Support Squad Felicity Posted December 2, 2014 Support Squad Posted December 2, 2014 Oh! that's another thing: Chim had the Druddigon nudge Zorro. In that situation, nudging Kenny would've had a greater effect. So, why no interaction then? >.>
Tacos Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 Oh! that's another thing: Chim had the Druddigon nudge Zorro. In that situation, nudging Kenny would've had a greater effect. Well, instead of waiting until now to say that, you could have said it then, that way Chim's event would have gone through.
K_H Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 (edited) So, why no interaction then? >.> Kenny would've been startled out of his sleep. Zorro is hard to scare. Well, instead of waiting until now to say that, you could have said it then, that way Chim's event would have gone through. Oh. *Shrinks away in embarrassment* Edited December 2, 2014 by K_H
Tacos Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 No need to be embarrassed, just keep it in mind next time.
Chim Posted December 2, 2014 Author Posted December 2, 2014 (edited) I did exactly back then what you describe now. Zorro made an illusion and I broke it by letting a Druddigon come over. I think you even said Kenny woke up and didn't do anything. So now I'm trying to come up with something you can't ignore or turn into in a battle. (Which would've happened with the Druddigon) It's for chapter 3 or 4 so I still have time. Edited December 2, 2014 by Chimchain
K_H Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 (edited) I did exactly back then what you describe now. Zorro made an illusion and I broke it by letting a Druddigon come over. I think you even said Kenny woke up and didn't do anything. Chim, I interpreted that as two different Interactions. I didn't know that it was just one. Also, I'm gonna check to see whether or not Kenny woke up. [EDIT]: Kenny did wake up, but he'd been told about the Druddigon's existence by James. he even said he didn't notice it. Kenny didn't wake up when the Druddigon nudged Zorro. Here's a tip: make the existence of the Pokemon be an unexpected surprise. Edited December 2, 2014 by K_H
Tacos Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 Interrupting Donphans are interrupting. Phanpy is gonna be the higher leveled one of it and Victoria. Guess Ryan's gonna have to hear about Celebi a little later. Oh, and, this battle's gonna make a mess. c:
Chim Posted December 2, 2014 Author Posted December 2, 2014 Chim, I interpreted that as two different Interactions. I didn't know that it was just one. Also, I'm gonna check to see whether or not Kenny woke up. [EDIT]: Kenny did wake up, but he'd been told about the Druddigon's existence by James. he even said he didn't notice it. Kenny didn't wake up when the Druddigon nudged Zorro. Here's a tip: make the existence of the Pokemon be an unexpected surprise. In that case I stopped the event because I thought you weren't interested. I'm doing a quick Pokémon count but as far as I know everyone has 4 Pokémon except Mareek, Claude and Danielle. Evan and Ryan are going to add their fourth. If I missed something let me know.
Support Squad Felicity Posted December 2, 2014 Support Squad Posted December 2, 2014 Interrupting Donphans are interrupting. Phanpy is gonna be the higher leveled one of it and Victoria. Guess Ryan's gonna have to hear about Celebi a little later. Oh, and, this battle's gonna make a mess. c: Especially with a fuckton of Leaves and spores flying around Also, I think Claude has the most evenly leveled team after the various battles.
TurboAura Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 (edited) Eh, I see no reason not to join in on the fun. @K_H: Uh, I'm pretty sure it's the background students that ran into the buildings, not the Donphan. Otherwise, I fear for Kage and Ryan. Edited December 2, 2014 by TurboAura
Chim Posted December 2, 2014 Author Posted December 2, 2014 Especially with a fuckton of Leaves and spores flying around Also, I think Claude has the most evenly leveled team after the various battles. If he has 3 Pokémon they can all be equally leveled. I just want to avoid people switching Pokémon around for various battles. It's one of the tests in the Winter Cup but that will become clear when we get there.
Tacos Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 Welp, now that I've spent up most of my mind's energy typing, I think a small break is in order.
