Nhadala Posted February 24, 2017 Share Posted February 24, 2017 (edited) Hi, im Nhadala and this is my first ever written story! Its a story about a girl named Haruka! This story is the build-up for the main part which may or may not come depending on what kind of mood i am. But id appreciate any and all feedback, criticism and thoughts from other users! But be warned that this story is dark. http://pastebin.com/0Qt1fkyr Edited February 26, 2017 by Nhadala Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sapphire Mahala Posted February 24, 2017 Share Posted February 24, 2017 (edited) 5 hours ago, Nhadala said: Hi, im Nhadala and this is my first ever written story! Its a story about a girl named Haruka! This story is the build-up for the main part which may or may not come depending on what kind of mood i am. But id appreciate any and all feedback, criticism and thoughts from other users! But be warned that this story is dark. http://pastebin.com/Xm4y5bqS please i need more that was to good and reminds me of one of my fave animes overall i give it a 100/100 great work Edited February 24, 2017 by Sapphire Mahala Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nhadala Posted February 26, 2017 Author Share Posted February 26, 2017 Edited the OP with what i believe are some corrections to, well, most things in the story! Ive had feedback from some of my friends. Thanks Sapphire for the positive words! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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