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Just now, MightySceptile said:
Okay thank you I'll definitely try that in my next chapter. Oh and when you mean description do you mean describing the scenery or the characters or both?
A bit of both actually. Like try to write actual paragraphs like you would see in any novel you read. Describe the characters, try to get across their moods, their reactions to events. Try to get across the environment around them.
Like I said, what you have right now is basically just a script like you see for movies. It's good for helping to plot out what happens in the story, but not to use as the actual story format.
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On 6/23/2018 at 5:31 PM, MightySceptile said:
Okay I finally finished the first chapter of my fanfic, I posted it on Wattpad, I wasn't sure if I should post there, here, or both. But you tell me your thoughts on it though
https://www.wattpad.com/586567817-pokemon-reborn-journey-of-miles-melody-willow
Edit: Oh yeah, I'm still working on a better title of the story, so it might be different than what the link says
It needs more description, more basically everything besides dialogue. It's more like a script than an actual story at this point. I do like the idea of fleshing out the protagonist choices and having more than one involved in the events of the game.
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Full Moon is pretty unique as a Pokemon Fangame with the player character having actual dialogue and a personality, only other one I can think of is Legends of the Arena. Too bad that concept is being held down by. . . well all this bad dialogue and dodgy motivations. Like the whole bullying thing was forgiven WAY too easily.
Awesome to see someone inspired by Derogatory Trainer. Can't wait to see how this goes.
Also my Question to Luna: When you're speaking to J-Awesome, is it all in your head or are you talking outloud? Because one of those scenarios is likely to make people think you're insane real quick, though it would be hilarious.
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11 hours ago, Trufa said:
I had the same thought as @Candy, also can a 19 years old person be member of the international police posing as a rookie trainer? I know they start at age 10 but I think that is a bit too much haha. just wondering. Go for it, I hope to see a good history.
So your thinking something along the lines of 21 Jump Street maybe? I actually had the same idea myself.
You kinda have to work out the details of which characters are in the know. I easily assume Amethyst (the character not the actual creator of the game) would know considering she's the Champion and you come to the region at her request.
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Oh yeah, Jan did replace Adrian. Doesn't help that her AI seem to randomly lose several dozen IQ points at random points during the battle.
For everything coming next storywise, all I can say is remember you're doing all this to save Nim (who is basically best girl now all things considered).
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God, I thought the end of Chapter 43 was just a joke.
The episode started off so well too. They all hurt, but Coffee dying was the worst. She's been with you since near the beginning. I think only Rose (thank god you didn't have her on the team) and Mothball had more tenure.
I'm actually terrified to see what happens next Chapter.
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So after 5 years of watching videos on the game, I've decided to play it for myself.
I have to say the intro is much improved compared to the past, I like method of presenting the player character choices as passengers on a train. I felt a little bad when I made a choice because I'd basically consigned 5 people to die no matter what.
My starter for the run is Totodile, who nicknamed Nile. Feraligatr is one of my favorite Pokemon, and I can't wait to use him to take a bite out of Team Meteor. I've made my my way to the Peridot ward with Nile, Commander (my Ekans), Lightning (the Pachirisu I saved from jackasses trying to drown her), Velvet (Espurr), and finally Violin (my Kricketune).
Reading through Derogatory Trainer's playthrough made me want to try Kricketune as well (RIP Sickle) so I'm gonna give her a shot. She's even Adamant nature with Technician Fury Cutter. I'm going to tear Fern to shreds, it'll be fun.
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Thanks everyone!
And to @Wolfox, nah it's just the first three letters of my name.
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I've been following Pokemon Reborn through Shofu's misadventures for years and now I've finally decided to start playing for myself.
Wanted to introduce myself to the forum as well.
The extremely delicate subject of Romance Options in Pokemon Reborn
in Reborn City
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Honestly most of the named characters are either underage, evil, committed, likely not interested in, not comfortable with, or insert any other reason to not pursue a relationship that people have.
If, and that is a BIG IF, Reborn was to have romance options I'd rather it be with a side character. Like how the Persona games have side character romance options like Sadayo Kawakami from Persona 5.