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Episode 12 was the most fun I had writing in some time. Hope you all can enjoy it as much as I did. Obviously wouldn't leave you all without a song. This episode is devoted to the stoic war veteran Soldier. I think its pretty cool and while I never played the COD games, I have them to thank for turning me on to this gem. Here ya go. Hopefully the next episode drops sooner rather than later amiright?
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Florinia recalls Cacturne and summons a Sceptile. The wild tree gecko walks around the field brushing is hands against all of the field. It looks at Soldier occasionally.
FlORINIA
I originally planned on having Sceptile fight Luxcalibur but since you chose to exclude him from the challenge I suppose this will have to do.
Justin throws his hands up in protest.
JUSTIN
Don't sell Soldier off so short. He's the most trained person in this room. He fought alongside Lt. Surge.
Everyone in the room starts murmuring about Surge's legacy.
FlORINIA
(stunned)
Is that correct?
JUSTIN
Yep.
FlORINIA
Then there is no need to hold back.
JUSTIN
Yeah... You're Fern's sister.
FlORINIA
Defender of the forest. One with the will to overcome corruption. Dragon of the sacred garden. Come forth and collect your power.
Florinia reveals a Mega-Bracelet holstered to her left shoulder.
JUSTIN
Ohhhh no....
A swirling ball of pink energy surrounds Sceptile and it quickly evolves into the highly agile Dragon Grass type Mega-Sceptile
JUSTIN
Ummm Soldier. Again don't kill him but at the same time, holding back is not ideal.
FlORINIA
Don't allow them an inch Sceptile.
Ignoring their trainers both Pokémon step towards the other and clash blades showing a sign of respect then return to their former positions readier than ever to begin their battle.
JUSTIN
Blaze wake up this is gonna be awesome.
In that instant both fighters disappear then several clashes can be heard all over the stadium. As if mimicking and old DBZ cartoon their battle transcends speed and all of its known concepts. Teleporting across the field in high speed flashes these two combatants revel in ecstasy throughout their intense battle. The monitor picks up blurs of the fighters along with puffs of sand popping where the two Pokémon clashed. The only ones able to clearly watch the battle seem to be Justin, Florinia and Victoria.
FlORINIA
Sceptile. The field is yours to mold.
Both Sceptile and Soldier separate. Sceptile digs its arms into the sand and they begin to glow a soft light green before trees and bushes and grass cover the entire arena changing it into a grassy terrain.
JUSTIN
So this is why you wanted Blaze out of the picture.
FlORINIA
Indeed. Your young pyro would have set the field ablaze and benefited greatly while my team would have suffered. A grass field would generally be more of a hindrance than a boon given the caliber of trainer in Reborn.
JUSTIN
Fair enough. Soldier let's take this chance to-
Justin is confused by Sceptile's disappearance.
JUSTIN
Wasn't he?
Soldier grunts and jumps on top of the newly formed trees.
JUSTIN
I think it can camouflage.
FlORINIA
A trait learned in its second stage of course maintained in Sceptile's adult form.
JUSTIN
Really wishing I had brought Lux.
Sceptile emerges from the top of the tree next to Soldier. Soldier quickly reacts and swings his blade down towards Sceptile's shoulder but is blocked by a white shield.
JUSTIN
Damn it knows detect! Soldier move!
FlORINIA
Thunder punch.
JUSTIN
NO!
The orbs on the Mega-monster's back light up with yellow sparks and the energy trails down its right arm before it punches Soldier square in the face sending it flying through several trees.
FlORINIA
I fully understand your belief in your team's abilities however I suggest you refrain from underestimating the talent of others. Continuing with such audacity may cost you more than a simple league match in the future.
JUSTIN
Soldier... Buddy? You o-
Soldier stands with static still fresh on his body. The old mantis clearly furious viciously clangs his arms together and disappears leaving a crater in the dirt and grass. In a moment several trees are separated from their stumps and fall slowly through the air, Soldier bounces from tree to tree until he is directly overhead his Mega-evolved opponent. He whizzes downward towards the Forest Pokémon.
FlORINIA
Leaf storm!
Sceptile raises both hands to the sky at his target and leaves, branches and trees from overhead begins to glow green with energy before flying towards Soldier. As they approach their target he disappears in a flash then reappears behind Sceptile. He swings his right arm blade through the ground, tearing it along the swing and everything cuts to black before the impact showing the terrified looks on everyone's faces.
End of episode 12.
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JUSTIN
Or. And hear me out here.
Justin easily breaks free from Serperior and grabs its tail. He then begins to slam it repeatedly into the ground until it passes out from the damage.
JUSTIN
You recognize the true top dog.
FERN
Another fluke. THATS ALL YOU ARE TURD!
Justin rubs his nails on his shirt scoffing at the lost grass trainer.
FERN
YOU THINK YOU'RE SO AWESOME TAKING THE LEAGUE ON. FINE THEN. I'LL CHALLENGE THIS LOSER LEAGUE AND SHOW YOU WHO IS THE BOSS AROUND REBORN!
JUSTIN
Doubtful.
Fern feigns regaining his composure. His face is a giveaway for his actual mood.
FERN
Enjoy this win Justurd. It'll be the last one you have against me.
JUSTIN
Bet it isn't.
Fern leaves the hub in front of Florinia's gym.
JUSTIN
And that ladies and gents is how you knock a clown down a peg.
Victoria cancels the video.
JUSTIN
How was I?
VICTORIA
I used to think you were kinda cute.
JUSTIN
(sarcastic)
Awwww...
VICTORIA
Ready for your match?
JUSTIN
Yeah. I hope it'll be fun.
InT. onYX TRAINER'S SCHOOL Florinia's gym
Justin, Blaze, Soldier and Victoria enter Florinia's gymnasium and much to Justin's shock her gym is a desert themed battleground complete with cacti and dried out tumbleweeds.
JUSTIN
Wait what!
We here a camera snap and see that Victoria has taken a picture of Justin's shock.
VICTORIA
Maybe still a little cute.
JUSTIN
Wait time out. You knew about this?
VICTORIA
I went to the school and my sensei is a gym leader. I know every gym leader's layout.
JUSTIN
I planned for this since I fought Julia.
Florinia
Hello Justin. I am pleased that you have overcome both Meteor attacks and could make it to this arena.
JUSTIN
So you aren't a grass type trainer or...
FlORINIA
Indeed I am. I however has chosen a route that hinders mobility allowing me time to plan.
Justin applauds Flornia's methodology.
JUSTIN
Not bad Flo. Not bad.
VICTORIA
Good luck Justin.
A large viewing space filled with bleachers rests to the side of the arena. The space has a fair amount of students including some of Justin's recent challengers. Victoria makes her way to the front row.
JUSTIN
Julia didn't really believe in my talent when we fought so I didn't get the whole welcome to Reborn, we kick ass speech. I know its not your style but-
FlORINIA
I'm afraid I'm not one to comply with such paltry wishes. It is not my method of teaching or combat to intimidate.
JUSTIN
Didn't think so.
FlORINIA
That isn't to say I am not thankful for your endeavours at the waste center or during our battle with the monster Tangrowth. However those alone fail to merit the awarding of a badge.
JUSTIN
I understand.
FlORINIA
So allow us to begin our exhibition. Follow carefully class. The subject lacks sufficient knowledge to achieve victory.
Justin looks on confused.
JUSTIN
Excuse me?
FlORINIA
Expected outcome. Failure.
JUSTIN
(shocked)
W-was that smack talk? Did she just?...
(Justin is immediately amped up)
Blaze you're up.
Blaze ignites his palm before punching it then enters the sand covered battlefield. He sinks a little but moves around a bit.
JUSTIN
Careful. Sand limits motion.
(whispering)
See those rocks?
Blaze takes notice of the rocks and even the cacti.
JUSTIN
That's your best footing here. Make it work.
FlORINIA
Blaze, your initial partner from what I hear. Perhaps Breloom would be suitable.
Florinia throws out her first Pokémon which is the Mushroom boxer Breloom. Breloom wears a necklace with a large purple ball at its center. It shines brightly.
JUSTIN
Hey Flo, you wanna take the jewelry off?
FlORINIA
I doubt you'll be able to hit it.
JUSTIN
(sighs)
It just runs in the family huh. Blaze get to it. I'll chime in.
Blaze charges forward igniting his fists again upon reaching Breloom he begins wailing on the small mushroom mon which is far to slow or frail to fight at Blaze's level. Justin looks on in confusion.
JUSTIN
Is this bait? This feels like bait.
FlORINIA
Breloom drain punch!
The grass Pokémon launches a glowing dark fist but Blaze easily blocks it and parries with a kick to the chest accidentally breaking the purple gem. He throws up his hands and caws in an attempts to apologize. He looks up to notice that purple liquid is dripping down Breloom's chest and the Pokémon even drinks some of the liquid.
JUSTIN
Oh that's cute a little juice container.
FlORINIA
Breloom Dynamic punch.
Justin starts laughing.
JUSTIN
You think Blaze would ever allow that move to hit. In fact why would you even teach that
(sudden realization)
wait a minute!
Blaze begins to stagger before dropping to one knee in a coughing fit. From Blaze's perspective we see triples of the room and everyone in it. He struggles to stand and by the time he stands Breloom is at his chest with a fully charged Dynamic punch.
