Shamitako

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I'd like you to lengthen the appearance section, outside that I don't see any issues here I've still got a few issues with this. But you seem to be a reasonable person so I'm going to accept it and let you try to patch them up as you write and develop her more I'm slightly confused as to why she looks plotting if she's always smiling? You don't need to change the sheet, just explain your logic. EDIT: Grr quotes breaking >_>

Hooray! I won't be posting today, to much stressed ATM

Psst, I think you got modifier and element backwards

Well, to comment on the spontaneity, this isn't just randomly, there was a reason it appeared at this point in time. I'm not going to go into detail, but suffice to say I needed a place to get this off my chest and Reborn is the only even moderately safe place I know of to do so It's me needing to talk about this as well as a way to get to know me better, so it's nice to meet you again as well ^^

Just right off the bat: if discussions about transgenderism, sexuality, rape, suicide (EDIT: Oh, RIP, I changed my mind and didn't talk about these but left them up here), depression, or self-deprecation will cause you to feel panicked, unbearably sad, or extremely angry turn back now So hi, this is a thread about me. It's sort of my way of telling you all who I am. Some of you know me, some not so much. I don't think very many of you really know me all that well, this is meant to change that to an extent. Basically it's just another excuse to talk about myself Let's start with the basics. My name is Benjamin Wallace, I go by the usernames "MasterWeavile898" and "KosherKitten" depending on the age of the account. By my request, most people online refer to me as some variation of Alexus. IRL my most common nickname is "Snow." I'm 17 years old and I live with my parents, two sisters, and a dog. I also consider myself to be transgender, a girl My personality is nothing special. I'm very emotional and have a bit of an inferiority complex which I like to hide behind a mask of pride. I don't like large groups of people and I hate starting conversations. But I do oh-so-love to talk about myself. I'm extremely smart, to the point where I can basically ignore my studies and get Bs. Maybe not a genius, although I have been reading at a college level since age seven. I'm prone to perfectionism and procrastination, which work in tandem to keep me from doing much. I tend to crack jokes, usually of a sexual kind, to keep myself distracted. And oftentimes asking me to be serious or cleaner is going to simply result in me feeling hurt or unwanted Behind all this though, I like to think that I'm a very caring girl. I'm not very nice, but I do care about people and always try to do what's best for others, even at my own expense. Of course, I care for others a lot, but my sense of self-worth is abysmal. At best I feel useless, and telling me that I made a mistake or outright insulting me is going to make me feel like asymmetrical garbage. Don't get me wrong, I know this isn't true, but like I said, very emotional I enjoy reading quite a lot, it's probably my second-favorite pastime besides writing. I also enjoy video games, anime, cooking, and the occasional board game. And I'm sure that if you think about it a little you'll quickly come to see why I like visual novels quite a lot, especially when they have some kind of gameplay element mixed in. They bridge the gap between words and technology beautifully I hate overly sensitive people (like myself), hypocrites (like myself), hipsters and weebs (I can be like both at times), liars (also me, everyone is a liar, even Madoka), and people who won't take math class seriously because they don't think it will help them later on in life (not me). I also dislike insects due to a phobia K, basics out of the way, let's get to the meat of this topic. See me? I'm a monster. It's not something I necessarily like, in fact it's probably not even true, but it's something I've accepted. I've actually outright been told that I am a monster, which has hurt. After all, I'm only as much a monster as any other human Basically what I'm trying to say here is that I'm human, and that to cope with those who would say otherwise, I've come to treat "monster" and "human" as synonyms. See, my belief is that the monsters we dream up are really just reflections of ourselves, fears spawned from what we don't want to become. So really, monsters are in everyone, I'm just more willing to admit to mine than some. Or maybe this is just me trying to justify myself to society and I really am inhuman. Does it really even matter why? It's how I am I've said before that I don't mind people so long as they realize that we're both human they're just as terrible (or not terrible, but the focus here is on the negative) a person as I am and treat me as human. But I hate when people treat me as though I'm less than human, a monster if you will. They're taking what little worth I have in human society and saying that it doesn't matter because I'm not human in the first place The person I am is a young trans girl struggling with depression and self-worth who desperately wishes she could find some way to be useful. I want to use what little strength I have to help others in every way possible, even if it means diminishing myself even further. To this end I want to become a librarian, someone who helps others through my favorite medium of books. I want to help connect my generation and the generations that follow to the sometimes forgotten world of words and imagination that I've come to love. If that makes me a monster, so be it With Hope, Alexus M. Wallace

