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  1. About the simple names- it only apllies to major characters. You also put in a lot of discription. Not being negative, but sometimes too much is bad. Usually when I write, I like to keep things simple yet impressionable. If you were to say "a ship" instead of "a dull ship", it would sound bland but if you glorify the interior (if you plan to) that leaves a lot to ponder over for the readers. The reader's creavity matters most in a text.
  2. The depressed ones are the ones whom percieve reality best. /discussion

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    2. Amethyst

      Amethyst

      Although I love Emilie as much as the next plague rat, and am basically going to kill myself when she does her show here and I can't go because I'm po', that's one of the quotes I actually disagree with... I think intelligence doesn't stop at seeing the truth, but also learning how to accept it.

    3. Maelstrom

      Maelstrom

      Dunno if that takes intellegence or just pure gumption. Have the pride, the strength of self to say F that, I have other plans- we are all better than this and I will show you.

    4. Summer

      Summer

      Tis was actually a science experoment. The results? You know it.

  3. In my honest-est opinion, the story has waaaay too much suspense. You're also giving out obvious clues that Earth is going to be attacked. (Unless plot twist, then derp). And the 'seed' thingy is still so vague. You should at least give an estimate of how good it is. (etc Crushing Mountains, mind-control) And lazy readers like me dislike remembering unique names. Try to use something simple- Tom & Jerry were successful because people just couldn't forget the names.
  4. Black color hard to read, too lazy to highlight entire story.
  5. Hark your pic scares me :c

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    2. Summer

      Summer

      Cotton death scary :c

    3. Yuki

      Yuki

      fight me irl

      !!!

    4. The Fush

      The Fush

      Roo The Baka: do you even lift?

  6. I can get you the Pokemon, but it'll take time. I'll need to borrow my friend's DS to trade my Pearl's Bronzor. And you can have the rupees. I admit I stole some from you xD
  7. Tis is more of a request actually, or beg. Okayso, I was looking thrugh the BW2 pokedex. It seemed my ideal team is almost impossible to get before beating the game, and I have a unwritten rule to never train Pokemon not belonging to the region, etc Not training rattata in Hoenn, Training riolu in Sinnoh. I don't know how fast you people can play the game, but what i do know is I need help from game-beaters to make my ideal team. I'm not sure if Pokegen can be used before beating the game, but if it is allowed, derp. I'll need Tympole and Blitzle. Both can't be caught, but their evos can. Get a Zebstrika or Semistoad, breed it and international trade with me.. Anyone who fufills getting them gets 100-200 rupees, depending on stats. (Dream world, shiny, etc) It may not sound much, it may not even sound worth it, but still, I begs. You can also raise the reward price if the pokemon happens to be extraordernary. Pokegen produced pokemon welcome. Anyone willing to take this offer up?
  8. Muk - Toxic sludge with eyes.
  9. I promise to be more active come POv2. Pinky Swear.

    1. Summer

      Summer

      POv2 Android*

  10. More legend pls. Offensive and defensive at the same time? Approved.
  11. Even though I'm CHinese, I have no idea about this. Truly, the Asian belief holds more respect for the unknown.
  12. Granted. Stealth Rocks takes its toll. I wish for Pokemon to be a reality
  13. Trainer class/name: Ruth , cyclist. Start text: Pick up the pace, or you'll be left behind! End text: ...Not so fast! Pokemon: Magnetmite, Magneton Cycling Road/Random street road pls ame
  14. Granted, but everyone cosplays as xenoblade and the real one is unidentified. GG I wish for more money.
  15. Enigma pls do WDITOY thread :c

  16. The toughness award belongs to the Pokeball, not you >.> I'm so hot I burn flames. I'm so tough I crash Doj once with their own spam message. (True story) I'm so tough I oven my hair cause the hairdryer was too cold. I'm so tough I cough blood. Or maybe I'm suffering from a terminal disease. Jkjk
  17. Tis' okay. I'm probably gonna return to the server come 24 October, so hang out maybe?
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