JUSTIN
BLAZE DEFEND!
Blaze throws up Protect at the last moment and the vicious blow is deflected by the white shield from his face to his torso. Upon contact we hear a rib break and Blaze is launched into a nearby boulder.
JUSTIN
Was that a toxic orb?
FlORINIA
Correct. By breaking it, a portion of its toxicity has been taken in by Blaze. With this field restricting mobility and the kicking up of sand combined with the poison, its safe to say that Blaze is not in for an easy fight even considering his typing.
JUSTIN
And I'm guessing that this is one of the rare Breloom with the ability-
FlORINIA
To turn toxins into nutrition. Yes Justin I know your team very well. Without the powerhouse of your team here I'd say this battle is far from something you can claim. Breloom, continue your assault with mach punch.
Breloom begins wailing down on a weakened Blaze with a series of high speed hits. After a long painful combo Blaze catches the Mushroom's fist and smiles.
JUSTIN
No energy attacks Blaze! You can't afford it.
Breloom starts throwing punches at close range but Blaze tanks the hits while his eyes are closed and he takes a deep breath.
FlORINIA
Breloom, remove yourself, his next attack will be dangerous.
Blaze's upperbody ignites and he bear hugs Breloom locking away any more attacks. He then charges into a boulder as the helpless grassling screams in pain. After collision with the rock Breloom drops out cold and is quickly recalled by Florinia.
FlORINIA
Blaze is a fair combatant on his own. I commend your efforts even in your weakened state. However your partner's failure to include a complete roster will be your undoing.
Blaze begins panting heavily and drops against the rock he previously crashed into.
FlORINIA
Torterra, come forward.
Florinia summons the second of her team. A large sand turtle with an immense tree and small boulders emerging from its back. Soldier attempts to enter the arena but is stopped by Justin who simply shakes his head.
JUSTIN
Alright Blaze, lets focus on keeping the distance and trying to overcome this poisoning okay bud?
Blaze nods and forces a weak smile.
JUSTIN
Attaboy.
FlORINIA
Torterra Sandstorm.
The mighty Torterra roars and a sandstorm quickly overtakes the field. Vision is distorted slightly in the field. Monitors drop down in front of the audience and overhead to allow people on the outside to view (to some extent) what is occurring on the battlefield. At the moment Torterra is attacking Blaze from a distance with its long vines. Blaze can only block with the poison flowing through his veins and the sand in his eyes.
JUSTIN
Forcing my hand Flo...
FlORINIA
My intention is to hold you as close to the ropes as possible.
Justin turns to the crowd.
JuSTIN
Hear that kids, your teach is kind of a freak.
Florinia turns away from the students blushing.
JUSTIN
Blaze. Get hot then defend.
On the screen we see Blaze jump in the air and release and overheat attack. The large whirlwind of sand turns into a storm of glass and flies all over the arena. Florinia is protected by a barrier but Justin is guarded by Soldier. When all the glass falls to the floor we see Torterra inside of its shell.
JUSTIN
You're welcome.
Blaze jets his way over to Torterra's shell and hops on top. He begins charging fire in both of his hands.
Florinia
Well played. I expect no less from you Justin.
JUSTIN
HA-DOOOOOO-KENNNNNNN
Blaze drops off the top of the shell in front of Torterra's face and releases a full powered Fire blast to the unsuspecting tortoise's face. The immense fire damage leaves residual flames all over the forest on its back rendering the Pokémon useless. Florinia recalls him.
FloRINIA
Time to control the field.
Blaze throws up more bile and Justin walks on to the field to carry him off.
JUSTIN
I'm switching out. This guy is a tad tuckered out. Soldier. You feelin' it?
Soldier gives a cool reassuring nod then slowly enters the sandy field.
FlORINIA
Cacturne, the field is yours.
JUSTIN
This normally goes without saying but killing them is off limits. Or even serious damage.
Soldier nods.
FlORINIA
Cacturne Destiny-
A puff of sand flies forward and lands on Florinia's feet, the next thing to grace her presence is the knocked out body of her cactus partner. The room stares in awe trying to comprehend what has just occurred. Soldier huffs in disappointment brushing off his right shoulder with his left arm blade.
JuSTIN
For those who missed it Soldier first class gave him a shoulder bump to the stomach. For those who wish to repeat it. Do plenty of squats.
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So Onyx Trainer's School or OTS as the top dogs are calling it has a few challengers. J-Stunner, B-Eazy, Soldier 76 and Vicky V. On the opposing side we have bush gardens very own Fern and Florinia. Who will win this epic battle? (I'll be honest its a two parter) Who knows? Read and find out in this high stakes battle to return the school to the students. Justin, Blaze and Soldier have a lot to fend off but when battling the desert rose simplicity may be key. Welcome to Florinia's school for gifted youngsters.
Int. Onyx trainer's school
Justin, Blaze and Soldier are walking down a hallway full of sobbing teenagers and knocked out Pokémon. One of Fern's lackeys from earlier walks from the end of the hall he is guarding to confront Justin and company. A tall blonde pale skinned young man wearing all red.
Skylar
Yo Justin.
Justin raises his hands to stop Skylar from talking, then quickly takes a fighting stance.
SKYLAR
Look, I'd rather not fight you.
Justin
That's because losing isn't fun.
SKYLAR
(sighing)
Tim. Bring her out.
A moment after Skylar's order a couple of men force Victoria out of one of the rooms and into the hallway.
JUSTIN
Where are you going with this?
SKYLAR
Take her, leave and come back when Fern says its okay.
JUSTIN
Couple things. First she can probably beat the brakes off of all of you. Second, we're in your school so this is hardly a threat. And lastly, really need you to focus here.
Justin punches through the wall next to him revealing a portion of a girl's dorm.
JUSTIN
I really don't mind hitting any one of you guys. So you sure you want to give me a reason.
All of the fighters look nervous but take a deep breath when Victoria speaks up.
Victoria
Skylar.
SKYLAR
Yeah?
VICTORIA
Please let me reason with him.
SKYLAR
I... In the room and no funny business.
VICTORIA
Of course not.
Victoria goes into the nearby room and Justin cautiously follows. Blaze and Soldier remain outside. Blaze's watch starts ringing and we see Lucky is calling. The young foul shows Soldier his son before we cut to inside the room.
InT. girl's dorm
Justin and Victoria are inside the room sitting down at the community table.
JUSTIN
So why are you playing along?
VICTORIA
Originally just wanted to see my old room. Do you like?
Justin looks around the dorm at pictures of Victoria, Amaria, Julia, Florinia and another red haired girl.
JUSTIN
Must of been a fun time.
VICTORIA
It was. If you can believe even Fern was occasionally enjoyable.
JUSTIN
I cannot.
VICTORIA
His sister used to be so different. She was much kinder and more open. But then Titania happened.
JUSTIN
I'm guessing that's red over here?
Justin points at the only unfamiliar party in the photos.
VICTORIA
Correct. Tania always had well... A way with words.
JUSTIN
Hm. Why'd you leave?
VICTORIA
I was needed back on Apophyl. Things get out of hand from time to time.
JUSTIN
So then why take the league challenge?
VICTORIA
My sensei thought it would be good preparation. What made you take the challenge?
JUSTIN
My brother already beat the league by me so...
VICTORIA
He.. what?...
Victoria stares in disbelief.
JUSTIN
Oh yeah I have a brother. He sucks.
VICTORIA
Who exactly is your brother?
JUSTIN
Some jerk.
Justin turns away but Victoria simply walks in front of him.
VICTORIA
Justin?
JUSTIN
Lance.
Victoria is shocked by the reveal.
VICTORIA
Wait... THE LANCE?
JUSTIN
Don't give him "the" hes an "a" Lance at best.
VICTORIA
So you came all the way to Reborn so you could one up your brother?
JUSTIN
Yeah. He took out the lame league, so I'll conquer the awesome one...
(under his breath)
Didn't think I'd be fighting my own team rocket.
VICTORIA
Wow Justin. You really want to beat him.
JUSTIN
I beat him once.
VICTORIA
Blaze isn't your first Pokémon?
JUSTIN
(changing the subject)
Umm.... Sure why not. Anyway was there another reason you played along with Team Fern?
Justin gives a cheeky smile hoping to distract Victoria.
VICTORIA
Hmmm
(glaring at Justin)
Fern has a surprising amount of control of the going-ons here at OTS. The students are all so obedient because it affects the funding of their clubs. So losing to you actually hurts them severely.
JUSTIN
So we tell Flo. She owes me one.
VICTORIA
That may be why he's trying so hard to keep you away.
JUSTIN
So you're saying I shouldn't fight these guys?
VICTORIA
I think you could return control to the students by fighting but more importantly Skylar and the rest of the students actually think its hilarious how much you rile up Fern. So he asked if you could take him down and record it.
JUSTIN
Never have I known how much I love school until this moment. Vic.
Justin throws his Pokégear to Victoria. She quickly starts up a video.
JUSTIN
My name is Justin and welcome to Just-an-ass!
Justin and Victoria leave the dorm in a Crib's styled fashion.
JUSTIN
Whats going on Reborn this is OTS you know we represent and this is my campus. Top dog and cat at the same time J-stunner bout to teach the whole class how to live.
