Supernovae Posted November 2, 2014 Posted November 2, 2014 Mr. Taylor Status: Not old anymore and not alive anymore. Traveling on: Marcus's Back. Inventory: Whip he made in the second circle, a few pistols he jacked off of Quincy, and that is it since he lost his hat and bag in the second level.
Guest Posted November 2, 2014 Posted November 2, 2014 (edited) Status: Alive and well. Travelling With: Nobody. Inventory: Sharp, wooden stick. 3 knives, one in each of her boots, one in a pocket inside her jacket. Edited November 2, 2014 by Annie Leonhardt
Flux Posted November 2, 2014 Posted November 2, 2014 (edited) The Enigmatic Phantom Status: Recovering stamina-wise from the constant use of his ability on the previous floor. Traveling with: Nobody anymore. He loses every friend somehow... Inventory: His mask, his black trenchcoat, and his longsword. Edited November 2, 2014 by Flux
Chevaleresse Posted November 2, 2014 Posted November 2, 2014 Status: Alive and well, approximately 2.2x faster and stronger than top humans Traveling with: Taylor's corpse. Inventory: Clothing and a knife.
Supernovae Posted November 2, 2014 Posted November 2, 2014 Wrong topic Eagleby, . But, his hair would likely be a dark brown/black color. He'll also look like a military man now, for reasons that I'm not quite ready to discuss.
CURIE Posted November 2, 2014 Posted November 2, 2014 Oops, sorry I really did mean to post that here. Gimme a few minutes, I'll edit that into an actual addition to the story.
Supernovae Posted November 2, 2014 Posted November 2, 2014 No worries, I've done the same thing before, we all make mistakes sometimes.
Raindrop Valkyrie Posted November 3, 2014 Posted November 3, 2014 Wow......things have gone pretty far from where I broke off lol. Really sorry about kinda just dropping this twice now Notus lol. ((thought the second time was due to being ill....so not really of my choosing.))
CURIE Posted November 3, 2014 Posted November 3, 2014 Okay Notus, now that Panik thinks he's alone, what's he gonna do?
Rosesong Posted November 3, 2014 Posted November 3, 2014 Hmm... Kenny, did Notus ok this form change? I'm not sure that really falls into your realm of powers, but...
Notus Posted November 4, 2014 Author Posted November 4, 2014 Rose is right Kenny, I don't see shape shifting as a viable interpretation of your powers. And if you insist that they indeed are this diverse, than I would have to flag a Sue there. =/ All in all, my advice is that you take a good look in your character as of now and see where you can improve it, because in my opinion it could get a lot better. @Hukuna: No problem at all Sensei, I know how busy you have been and the cooperation plan we devised is great on that point - giving you liberty to come and go without any trouble for the RP. If you want to be back again in C4, you're always welcome! @Eagleby: You'll see soon mate. XD
CURIE Posted November 4, 2014 Posted November 4, 2014 Okay, Edward's finally moved on to the 4th circle. That makes everyone!
Notus Posted November 4, 2014 Author Posted November 4, 2014 Ok, so that finishes up the 3rd Circle of Hell! Hope you all enjoyed the ride, and as usual I'd like to hear your thoughts on it. I'm not going to make a full questionnaire, but I'd like to hear your opinions on NPCs, pace, the approach of the sin of Gluttony, what you think I can improve on, and anything else you find relevant.
CURIE Posted November 4, 2014 Posted November 4, 2014 Well, I do have a kinda major nitpick- that one time you changed up Quincy's inventory and what Edward and Mr. Taylor got from it. If I had known about the cane sword, Edward would have picked that up instead of a gun.
Notus Posted November 4, 2014 Author Posted November 4, 2014 Ah ok, sorry about that. In this case then lets simply change what you got, since it was a little confusing. Ed can have the cane sword for next circle, and Quincy keeps a gun.
Notus Posted November 11, 2014 Author Posted November 11, 2014 (Double post OP, ban to Ubers) Aand it's on! Have fun guys, and good luck!
CURIE Posted November 11, 2014 Posted November 11, 2014 Okay everyone, remember the order you came in: Quincy and Ellaria Annie Rose Ethic and Enya Ixidor Phantom Marcus and Mr. Taylor Kenny Edward Annie, you're up next. That or Rose, due to the split storyline thing Notus seems to be doing now. (green=fancy building storyline, blue=slums storyline)
Zephyrus the Priestess Posted November 12, 2014 Posted November 12, 2014 Wonder if I should tweak Enya's cost to even making her sickly when she pushes herself too much like how she did in the earlier battle?
CURIE Posted November 12, 2014 Posted November 12, 2014 Oh and Notus, about what you said about switching the cane sword with Edward's gun, I think we should just stick to the way things are. I don't like changing up stuff that has already happened, plus Edward's going to have a blast with using parts of wrecked buildings as weapons.
Notus Posted November 12, 2014 Author Posted November 12, 2014 Affirmative to both of you, we can do that with no problem! Also, just remembering you all that Kenny and Ix were sentenced to this circle, so they can expect some cool stuff. Okay everyone, remember the order you came in: Quincy and Ellaria Annie Rose Ethic and Enya Ixidor Phantom Marcus and Mr. Taylor Kenny Edward Next up are Rose and Ix! Bringing it up for this page, this list is so useful! =D
Zephyrus the Priestess Posted November 12, 2014 Posted November 12, 2014 Oh okay then. So uh... Surge, sir, if you don't mind, I'll be putting a sick child in your hands XD
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