Hey everyone I am going to write a story ( i no longer need characters for now)

[Code: PIRULUK 5]

your crap mention of their looks

That was an unnecessary addition.

[rustytengo 3]

Josh only saw the other to at a distance so there for he would not of seen or took in much of their appearances so that's why there is not much on them there will be more when he actually sees them. And oak every one for the most part knows what he looks like to much detail can be a bad thing as well that's something i learned along time ago.

[Kingd353 0]

That was an unnecessary addition.

"shrugs" that wasnt' ment to be an insult to him i just sue the word crap more hten i use words liek bad or inadiquet i had to enthesis the fact htat pics are only nessesery if his description of hte characters was bad

[Kingd353 0]

Josh only saw the other to at a distance so there for he would not of seen or took in much of their appearances so that's why there is not much on them there will be more when he actually sees them.

that's actually a very good reason for the lack of description of rose and dwayne i like that

[Kingd353 0]

that's actually a very good reason for the lack of description of rose and dwayne i like that

i loved how i called my character dwayen there as if he wasn't just me >.> lol

[The Radiant Aeon 7]

Am I professor N? I mean "Nocturne" and all..

[rustytengo 3]

Am I professor N? I mean "Nocturne" and all..

you will have to wait and see who this mysterious Professor N is

[Rosesong 25]

Hola folks. Josh, I left you a review on FFN with my critique. I loved the chapter though!

[rustytengo 3]

thank you two glade you enjoyed the first chapter on the plus side i should finally be getting a new computer in a few weeks so happy face. though that still does not fix my internet but that's kind of my own fault anyway (youtube + a download limit don't mix that well). with a new computer i should finally be able to write with out having to worry about the computer taking for ever just to open word and randomly crash on me and i wont have to write it on paper first so it should go faster then the last one because i wont have to write it twice.

also the chapter would of been much worst if i did not have some one edit it for me so big thank you to to that person as well.

[Kingd353 0]

hey dude how's the story goign? i've been trying to wait patiently for hte next chapter but it's been soooooo long x.x the anticipationis making my head hurt.... are u still working on it? you didn't quit did u?

[rustytengo 3]

dont worry i am working on it the last few weeks i have been distracted by x and y so i was really not doing anything other then that for awhile and sorry it takes me awhile to do anything i am slow at most even though when i get traction i can write a chapter in a night so once i know how i want next chapter it will be up pretty fast,

[Kingd353 0]

stilll waiting... come on man i'm going insane waiting here! x.x

[rustytengo 3]

well i really have no excuse i have been a lazy dilly dally person lately should in all hopes be up by the end of the month or early next month depends when i get my normal schedule at work again and if i actually have to do jury duty or not.

[Code: PIRULUK 5]

Question: How long does it take you to write a chapter? Just curious. Assuming normal conditions.

[rustytengo 3]

Well if I actually know what I want and get traction and not being lazy I can write a chapter in a day or so but that's on paper it takes longer on the computer if i am rewriting it.

[Kingd353 0]

josh i'm seconds away from devouring your soul.... it's been MONTHS! >.>

[rustytengo 3]

its been two of them i should have a new computer in a week or two so i will have it up before Christmas probably a few chapters okay.(little hint the more you bug me the more i procrastinate) and my soul has been devoured already or at least something tried to do it in anyway my soul is to spicy

[Requieon 0]

I liek spicy thingz.

[Kingd353 0]

probably wasting my time askign thsi but is this story offically dead? i was really looking forward to it and it really bugs me that in 4 months we havn'et been notified of a new chapter yet...

[rustytengo 3]

i won't say dead that would imply that i have no intention of continuing it. so its best to say its in a coma and will wake up once my life levels out again.

and i stop being ADD on things.