Justin walks by Soldier and Blaze who are now wearing sunglasses.
JUSTIN
This is B-Eazy and you know we got Soldier 76 doin work. The bodyguards always guarding Reborn's finest. We heard about some poser trying to take my throne and figured, lets teach em a lesson in class. Vic catch my subjects candid before the king comes in.
VICTORIA
Yes sir.
JUSTIN
She's my mental health advisor. Keeps me all feng-shui and ish.
Victoria heads down the stairs.
JUSTIN
So Skylar right?
SKYLAR
Yeah?
JUSTIN
Any requests?
SKYLAR
If he pisses himself I will gladly give you my trust fund.
JUSTIN
Got any rare candy. For Pokémon. Apparently I have to specify that in Reborn.
SKYLAR
I have a few.
JUSTIN
Send em to Seacrest's garden by Julia's gym and we're even.
SKYLAR
Thank you.
JUSTIN
Its what I do.
InT. ONYX TRAINER'S SCHOOL lower Area
Justin heads down the stairs after Victoria. The students largely playing dumb to Justin's overacting in the school. Everyone goes about their business fully aware of what's to come. Finally Justin arrives at the entrance of Florinia's gym. Fern sits annoyed waiting for his only challenger.
JUSTIN
So this is the screw loose in the tool shed that calls himself... Uhhh. Shrub?... Bush?... Oak?
Fern
Fern.
JUSTIN
He's about to teach a master class in how to respect the top dog.
Justin stares into the camera.
JUSTIN
That's me in case you didn't know.
Fern takes a deep breath and approaches Justin.
FERN
I don't get you Justurd. Why do you always go out of your way to get slapped around. I tried to spare you humiliation and this is how you repay me. Fine. Just remember. I tried to help you.
Fern readies Pokéballs and summons his ace Serperior and Ferroseed.
JUSTIN
How about that. He actually managed to evolve two whole Pokémon. A world record for the world's worst.
FERN
Serperior, Ferroseed. Teach this novice a lesson.
Ferroseed spins wildly rushing towards Justin. He readies a kick like the previous encounter but changes at the last moment and grabs the spinning thorn Pokémon at the last moment. He then proceeds to slam it onto the ground, knocking it out.
JUSTIN
Oh my little grasshole. I've grown. You however have not. After I win today. You relinquish control of the student council to one of those idiots you had control the gate. Red was the only challenge so I say him.
FERN
Justin, if you actually manage to win, I will do just that.
JUSTIN
Why would you win Fern? You've literally never beaten me.
FERN
Because I'm the top god damn dog.
Justin sighs.
JUSTIN
Alright.
FERN
Serperior. Frenzy plant!
A large surge of thorned vines spike through the floor and Justin carefully dodges each one.
JUSTIN
WE JUST HAD A PLANT PROBLEM!
FERN
Serperior Iron tail.
The regal snake's tail lights up and it charges Justin to attack. Justin blocks the hammer-like tail but a puff of smoke reveals a substitute had been in effect.
JUSTIN
What?!
Justin looks around the room confused but is quickly ensnared by the powerful cobra wrapping its body around him.
FERN
You might think you had me all figured out but you didn't. Not using your Pokémon may have been the dumbest decision ever made.
JUSTIN
You missed my lecture earlier.
Justin laughs coyly.
JUSTIN
It was for Blaze and Soldier. I wanted them to see what their leader can do. And spoiler alert. Its anything.
FERN
Yeah sounds great. Serperior crush him until he decides to leave my school.
Serperior begins putting the squeeze on Justin whose countenance does not change.
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So as the title suggests (I need a new opener) I was working on another episode of Justin's Story (like and subscribe) and a thought occurs. How exactly do the trainers in Reborn stack up. This is saying every gym leader has equal leveled pokemanz but not equal skill. i.e Noel is probably higher than Julia because he's chosen on his intellect and ability to use the worst type even those he's a child. You can include trainers too like the player, fern and cain. I was thinking Fern may not be all that terrible. Not as good as Cain since by both of their omissions, Fern lost to poison due to bad planning but Cain was prepped to battle a psychic lead and was ready to test on you to see its effectiveness. We can probably say as of this post Lin is the current top but her battle plan seems highly reliant on power and not much else based on her dialogue. So who are your top 5. Here be mine.
5. Florinia- Not much to say outside of using a gym she had no business having and making it work well.
4. Corey- Debateably the hardest gym in the game. The posion in either route does damage, his team (especially on hardcore) is monstrous and he has the coolest closing line in gaming. "all things must come to an end"
3. Cain- He's honestly limited by plot. His intelligence isn't too far off since he plans to attack and defend depending on the problem and he did fight solaris and taka by himself before we came to the rescue. Lastly he fought an E4 knowing to deter them instead of engage. This guy deserves a spinoff.
2. Solaris- I'll try not to ride him any harder than I have in the past. One of very few fights in canon and non canon material where the pc loses. That has to count for something.
1.???/Lin- The two top battlers in Reborn. I didn't mention the other for those who haven't finished but one is the holder of champion in the toughest league ever and the other beat them as well as commands team meteor. Anyone who scares Sirius, ZEL and Solaris has to be more than really tough. Hopefully she can keep her... head.... ehhhh
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This episode's song is devoted to Fern who believes in his world he is king. With Justin bringing the war to him I found a nice little gem from a music pal of mine. At any rate hope you all enjoyed. Next episode ends this arc and begins my literal favorite part of the story in the game. Battle for Beryl. Wooooooo
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VICTORIA
We should stop him!
JUSTIN
Why he always cries after he's beaten. He's a less intelligent Cartman.
VICTORIA
I don't understand that reference but Florinia runs the school here as Principal and Gym Leader.
JUSTIN
And.
VICTORIA
He's the Class president
JUSTIN
So-
VICTORIA
By vote.
Terrified by the revalation.
JUSTIN
Oh. Oh.... shit.
Justin and Victoria run inside of the school.
InT. Onyx trainer's school O.T.S
Just as Justin and Victoria make it inside a gate slams down in front of them with Fern sitting against a table next to two students. Above him is a large picture of Florinia and himself.
FERN
So what have we learned?
JUSTIN
(sighing)
Please don't monologue.
FERN
You shouldn't challenge people above you. You should know your place. You probably think that I'm doing this out of spite or to disrespect you Justin.
JUSTIN
Why would I ever think so lowly of the mighty Fern?
Fern begins to walk away. He snaps and the two men beside him rush out the other door.
FERN
Incompetence. You aren't very bright. But no Justin this isn't an attack on your intelligence or lack there of.
Justin takes another deep breath.
FERN
No Justin. This is a matter of class and simply put.
Fern is at the door to Florinia's gym.
FERN
You aren't worthy.
Fern is gone.
JUSTIN
NO. DON'T YOU DARE DO THE COOL GUY WALK AWAY! I DO THE COOL GUY WALK AWAY!
Victoria grabs Justin's hand and he calms down.
VICTORIA
Relax Justin. He's just trying to bait you. You'll still be able to challenge Florinia.
JUSTIN
(furious)
But Vic you saw him, he thinks he's cool now.
Fern peeps his head back in.
FERN
Vicky, I'll let you and the douche in easy if you blow me.
Fern winks before popping back out. Justin is triggered once again.
JUSTIN
FERN I HOPE YOU HEAR ME! I'M GOING TO BEAT EVERY SINGLE TRAINER IN THIS SCHOOL WITHOUT ANY OF MY TEAM FIGHTING. I SWEAR WITH MY BEAR HANDS WILL BEAT THEM AND YOU DOWN.
Justin begins to leave but Victoria grabs his shoulder, he quickly pivots throwing his arm around her and quickly closing in for a long kiss catching her off surprise.
JUSTIN
(angry)
I need to put him in his place. I'm sorry but patience will not work here. Then.
(briefly smiling)
We can enjoy our date.
Justin storms out of the O.T.S.
VICTORIA
(still in shock)
Yeah okay.
InT. sEACREST'S GARDEN
Justin bursts through the doors to see Luxcalibur greeting guests along with Rebecca.
Rebecca
Hey Justin, how have you been?
JUSTIN
Fantastic.
Justin storms right into the garden past the visitors.
JUSTIN
BLAZE! SOLDIER!
Both Pokémon make their way over to Justin.
JUSTIN
Blaze, you remember Fern?
Without missing a beat the young rooster enflames his arms and punches his palm.
JUSTIN
Good. Soldier, you ready to see your new team leader in action?
Soldier gives a light nod.
JUSTIN
Good. Let's go.
Justin and Blaze head for the exit but Soldier runs over to his son Lucky who is playing with some of the guests and Isabella. He pats his son on the head and bows before Isabella who simply rubs the Mantis soldier's head while smiling. Soldier then follows out after Justin and Blaze.
JUSTIN
Rebecca, if anyone unwanted comes, you call me immediately.
ReBECCA
We should be-
JUSTIN
GOT IT?!
REBECCA
(nervous)
Yes sir.
The three head out leaving behind a very confused Luxcalibur.
ExT. oNYX TRAINER'S SCHOOL O.T.S
Dozens of students and mid-level Pokémon fill the school yard. They all stare in anticipation of Justin, Blaze and Soldier who make their way towards the front gates.
