Ooh, another part already!
So... Time to say stuff!
You shoukd add that you can get the TMs for Attract, Facade, and Substitute. Not the best, but still pretty okayish.
In addition, there are coins ALL OVER the Onyx Arcade. You want to press Z on every space, cuz you can get around two hundred that way.
Also, you could mention getting a Fire, Flying and/or Fighting type(s) for Florinia, or else that Cradily will be horrible. (Strangely the Breloom gave me more trouble than the Cradily...)
That's all, but now it's almost time for the split story! About two more sections left...