Alaris

Great episode! Although the great weakness of the whole leader's team to certain type made the battle quite easy... By the way, is it just me or sliding on the ice is veeery slow? It'd be cool if it was faster (like in the oficial games). And surfing could be a little bit faster as well... Just a suggestion ^^ EDIT: Ah, if you enter the icy zones running, the first move is faster. But then the following ones are quite slower...

As Freya said, practise with the proportions. Even if it's a chibi, some parts like the hands, or the shoulders, need to follow certain proportions. Drawing chibis is harder than usually thought, and practising with both realistic and manga styles really helps you to improve. Another thing: if you have to draw straight lines, use a ruler xD It may seem obvious, but the difference of using it or not is huge, specially when you're a beginner. By the way, did you scan it directly from the pencil drawing? I would recommend doing the lineart before scanning, and make the lines thicker or thinner d