JUSTIN
What I intend to teach you two is a simple lesson in power. Something ingrained in me by my friends, my family and my home in the violent Dragon-land of Blackthorn City.
One of the trainers sends out a Meganium which launches a vine whip that latches around Justin's arm. Though the large flower Pokémon attempts to pull at Justin its attempts are as fruitless as its flower petals..
JUSTIN
With what you witness today something should become painfully clear.
Justin reels in the giant grass type and kicks it into a nearby wall then proceeds to stand on the unconscious Pokémon's stomach.
JUSTIN
I am the ace of this team.
Blaze and Soldier look upon their leader with pride while the students are clearly in shock by what has taken place.
JUSTIN
You will simply watch until we reach Flo. I can't allow them to fight you- not out of spite.
Student
SCREW YOU!
JUSTIN
Its simply a matter of class. And you kids got some learnin' to do.
End of episode 11.
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MeMBER
Hey Lux...
(confused)
Are you running the garden now?
Luxcalibur nods as he smiles.
MemBER
Oh... Okay.
The patron makes his way to the garden but Luxcalibur growls and points to the sign in.
MemBER
Sorry... Ummm
The man signs in and bows. Lux smiles and he makes his way to the garden. Lux continues smiling and wagging his tail, facing forward waiting for the next person to make their way in.
ExT. opal ward
Its a relatively nice day outside. People are casually strolling down the main street in front of Grand Hall. Justin and Victoria make their way down the road.
JUSTIN
Its just now dawning on me that I'm kinda new here.
VICTORIA
With your adventures haven't you been all over the wards?
JUSTIN
Ironically no. First day I fought Team Magma.
VICTORIA
The day you met Blaze you dragged him into that?
JUSTIN
No he was sleeping after fighting a Klinklang and a hoard of Noibat. This girl Shelly actually helped me along with Lux.
VICTORIA
Sounds like a fun first day.
JUSTIN
Yeah...
Justin stops noticing the dark toxic lake in front of the Grand Hall. Victoria stops shortly afterward.
VICTORIA
This lake has seen better days.
JUSTIN
I don't get it.
VICTORIA
Team Meteor they-
JUSTIN
No Vic. Me, Flo, Julia and some other guy shut the factory down. This should be changing back but nothing.
VICTORIA
It may be some time before the waters clean up.
JUSTIN
Jeez. No real romantic spots around here are there?
VICTORIA
There's a lovely pier with a slightly less rough view of the lake.
JUSTIN
Less rough sounds beautiful. Lets-
A small Lilipup rams into Justin's shin wildly barking and wagging its little tail.
JUSTIN
Hello bud? Any reason you charged into me, I can be your friend.
The small dog Pokémon races circles around Justin energetically barking and bumping into him.
VICTORIA
Seems a new Pokémon wants to be your friend.
Justin crouches down and pets the lively pup.
JUSTIN
Seems cool enough. Friends we can be but teammates...
VICTORIA
Don't like dog types?
JUSTIN
Normal types aren't very... Good...
Lillipup barks angrily.
JUSTIN
No disrespect, you just don't get far against much pal. Ask Helena.
VICTORIA
Whose Helena?
JUSTIN
Total bad ass. She-
A portly man is running towards them yelling from Grand Hall.
Man
HELP! PLEASE CATCH THAT LILLIPUP!
Without hesitation Justin reaches out to catch the puppy unawares but its already running towards Obsidia despite hearing its Owner's plea.
JUSTIN
Sorry bud.
MAN
I can never catch that doggone doggo.
JUSTIN
Ha.
VICTORIA
Perhaps we can help?
Justin turns away looking at his watch. Victoria hits him in the side to encourage his assistance.
JUSTIN
Yeah we can't just leave a guy in need.
MAN
Such a sweet couple.
JUSTIN
(through his teeth)
YUP!
VICTORIA
Where would he have gone?
MAN
North Obsidia, he's been restless since the plant invasion and that's where I usually walked him. We should go before he starts bothering anyone else.
Victoria and the older gentleman race off after Lillipup.
JUSTIN
I wonder if once... Just once... If I set out to do something I'll be able to do that one thing. Arceus... Just once is all I ask.
Victoria yells from the distance.
VICTORIA
HUNNIE HURRY UP!
Justin raises a finger as if asking Arceus one more time before running after Victoria and the Man.
ExT. north obsidia
North Obsidia Ward is virtually untouched by devastation. People go about their business as if no problems have occurred. An arcade has a plethora of students playing outside and inside. The only oddity is the large amount of people.
MAN
Crowded today huh?
VICTORIA
Probably just trying to stay away from the vines.
MAN
Makes sense.
VICTORIA
Also the mall and the Onix Trainer's School.
MAN
Oh no I hope no one tries to catch doggo.
Justin makes it up the stairs into North Obsidia Ward. Once the trainers see him they all glare for a moment then slowly walk away.
JUSTIN
Ummmm... Nice to meet you too.
The owner and Victoria both look at Justin as if searching for his offense.
JUSTIN
Sup?
VICTORIA
(suspicious)
What did you do?
JUSTIN
(annoyed)
Besides save the City several times?
VICTORIA
Hmmm
MAN
HEY ITS Doggo!
The man pulls out his Pokéball and readies to throw it but Justin grabs the ball and minimizes it.
JUSTIN
Just a thought but if he constantly wants to run and explore maybe cooping him up wont help.
The man slowly puts his ball away.
JUSTIN
Just talk to your pal and join him on a run. He might be more likely to stay in range.
The man slowly walks up to the Lillipup and crouches down.
MAN
Hey Doggo. Wanna run around town?
The pup races around his owner excitedly.
MAN
Alright
(hesitantly)
Lets go
The Lillipup dashes ahead of his owner when they run.
MAN
Just stay close buddy.
The small pup barks as the two leave North Obsidia.
VICTORIA
That was easy.
JUSTIN
Yeah. I expected that to be the whole day.
VICTORIA
A little patience will go a long way.
JUSTIN
(smiling)
I'll try to keep that in mind.
As Justin finishes his sentence Fern bumps into his shoulder as he walks down the street.
Fern
Move it idiot.
JUSTIN
Its gonna be this kind of day.
Fern stops walking and turns to see Justin and Victoria.
FERN
Well look what the fat Meowth dragged in.
Justin takes a deep breath.
JUSTIN
Patience. He'll pass.
Fern slaps Justin upside his head.
FERN
You know I can hear you fool.
Justin responds robotically to the small green man.
JUSTIN
I apologize Fern. I did not mean to offend you. Me and my friend will be on our way.
VICTORIA
(concerned)
Justin...
JUSTIN
Lets go Vic.
Fern runs in front of Victoria attempting to flex what little muscle mass he can.
FERN
I thought my eyes were playing with me. Vicky that you?
VICTORIA
Yes Fern.
Fern whistles obnoxiously.
FERN
Why the hell are you with this loser? You know I'm still single.
Justin feigns shock.
JUSTIN
Surely you jest!
FERN
Justurd, usually I'd engage but I don't want my zen squeeze to think I'm a brute like you.
JUSTIN
Yeah I bet.
Victoria grabs Justin's hand tightly.
VICTORIA
Sorry to burst your bubble Fern but me and Justin have places to be. Easiest way for us to achieve zen is via the Karma Sutra.
Both men drop their jaws in disbelief.
FERN
WITH THIS LOSER ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!
Justin takes a monk-like stance, closing his eyes and preaching to Fern.
JUSTIN
Peace my brother and you too will someday learn ALL the pleasures life has to offer.
Fern throws a right hook to Justin's smiling jaw but he is unfazed by the smaller teen's attack.
JUSTIN
That's actually four strikes so-
Before Justin can react Victoria punches Fern but a small shockwave is sent without her connecting to his body and he flies back several yards. Fern struggles to stand while coughing.
FERN
You think you can get away with disrespecting the top dog?
JUSTIN
Literally has not negatively affected me yet.
FERN
We'll see about that.
Fern scurries off down the road towards the large school in the back.
JUSTIN
Oh come on Fern, this isn't the first time someone has- wait Vic, how did you do that?
VICTORIA
I'll explain later.
JUSTIN
Doubtful.
-
So its been quite long, this story is far from gone, I'll also prepare a song and for those who are wondering Fern is still wrong. Terrible segue but 11 is my lucky number. You're welcome.
InT. Magma base
Maxwell is sitting on his throne next to Momo his Magmortar. Only members of the team are in the base at the moment. Break, Darm and Chris are kneeling in front of the mad king waiting for him to speak.
Maxwell
Ya done fucked up. All of you.
Break
Apologies sir.
Darm
The fuck are you apologizing for?
BREAK
Failing to stop you.
Darm sucks his teeth.
DARM
Kiss ass.
MAXWELL
So since ya done fucked up ya gotta get punished. Break you're first.
BREAK
Yes sir.
Break stands and walks up to Maxwell.
MAXWELL
Your hand.
Break extends his arm without hesitation. Maxwell lightly slaps it.
MAXWELL
Hope you learned your lesson.
BrEAK
One I wont soon forget.
MAXWELL
You're dismissed.
Break leaves passing by an agitated Darm and Chris.
Chris
Is he literally going to spank us?
Darm shakes his head.
