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Hey, that's pretty interesting! It looks very good so far!

Update: Chapter 1 has been rewritten! Honestly, I thought that the first chapter had some awkward dialogue and description, so I replaced it. Hope it is better.

Damn, I hadn't noticed the last post's date. Sorry about that. Besides, thank you for the reply. I'm going to follow this up in PM, like you suggested.

Tell me about how silence kills self-esteem. Seriously, I haven't had anyone tell me any constructive thing about my story since weeks, when I posted the first chapters, despite my fic having a decent flow of visitors and views. Urgh, and now I'm asking a few people for a bit of opinion sharing and I feel like an insecure mess of an attention whore. Do you have any advice on how to personnally deal with this as an author?

Alright, what about these ones: Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson as Bravestone in Jumanji: Welcome to the Jungle Captain Underpants

Update: Chapter 18 is out! Lucia: The Coral Ward If you're reading this, or the new chapters while you're at it, and you have any kind of constructive feedback to give, then please tell me. It's been weeks without someone telling me anything and I am beginning to worry that my quality of writing is dropping.

Update: Chapter 17 is now out! Alice and Decibel: Striking Back Stuff continues to go down at Jasper, now that the trainers are trying to find what is causing these plants to attack everyone who played the game would know, but whatever. I have tried to include some further characterisation for both main characters here, I hope it feels natural. Once again, feedback is extremely scarce, so any you can give would be welcome.

Update: Chapter 16 is out! Vero and Lucia: The slums (part 3) I know I've said it before, but there may be more time between updates in the future, but never more than a week. And also, like before, don't hesitate to give feedback! Constructive criticism and general appreciation are both good to recieve and help me in honing my writing skills.

Update: Chapter 15 is out! Shit hits the fan at the Jasper Ward.

Update, Chapter 14 is out! Vero and Lucia: The slums (part 2) So, I originally intended to post it yesterday, but I've somehow become sick in the middle of the summer. Because of this, I am also unsure that the second half of the chapter actually has the same quality as the first. If you remark a drop, please let me know.

Basically, we would be a more powerful version of Undertale's protag? Also, I'm pretty sure someone must have said it already, but I have never seen such a cute Drapion before!

I must say, this was a very interesting theory. That the plot armor would actually have an explication is intriguing to me. There was a sidequest, however, that I recall. It ended with obtaining a crystal ball and having an old fortune teller tell us the story of an alternate Reborn, seemingly without the Protagonist. In it, Fern seemed to take our place, and this reality apparently ended in its total destruction. Where would that fit? Finally, small nitpick; there is an abandonned PULSE machine under the wasteland, in the same room as a shiny, speaking Garbador. It is heavily implied that this Pokémon is the origin of all the waste.

That, my friend, is an excellent question! For Decibel, I will keep referring to them with non-gendered pronouns. Part of their character is the mystery they have around them, and keeping their gender a secret will add to that. As for Ari, I made something a bit different. I do not intend on directly stating it, but I have let some hints in the story that she represents a different branch of the LGBTQ+ than Decibel. I felt that it would be better to make the two different in this regard.

Alright, this one took some more time, but chapter 13 is out. From now on, I will slow down a little bit, so I do not stress myself out for litterrally nothing. Anyway, to those who will see this, have a good read!

Alright, I didn't think I would make it this quickly, but the 12th chapter is out. Decibel: The cavalry is here! Seriously, I think Decibel has been my favorite character to write as of now. What do you think?

Update: Chapter 11 is out! Vero: First trial, where the young trainer has to fight his first gym battle. Up next, the introduction of Decibel.

Hello everyone, could someone remind me of the names of the currently obtainable badges? I don't want to do a full playthrough just for it. @Gabriel1 Julia = Volt Badge Florinia = Canopy Shelly = Cocoon Shade = Omen Aya = Venom or Blight (forget which) Serra = Rime Noel = Standard Radomus = Millennium Luna = Eclipse Samson = Fury Charlotte = Cinder Terra = Gravity Ciel = Suspension Adrienn = Amaranth Titania = Alloy Amaria = Torrent Hardy = Geode Saphira = Treasure

Chapter 10 is now out! Alice and Ari: The Jasper Ward

I have just checked, both with 's' and 'z' are acceptable, but the z is more often used. I will change it, thanks for bringing it to my attention!

You cannot play this on any official console. It is only on a computer, on which you install the files of the game.

Quick update Pokémon Reborn: the novelisation, chapter 9 has aired. Some focus off of Vero for the time being.

Update: 8 chapters are now public! They mainly focus aroud Vero, but the other MCs are going to have their turn in the timelight too!

Alright, around a week ago, I have posted here about how I wanted to make a Reborn fic, and I have decided to push it a bit further. Up until now, I have completed 6 chapters and I'm on the way to complete the seventh, although I will only publish the chapters weekly or bi-weekly. So, here it is, my very first fic: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13328342/1/Pokémon-Reborn-the-novelisation Just like before, since this is my first publicly published story, I would love it if you could give me some feedback about how my writing has made your day, or how it sucks, or how I could make it better. If a member of the staff sees this, I would very much appreciate your opinion on my handling of the wonderful world and characters that you have created. If you end up reading this post, then I wish you a good day. Edit: If you want to get updates regarding the advancement of the story, then you can follow this thread, I'll post updates when I post chapters.

Slimer from Ghostbusters.

Yeah, I know how it looks like, a fanfic about a fanwork and all. I had a desire to write a story about Reborn since some time. But anyway, I'm asking for a little feedback. I am rather new at writing a story, and I am not sure of my strenghts and weaknesses, or if I am even good at all. If the developpers of the game see this, I would really appreciate your oppinion on my handling of the world and characters as well. So far, I have written two chapters, including the prologue, which countain around 7600 words in total. When I first thought about it, obviously, the first problem to come to my mind was "But which playable character will I use?" However, I have decided that I would not choose between them, but instead include all of them in some shape or form in the story. Of course, some will be more prevalent than others, but in the end, each will be important for the story. If you have other questions about it, don't hesitate to ask. Pokémon Reborn.docx