JustM33

A very nice intro. I'm curious about that opening scene and its significance to Romi. Romi seems to be a very quiet person-they speak moreso than the Player Character, though. Haha. The writing is very smooth for the most part. I think it would benefit from better paragraph spacing before the scene cut line, though. The lines are all pushed together, which makes it a bit difficult on the eyes. Your spacing is fine after the horizontal line, though. I'm interested to see where you take the story. :3

I don't know if this is the correct place to ask this, but how do I use this? I downloaded the file, but I'm not sure where to go from there. If this is not the correct place to ask this, I apologize and I'll reask it in the correct place if someone directs me to do so.

Is this different from the regular Reborn?