DARM
You're stupid.
MAXWELL
Next up Darm.
Darm lets out a heavy sigh and walks over to Maxwell.
DARM
Can we not be dramatic? Either kill me or hit me cause I got shit to do.
MAXWELL
Still got the fire?
DARM
Even after I start burning in hell.
Maxwell smirks.
MAXWELL
Iron hide... You're up. Darm turn around.
Darm turns around and takes his shirt off and bites down hard on it. As he does a pitch black Flareon walks from behind the throne. Its tail lights up in silver then catches flame before hitting Darm square in the back sending him about ten feet forward and knocking over several trash cans. He lays still in the garbage.
MaXWELL
Oh shit, did he die this time?
Chris looks on horrified. After a few moments Darm coughs and turns around laying on his back.
DARM
Thanks.
(he coughs a little more)
May I have another?
Maxwell claps and the other members of Magma team all cheer and roar for their teammates survival.
MAXWELL
You gonna fuck up again?
DARM
(scoffs)
I'm busy tomorrow but there's always the weekend.
MAXWELL
Get outta here!
Darm slowly stands and limps out of the base.
MAXWELL
Alright Kriz.
ChRIS
Its Chris.
MAXWELL
Yeah well I like Kriz better, doesn't sound like some prissy rich kid. This is how this works. You shut up, walk up here, get punished, shut up again and go home until the next job. Its so simple even an Aqua could get it.
Member
Maybe on opposite day!
The sidelines chuckle. Max gestures for the crowd to settle down.
ChRIS
Yes sir.
Chris reluctantly walks up to his new master.
MAXWELL
Momo...
The gargantuan fire beast steps forward shaking the ground.
MemBER
Don't you dare move newbie.
Member 2
Ohhh he's gonna piss himself.
Member 3
It'll be steamed away thats for sure!
Chris closes his eyes and drops his head in fear. Momo raises his arm and begins charging up a fire attack.
MaXWELL
Try to leave it in tact this time. I think I like this one.
Chris keeps his eyes shut and even begins to cry as he feels the heat emanating from the black hole that makes the Magmortar's arm cannon.
MAXWELL
Fire...
Chris lets out a small yelp but nothing happens. He opens his eyes to see Magmortar heating a cup of tea in Maxwell's hands. The sidelines are full of laughing members. Momo uses his free arm to raise Chris' hand and Maxwell slaps it as he did with Break.
MeMBER
Holy crap he didn't piss himself.
MemBER 2
Maybe there is a set of balls on him
Member 3
Hilarious background chatter!
MAXWELL
Alright, see you later Kriz. Oh yeah and don't fuck up.
ChrIS
Ye... Yeah...
Chris begins walking towards the door.
ChrIS (V.O.)
I'm going to get out of this group... I'm going to get Onix.... then I'm going to kill you and take your throne....
Chris turns to see Max and the members all cheerfully laughing and playing around.
ChrIS (V.O.)
You wanna fuck with high society... You better be ready to get fucked BY high society.
Chris leaves the Magma base.
EXT. seacrest's Garden
The garden is very peaceful and early in the afternoon. Blaze is reading while laying against a sleeping Luxcalibur. Isabella is cradling Lucky in another area of the garden. Justin and Soldier are standing at a table looking over what appears to be battle plans and formations. Seacrest is nervously looking around the garden and inside the main hall. Nancy is in the main pavilion talking to a few men and women dressed rather well. She says her goodbyes to the group as they leave and she makes her way to a clearly distracted Seacrest.
Nancy
Mr. Seacrest, you seem weary. Is something bothering you?
Seacrest
Too damn quiet. We've been under attack so many times I guess I'm just nervous.
NANCY
Perhaps you should take the day off. Rebecca said she would be coming today. Why not let her run things here.
SeACREST
I suppose it couldn't hurt. What about you?
NANCY
I figured I would join you. I've been meaning to go to the Lapis ward market.
SEACREST
That sounds lovely. Shall we?
NANCY
Don't you want to wait for Rebecca?
SEACREST
The boy can handle it for an hour.
Seacrest holds his arm out and Nancy latches on gently.
SEACREST
Boy! You're in charge. This place better still be standing when I get back.
Seacrest leaves. Outside we see Justin and Soldier engrossed with their work. Soldier hears the door slam and nudges Justin.
Justin
Yeah I'll clean it in a minute.
After a few moments Victoria walks into the garden. It doesn't take her long to reach Justin.
JUSTIN
This all really loops back to if she's poison. I gotta admit though even though Cain hasn't said anything I'm thinking he's the poison leader. If she's grass then this strategy is safe. Blaze burns the field so that they wont ingrain meaning no setup or still defense. We keep her mobile and with her ace probably being Venasaur mobility is the last thing she'd need.
Victoria
Oooh Justin's battle plan.
Justin turns and waves before immediately turning back.
JUSTIN
Hey Vic. After Julia I figure every leader is going to have a modified field. Meaning the ones that will give me the most trouble will be Poison and Fire gyms since they'd wear the team down. Grass will probably been a meadow or something she can use to build up power to cover Grass' weak offense. The damn type is so balanced though so-
VICTORIA
You go over this with your Pokémon.
Justin raises his hand to correct her.
JUSTIN
My team. And yes, Everyone learns all strategies so when I can't think they can for themselves. First is type effectiveness which Luckily Luxcalibur only has one problem and Soldier was taught this during the war... Long shot but did you have Surge as a teacher?
Soldier shakes his head then growls into his device. It reads back to Justin "subordinate"
JUSTIN
Well damn. This should actually go smoothly.
VICTORIA
Justin are you forgetting something?
Justin ponders for a moment before his watch lights up with the word date. He jumps at the shock.
JUSTIN
Our date!... I mean, yeah of course I remembered. Garcon'
Justin snaps and Soldier flash steps in and out bringing flowers when he returns.
JUSTIN
Milady.
Victoria raises an eyebrow and Justin's sudden shift in demeanor.
VICTORIA
Thank you Soldier. If only your teammate could be as thoughtful.
JUSTIN
At least 2 or 3 times as thoughtful. Soldier, we'll continue later bud.
Soldier nods and proceeds towards Isabella and Lucky.
VICTORIA
Shall we?
JUSTIN
After you.
Justin follows Victoria out. Before he's gone he yells out.
JUSTIN
Lux! You're in charge. Make sure the building is in tact when I get home.
Justin is gone. Luxcalibur lightly taps his tail on Blaze's head who stands up and goes to sit against a nearby tree. Luxcalibur walks to the main desk sits in front of it. He quickly bolts up with an idea and runs behind the desk. After a few moments he scurries back out and has a sign around his neck with the word "welcome" crudely drawn on it with his paw prints around the borders. A park regular walks in.
-
Alas a song that works for our newcomer this episode ZEL otherwise known as the trio de dangers including Zero, Eve and Lumi. Here's a song that I think gets them depending on how you interpret it. The soundtrack to this reborn story would be amazing (its my taste in music so yeah bias but true XD) anywho here's da tunes.
-
FLORINIA
I've avoided injury yes.
AMARIA
Okay... Goodnight everyone.
Amaria leaves.
VICTORIA
Justin, The two families worked well together.
JUSTIN
Do they hate each other anymore?
VICTORIA
No... I think we've averted their attention with that attack.
JUSTIN
Good. Call Clean and get everyone to go to Seacrest's Garden.
VICTORIA
Where is that?
JUSTIN
A block away from Julia's gym,
VICTORIA
Sure? Is that okay?
JuSTIN
I'm sure they were just sitting around bored all day. Cain.
CAIN
Sup?
JUSTIN
Wanna get drunk?
CAIN
I'm 19.
JUSTIN
Didn't answer my question.
CaIN
That meant yasssssssss.
JUSTIN
Flo?
FLORINIA
Your company is a fresh reprieve from the recent affairs that have destroyed Obsidia. I think after seeing your activity I can feel safe in joining you.
JUSTIN
Alright. LETS PARTYYYYYYYYYYY-
E/I. sEACREST'S GARDEN
Justin and company are at the front door to Seacrest's garden with Seacrest angrily staring at a smirking Justin and Luxcalibur.
JUSTIN
So...
SEACREST
YOU WANT TO PARTY?! YOU MISSED ANOTHER ATTACK!
JUSTIN
(concerned)
Who was hurt?
SEACREST
NO ONE BUT!
Justin is back to smirking.
JUSTIN
Who. Was. Hurt?
SEACREST
Anyone could have easily been-
JUSTIN
Pops pops. Simple question. Need you to answer it to the best of your ability.
Seacrest grunts.
JUSTIN
Who. Was. Hurt.
Seacrest glares angrily but the next shot is the garden full of energy. Everyone who stayed behind after the fight along with the warring underground families and Clean are at the party. Justin and Cain are harassing Florinia and Victoria.
CAIN
So this almost good-looking guy wants to talk to you Victoria.
JUSTIN
Woah C-money. I'm just your average Terrorist fighting, good looking, gym beating, badass. I don't need special treatment.
ViCTORIA
Of course not. So I wont give you any.
Victoria and Florinia walk away and talk to Clean. Justin and Cain go over to Seacrest. Justin's arm is over Cain's shoulder. The two are clearly inseparable at the moment.