Jory Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 GUYS, THE EXTRANEOUS STUDENTS ARE IN THE BUILDING. NOT THE DONPHAN AND PHANPY. L2READ Q_Q
Tacos Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 Oh, didn't seem too clear to me, I'll try to edit it.
Sutoratosu Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 What do you think of Chapter 2? Did you enjoy it? It was Good, Sergeant, I enjoyed it quite a bit. Like someone already said though, the separation might've subtracted from things a tab bit, but I don't really have any solution to suggest, so eh... What about my writing? Where can I improve? You're coming along well. Keep up your current work and I'm sure you'll be golden in no time. Which characters under my control feel real / which characters need improvement? Lana (For reasons cited for Chapter 1's questionnaire.) Redwood could get a bit more spotlight from time to time though. Who is your favorite NPC and why? Lana, same personal Bias reasons as before. Who is your least favorite NPC and why? Hmmm... Alvin, without a doubt. same reasons as before. What do you think about the darker parts I included in this chapter? (Hydreigon and Celebi) I'm liking where you're beginning to take us all in the story, Sergeant... Things Can't stay all clean and sugar coated forever, now can they? Which Legendary do you think will befriend your character? And why? I... honestly don't know for sure which I think would be most likely for him. The direction I plan to ultimately develop Mareek in could take a number of different outcomes with who he ultimately becomes as a person... so trying to pin down which I think would be most suited is kinda like playing Wheel of Fortune. What do you expect to happen in Chapter 3: Winter Cup? Well, I expect that you're gonna be having some things in mind for old Galen and his Hooligan Squad young team members, along with the plot escalating a considerable bit and overall, things beginning to reveal themselves a bit more. If your character was approached instead of Slade; how would he / she react? Just had to peg me with this question, Didn't you? Well, considering his history... I don't know what exactly he'd have done for certain, but it would've gotten very physically violent between him and them very quickly... Is there anything else I can improve upon? Hold on, let me think... I got nothing right now, but I'll let you know if I come up with an area of improvement in the future. for now just keep on keeping on, Sergeant.
TurboAura Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 GUYS, THE EXTRANEOUS STUDENTS ARE IN THE BUILDING. NOT THE DONPHAN AND PHANPY. L2READ Q_Q Hehe, well I had it right first and was confused by Tacos. To the un-editing. Can we atleast keep the 'Phanpy in the halls' there, even if it's nothing more than them 'play stampeding'?
K_H Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 ooh. let me fi- *gets ninja'd by Turbo* Or Kenny can help out with that.
Chim Posted December 2, 2014 Author Posted December 2, 2014 Can we bunny those donphans? Yes. As far as the ones inside go: You all do realize a Donphan has enough power to level the whole thing right?
Support Squad Felicity Posted December 2, 2014 Support Squad Posted December 2, 2014 Well, most of the ones outside are currently paralysed, soooo yeah.
Tacos Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 Idk I thought only phanpys would fit inside so I did that. When I get home it will be fixed.
Veterans Azeria Posted December 2, 2014 Veterans Posted December 2, 2014 Most of James's team besides Luna the Litwick are 20-21. Time to kill some Donphan with Tytaniell :I
Chim Posted December 2, 2014 Author Posted December 2, 2014 Most of James's team besides Luna the Litwick are 20-21. Time to kill some Donphan with Tytaniell :I Just stopping them like Claude did should be enough. They mainly need to calm down asap.
Support Squad Felicity Posted December 2, 2014 Support Squad Posted December 2, 2014 Is confusing a horde of Angry Donphan really a good idea...?
Jory Posted December 2, 2014 Posted December 2, 2014 I'll post again later to finish my Donphan battle. Jacob was standing in front of one of the cabins (turns out it's the girls' cabin >>), so there shouldn't be any in there unless someone feels like bunnying my character getting trampled (that was a joke please don't).
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