuse the lack of rules

I don't always play Corki but when I do I get a quadra and go legendary #referencingPastPosts Except without the quadra this time, guess I'm rusty from not playing League for three weeks I told them I wasn't good at ADC, but I guess that doesn't matter when Corki owo EDIT: Oh, also, in case anyone was wondering, I was repeatedly playing Yuru Yuri's OP during the entire match, it's what won us the game

Yeah, a good number of RPs you're very unlikely to be writing less than a paragraph for personality, appearance, and backstory I'm not running any goofy RPs ATM or I'd offer to have you join. You could try Pyon's Harem RP, it'd still need more work than you put into the above sheet, but a lot less than OSAF would require

Greeterings, person-type person. Murdoc seems to be out ATM, but I think I can provide you some assistance in getting your sheet to a passable point for when he shows up Firstly, since your post count says "1" I'm going to make the assumption you're new here and thus provide you with some shameless self-promotion in the form of a guide I wrote for scrubs like yourself ^^ http://www.pokemonreborn.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=17996 You should also check out the Grand Hall, as it's specifically made for new Rebornians to introduce themselves Now, onto your character While I'm sure it's not your intention excessive use of the letter Z just screams "Sue" (if you don't know what a Sue is I'd be happy to explain since I didn't cover it in my guide) I recommend heading here: http://www.behindthename.com/ and looking up names with meanings that reference your character's personality (although it's not as helpful for Japanese names) You'll also be in need of a surname This is extremely short and misses out on a lot of possible features you could describe (for one you kind of didn't give her shoes...) I recommend you check out the accepted character's list. you'll note that not a single accepted character has an appearance shorter than a paragraph. The same applies to your transformed appearance As with the appearance, this is very short. In addition to just missing out on possible personality traits, having a personality like this can make your character seem very shallow. Try to avoid using exact opposite personality traits like "childish" and "serious." You should also generally avoid characters who are different "outside" and "inside" unless you're specifically making a character who hides who they are (which if you are doing you should provide detailed reasoning as to why they are doing so) Laziness isn't going to get you anywhere, in fact it's likely to just tick the host off since it shows you're not willing to actually put time into participating Things you should explain: Actually where she comes from. This RP is set in Japan so if she's American you'll also want to explain how she ended up in Japan. You say she's a mercenary, but you also need to explain why she's a mercenary. You said she had to learn a lot of fighting styles, so you should explain why as well as that's not something most people would have to do. And you also need to cover how she got her powers, since it's from a Shard, please explain how she came into contact with the Shard Shards disperse into the person that activates them, assuming they are capable of wielding magical powers. My character, Kindle, had the Shard's power coalesce inside her right eye after it was absorbed into her body. The Shard could simply exist throughout your character or could be gathered into a simple spot, or maybe it could exist outside your character and they could wear it as a piece of jewelry. Magi gaining their powers from a Shard is very rare and unusual, and there's not really any set rule on how it effects them individually That just about covers it With Hope, Lexi ^^

7/10

NRYOOM~ mde ~MOOYRN

Carm>Medusa>Atalanta results in the greatest amount of crit with those three NPs since I think Medusa's crit gen buff scales with NP % ...I think, might only be level Also: FUCK DAILIES STOP CHANGING IN THE MIDDLE OF ME GRINDING FOR THINGS

Thus why I go to the restroom before and get annoyed when I get called to do things Even without the mastery changes, watching picks and bans is actually like really important

Behold, Prisma Illya in all its glory: Empty Eyes: Faceless: Sexual Desire: Also another Railgun:

...And whose fault is it that you don't pay attention? Personally I do think it's gonna be a bit of a pain but is overall a positive change

(OOC: ...) After the tablet had switched to show video and she'd gotten a look at her coworker's faces, Kiyoko had pretty immediately gone back to bed. She wasn't quite rude enough to just leave the tablet where it was, so she set it upright on the bed next to her. She was a little annoyed when her name was mentioned. "I don't see why I would have anything to say, Yuii-chan." she said, dropping her fake accent, "One way or another I'm going to end up naked." She yawned loudly and rolled over so her back was to the tablet. Normally she wouldn't be so rude to a superior, but she was annoyed at the whole abduction thing. Just because this was the "Dark Side" didn't mean everything had to be so edgy and cliche. Kihara could have just sent some whore to give her a message overnight, that would certainly have been more interesting than this.

Onyx Were she on her own Onyx would likely have had no trouble evading the beast, having a passenger made this significantly harder. So when the beast followed along the ceiling after, she seriously considered dropping the other master. Luckily for him, Archer cut the beast's advance off before she could make her decision. She took a moment to observe the fight breaking out between Berserker and the third servant. "Thanks Archer." She said telepathically as she watched, "If the other servant, I think they're Lancer, can keep Berseker occupied can you kill it?" She was fairly confident that Archer had the firepower to kill Berserker, the question was really whether she wanted to risk revealing her identity to Lancer. Take out one powerful enemy now and create a potentially more powerful one later, or leave the first enemy intact but weakened and keep archer's identity secret. While she waited for Archer's reply she took the time to cast a full concealment spell over herself and her passenger, rendering them completely invisible to detection by all but the most skilled of foes. She also realized her arms were getting tired, she probably needed to find some way to put the other magus down without dropping him to the floor and killing him.

So you know how I said I would update things? Yeah, I didn't do that I will update the OP this afternoon after skewl

IC It makes it a lot harder to just grab a new tanky AP champ and toss my Rumble masteries on them to see how they do, but I like it overall

7/10