SEACREST
I hate you.
JUSTIN
He says that every day. I still haven't paid rent so don't worry.
SEACREST
You missed another attack.
JUSTIN
I'm sorry. I really am. I didn't think- BLAZE. WHERE IS MY BOY
SEACREST
Walking Nancy home.
JUSTIN
Did he get hurt?
Seacrest looks at Justin's broken hand.
SEACREST
I feel as though that shouldn't be your primary concern.
Isabella walks over to Justin and begins healing his hand.
JUSTIN
Don't exhaust yourself Izzy. I'll-
Isabella slaps him and continues healing.
JUSTIN
Ummm. I was just trying to help-
Isabella punches Justin in the mouth.
JUSTIN
What the heck Izzy?
Blaze is seen on the edge of the garden laughing hysterically.
CaIN
So you fight terrorists but lose to Psychic types.
Cain and Seacrest laugh.
JUSTIN
Yeah so do you smartass.
Cain has an epiphany.
CaIN
Oh right.
Everyone laughs.
JUSTIN
Izzy. Seriously, don't over exert yourself.
Blaze walks over and plucks Justin's head. He caws slowly and subtly. Seacreast pats Blaze on the back as he heads inside.
JUSTIN
Sorry. Thank you for your help. I appreciate all assistance for this broken man.
Isabella smiles and hugs Justin then continues healing her new friend. Blaze sits next to his partner.
JUSTIN
So you bodied REDTEAM huh?
Blaze arrogantly rubs his chest then blows on his claws.
JUSTIN
Yeah yeah. Blaze I'd like you to meet a few people since we finally have a break. First is Cain. Cain's dope.
Cain throws his arm around Blaze and hands him a drink.
CAIN
Oh my god. I-
JUSTIN
Its coo.
CAIN
Oh then enjoy.
Blaze indulges.
JuSTIN
Thoughts?
Blaze throws up a thumb.
CAIN
Obviously.
Cain's phone begins to ring.
JUSTIN
Don't do it.
CAIN
Sorry
Cain answers his phone.
CaIN
(loudly)
Its my super overweight sister. She needs support at the gym to lose weight to distract from her club foot.
(now focusing on the phone)
Hey sis what's up?
Cain leaves. Blaze sits down in one of the nearby recliners.
JUSTIN
So bud how did you lead the charge against the flaming offensive?
Blaze outstretches his free hand and waves through the sky as he caws boldly. He sets his beer down and Isabella quickly snatches his seat. He puffs out his chest and takes a great breath.
JUSTIN
I don't know where this clown gets this stuff.
As Justin finishes his comment, Victoria walks over. Justin bolts up with his chest fully puffed out and his voice deepens for his conversation.
JUSTIN
Hey Vick.... uhhh hows it hanging?
VICTORIA
Just letting you know me and Florinia are heading out.
JUSTIN
Shame. You're missing out on the activities.
VICTORIA
I'm sure. Perhaps tomorrow we can make up for lost time?
Justin's voice returns to normal and his chest falls in his excitement.
JUSTIN
Yeah-yeah-yeah...
(regaining composure)
I mean, sounds coo. Maybe we should exchange numbers.
VICTORIA
Already got yours.
Victoria casually walks away, meeting Florinia by the exit.
JUSTIN
But how?
Justin turns to see Luxcalibur in the back of the garden waving his paw and pointing to his communicator. Justin throws a thumbs up while smiling.
JUSTIN
I love you guys so much.
Justin sits down in a chair to see a widely grinning Blaze and Isabella.
JUSTIN
Sorry kids. Mom and dad had to talk. Continue.
Blaze enflames his arms as he dances, the scene silences as he caws and performs the story of his epic battle. The scene slowly fades to black as both Justin and Isabella look on in amazement.
ExT. SEACREST'S GARDEN Morning
The morning is new with the light just breaking in certain areas of the garden. Many of the Pokémon still slumbering from the night before. Blaze and Isabella are asleep in recliners. Luxcalibur is half-awake with Lucky completely passed out nestled beside him. In the center of the garden Justin and Soldier are doing one-handed push ups.
JUSTIN
Fun to finally have a challenger for this. Blaze is strong enough but his balance is still crap.
For the first time it seems Soldier is enjoying physical activity instead of just getting through it.
JUSTIN
You at two hundred for this arm yet?
Soldier nods. Both stand and shake themselves off.
JUSTIN
I'd like to make a little wager.
Soldier looks curiously upon his challenger.
JUSTIN
I win, you come with me to tackle Flo- 50-50 got she's grass or poison. If she's grass, Lux isn't the best match-up. If you win, you name it.
Soldier points to Luxcalibur.
JUSTIN
You can't have Lux.
Soldier shakes his head and points again to Luxcalibur's paws.
JUSTIN
Oh the weights. Win or lose I can get you those. Isn't there something nice you want? Cmon man sky's the limit.
Soldier looks around pondering.
JUSTIN
How about a shiny stone? It'll help Lucky reach his last form. Ya know for when he gets older.
Soldier shrugs, clearly uninterested before entering his stance. Justin sighs before entering his pulling out the three wooden poles usually holstered to his side. He attaches them to each other forming one solid three foot pole.
JUSTIN
Alright, don't you go holding back on me.
The two clash several times with Soldier's blade arms and Justin's wooden pole. One last clash leads them to a face to face smiling encounter before the screen cuts to black.
End of episode 10.
-
So it's been forever since I posted one of these episodes but I've finally had some time to write again and why not continue the story I love to write. Thanks game for existing. That was pretty cool. So story picks up from episode 9 obviously. Refresher? Sure. Justin and co went to fight Pulse tangrowth, split into teams, Blaze is fighting team magma back at the garden episode ends on a trailer line. Here we go with the aptly named episode 10..... "What did I miss?"
ExT. seacrest's garden
Its night time and most of the Pokémon are sleeping. Seacrest, Blaze and Soldier are tending to the wall. Lucky is trying his best to help but isn't tall enough to assist. Soldier kneels and signals for the young egg to sleep. He pouts but ultimately follows his father's direction.
Seacrest
You boys can sleep, I don't mind doing this alone.
Blaze caws in opposition and Soldier quietly remains focused on his task.
SEACREST
Didn't think you'd listen.
Nancy walks over to the group.
Nancy
I spoke with Ame, she'll be sending over a team of workers to do some repairs and reinforce the wall.
SEACREST
You'd think it was made of kindling at this point.
NANCY
Perhaps you should get some rest.
SEACREST
Yeah. You going home now?
NANCY
I am.
SEACREST
Blaze come here boy.
NANCY
This isn't necessary.
Blaze joins the two.
SEACREST
Walk Nancy home and come right back.
NANCY
I'll be alright.
SEACREST
Nancy its been a long day and those thugs are out there. Let's just be safe.
She looks at Blaze's ready face then to Seacrest's worried expression.
NANCY
Very well. Blaze-
Nancy gestures for Blaze to follow her.
NANCY
Good night Seacrest.
SEACREST
Goodnight Nan.
Nancy and Blaze leave. Seacrest walks over to Soldier.
SEACREST
You can get some rest. Someone will come in the morning to take care of this.
Soldier nods then goes over to his sleeping child and sits with his legs folded around him like a cradle. After a few moments Seacrest gives Soldier a blanket that he uses solely to cover Lucky. SOldier extends his arm out to shake. Seacrest does so slowly. He then sits down next to the two.
SEACREST
Thank you for earlier.
Solider drops his head.
SEACREST
No... It makes sense to want to take someone like him out. But these gangs wont fall without the police coming back. For now-
Cut TO:
ExT. desert
Soldier, Lt Surge and Soldier's partner General Daniel Rush, a tall extremely muscular man with an automatic strapped to his back and traditional military garb. Soldier has bandages drenched in blood all over his arms and torso.
G.Rush
Let's stick to the defensive. You got a bad habit of attacking the leader bud.
Lt.Surge
Kid ain't stupid. End the leader and the rest fall to pieces. Besides pipsqueak saved all of our shit. So...
Rush steps close to Soldier and extends his hand.
CUT TO:
ExT. SEACREST'S GARDEN
Soldier looks up and shakes his head as if exiting a daze.
SEACREST
I said thank you.
Soldier looks and sees Seacrest's hand. Soldier cracks a smile.
ExT. obsidia Park
The action continues here from last episode's endpoint. Justin and Luxcalibur are homing on the plant and metal monstrosity that sits at the epicenter of Obsidia park. As the two get within attacking range of the monster Tangrowth they are separated by a rampant vine that propels Luxcalibur back towards the group of trainers, Justin continues forward and lands directly at the eye of the storm.
Justin
Hey...
Justin flourishes the glass in his hand and just as he is about to lunge it at the plant's eye several tenrills all come crashing down on him but a flash of green pulls him out of the way at the last second. After a moment he realizes he's next to Florinia, Amaria, Cain, Venasaur, Muk, and Kingdra.
JUSTIN
Thanks Flo.
Florinia
You're welcome. I do wish that you'd take some form of caution when attacking opponents.
JUSTIN
Flo cmon where's the fun. HOLY SHIT IS THAT CAIN?!
Cain
Would love to banter but now's not the time for jokes.
JuSTIN
Ha.
CaIN
Muk keep the screen up on Venasaur.
