Groteska Posted March 29, 2015 Share Posted March 29, 2015 Well... Just any advices or criticism, tell me what do You thing.Malamar:Ability: Contrary, Item: LeftoversNature: Adamant EV: 252 HP, 252 Atk, 4 Spe-Superpower,-Knock Off-Psycho Cut-Rock Slide. Sweeper. If it gets to +2, it usually kills 3 -4 pokes on it's own. Rotom-Fan:Ability: Levitate (he really hates ground types, double immune)Item: LeftoversNature: ModestEV: 252 SpA, 252 Spe, 4 HP-Air Slash -Dark Pulse -Volt Switch -Will-o-wisp It is really, really strong with good coverage. Golurk:Ability: No GuardItem: Life orbNature: AdamantEV: 252 HP, 252 Atk, 4 Def -Shadow Punch -Dynamic Punch-Earthquake -Thunderpunch No body expect Dynamic Punch, it usually kills in 1 hit with it or EQ. What is funny, I usually don't use other moves... Typhlosion:Ability: BlazeItem: Life orbNature: TimidEV: 252 SpA, 252 Spe, 4 HP -Eruption-Lava Plume-Toxic-Focus Blast Burns everything, outspeeds almost everything. Electivire:Ability; Vital SpiritItem: Life orbNature: JollyEV: 252 Atk, 252 Spe, 4 HP -Earthquake -Ice Punch -Thunderpunch -Brick Break It hurts. A lot. Crustle: Ability:SturdyItem: LeftoversNature: AdamantEV: 252 HP, 252 Atk, 4 SpD -X scissor-Earthquake-Night Slash-Rock slide Worse in whole team, I think of replacing it. PS - No idea how to put images here :c Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevaleresse Posted March 29, 2015 Share Posted March 29, 2015 not sure about the rest of your team, but Crustle needs to be running Shell Smash. Period. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Tack Posted March 29, 2015 Share Posted March 29, 2015 (edited) http://www.pokemonreborn.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=3279 i can understand not knowing how to put uip pictures but yhe only thing you really did was give sets that can't be imported w/ semi-sentences under them w/ bad grammar. Edited March 29, 2015 by blasterman4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero Posted March 29, 2015 Share Posted March 29, 2015 (edited) get rid of toxic and lava plume on typhlosion. use a choice scarf or choice specs on him, preferably scarf. your team lacks revenge killers, and typhlosion is one of the best in NU. spam eruption all day. on a side note, all your evs are 252/252/4. that's not necessary all the time. Edited March 29, 2015 by Aero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Bagel Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 For the malamar, I personally recommend a specially invested rest talker. With this spread it will be able to tank all kinds of hits and get its health back with rest. The rotom fan looks more like it should a defesnive vatiant since you're running will o wisp and not scarf. This set could work for you. Rotom-Fan @ Leftovers Ability: Levitate EVs: 248 HP / 248 Def / 8 SpA Bold Nature - Will-O-Wisp - Thunderbolt - Air Slash - Pain Split As for the golurk it is your decision what you do with that, though the dynamic punch will be expected, it's like the only reason to run golurk in the first place. Choice band might be good but it's your choice. As Aero said give the typhlosion a choice scarf, also replace what he suggested with extrasensory and hidden power grass. The crustle would be good for stealth rocks, entry hazards are always nice to have. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelly Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 ok well first off you have no rocks. i suggest changing crustle to a suicide lead set that looks like this: Crustle @ Red Card Ability: Sturdy EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe Jolly Nature - Stealth Rock - Spikes - Rock Blast - Knock Off this allows you to get up at least rocks and a spike before you die (usually). i second bagel's noms for resttalk malamar and defensive rotom-fan (although you may want to remember to max out your defense evs bagel ;]). scarf typh is what this team needs and allows you to revenge kill basically anything outside of swift swimmers. consider changing your golurk to a banded set that could look a bit like this: Golurk @ Choice Band Ability: No Guard EVs: 108 HP / 252 Atk / 148 Spe Adamant Nature - Earthquake - Shadow Punch - Ice Punch - Thunder Punch speed evs allow you to outspeed -speed seismitoad and 0 speed mantine and pelipper which look to pose a few problems for your team. bulk allows you to still survive a few hits while you continue to bop things. also consider changing e-vire to a mixed set since a purely physical set completely defeats the purpose of using e-vire. overall a pretty shaky offense team but if you play it well it can work. 5/10. not sure about the rest of your team, but Crustle needs to be running Shell Smash. Period. crustle is a bad smasher lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevaleresse Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 In your opinion. Offensive Crustle should have smash, otherwise it's pointless. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelly Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 In your opinion. Offensive Crustle should have smash, otherwise it's pointless. yes offensive crustle should have smash. but it's a bad smasher so it shouldnt be ran offensively in the first place. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Groteska Posted March 30, 2015 Author Share Posted March 30, 2015 Well, thank You. I will try out your changes as soon as I will have some free time. ^.^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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