Karudae Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 (edited) I would like some constructive criticism on some custom sprites I made for a currently nonexistent fangame. Please note that many of these characters have some sort of type specialty, and that I have sort of imitated Reborn's style. Please tell me if I attached the picture wrong. Edited 29/04/2015 Added some more, tried my best to fix some thing people pointed out. Edited April 29, 2015 by Karudae Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2tousent Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 they look very well done, but some mugshots seem different from their whole sprite Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anethia Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 I would like some constructive criticism on some custom sprites I made for a currently nonexistent fangame. Please note that many of these characters have some sort of type specialty, and that I have sort of imitated Reborn's style. Please tell me if I attached the picture wrong. Some of the things I'd personally change; The lipstick on the first one; not by much, but I'd tone it down at the end of it going up. On the trainer sprite, you seem to have missed a small outline on her hair? Don't know if intentional. Arm on the fourth one w/ the tattoo looks a bit boney, almost jutting out. Maybe even it out? Shadow on the 6th one on her forehead, from what I can see the bow and hair should both be casting slight shadows, but not huge. 8th ones hair kinda looks weird, possibly due to how thick the hair covering her ear is. Good sprites, I like em! Good luck, hope I wasn't too picky. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shing Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 They looks pretty great. I like them. The down left: The blinking looks pretty weird in a way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karudae Posted April 26, 2015 Author Share Posted April 26, 2015 Thanks, I'm wasn't very sure about the hair or Tattoo Girl's arms. Some of the things I'd personally change; The lipstick on the first one; not by much, but I'd tone it down at the end of it going up. On the trainer sprite, you seem to have missed a small outline on her hair? Don't know if intentional. Arm on the fourth one w/ the tattoo looks a bit boney, almost jutting out. Maybe even it out? Shadow on the 6th one on her forehead, from what I can see the bow and hair should both be casting slight shadows, but not huge. 8th ones hair kinda looks weird, possibly due to how thick the hair covering her ear is. Good sprites, I like em! Good luck, hope I wasn't too picky. Thanks, I'm wasn't very sure about the hair or Tattoo Girl's arms. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Odybld Posted April 27, 2015 Share Posted April 27, 2015 ...the eye of the Koga pose guy is kinda off. Like, the shape seems off, the iris is way too outside, and too big at that. I think he's better off with realistic, almond-shape eyes instead of the large anime-style ones, due to the angle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TyranntX Posted April 27, 2015 Share Posted April 27, 2015 They look pretty good. I am actually looking for a Sprite designer for my Game "Poke'mon Infinity". if you are interested PM me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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