JUSTIN
And... Uh... Who's the lady in blue. Hi, Justin Weyland Terrorist fighter.
CAIN
Literally couldn't of picked a worse tree to bark up.
Amaria
Or time.
JuSTIN
I mean, what's the worst that could-
One of the tentacles swoops Justin up and slams him several times into the ground and throws him at the guardrail at the edge of the park.
AMARIA
This is the talented back-up Rini?
CAIN
I thought he'd be good too. Looks can be deceiving huh?
Justin's head is down but one hand is on his ear and the other is shaped into a gun that points at Tangrowth.
JuSTIN
3...2...1... Bang...
At that moment. A bolt of lightning slams down and stuns the plan monster momentarily.
JUSTIN
Sorry guys figuring out if my spine still works can someone else kill it?
Every directs their attention back towards the weakened Tangrowth.
AmARIA
Kingdra ICE BEAM!
JuSTIN
Yo Cain. Poison gas this place.
CAIN
That wont hurt- You're not bad Justin.
Justin chuckles and coughs up blood.
JUSTIN
Oh Arceus.. it hurts to laugh.
CAIN
Poison gas.
A smog covers the battleground. The group is all seen with gas masks covering them even the non-poison Pokémon. Luxcalibur makes his rounds to point everyone in the right direction.
JUSTIN
Lux HIT IT HARD!
The forest Pokémon roars and the gas clears the area Luxcalibur is nowhere to be found but it is holding the young Panchams it kidnapped from their parents. Justin leaps from behind the Tangrowth dropping an empty bottle of moomoo milk and snatching the two cubs from the tendrills.
JUSTIN
Hey. You got about 10 seconds.
Justin runs past everyone, kissing Florinia on the cheek before he plunges into the underground. Florinia turns from the group.
FLORINIA
Still a poor choice of trees.
InT. obsidia depths
Victoria, Embroar, Scrafty and the Pangoro crew are fighting in the now lit tunnel where a creepy eye covered in moss swings tendrills at the heroes.
Victoria
Justin. You're okay.
JUSTIN
Only a few broken bones.
VICTORIA
Are those the Pangoro children.
JUSTIN
Yeah so.
The lead pandas take notice of their now safe children.
JUSTIN
Time to go all out boys.
Purple fluid leaks from the ceiling. The Pangoros and Scrafty begin ruthlessly beating on the eye of the storm that is the Tangrowth's underbelly.
The ceiling is broken in by vines and Justin is pulled up by Venasaur and flung towards the heavily weakened monster.
JUSTIN
Thanks V. YOU BOYS DOWNSTAIRS BETTER BE READY.
The Pokémon underground unleash a flurry of punches and Justin follows suit and begins violently beating down on the main body of Tangrowth and eventually it is knocked out of its PULSE form. Justin crosses his arms.
JUSTIN
Everyone step back.
The team underground exits the monster's nest and the trainers upstairs all run to the park's edge.
JUSTIN
Here's a real monster's technique.
Several tendrills all begin to crash down on Justin mimicking the beginning of their fight.
JUSTIN
Thunder.
Lightning strikes the field around him.
JUSTIN
Thunder.
More lightning strikes the ground.
JUSTIN
THUNDER!
Just before the attacks land a violent crash down of several lightning bolts all scorch the ground and burn away the violent overgrowth. Many plants around the city are destroyed. Finally the body is violently electrocuted and burns away as well. Luxcalibur falls from the sky and lands on the PULSE machine in front of Justin.
JuSTIN
Thunder cat..... hoooo...
Luxcalibur wags his tail. Justin walks over to the trainers in time to see Victoria and company have made their way above ground. Luxcalibur sits behind Justin and stands to rest on Justin's shoulders.
JUSTIN
So guys, as much fun as it would of been to solo that sin against nature I am very much glad I had a team to work with. That said... WHAT THE FLORGES WAS THAT THING
A stange hooded figure steps outside from a decrepit shed.
Zel (Eve)
PULSE is the proper designation for the creature you just witnessed fight.
Cain
How did that shed not get destroyed?
JUSTIN
Professor Oak the Science Folk says its Tangrowth.
Zel (ZERO)
That hasbeen fool has no idea what power we're dealing with.
ZEL (Lumi)
I..
ZEL (ZERO)
No one cares Lumi
JUSTIN
This is...
CAIN
Unsettling.
VICTORIA
Who are you?
Justin whispers in Luxcalibur's ear and he gets off his shoulders.
JuSTIN
Yeah you umm... Evildoer?
FLORINIA
They killed well over a dozen people in the last 6 hours alone so yes. This person is well within the boundaries of evil.
JUSTIN
Makes sense since that eyepatch guy is right behind them.
ZEL looks behind themself, Justin takes this moment to jump up and Luxcalibur uses his tail to fling him powerfully towards the individual. Justin throws a punch but goes through a hologram and punches a hole in the PULSE machine effectively shattering his hand. ZEL looks confused at Justin's attack.
ZEL (EVE)
That was a wise distraction. You've given us much to think about Reborn leaders and slightly gifted trainers.
JUSTIN
(scoffs)
Slightly?
AMARIA
You will never win Meteor.
ZEL (ZERO)
We'll see girlie. We will see.
The hologram disappears.
AMARIA
I'm sorry Cain, didn't mean to drag you into this.
CAIN
No sweat. Always fun thwarting evil and what-not.
AMARIA
I have to report to Ame. Rini you okay?
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Cal rigged the machine before anyone got up there. It was never going to erupt, him attacking Camerupt was just a rage moment due to Kiki's (beheading?)
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For me personally writing is just a fun thing to do and I like to get better at it. Not getting feedback isn't a deterrent for me anymore. I try to give time to others when I have a moment to sit down and process stories since good feedback builds confidence and said confidence can lead to more stories and work being generated. Seeing you say that it can turn poorly if rewarded did immediately send a signal to me Commander as I can see that turning sour pretty quickly. Just for anyone out there I guess don't be afraid to post everything you want to write about. This is a great forum let's enjoy everything we can in it ya know.
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So umm, I'm not the most active in this portion area lately. I'll admit it but the fact that my last topic from December is still on the page of recent posts before this topic means maybe there isn't enough going on. Is it for lack of interest or feedback. I can't say since refer to the first sentence. Maybe and admins feel free to comment. If there's some incentive to comment and create content for this section so people want to contribute here as much as other sections. I think since this site is based on the idea of pushing dreams to their limit the creative writing section should be one of the higher traffic areas. I'm working on film projects so I'm willing to buy interesting properties but I don't know if that's enough to get everyone excited. Thoughts?
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I use Dorcas on every run. Usually drop for Hector though. I don't think you can get all characters in any given run since at the split you go with Eliwood or Hector which means you miss a few units. The game is hard but on a rom its easy since you can always restart
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Hello I'd like to do a dark mono. Not a super OP team since Absol is not so great but I want a balanced starter and Abs is it. Thanks for the help.
Absol- adamant/shiny
Houndour-Timid
Skorupi-Jolly
Pawniard-Adamant
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Arcanine is a total A rank mon in reborn and in general as a fire type. Mawile outside of mega is just kinda there. Better fairies include gardevoir, sylveon, florges. Pidgeot is cool because g1/ash love but is pretty terrible. I think you can get Braviary or Staraptor at that point, Swellow is probably locked. But there's plenty of birds in the sky. Lopunny is bad. Normal types are bad. Fighting types available to you at that point include Lucario and your gallade, They will do everything Lopunny can do but better. I've never seen the use in donphan but everyone else seems to get mileage out of it. Krookodile and Golurk should be available both of which are amazing ground types with fantastic abilities and useful niches/coverage. But if your team works and you're having fun. I say roll with it. That's my three cents.
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fighting mono was fun and easy for me. infernape, toxicroak, machamp (arceus killer), gallade, chesnaught (mvp) and scrafty.
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Why male snorunt? Froslass is like key part of almost all ice monos
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hes in a house near the pokemart
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Okay so you guys made a strong point about the challenge thing and dragons would be too easy. And two dragons that don't exist for players makes it even less challenging. So lets try this again. Dark mono.
Absol-Adamant
Pawniard-shiny cause im curious
Skorupi- dont care
These guys are all available. Pawniard is late in the game and comes in with two straight weakness gyms in a row so I'd like him to get more mileage. Absol is pretty terrible imo but itll be the starter that will carry me or disappoint. Fair-er?
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*inhales deeply* yay.... Thanks SantaNjab. You da best
Edit* So no big deal but I didn't get the skrelp and Deino didn't have fire blast. We need a team since I just remembered no one evolves until like gym 3 or 4 And its a hardcore run. Also if I could get Swablu with roost that'd be neat.
Justin's Story E13: Battle for Beryl pt1
in Creative Works
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Here we are once again. I'm in the mind to write and nothing is gonna stop me... at the moment. So this officially begins my favorite part of this story as well as my favorite part in Reborn and one of my favorite moments in gaming. The entirety of the Beryl ward arc. Seriously seeing a familiar story go in such a different direction was just nice to see. The police force actually trying to do something instead of sitting in front of a hole confused as to where a robber went... (were you even trying gamefreak??) And of course the major twist of a gym leader turning against you and if Pokémon had game overs even killing you. So hopefully I can do this story more justice than batman v superman. Anyway I digest... Justin finishes his epic battle with Florinia and is told of the vile infestation plaguing Jasper and Beryl Wards. He calls upon his team to save the wards. Now Justin, Blaze, Luxcalibur, Soldier and Isabella venture into the mock wilderness but what awaits them inside. This is the Battle for Beryl Part 1: Team Shenanigans.