Well, IDK about the people not in the mall interaction... But I can get an Onyx post out tomorrow

Well, they're not terrorists, but they're socially equivalent to an extremist group like Al Qaeda. They're not a group you want to be openly associated with and even those who aren't actually cultists but actually believe in the true Layla get lumped in with the cultists and have to follow the cult rules, so even then it's a risky join This was something I failed to properly communicate with Lilith's announcement of her chosen Line during the last iteration of this RP too >_< Everyone thought it was just "weird" when it was more like "unheard of"

That would be a safe choice While I was struggling to come up with how to explain this to you I said something that I think actually carries my point pretty well, so Ima go ahead and toss that here and maybe that will carry my point better than me trying to explain the politics and social ramifications of the Lines

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I said almost because there are exceptions. And as I told you, if you can make a good case for why a teenage girl is going to pick to join a dangerous cult that the entire world knows is a dangerous cult when she could easily join a group of people who don't care what she does, a group that's all about thinking a bunch and bettering themselves, or a group that will let her be so long as she doesn't break their rules, then she can join the dangerous cult "She thinks she'll benefit the most." Is not a good case, because she'll have heard all her life about what a bad idea it is to become a Laylite and how crazy all those Laylites are and how everyone hates Laylites As for those who actually are nonpracticing Laylites, the only possible examples I can think of are the cult leaders--they don't believe in Layla, they're just manipulative. So convince me that there's another reason to shoot yourself in the foot in terms of social, political, and religious status besides believing wholeheartedly that the goddess Layla exists and will help guide your through the darkness to gain true power

EDIT: Also, all returning characters have been accepted EDIT2: @Chimchain, your character is also accepted. I like that you made a simple character with room to grow. Just FYI, it's going to be crowded early on so you may struggle to get interactions where Lana is comfortable at first

You know. I never noticed how similar she and Natalie are (It helps that this time about I wrote in Natalie's actuality rather than just her cover) I'll add her and Arturia up a bit later

Kindle shakily stood up. "S-safe, right." She said numbly. She tried to take a step towards the door, but fell back to her knees with a cry of pain as her injured leg gave out underneath her. But her face was no longer coated with anguish, it now held determination. She forcefully wiped her teary eyes and stood up again. She clenched her fists so hard that her knuckles started turning white. Her entire body shook with the flurry of emotions that shot through it. And then, she very deliberately lifted her uninjured leg, letting the weight of her entire body rest on the injured one, and stepped forward. After this first step was complete she stood still for a short while, afraid that if she took another she would collapse again. But eventually she began to walk and strode carefully to the door where she waited for Hikaru to follow. (OOC: I'm assuming Hikaru will just escort her home for now, so this can be considered "wrapping up." Unless you had something else in mind)

So, this entire personality is going to be extremely hard to play. Avoiding interaction in an RP about social interaction is not generally a good idea As for specific issues: This is just a wording thing that you should keep in mind (and you'll not I mentioned a similar issue in TTG) saying that most things are one way or another isn't really something you can do. You can't really know for certain how other characters or NPCs will act, for all you know someone quiet could draw all kinds of attention and be bugged constantly If you're going to have her be a nonpracticing Laylite, you're going to have to present an extremely strong case for why she is as such, because those are practically nonexistent

Alright Sketches, this is okay, but there's a few things I need to clear up (mostly about the mech, which is understandable since you said you were struggling there) There's really no "most other mechs." Everyone has a unique suit so everything is varied greatly, including bulkiness You can't have flight abilities unless that's your special ability And this is more just a mechanics nuance than an actual issue. Keep in mind that a high speed stat doesn't enable you to "dodge" so much as it prevents firepower-based opponents from locking onto you or melee opponents from keeping up with you. Which basically means that speeding around doesn't make you harder to hit, just harder to attack in the first place

Well, he was certainly angry