InT. OTS Florinia's Gym
The episode continues where it left off in Soldier and Mega-Sceptile's battle. Soldier finishes his swing cutting his forest bound opponent down the length of his torso. It staggers away a few steps and begins to camouflage with a nearby tree.
Justin
Soldier.
Soldier dashes over and begins cutting it repeatedly until it is forced out of its Mega form.
JUSTIN
Making him try makes your buddy leagues ahead of most mons. You should be proud of him.
Florinia
Well fought Sceptile. Ret-
The weakened grass Pokémon begins to whistle and upon hearing the tune everyone in the stadium grows drowsy.
JUSTIN
What is that...
Soldier staggers a little bit.
JUSTIN
No no no... Soldier you need-
The Sceptile stands over Soldier charging an energy attack.
FLORINIA
A dragon pulse attack. Well done.
Sceptile proceeds to stand on Soldier's foot as it charges the attack.
FLORINIA
Now before you lose your chance.
The tree gecko releases his energy blast at point blank engulfing his opponent in a large explosion. When the smoke clears we see Soldier's arms have embedded into the ground and he has taken some noticeable damage from the attack.
JUSTIN
I cannot lose another match this early.
Blaze wakes from his poisoned slumber with dark bags under his already black feathered eyes. He climbs off Justin's back and caws out to Soldier. Soldier hears this and his wings begin fluttering wildly with enough force to create a blowing gust on Justin, Blaze and the forest behind him. Blaze caws and at his instruction Soldier charges forward bashing Sceptile through a myriad of trees leaving him at the edge of the forest.
JUSTIN
Good job Soldier.
Soldier looks at his smiling partner and has a flashback of seeing his old squad captain smiling forward in the same pose.
FLORINIA
Sceptile...
The forest Pokémon is barely able to stand and walks over to Soldier limping the whole walk and extends its arm. Soldier smiles and the two clash blades a final time before Sceptile walks off the field and nods to Florinia and is recalled.
JUSTIN
Wow. Someone who just appreciates a good fight. I like your gecko friend Flo.
FLORINIA
Me and Sceptile have trained together for some time. She is my first teammate.
JUSTIN
Oh wow... Soldier beat up a girl. Not cool man...
Soldier looks irritated by Justin's comment. He looks over to see Blaze and Justin shaking their head in disapproval. Soldier walks off the fighting area.
JuSTIN
Gonna go home and beat up all the other ladies.
Soldier holds up Blaze's gear and shows a crying Lucky on screen.
JUSTIN
Gotta take care of the kid. I get it.
Soldier exits the gym.
FLORINIA
You expect to take down the rest of my team with Blaze alone?
JUSTIN
Don't have a choice. He has a son. As a parent I can relate.
Florinia and Julia look on at the young man in shock. Justin throws his arm around Blaze and kisses the top of his head.
JUSTIN
This is my beautiful baby boy right here. He takes after his not so old man.
FLORINIA
I see.
Victoria
I expected different and I shouldn't of.
JUSTIN
We both know how this fight goes from here right Flo?
FLORINIA
You may believe that but a battle isn't decided until its conclusion.
JUSTIN
That right?
FLORINIA
And make no mistake. The conclusion is forthcoming.
JUSTIN
(excited)
Attagirl.
Justin is fired up from Florinia's challenge. She summons Ivysaur to the field. Blaze walks onto the field his every step leaving embers on the grass.
JUSTIN
The next move is big Blaze. You already know what she's planning right?
Blaze nods.
JUSTIN
Alright buddy. The battle is in your hands. Three...Two...One... GO!
Ivysaur bolts up a tree and Blaze rushes to the center of the field.
FLORINIA
Rain dance!
Before Ivysaur can activate his move Blaze explodes with flames bursting from his body and in seconds the field is covered with flames. A light drizzle starts over the now raging inferno of a forest but it does nothing to quell the blaze.
JUSTIN
Sit back buddy,the fires will take out her teammate.
Justin's call holds true as the tree Ivysaur is on collapses from the flames and Ivysaur is burned by the field and runs out of the arena and is abruptly recalled by Florinia. Blaze takes a deep breath finally feeling some comfort from the raging fires surrounding him.
JUSTIN
You feeling better buddy?
Blaze is seen throwing a thumbs up on the monitor.
JUSTIN
So Flo, who is left?
Florinia summons her final Pokémon Cradily. The rock flower sits outside of the forest's edge gazing upon the raging fire and looks hesitant at its trainer.
FLORINIA
Worry not Cradily. I will not force you into that.
The final grass types gives a sigh of relief before being recalled. Justin goes into the burning forest to retrieve his friend.
FLORINIA
Please wait, I have built in safety measures for-
After a few moments Justin is seen with partially burnt clothes carrying Blaze from the burning woodwork. After the sprinklers above take effect and douse the field.
JUSTIN
He doesn't care for rain.
FLORINIA
I see. Justin for your exemplary skill in battle and displaying strength in the face of overwhelming odds, I award you the Canopy Badge.
Florinia walks over to Justin and hands him his reward.
JUSTIN
Two down... Sixteen to go. This is going to take some time... Look bud, new badge.
Justin shows Blaze the newly acquired badge. He caws weakly before falling back to sleep.
JUSTIN
Thanks Flo. Its been fun. See you around.
Justin begins to leave with Victoria meeting him by the door until he is called by Florinia.
FLORINIA
Justin. Have you any current activities to occupy your time?
JUSTIN
Bold asking for a date after losing but damn if I don't respect it.
FLORINIA
Allow me to clarify. You assistance is needed once again.
JUSTIN
(weakly)
Yay....
FLORINIA
While we were able to protect the Opal and Obsidia Wards, I'm afraid Beryl wasn't able to receive the same attention. It has blossomed from its budding state and the plant infestation has spiraled out of control.
JUSTIN
What are you saying?
FLORINIA
The Jasper and Beryl wards are the current root of our problems. The police force's base of operations resides in Jasper and Beryl houses the gym leader Corey. We lost contact with both parties the day of the train station bombing. Given the amount of time passed we can only assume the worst has come to pass. Due to my extended departure I can no longer leave the school. You'll unfortunately find Julia is not equipped for a long journey either.
JUSTIN
(sarcastic)
Of course not.
FLORINIA
If you accept this mission I will make sure you are properly rewarded.
JUSTIN
Good to hear, I would of taken the job regardless.
VICTORIA
Justin, maybe you should reconsider.
JUSTIN
Not gonna happen. Flo, send whatever reports have been developed to Seacrest's garden. Team Shenanigans is on the case.
FLORINIA
Very well. I would wish you luck however luck is merely an illusory essentialization of statistics and is not inherently good or bad in any way.
Florinia extends her hand.
FLORINIA
However I hope that you fare well.
Justin shakes her hand.
JUSTIN
Thanks Flo.
InT. seacrest's garden
It is late evening and a few people are gathered in the garden around a small fire. Blaze is sleeping with his head on Luxcalibur's back, next to him is Isabella who is watching over him. Soldier is sitting with Lucky on his lap sleeping. Seacrest, Justin and Victoria are all sitting in lawn chairs close to the flame each holding a beer.
Seacrest
So from one dangerous job to the next huh boy?
JUSTIN
I like to live dangerously.
SEACREST
Clearly. You do realize this one may be above your pay grade?
JUSTIN
Honestly... This one looks really bad no matter how you paint it. The police force gone, a gym leader possibly dead and two districts totally destroyed by the plants. Nancy showed me Flo's reports. For once Team Meteor actually seems competent.
SEACREST
Looks like they also setup two of those machines.
JUSTIN
Took quite a bit to take down one but this time they're sure to have guards.
SEACREST
You don't have to do this. You can wait and we can gather folks and mount a real rescue.
JUSTIN
Its been about a month since everyone got trapped up there. If people are still holding out...
VICTORIA
You don't think there are survivors do you?
JUSTIN
Maybe.
VICTORIA
So you want to rush into this on the off chance some people may still be waiting for help?
JUSTIN
Dumb yeah. My reasoning... Absolutely.
VICTORIA
Well, I obviously can't-
Victoria's phone begins to ring.
JUSTIN
I know that song...
SEACREST
Yeah... Its called good luck Justin.
VICTORIA
No its... Just a minute.
Victoria walks away from the group to answer it.
VICTORIA
Yes... I'm a tad busy at the moment. There is an urgent mater... Can you not help... Yes... I... Understood... I'll-
Victoria looks at Justin and Seacrest waving her off.
VICTORIA
I'll be there in a few hours.
Victoria hangs up and walks over to Justin.
VICTORIA
Justin. I'm so sorry. If you just-
Justin stands and walks away from the fire with Victoria following him to the edge of the garden.
JUSTIN
Vic. Its cool. You've got big responsibilities as a gym assistant. I've heard about Apophyll. You can't leave them alone with how crazy Reborn's been. They need you.